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RuMya :Jab Miss.Mumbai Met Mr.Delhi “SHOW SOME ISHQ” By Fenu (Ten Pearls) (Pearl-01)

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~~Jab Miss.Mumbai Met Mr.Delhi~~

” Jisse bhagwan ne ek dusre ke liye banaya hota hai…wo kahin bhi…kabhi bhi…kisi na kisi tarah mil hi jate hai…”

Rudra SinghOberoi & Soumya Tendulkar

This Rudra will surely make u roll on the bed laughing…while this Soumya is a real tikhi mirchi…its hard to understand her

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Characters

Rudra Singh Oberoi

Soumya Tendulkar

It’s a short story…
Enitire resolves around d two characters..hope u all will like it..
this story is inspired by a marathi movie !!

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7:35am
Delhi Railway station

every where noise noise n only noise…

a old man was picking stuffs from ground…
people some here and some there seeping their tea..waiting for trains…
and middle aged lady running through crowd to catch the started train…

a train arrives…

” Kabhi kabhi samajh nahi aata…
…kisi na khaas pal me…
…kaise kho jata hai MANN achanak…”

some people talking on cells just arrived from trains…
doggies roaming here and there unnecessarily…
an old couple sitting in a corner waiting for train to go back to their native place…

” Kaise khil jata hai…
…jane anjane se ehsaas…
…kuchh ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai…”

a girl waiting for some1…her expression very well shows whom she is waiting for…
a couple sharing common ice-cream..suddenly starts running as their train arrives…
a group of friend..laughing giggling..coming out of half stopped train…

” Nata jood jata hai..
…ek nayi soch ka…
…mithasa rishta…
…kabhi na toot sake jo…”

a girl in her 20s…came from just stopped train…
walking fastly..making her way out of plat-form..just to get herself rid out of the crowd…
wearing a white-perfectly fitted top with a dark green designer skirt till her toes…
a fancy belt to give perfect look to it…
small green and white diamond ear-rings…
her white milky skin was shining more in sun-light…
her straight hairs with a beautiful belt hanged in it were shining in golden shade…
and a black belted watch giving her a perfect look…


somehow made her way out…raising her hand..for any rikshaw (auto) to stop…
a rikshaw stopped…
Girl : ville streets…??
as the rikhsaw-man nodded his head in yes..
she instantly grabbed herself in rikshaw…
and it started…

she stopped the rikshaw in middle…
just to ask where is the place she wants to go..
as the stranger gave her rough track..
rikshaw again started…
making his way further…

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a boy in his 22s…
hit the fast coming ball so hardly that the fielders ran after the ball…
while he started running from stumps to stumps for the needed to runs…
the opposite team was still running behind the ball…
while he ran for his runs…
it was a 4…
he screamed in happiness…yesss
team : u always rock buddy…
Boy : tell me something new…

opposite member : match is not over yet dude…
Boy : chal..next ball daal..chal…
the baller moved at his place…
Boy : kitna baki jitne ke liye…
team : a ball..2 run..
Boy : no tension guys..chal ball daal..

while a rikshaw just stopped beside them…

Girl came out of rikshaw and walked towards the boys…
stood right behind him…
the baller did his work…
he was about to hit the ball..

when she uttered : excuse me…

the sudden voice broke his concentration…
and the ball directly hit the stumps…

BOLD OUTTT


everything stopped for a moment…
her mouth went right open…
while he went in a state of shock for a min…

he looked up to meet her eyes…
while she looked at him still in shock and mouth open…
both looked at each other eye to eye…

To Be Continued…..
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Hello friends, As part of the concept ‘show some ishq’, given by Renima Dii…mein sabse pehle meri entry denewala tha jab mene dii ki post ko activity area mein read kiya tha but dengue ne sab pe pani phair diya koi baat nahi late hi sahi Now I m giving my entry for RUMYA . Second entry will be PriVeer OS for this concept. I m sure u will have great fun and enjoyment in this story.
Do Comments and share your views for this story also. !!
Keep Loving RuMya !!

43 Comments
  1. awesome

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next one soon.

  2. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear… Update soon

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear Nikki.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next one soon.

  3. Hey is this based on mumbai pune mumbai thre marathi movie

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dear for reading.
      Yaa this story based on Marathi movie same.

  4. UF3355

    AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING SUPERB👌👌👌😘😘😘
    Dear Fenil
    Story And RuMya CS Is Very Interesting😄😘😘👏👏👏
    Keep It Up👍

    Take Care And Stay Safe😊

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much UF sis.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next one asap.
      Take care and stay safe.

  5. Tharu

    Awesome looking so interesting update soon

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much sis.
      Glad that you liked it.
      Next one I submitted may update by evening or night.

  6. Fidato

    Wow…..nice come back… How is your health..?? It’s just awesome….. I’m ready to laugh….my heart out…

    I just don’t like the rude Rudy…now in IB…🤔🤔🤔

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Fidato.
      I m very good now with health.
      Glad that you loved it.
      I submitted next part do check.

  7. Aastha_Reddy

    Hmm…Achchha hai..par yeh jo emotions hai na meri kuch samajh mein nehi aaya..Kya hai yeh Ishqbaazi??!! Still waiting for more so that I could understand them clearly…Soumya came to Meet Rudra is all I got meaning from it..
    Did Dhania sting you..wo kya hai na Annika bhabhi says Tania as a Dengue mosquito!!! Any way you are fit and fine is a thousand reason for smile on your all your sister’s face..

    1. Fenil

      You understand correctly the concept.
      Hahah yo yo that Tania Dhania dangue mosquitoes now fly away from me.
      Thank you so much sis.
      Glad that you liked it.

  8. ReihanaThamiz

    Dats so nice

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Sam.

  9. VHM

    Hey bro…in your language AFLATOON wala episode…kya baat hain..kya baat hain…loved it

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Dii.
      Glad that you loved it .
      Hahah in my language Aflatoon 😍😍😍😍
      Yahi baat Hain yahi baat Hain.
      Aakhir aapko pehli comment as hi gayi mere yahan.❤

      1. VHM

        Haan sacchi …100 se jyada articles likh diya tumne ki sab kuch padhne mein time tho lagega…lekin socha isspe pehle opinion post kar hi doon…ab ye bhi backlog mein nahi rakhna chahhti…

    2. Fenil

      yaaa aur aapke bhi 100+ hi hain.
      Good decision hahahah warna one more story in pending list.

  10. Ishuyamjha

    awwwwwwwwwwwwww bhai awesome one on rumya loved it to the core

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much WalkyTalky.
      Glad that you loved it.

  11. Lauren

    amazing bhai loved it…. I really miss rumya …. thanks for writing some pearls on them…. lovely…. uhh nailed it as always…. post next soon bhai… n yeah thinks for d links…

    1. Fenil

      Aww Thank you so much.I too miss RuMya a lot. will write for IshKara and RuMya always.
      next link : http://www.tellyupdates.com/rumya-jab-miss-mumbai-met-mr-delhi-show-ishq-fenu-ten-pearls-pearl-02/

  12. Aarti32

    Such an awesome start Bhai..Rudy bowled over by Saumya 😄

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Aaru.
      Always ready to hear you.
      Glad that you liked it.

  13. Fatmi

    wow! Nice story bhai…hope we’ll see the next part soon…kitna accha hota agar hum Rumya ko phirse is tarha serial par bhi dekh sakhte!

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much sis.
      Glad that you loved it.
      yaaa missing RuMya so much.
      Next Link :http://www.tellyupdates.com/rumya-jab-miss-mumbai-met-mr-delhi-show-ishq-fenu-ten-pearls-pearl-02/

      1. Fatmi

        Thanx I’ll read…Sorry just nw I read ur cmnt…

  14. Banita

    Heyy Bhayu🙋🙋🙋🙋
    Hope u r fit and fine now…
    I miss Rumya Soo much in d show…. Like ur concept…. As always u write it Soo Good…. Eagerly waiting 4 next….

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Bani.
      Glad that you loved it.
      Me too missing RuMya so much.

  15. Navz

    Bhaiyya….it is as cute and awesome as my rumya❤❤❤

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Sis.
      Glad that you loved it.

  16. Veera

    Nice start. It means rumya know each other but how? Curious to read the next part.

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Veera.
      No they are stranger.

  17. Radhika.k

    Superb start bhai….But this one was little bit confusing….All the surrounding descriptions which u mentioned were too good..n awesome!!N those lines meant more beautiful than ever..in ur writing…RUMYA…..”GIVING SOME ISHQ”….Ya is absolutely required as we r missing them alot!!Lovely thought…..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Radhika.
      Say me where you got confused so that I can clear your doubt.
      Yaa nice Concept given by Renimaa Dii.
      Me too missing RuMya a lot.
      Glad that you loved it.

  18. Ankita27

    Khub j saras shaduaat…. 👌👌Cute n sweet Rumya… Loved it…

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot.
      Glad that you loved it.

  19. Komal

    Awesome start.. Its a new concept for me.. Totally new.. Keep it up bro..

    1. Fenil

      Thank you so much Kashu.
      Really glad that you liked it.

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