A Sad Story (ONE SHOT)

Hi Guys this story is based on one of my favourite story. So lets start .Five friends who plan for a trip to Mumbai .Laksh initially reluctant to go,later accept to have fun with his friends.They travel together to Mumbai.Finally they reach and meet Sheker who get things done for them.
Swara lover of their friend Sanskar bring dinner for them. Mysterious thing happen and thing that their dead friend Sanskar have possessed into Sahil.Later when they check photo taken they see Sanskar with the him. They go to Laksh to tell him about Sahil,they get to know Laksh who possessedby Sanskar not Sahil. Sankar possessed in Laksh says that his friend Laksh promise him to get permission for Sanskar from his parents tomarry his girlfriend Swara.His parents did not accept her as she is orphan.Oneday Sanskars parents make another arrangment for his wedding .When Sanskar call Laksh ,Laksh says that convincing his parents can never happen as they dislike Swara and say him to come to a place.Then later Laksh receives a call from Karan that Sanskar has slit his hand and commited suicide.In order to aviod swara getting hurt ,laksh hid it from swara. laksh possessed by sanskar says that he needs only Laksh to kill and he wii never do anything for four of them.The friends seek help from Shaker and tie a holy string .After several attemp they do it and bring Laksh back.They go to the place where swara and shocked to know that she had already commited suicide .
On knowing about her death of her they think that swara spirit who brought dinner for them.Oneday when they are about leave Mumbai they cnfronted by swasan ,and laksh says he is ready to die and say a flashback that it was sanskar birthday,so to surprise him laksh had told a lie and said him to come to a place .The place is their to be revealed register office to get swasan married and wanted to suprise sanskar by giving swara to him.So ha mischievously lies telling that his parent will not accept swara ana tell him to stop spoiling swara life. Taking it seriously sanskar commited suicide and Laksh fell sorry for him and ask to take his life after forgiving him .Sanskar after hearing this he left laksh and forgave him .After six years it is shown laksh married is long time girlfriend and lived happily.

SORRY FOR THIS BORING STORY AND FOR GRAMMATICAL ERROR THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT SO NEXT TIME I WILL TRY TO WRITE A GOOD OME SO DO NOT SCOLD ME .

Credit to: FRR

4 comments

  1. sam

    so stupid of sanskar
    he even didn’t thought of his parents friends.
    life is so precious he gave it just because of a girl
    I know he loves her but what about his parents love and other people who love him

    • Rizna

      Yes,I have mention that it’s based on one of my favourite story but i have change the end and some more also

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