Samjhota…..Swaragini ka….Episode 10

Hello people….so as I have already informed u that it’s a 10 episode story….its gonna be the last part……so enjoy this and yes….please answer the questions that I’m gonna ask in the end of the story…..
The episode starts with a leap of one month….its the baby’s naming ceremony…..
A wall is shown with a photo of swalak..and it has a garland…
Everyone is busy with all the preparations…..All the guest arrives……
Ap:I have an announcement to make….
Everyone looks at her…
Ap:I have decided to get Ragini married to Sanskar….
Everyone is shocked…
Ap goes to Ragini….

Ap:Dear…u r our rajkumari’s masi….no one can take care of her better than u…..
Ragini cries…..
Sumi:Beta…if Sanskar can accept the baby as his child..the why can’t u? U both can give her a secured future…..i’m sure u both will never let her miss her parents……
Ap:Sanskar…Ragini….will u marry eachother?
Rags sees Sanskar…
Sanskar;I’m ready to marry her ma…..
Rags even nods crying….
Both sit for the baby’s naming ceremony…..
Everyones too confused with the names…..
Uttara;I know….what our princess’ name should be…
Everyone:What?

Uttara:U remember….I asked Swara bhabi to write her baby’s name in the chit…….I’ll get the chit…
Uttara brings the chit…
Sanskar opens it and gets teary eyed….
Sanskar:From today…..our princess’ name is Swaranshi…..
Everyone get happy…..
Rags:I know…why she kept this name…
San:Why?
Rags:’Swar’….Swara ka….’an’..Sanskar ka…’sh’…Laksh ka…aur ‘I’……Ragini ka…..in all…..she is our Swaranshi…..
Everyone gets teary eyed…..Sanskar is in his room..holding the baby….
Rags comes there…
Rags:Sanskar….u okay?
San:Yes….but Ragini….u r marrying me….but u need to accept Swaranshi as your child…will u?
Rags:I’m her masi…as in ma jesi……

San:I know u love me…..thats y u r marrying me na?
Rags:No….I’m marrying u for my Swaranshi……meri behen ki akri nishani..and yes…..i love u…but I know….that u……u love Swara…..
Sanskar has tears in his eyes….He hugs Ragini….Baby starts crying..Ragini takes her in her arms and starts singing lori….. Aaja nindiya rani aja…
Ragini sings this song and looks at Swara’s photo…….

The story takes 22 years leap….
A girl is shown doing preparations of something…..
Rags:Swarashi…beta….why r u doing all the preparations? Beta…just order the servents..u don’t need to work….
Swaranshi;Mom…..aj mere mamma aur papa ki wedding anniversary…..i need to celebrate that na…..so I’m going to do all the preparations..all by myself….
PEOPLE…..GUESS WHAT….SWARANSHI EXACTLY LOOKS LIKE HER MOTHER…OUR SWARA…..SO THE CHARACTER OF SWARANSHI IS ALSO PLAYED MY HELLY SHAH……
Rags goes to Swara’s pic…
Rags:Swara…i miss u so much…see our daughter have grown up..she is doing all the preparations..all by herself……
Sanskar comes down…
Swaranshi runs to him…

Swaranshi:Dad..how is everything? I did it…
Sanskar;Extremly beautifyul…but not more then my princess….
Sujata:Ha..chori…its very beautiful…
Swaranshi:Thank u Dadi…
Ap comes there…
Ap:Beta..u think about everyone but bot about yourself…..now tell me….u r perfect from every angle….y don’t u want to get married?
Swaranshi:Dadima…..no worries..i promise,,,that I will solve your problem by today..and I’m only 22….
Ap looks confused…..
It’s the party time..it 8pm
Everyone has come……now comes the cake…
Swaranshi:Dadima….i have invited someone special..who will solve your problem…
Ap:What? Your marriage?
Sujata:Koi bali ka bakra utha kar layi hai apne liye?
San:Ma…..
Swaranshi:Please come……

A dashing and handsome boy enters the Maheahwari house…..
Everyone is shocked to see him…..its someone who exactly looks like Laksh…..everyone gets teary eyes…
Swaranshi;Mom..dad….he is Lakshman Sinha…..u all can call him Lucky….he is my mister perfect..whom I have chosen for myself…..
Everyone is hell shocked……and then smiles….
Sujata:At last..chora..tu issh musibat ko lejaraha hai….
No worries people…..Sujata even now loves Swaranshi……
Swaranshi:Dadi.
Swaranshi;Now..lets cut the cake…

Ap:Wait a min dear..every year u cut the cake alone..this time u have your partner…..i want the new couple to cut the cake…..Lucky and Swaranshi cut the cake together..everyone get smiles with tears on their eyes…..
Ragini:Swara aur Laksh bank eek nehi hopaye yeh…par Swaranshi aur Lakshman ek zarur hoge….
Sanskar;Swara ad Laksh kept their promise of uniting in the next birth…seee now……thats our Swalak…..

So now there were smarties….very smart people..who accusing me of me playing with everyone’s feeling..now tell me..
Wasn’t this Swasan?
Wasn’t this Ragsan?

Wasn’t this Swalak?
Kuch kahaniya adhurihi hoti hai……every love story doesn’t get a happy ending……it was my mistake that I thought u people believe in stories and not couples….and yes….from now on..couple freaks..stay away from my stories……after reading the haters comments..i was crying….i never wrote that cause I was waiting for the last episode….how could u think that I’m doing this for comments?…..to be honest..i never expected so many comments..each of my episodes were getting 50 up comments..and 4-5 episodes got 100 comments….did I ask them for comments? I asked them to read my ff..and no need for comments…..and yes..from now on…bashers,,stay away from me..and yes..i won’t reply to any haters comments……
Lila….u were saying that I won’t unite Ragsan with heart..doesn’t my ff name tell u that its about samjhota? At last Ragsan got married because of samjhota,……were does this heart come from? And yes….u appreciated me from the beginning..so I’ll definitely write an other Ragsan ff…specially for u….

Abi;U were continuously telling me in evry episode that u r leaving but posted bashing comments in every episodes…
I’m sorry..I know I being rude..so now…let me thank my all friends….
Joona and Anahita special thanks to u both cause u both kept on appreciating me so much….love u both…..

Thanks Sonam,cute girl,Sara,diva,kittu,Manyatha,Nami,Naimi,Sathya,Kayra,Niharika,Sindhu rm,Shirin,Vanitha,lol,Renu…so sorry if I missed someone…but love u all…..
Thanks for tolerating my story….

Credit to: Eva

47 comments

  1. anonymous

    I have been reading all ur ff’s……………and this one ..I wondered how this is going to be swasan,ragsan,swalak,…………………but u nailed it………….I think u have done justice for all the pairs…….(except raglak as that can’t happen according to story.)……..at the end of the day what matters is the story but not the couples.(my opinion)……..so don’t bother about hate comments…….can u write an ff on raglak/ragsan….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.it’s a request from my side…………………………….and my favourite ff of ur’s is “‘I hate you too………..”looking forward for ur next ff(i will b happy if it’s raglak……..but it’s up to you)

  2. arohi

    i guess this comment came twice i wrote my mailid wrong in my previou comment

    hey eva amazing dear
    loved ur ff from beginning till end
    sry i couldnt comment on previous episodes as i was busy but i read the comments today
    eva please dont worry about those comments , just ignore it dear..
    ur ff was really nice and i loved it
    hope to see ur next ff soon dear….. 🙂
    🙂 nd keep smiling 🙂

  3. Sathya

    I’ll miss your ff. I believe that every writer has their own way on conveying their story. And Eva, you are one of the best I know. I’ll be waiting for your next ff. Please come back soon as I can’t wait to read your next. Thanks for this lovely episode and ff. With lots of love and respect

  4. khusubu

    good yaar. I even cry when I read this episode .your story is away some.please come with your new ff.i am waiting

  5. Ms. Unknown.....

    How was this Swasan? Plz answer my question… this was totally swalak and ragsan, if swasan got married that doesn’t mean that this was swasan….

    • Khyati

      Dear..tell me..how wasn’t this swasan?..yeh pura ff unhi ke scenes seh hiih toh bhara tha….and in this episode evn Ragini clearly said that she knows that sanskar loves Swara….so they did the samjhota…..not even a single swalak scen I guess..last meh Jo bhi couples Ho….unke liye..how can u ignore the scenes? I guess apne baki episodes nehi pare….swasan Ki shadi bhi huti aur Sanskar neh pyar bhi kiya…great job miss writer…

  6. Nups

    I ll miss ur ff I m a die hard fan of u Eva ur stories are so beautiful keep writing and I promise whichever couple u choose for ur next I will read all because u write so well and I’m eagerly waiting for your next one

  7. sara

    Awesome dr.. will miss ur ff.. soon write.. last 2episodes made me cry . U have an awesome talent.. don’t stop writing for any 1.. soon write ur nxt ft..love ur storyline dr not couples..

  8. Pranami

    This was one of the most different story with full of emotions now i’m literally crying after reading this last episode…hats off to you!! One request…can you write something on emotional teenage love? Whatever pair u make..i don’t care…just want to read something on teenage love…can you do this for me? please!! ??

  9. Lily

    I have read ur ft I hate u too n even this one from the beginning but never commented. Ur today’s episode was marvellous I’m speechless can’t describe it in words. U just kept true to ur title n u nailed it I was literally crying when ragini said that he loved swara and it was just a samjota. Pls start a new ff soon as ur stories r toooooo awesome!!!!!

  10. Lila

    That was a beautiful epi. Eva i am so sorry of I hurt u in anyway. I was just a little heart broken as there are less ragsan ff. Ur a fantastic writer. U write with feelings. I’m a huge fan of u. U write this for all of us even though ur not getting anything out of it but u still write. And a huge Thank you for that. I will be waiting for ur next ff. Plz forgive me if I heart u. And u sed u cried after reading hateful comments plz forget them they are people who are jealous that u can write so well. Haters are gonna hate. Plz dont be let down by them. Keep smiling amd dont cry for those who dont respect ur work

  11. Bisha

    Eva..i hv bn reading n commenting on ur ff snce d frst dy..almost all episodes though i don remember well…nd at last…i wud say..IT IS BEYOND AWESOME..I LOVED UR FF…pairs were nvr important to me…i always read d story as it is..nd i appreciate ur skill….ur idea…nd d awesum way u implemented thm…i wl seriously miss this soo touching story…i think if ur character names had bn differnt frm swasanraglak den bashers wudnt hv bashed u soo much 😉 😀 ..but yess this ff also showed some coupke freaks’ true colours…i ws also stunned to c soo mny cmmnts n dn ur saying dt in ur lst ff u used to get hardly 2-3 cmmnts…well…keeping aside all these…u r superb n ur epilogue showed that u r good person too…juz remember criticisers will always b there in life..criticism will mk u a better person..u will def feel bad but nvr tk dt to an emotional level…u made my heart cry after this end..too long a comment..lol

  12. Lol

    Awesomeness overloaded Eva !! You just rocked it yaar !! So emotional . It just made me cry
    I just love your stories: i hate u too, swaragnithi ki kahani and samjhota. They are the best !! What is the name of the new ff ?? When are you going to write it ??

  13. Joona

    Love you too dear…Mindblowing episode…u know what… I always loved ur ff and in future also I will keep loving it.. Not because of the pair.. But the outstanding writing skill of ur’s.so..keep writing… Come soon with new ff..I am eagerly waiting….

  14. Anjali

    Amazing eva…..
    You nailed it…..being a swasan fan myself, I was wondering how all the couple’s would work out…and how the story will mould itself in just 10 short chapters….but you really understood what your story was and gave us a clear description…..
    Love you and also am proud of you…being so young, you gave us two awesome ff’s….Idk if you’ve written more…please come back soon…and a request…pls write one on swasan as well
    All the best and thanks for such a beautiful story

  15. divya

    luved ur ff eva and i am so sad that ur ending it but no worries plz come up with an other ff sure i will stick to it u attract readers with ur stories and next ff write about swasan plz an
    ALL THE BEST

  16. cute girl

    omg, what a epi i love it …
    i luv u eva …i have no word to say ….
    seriously amazing ..mindblowing …
    ur all stories are best but this is ur
    different and unique …i luv ur story ..

  17. Anahita

    Love u too di..and never be sad because of haters comments…..if someone hates your..as in Eva’s ff..then he or she didn’t understand the story…..u r an inspiration for all writers who don’t write for others but themselves….keep writing..and I will read your every ff..cause I AM NOT A COUPLE FREAK….

  18. Eva! Oh god! I can’t believe any1 can write such ff…this is like u made the story complete yeah somewhere I am disappointed right now also…but I loved this ff n I will miss u..soo much.

  19. shloka

    Eva u nailed It today …….I’m ur big fan……..just wanna ask will u be my friend ……..
    waiting for your next ff…

  20. I miss u sooo much u r really sprb what a story I knw u r hurt by haters comment and say sorry if I hurt u. I understand one thing in ur ff don’t judge people before u truly know them. The truth must be surprise u. I miss u soon much I love u Eva plz come back with a new ff i ‘m waiting

  21. Sahi

    Excellent story….i mean…perfect naming of the ff..everyone did samjhota..swasan married eachother..that was a compromise….Ragini sacrificed her love…that was another compromise…Laksh left Swara for her betterment..that was a compromise….Sanskar married Swara because Ragini told him to do so….that was a samjhota….Eva..no worries…ignore haters comment..cause haters r the ones who r jealous of u or r desperate couple freaks….i mean how can someone not like this story? Maybe..they were so frustrated about u not chosing their faav couple…and wrote on those things….people should not judge anything before they really know..what it is about….keep writing…bashers will be always there to bash….ignore them..and be happy..love u

  22. ananya

    Hi eva . I know how much time it take to write a complete story or even a part and it hurts when body write hate comments?. But i think you are the best ff writter and trust me superb your storyline was awesome ? though it made me cry ? . And as far as couples though iam an swasan fan but i loved swasan ragsan and swalak in this story .you did justice to all and kept your promise.? and write a another ff very soon . Pairs don’t matter specially for me . Waiting for you Eva to come back . ????????

  23. ananya

    And no need to be discouraged by some stupid comments people have hands so they will write stupid things?????? at heart everyone knows that your ff was super se uper tha?????????????

  24. abi

    Eva i m very sorry i dint had any intention to hurt u…..i know dis story s nice u r just 8th bt u wrote amazing…..i dint bash ur writings….i just want to know d pairs beforehand…. thats it…..i do no whom u r i dont have any personal enimity with u to bash u…..i just commented what it s n my mind…..nd i equally give imp to both pairs nd story…..if d story s not nice nd if it s swasan also i wont read….nd if d story a fantastic nd if it s ragsa also i dont read…..u people have big heart to accept any pairs bt i am a die hard fan f swasan i cant c ragsan as pairs dats it…..for dat u dnt have to mention my name…..in other ff one girl/boy i do no she told something that bcoz f me she hate swasan i m really fed up….i do no y she mentioned my name bt atlast when i opened ur ff u mentioned my name dat i m continously bashing u…..no i just commneted n 3 epi f urs….it s my opinion…..nd its just a ff bt y al r taking it serioysly nd fighting i do no….nd pls i m clearing one thing i m not saying dat all ff should b swasan….it can b ragsan also…..i dint hurt u eva….i appreciate ur work…..ur writings s fantastic…..bt i dint mean to bash u…..bt u showed me as bad infront f others…..i cant accept it….if u c dis comment i really need a reply…..i dint use any harah words on u…..i just said dat i m leaving……dat doesnt mean i m bashing u…..i m literally crying…..even dis comment hurts u i m really sry very very very very very sry…..

  25. super and you are just awesome and eagerly waiting for your next ff , plz make it as soon as possible…………..good luck……..:-)

  26. abi

    i wont comment hereafter guys….i dnt want to hurt anyone nd i dnt want others to hurt me also….i m sensible i cant take it….if d comment i m leaving makes u hurt i m really sry….bye thank u soo much….

  27. abi

    eva i m really very very very very very sry…..i dint bash u r ur writings eva…..u r just 8th bt ur writings r amazing…..u wrote as if a professional….u have bright future eva…..i just showed my frustation bcoz at first u showed as swasan nd changed to ragsan….i cant digest…..i dint bash u in every episodes…..i just commented on 3 episodes…..if my comment i m leaving made u hurt i m really sry….dat doesnt mean i m bashing u…..nd one more thing i dnt have any personal vengance on u too bash dr…..bt u displayed my name on ur writing dat i m bashing u on every episodes….i dint use any wrong words against u…..i just comment what i meant…..if dat hurts u i m sry…..bt just think though i commented like that many have supported u nd scolded me directly….nd n dis epi many have told dnt think about bashers dey have indirectly pointed me only bcoz u have mentioned my name nd showed me as a bad person….u think i m bashing u bt der r many to support u…..bt now u displayed my name as a basher nd all r scolding me now…..in another ff one unknown person told that bcoz f me she hate swasan…..i m not asking every ff should b swasan….try to understand my point f view….u have many supporters i m just a reader i do no y all r bashing me….sry for hurting u dr…..i m really heart broken….u can also tell me that u r also hurt bt only my comment hurt u….many have praised u…..bt now all r bashing me….even dis comment hurts u i m sry…..

    • Eva

      If u think that u r good then u shouldn’t be effected by what I wrote..and about proving u wrong…i just expressed by feelings..like u did…u said yourself that u wrote on 3 episodes…and all were I’m leaving…i clearly remember that…wasn’t that an indirect bash? If u r leaving then how can u write that everyday? Even today u commented..that mans u read my ff..tbh..that’s non of my concern..amd about sorry..i ask for your apology..galti hogayi yar Jo apne friends Ko tumhare bareme meh diya…maf kardo….and my other friends..love u all…and abi..cab I please tell me evn 1 name..who bashed u for my sake? Remember dear it’s all public…jhut bolke mujhe galat sambet karne ki koshish mat karna…

    • Kashish

      R u trying to blackmail us? That I r not going to comment? That’s such a melodrama..i’m so sorry to say that..u wrote about u leaving this ff every day..u yourself said three episodes….was that important to write 3 times 3 episodes..that u r leaving? The writer just expressed her feelings and u r trying to prove her wrong….Eva dear..read my comment carefully..i’m not bashing her but giving her a nice reply…

  28. Meghs

    Hey eva y u r caring for critics to be honest u treated swasan n ragsan fans …. I like ur previous ff n i must say u have gud talent …. No woories dr some people care couples but there r many silent readers who cares stry not couple which i was telling u from beginning ….

    N sry if i hurt u knowingly or unknowingly …. I like ur ff too much … Miss u

  29. Sus

    Srry if I hurt u but I would like to say something about your story line just I don’t get two things………
    1) u said that Laksh is suffering from a brain tumor and he died Becoz of it, fine I got this thing …… Tumhe ni lagta ye bahut badi disease h jis kam se kam Laksh ko 5-6 months pahle hi pata chal jana chahiye that so Taki wo apne future ki clear picture dekh sake
    2) fine let it be Laksh came to know after his marriage, don’t u think…..
    Agar tum kisi se bahut pyaar karte ho to… tum itni badi baat ye video k through to..kabhi ni batate.. after knowing ki she loves the most.. Or tum chahte ho ki wo life mei move on kare,…. Becoz u don’t want to hurt your love
    Fine chalo tumne aisa b kar diya after you don’t want your love to hate u….
    But jaha tak mujhe pata h ki tumhari story m sab childhood friends hai to Laksh swara ko bahut achhe se janta hoga to… So according to me Laksh kabhi b aisi mistak ni karege wo swara ko kuch years baad is baat ko batana sahi smjta,………….
    Chalo yaha tak b maine tumhari story thik smji don’t u think its really a foolish mistak which was done by doctor……… Being doctor of Laksh she must have came to know about swara…. Their love…. Let’s koi baat doctor ko ni pata swara ki baare mei…….. But jaha tak mujhe pata h wo ek doctor hai or doctors ko bahut achhe se pata hota hai ki koi baat hai kab batani chahiye or kab ni……

    So in last I would like to say I have find these loopholes in your story and I want you to consider these things and next time u write any story keep some realistic and practical approach for your story…..
    And again Sorry if I hurted u and waiting for your reply wat u thought about my points

  30. abi

    c i have said her story s nice writing skills are nice she have a beautiful skills i appreciated her…..bt u dint note dat….u just want to bash me so u r just noting d negative part f my comment….i dnt have to blackmail u…..by blackmailing u wat i m going to gain…..c only n one epi i told i m leaving….dat s my own opinion….how come dis will hurt her if i dint read her ff d loss s only mine dat i m loosing a nice story plot…..nd if one person dint read her ff dis doesnt mean dat her ff s not nice….nd i thought my comment dint display so i typed again dat s d 3 rd comment…..what now u said s not bashing means what i said to eva s also not bashing….i just want to tell d pairs before dats it….i do no n dis what dere s bashing?????nd c dis s between me as a reader nd eva as a writer….so u dnt come between us…..she feels dat i hurt her…..bt i promise dat s not my intention…..i feel sry for it…..really very very sry…..

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