roke na ruke naina (raglak) part 25 by mickey

Hello friends.
Note :-1)This is the second last part..
Comment karna to banta hai?
2)And This is a big part and I want big comments also as for my hardwork to write this ?
3)Only one word comments like’awesome’, ‘ nice’ etc… Are not allowed ??
4) Don’t skip the dance part pleaseeee…I wrote this by very much difficulty… That’s why I got late to post it?
Okkkk now Start the story


So the story starts with
Laksh gave ragini a packet..
Ragu:- lucky what is in this??
Lak:- A dress for you.. For tomorrow’s sangeet..but open it tomorrow morning only.

Ragu:- why now??
Lak:- It’s a I have to go.. Otherwise Bhai will engulf me..
Ragu:- ok bye..

Laksh hugged ragu..

sanky waiting for lucky outside.. Just then a paper ball fall on his car..
Sanky picked that paper and open that..

In that paper
A sorry was written…
Sanky Looked everywhere​ but didn’t found last he saw upwards
And​ found swara standing​ in the balcony of her house.. Holding her both ears..

Sanky smiled..
San:- it’s need..
Swara smiled back..

Just then lucky came downstairs and found sanky saying “it’s need..”
Lucky looked see with whom sanky is talking but didn’t found anyone..swara also immediately sat down in balcony, now lucky was.unable to see her..

Lak:- Bhai… With whom you​ are talking.. Don’t.. Don’t tell me that.. you can see..ghosts and you can talk with them…

San:- oyeee shut up..I can’t able to see any ghost- vost.

Lak(murmured):- yes..ghosts are visible to only good person and you are a devil..

San:- what you said???

Lak:- nooo nothing…I said something​ no.. Bhai..
San:- ok ok now let’s Go home or else the firecrackers will blast today only before your marriage….

Lak:- hahahha…yes Bhai let’s go home..

Sanlak sat in car and drove off…
After sometime
It was 11:30 pm..when sanlak reached home…
San:- now..bade papa will kill us both…
Lak:- I have to face his anger more..I don’t want to die this early.. At least let me see my marriage first..!!

San(frowns lucky):- Bade papa should do one thing when you were small…!!

Lak:- what thing?? Don’t say he should kill me when I was small..!!

San:- nooo I am talking about other thing…I am​ saying he should send you in India’s best dramebaaz…I am sure you will be the winner..?

Lak(making faces):- don’t irritate me…I am preparing myself to hear the big lectures of Mr.Dangerous…. But I happy this time as you are also going to listen the big long lectures…

San:-tornado don’t be so happy..I am listening all this because of your silly try to meet ragu….now come..

They went inside mm..

When they entered the home the hall is filled with silence.. Sanlak thought that ap and dp went to sleep.. So they r escape now..!!
Just they got relax.. The light gets on our poor guys r freezed for a moment..!!

Dp came out and went to lucky
Dp:- where u went.laksh??
Laksh is stammered…. He said voh voh…

Then dp went to sanky..nd ask why u took more time to reach home..???

He has no answer.. Both don’t know what to say..
Dp:- Why u are not answering me?? Can u please answer me!!( He asked in louder tone.)

San – doctor, lucky- temple(both said at the same time.. )
Dp see them in strange way..
They lucky manage to say..
Lak:-Papa I went to temple to thank god for this happiness nd I saw Sanky on road he is feeling dizzy.. Nd I ask to him what is the reason..?? He said he is not feeling well.. So we went to doctor.. Thats it papa..
Lucky said in one go nd breaths heavily..

Sanky :- yeah bade papa.. He is right

In Next moment
“what ur not feeling well??”
voice came..
It’s none other than ap..
Ap:- Ur so weak.. U don’t eat properly.. That’s the reason u got this kind of weakness.. Wait I will give some old medicine..Its Ayurvedic medicine..

San- no ma..
ap:- no I’m not going to listen u..wait I bring it..
Lucky (murmurs ):-bro ur gone…ittaste bitter.. Yuck..!!!

Sanky glared him…lucky is controlled his laugher by seeing him Sanky got a idea.. Ma lucky also said he is feeling little bit weak..he is groom.. He must be energetic…
ap :-y not..??? wait I bring u for both..

Ap prepared it.. Nd give to sanlak.. They both made faces by seeing the medicines..
. Sanlak – ma plss.
Dp said u both r going to drink.. We gonna watch u..!!!
Finally they both drink it.. They made faces and they ran to kitchen to eat some chocolate..

In lucky room..
san- For ur stupid answer I drank that medicines..
Lucky – what I do bro?? innocent kid,
San- ur the reason for everything
Lucky – I’m also drank that na..y r u scolding me..
San- I know u r a world best actor.. Don’t do that trick too me..I know u very well
lucky – is it??
They both saw each other.. And they burst out their laughter..

———-###sangeet ceremony##—————
It was a new morning…birds were tweeting and​ dancing in their seems​ like they are practicing for raglak’s sangeet…

In gadodiya house.
Ragini woke up.. And smiled seeing the packet which lucky gave her..
She immediately opened it..
It was a beautiful Blue and pink lahenga inside it..
She unfolded the dress and found a collage of raglak pics inside it … Their pics from starting to till the date…
Ragu smiled widely…
And got ready for the sangeet party… She was looking gorgeous ?? her hair were felt open with curls at ends, big black eyes with Kohl.., matching jewelleries..omg… Really a beautiful fairy tail princess???

Shona came there and hugged her
Swa:- wawoooo you are looking​ awesome ?
Ragu:- thank you…but di.. You looks awesome too…why don’t you find a groom for you..

Hearing her words only sanky’s face came in swara’s mind..
Swa:- leave me!!! You get ready fast ma is calling you downstairs..
Ragu:- I am ready.. Let’s goo
Both we down and from there all gadodiya went to mm…

Here in mm..
Lucky got ready and went in sanky’s room.
Lak:- Bhai..!!
San:- wawooo lucky!!!
Lak:- am I looking that much handsome that you are saying wawooo.. Anyways thanks..

San:- you are looking nice but my dear I am saying wawoo for another reason, first you go and check is the sun rise from east today or from went?…

Lak:- obviously the sun rises from East..
San:- but you came without doing any dhamedaar entry without breaking anything or without shocking me.. That’s why I am asking you!!..oooo…I see you are going to get married na.. That’s why you are changing..

Lak:- stop your nonsense​.. And may you also change, why don’t you find a bride for you..who will change you.huh!!!

Hearing his words swara’s face came in sanky’s mind..

Lak:-come downstairs is calling you.
Both came down..

When they reached downstairs they found gadodiyas there..
Lucky smiled seeing ragu
All greeted eo , then lucky went near ragu and whispered”you are looking​ gorgeous”

Ragu smiled and whispered back”you are looking awesome”

Lucky was dressed in blue sherwani..

Here swasan were also dressed coincidentally. In Same coloured dress
Swara was in purple lahenga and sanky was in purple sherwani..

Both passed a smile to eo.
Then they took mike and spoke..
Swa:- hello!!! Everyone.. It’s​ my lil sister’s..
San:- and my lil bro’s sangeet party…
Swa:- sooo are you guys ready..!!!
All :- yes!!!!!
Swasan:- sooo why we are waiting for…. LET’S NACHOOO!!!!!!!!

The lights got off..
Then flash light fall at the center of the hall…& a guy is standing facing his back…he clapped & music starts..he turn..its lucky

Khwaab Hai Tu
Neend Hoon Main
Dono Mile
Raat Bane.
Roz Yahin
Maangu Duaa Teri Meri
Baat Bane.
Baat Bane.

Main Rang Sharbaton Ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani
Main Rang Sharbaton Ka Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Paani..
Mujhe Khud Mein Ghol De Toh
Mere Yaar Baat Bann Jaani
Main Rang Sarbaton ka
Tu Meethe Ghaat Ka Pani….


Munda thoda.. offbeat hai
Par kudiya de naal.. bohat sweet hai (x2)
Dhongi sa ye bada dheeth hai
Viral hogya ye Tweet
Par phool wool karne mein cool
Tu badi tezz katari hai
Shagan teri ki, lagan teri ki
Humne kardi taiyari hai
Nachde ne saare ral-mil ke
Aaj hil-dul ke
Le saare ke saare nazare (x2)
Khasma nu khaane!

[Raglak sat at the special sofa then,

RAGINI(WHISPERED IN LUCKY’S EAR):-DID you Saw A Spark Of Love IN SWSAN’S EYES For Each other..i think your bro love my sis and what you did for me….
Lucky :- ohhh….I didn’t did anything for you…
Ragu:- nooo
Lucky:- let me remind you….

He stood up…. And started​ singing pointing ragu..
Ishq mein tere, announce kar diya
Ho tere liye dil kudiyon ka bounce kar diya

Haaye Ishq mein tere, announce kar diya
O tere liye dil kudiyon ka bounce kar diya
Bechain sa hota jaaun
Par main ye samajh na paaun
Main jaagun, mere bin tu kaise so jaati
Shanivaar raati humein neend nahi aati
Shanivaar raati humein neend nahi aati
Shanivaar raati humein neend nahi aati
Shaniwaar raati humein neend nahi aati
Main jaagun, mere bin tu kaise so jaati
ta da da da… oye.. ta da da da… oye!

[Lucky made ragu stand and pulled her closer to him and both started dancing and doing the signature steps of the dance of this song?)

Shanivaar raati humein neend nahi aati
Shanivaar raati humein neend neend neend neend…
They completed their dance…

[Lucky hugged ragu and whispered in her ear:- I love you….
Ragu got extra happy and tears started coming from her eyes….she said:- I LOVE YOU TOO LAKSH with a cute smile ?]

???Ok byeeee Friends Now they got tired nooo energy for dancing more…. Actually The secret is I don’t have the energy to write more ???

Comment please I did lots of hardwork you know ?????


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  1. Follybraverl

    Awesome kidoooo just loved it

    1. Yashu24

      Love you folly diiiii??? I am very happy that you liked​ it ?
      Take care
      Keep smiling ??????

  2. di epi was good. I loved the moment when swara said sorry holding her ears. Last time you asked me my age its 17 . Im reading from when ragini and lakash marriage and ragini was in love with nikhil.

    1. Yashu24

      Hey don’t call me diii I am younger than you…I should call you dii..
      And thank you sooo much for liking my ff???I am super happy that you liked it..
      Take care..???

  3. Dharani

    awesome mickey the dance steps are also awesome and congo for silver jubilee

    1. Yashu24

      Love you diiii????? I am very happy that you liked it… And thanks for wishing me for the silver jubilee ?????
      Take care
      Keep smiling ???????

  4. Kitkat

    mikuuuuuu…….???????? sweetheart it was awwwwwwsome…….. just loved it….. n r u really ending this ff…..???????????

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww….di you always become emotional when I end my ffs…
      Don’t be sad diii I will write another raglak ff if I get time and ideas ?
      But I am happy that you liked it..??????????
      Keep smiling…
      Take care
      Loveee you sooo muchhh???????????????

  5. Amazing dear ?? , I loved your update . Literally this part was longggg plus beautiful one . Sanlak ‘s convo was hilarious ????? …… specially when they talked about
    ‘ ghosts’ n ‘drank that Ayurvedic medicine’ …… Mr . Dangerous is really ?????? ….. the steps were awesome as well as the choices of songs too . I loved blue?? …. and so raglak . Swasan dress combination was also cool .

    I hope …. I fulfilled your all promises ???? . I gave a long comment . Plus I read dance steps too .

    1. Yashu24

      Ashnoorrrrrrr my dear thank u thank uuuu thank uuuuuuu sooooooooooo much!!!!!????????yes my dear You fulfilled all promises ?? and I am overwhelmed to get your this beautiful comment​ thanks​ again dear ????? I am very very veryyyyy happyyyy that you liked it???

      And blue is my favourite colour too?
      Ok dear keep commenting..
      Take care…
      Keep smiling
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  6. Mintu

    Awesome choti… full episode is like a big treat..raglak moments r chooo sweet..!!! ohh my dear u going to reach 25 episode… Cngrtzz da..ur hardwork for writing this long update is really worked.. Its super duper hit..the song sequence r amazing..!! Waiting for next part.. I think I give u a long comment ?? but it worthy for ur work dear..keep rocking..!!

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwwww…my sweet AKKA(hehe I said in your language) thanks alot…??????????? i am really very happy that you liked it…???
      Thanks for wishing me for the silver jubilee ?
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      Love you ???

  7. Sindhura


    1. Yashu24

      Sindhu diii your one word awesome was not allowed ?? but sometimes one word can say alot…thank you for liking it??????
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  8. Harinipriya

    Hey Mickey! First of all I am happy and sad too. Sad because next is last episode :(:( and happy because of the dramebaaz and tornado Lucky who made me laugh like hell 🙂 🙂 🙂 Next was the beautiful dance of RAGLAK at last 😉 😉 U made my day dear. And finally a very big congratulations for ur 25th episode and ur hard work. Keep writing more stories. Love u so much dear. MICKEY ROCKZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzz. :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

    1. Yashu24

      Love you diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ???????????????? I am really very very very happy that you liked it… And di don’t be sad , I promise I will write another raglak ff if I get time and ideas?
      Take care
      Keep smiling….?????????

  9. Akshata

    awesome, it is very sweet and cute update, full of raglak scenes. what to say abt sanlak conversation…. that was damn hilarious. and yes congratulations, you have completed 25 updates. eagerly waiting for the next.

    1. Yashu24

      Awww…my akshi diii
      Love you ???????????????I am really very happy that you liked it??
      Thanks for wishes…
      Take care
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      Love you loads….??????

  10. Asw

    Nice keep going

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very much for reading and commenting…I am super​ happy that you liked it????
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  11. Akankshanna

    Amazing……Cute bromance………

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very much for reading and commenting…I am super​ happy that you liked it???tTake care..
      Keep commenting
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  12. Berdilla

    superb choti i liked sanlak conversations and their dance dear

    1. Yashu24

      Love you diii??
      I am very very happy that you liked it..?
      Take care
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  13. Shivi21

    Awesome siso ???
    I loved sanlak scene ???
    And their dance was amazing mind blowing ???but y u end this ff ??

    1. Yashu24

      Awww…shivu diii
      Thank you diiii for reading this and liking it???????
      And diii please don’t feel sad I promise I will start another ff of raglak if I got time and idea..?
      Love you ????

  14. Shivi21

    Awesome siso ???
    I loved sanlak scene ???
    And their dance was amazing mind blowing ???but y u end this ff

  15. Awesome raglak scene were cute waiting for next chapter

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear..I am happy that you liked it..
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  16. Interesting episode and Raglak scenes are beautiful. Loved Sanlak scenes too. Eagerly waiting for next episode

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear..I am happy that you liked it..
      Keep smiling
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  17. Lovely7

    Raglak scenes are amazing sis

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very muchhhh diii???? I am feeling very happy that you liked it..
      Take care ??


    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear..I am happy that you liked it..
      Keep smiling
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  19. Sreenandana.suresh

    mivkey….plz continue swaragini 2….

    1. Yashu24

      I will try to continue it but I can’t promise you…
      Take care
      Keep smiling..????

  20. IME

    loved it!!
    post nxt part sooooooooooooooooooooon
    m dying to read it!!
    postttttttttttttttttt soooonnnnnnnnnnn
    its my order!!!!!!!!!!!
    love u
    take care

    1. Yashu24

      Awww…my sweet don keep patience ishu???? I am very happy that you liked it..??????
      Your order will be accepted my lord???? I will try to post soon…
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  21. IQRA222

    angel angel you know after reading this part i was feeling so fresh as it was full of dance songs and that too my favs
    raglak scenes were fabulous
    and swan they are so cute i really love their pair they are just amazing
    sank scene and medicine was funny
    and it is the silver jubilee of my one of the fav ffs i am very happy
    can’t wait for the next part

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww… My lil princess , you liked it sooo much?? My pleasure sweetheart ????? I am super dooper happy that you liked it ???????
      And thanks for wishing me for the silver jubilee ????
      Take care…
      Keep smiling.
      Love you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

  22. AMkideewani

    Superb Sweety, I love it

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diii ????
      I am very happy that you liked it…
      Did you read the previous parts??
      Take care
      Keep smiling..????????

  23. Superb…. Congrats Mickey for Silver Jubliee ??… Yahoo….
    SanLak conversation is hilarious especially ( Ghost, Mr Dangerous & Lucky’s entry without breaking anything)…
    Next is the last Part & will missed Lucky our Tornado alot ??

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww… Don’t be sad teito dear..I will write another raglak ff for sure..okkk.
      But the reality is I also miss our tornado ?
      Ok leave sad talks…I am very very very happyyyy that you liked it and thanks for wishing me for the silver jubilee ???
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Love you

  24. hi yaar it was awesome
    the songs choice, colour combination and the sanlak convo was funny

    1. Yashu24

      Hey buddy thanks ??????????????????
      I am really very very happy that you liked it..
      Take care sweetie…
      Keep smiling
      Love you ????

  25. Darshini

    Miku dear…first of all am really really sorry da..for being lte…
    The chappy was too gd??
    Haha!!lucky’s dialogue”Ragu don’t open now”…aww…
    Their dress code…
    Love the way swara hide whn she noticed lucky…
    Ghost na..who told u laksh that only gd pples alone can see ghosts..hehe!!vry funny…
    And the ayurvedic drink…poor sanlak…
    Lov their bonding…
    The song selections ???…
    Lovd each ND evry phase of this chappy…my fav sng rang sharbhaton??
    And Congo for silver jubilee and am waiting for your next work…keep going dear…

    1. Yashu24 darshu akka?????? chooooo sweet of of you…??? I am I on cloud nine that you liked it….???
      Love you soooooo much ???
      Oh rang sabartoon ka is your favourite song…nice?
      Ok akka
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Love you very much ?????????

  26. Asra

    Ohh my princess it’s fabulous dear….loved it alot dear….sanlak scenes r so hilarious…..ayurvedic medicine scenes superbbb hahaha….raglak scenes r chooo cute and chweet….and their dance superb dear….loved it….waiting for nxt one my Mickey princess….
    and congratulations for ur 25th update….and am really sorry for late comment…holding my ears…it’s all bcz of my exam…tkcr dear…

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww..arsa diii ???????
      Love you I am really very happy that you liked it?????
      Thanks for wishes…
      And no need of sorry… best of luck for your exams..???
      Take care
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  27. A.xx

    amazing yar and 25 woo! xx

    1. Yashu24

      Love you diiii ???I am very happy that you liked it… And thanks for wishing me for the silver jubilee ??????
      Take care
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  28. Varshni

    Wowwww !!!! I ‘m speechless !!!
    It’s amazing [email protected] such a lovely part !!!
    Awwwww lucky singing shanivaar raati song that’s awesome
    And mein rang sharbaton ka song with raglak that’s so cute
    Nachde ne saare song for swasan was amazing
    Lovely update by lovely author
    Wow lovely lucky too???

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww… such a sweet comment by a sweet reader ?????
      Varshu diii thank you sooo much ?? I am very happy that you liked it?
      Take care
      Keep smiling????

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