Samjhota..Swaragini ka…Ek Naya Adhaye (Intezaar) Episode 1

People…as the name is Samjhota…..u all must have understood that its me Eva…..and about the couples….u know…I never reveal them….hehhe…now lets start this ff….
A girl is wearing a pink saree..she has mangalsutra on her neck and sindoor on her mang…she is sleeping…on the floor keeping her head in the bed…….Just then she hears a sound and wakes up…she is really scared…a maid comes there..
Maid:Madam…sir asked u too be ready for the party which is at 8pm….he will come and pick u up…
Girl:Okay…..
She hears her phone ringing..she picks it up…
Caller;Hello Swara di?
Yes,,,the girl is non other than Swara..
Swara:Yes Ragini bolo…
Rags:Di…..we have kept a satyanarayan puja at home…….its day after tomorrow….4 pm….will u come?
Swara:Wohh Ragini….i don’t think I can make it…
Rags:What di…..it has been a month since u have got married..and u didn’t come here…
Swara:Ragini…plz try to understand…i can’t come…..I’m busy….
Swara hangs up….and starts crying…
Swara:I’m so sorry….that I spoke like this to u……but whatever I’m doing is only for u….
Swara goes to the washroom and cries seeing some marks on her body…someone has beaten her like an animal….her cheeks look like someone has slapped her many times….she touches her wounds and cries…..
Swara:Kaha ho tum Sanskar? Why did u leave me?Plz come back….i need u…i can’t stay in this hell…..i need u…plz come back…..for your lady hitler……..plz come back and clear all these misunderstandings…….i have no complains or hatred against u……i don’t blame u for my situation but plz……u have to come….where r u?

The scene shifts to Ragini who is crying…
Ragini;Why r u doing this di? Why? Why r u behaving like a stranger to me?
Sumi:Beta…what happened?
Rags:Ma…di is not coming…she said that she is busy…
Sumi:Why r u crying then? She must be busy na……
Rags:What busy ma? that she can’t even come to the puja……
Sumi:Beta…don’t cry…I have some work at market……I’m leaving okay?
Rags:Okay ma…
Sumi leaves..
Rags goes near her cupboard and opens it…she takes out a pic and starts crying seeing it….

Precap:Who is Swara’s husband?Who tortures Swara?Why does he do that?

Credit to: Eva

107 comments

    • Eva

      Mujhe toh wapas anah hii tha…..and I will upload the next part today most probably…i have submitted my writing..lets see when its updated…

  1. shloka

    Wow…..eva so happy that you are back…….. amazing as usual…love it…maybe swra’s husband is laksh…maybe its just a guess…lets see….btw..thanks for returning..

    • Eva

      Hey Shola..thank u so much for appreciating my ff so much on its first episode….and about your guess..u will get to know whether its right or wrong on the next episode…btw plz update your ff..i waiting for Kya Hua tera vada….

    • Eva

      I have written many ffs…like 5 for Swaragini…and in all those…i have written 2 swalak and 2 swasan..and 1 that was Samjhota 1…..was for both the couples…..so how can u say that i write on Swalak only?

    • Eva

      Mysterious starting is kinda my style dear…next episode will be here today…cause I have submitted it an hour ago…

  2. Siddhi

    Eva…u r back…I’m so happy yar…..love u and all your ffs…they were awesome…..and suprb starting…

  3. Shalini

    Di welcome back…..thanks for coming up with Samjhota 2…..and I’m loving this..its very interesting…plz plz plz update the next part soon….

  4. Niharika

    Eva…thank god u r back..I was missing your ffs….trust me u have amazing writing skills dear…so attractive and interesting starting…..keep writing….

  5. Anahita

    U r Samjhota queen di..thats the new name..i have given to u..i hope u don’t mind….I was missing these kinds of heart touching ffs so much….your ffs r really heart touching and emotional…..

  6. Niti

    Di…..love u and missed u so much….i’m waiting for the next episode eagerly…plz update soon..and about couples….I love swasan but u r an exception..i read all your ffs…and don’t really care about the couples….in your ffs…..I started liking Ragsan after I hate u too……

    • Eva

      Thank u Niti for such a lovely comment..u called me an exception..thats a big thing dear..I’m glad..that people read my ff for its storyline and not couples…

  7. Shreya

    Hayyy…..this is too good Eva…continue…I read you name in other ffs..as in they were praising u….but unfortunately didn’t read any of your ff..but I’m not going to miss this one….

    • Eva

      Oh so new reader of my ff.. I’ll be able to stand up to your expectations…keep reading dear..?

  8. Eva

    People I need to know something about this serial..is Ragini going to get married to Kartik? I heard this news that Kartik is going to fall for Ragini.if that happens then we will be able to see jealousy of Laksh..and tbh I want Kartik and Ragini to get married..cause Laksh doesn’t deserve Ragini anymore…

  9. Lily

    Happy to see u again…I always loved ur ff for its story n not its couple….so pls update the next part soon….This episode was awesome as it always has to be!!!!

    • Eva

      Thank u so much Lily for such a sweet comment dear..even o believe that couples r not important…its the story that matters…

  10. Iqra

    Vry vry happy that ur back again……
    i dont care about the couples
    but its jus that i love u n ur ff

  11. Pari

    Awsum…loved it…u r a eighth grader right? If yes..then di…I’ve read all your ffs..and all r mind blowing…keep writing..?

  12. Hey Eva..! First of all, WC back… Then, wanted to ask when will u officially reveal pairs?? Well , bura na mano holi hai..! Sry for late wishes..! Hope they upload soon…BTW are ur exams over??

    • Eva

      Krittika..i never reveal the pairs officially…not in Samjhota….at least….and happy holi to u too….my exams r over….

  13. Sweetie pie

    You are an awesome writer Eva. Missed you very much. I loved Samjhota Swaragini ka. This one is also looking equally promising and exciting. You and are your ffs are mind blowing.

    • Eva

      Dear..let me get some idea…i will definitely write one on Ragsan…cause i guess….they r the most peaceful couple…who were never shown as a couple in the show….but i like their pair a lot….more than Raglak…..

  14. Anjali

    Eva… I think I missed ur first ff… Which one was that?
    Actually give all the names.. I’ll see which all I’ve read…
    Btw I don’t know if you’ve read mine… Please dotry it if you have time..

    And uk what… I’m so proud of you… Being so young, you manage to capture the emotions perfectly.. That is a gift srsly… That’s why ppl love you and your writings… All the best Eva!! Hope one day iget to read a fully fledged novel by you… 😀 😀

    • Eva

      The name of my ffs r Swaraginiti ki kahani,I hate u too,Samjhota Swaragini ka,Manyata VS Ragini and Sanskar..Zindegi meri……and this one is the 6th one…..and plz tell me your ff’s name..i would love to read your ff..and your words r really appreciative….and about writing a novel…..u gave a so much respect by saying that……keep reading and writing dear..and plz tell me your ff’s name….cause I’m eager to read your ff….

      • Anjali

        Thnxxx…
        I have read all except for the first one…swaraginiti ki kahani…
        I’ll try that once my tests are over…
        And I’m writing my second story now.. swasan mr maheshwari and i…
        Previously I’ve written swaragini the path to happiness….
        Do read it if you have time…
        And its not about respect… being a bookworm and a writer , I understand the patience and creativity put into the story…
        To come up with such new ideas and to show the emotions on the surface is not a task that everyone can do…

      • Anjali

        I’m talking only about me here, but I’m sure everyone might agree…
        For me, as a reader, a good story is one that as you read it, you can picture it and understand exactly how the characters are feeling…
        And I feel that in ur story…
        And pls no words like respect between friends… I have complete confidence that one day I’m going to read novels written by u….
        Sorry I’m going on and on, but I’m just so proud of you…. when I was in eight…I tried writing one…but I guess I was too immature to finish…
        So yeah I’m really proud of you eva….
        Btw where are you from??
        And do read my ff if you have time

  15. Meghs(megha)

    Eva back with another amazing stry…
    Ur ff swaraginiti ki kahani
    I hate u too manyata vs ragini n zindagi was all my r favorite ff … This ffc too mysterious strt wow…i too like mystery …

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