roke na ruke naina (raglak) part 24 again by mickey

It’s my request to all the readers of my ff please read it and the once who read yesterday, please comment again…
Actually it got deleted by tu and I have to write it again.. Please I wrote it again after being so busy.. Please comment…

The story starts with lucky
lucky went in his room stamping his feet as no one allowed him to go with ragu..
In Lucky’s room
Lak:- ahhh…no one allowed me to go with ragu..I also wanted to go with her..I don’t even talked with her today..
Now what to do..???

After sometime lucky ki dimag ki batti jali?
Lak:- yes…!!! I can do it..I will definitely do it..!!

His face glow up like a 100 volt bulb..

Here in gadodiya house
Sanky reached there with the gadodiyas..

San:- ok uncle-aunty now I have to go..

Swa:-what you have to go..!! This soon…I mean today only you became my friend and I want to talk to you.. And you are saying I have to go….no sanky you can’t …

San:- but swara…!!!

Swa:- no buts and ifs… you are my friend na.. Can’t you accept a small request of your friend..very bad sanky..I was considering you as my friend and you..huh… You are coming with me , I want to talk on a very important​ topic with you… And ragu you are not allowed​ to come there , if ma baba wish they can come but you can’ tell me where is your..oh sorry..where is our room..ragu….areee..tell fast na..sanky’s time is wasting..ragu…

Sansky was continuosly seeing swara hearing her blabber..whereas sumi,shekhar and ragu were standing there with open mouth…

Ragu:- maaa…are you sure that this is our shona di…. Shona di spoke hardly 10 words in a day and this shona di…omg……

Swa(making faces):-Did I asked. You to give a report on me.. Whether it’s​ me or not..I asked you where is our room..ragu how can you doubt on me..haa.. Very bad… It’s me..Miss Swara gadodiya….If your doubt got cleared can you kindly​ tell me the way to our room..

Rag(being surprised by her sister’s so much talks):- it’s upstairs.. The first room…

Swa:- very good…
Ragu:- but madam if you allow me can I take my phone from the room.. Before you go there..
Swa:-ummmm..yes you can but don’t dare to come there when we will go there
Ragu:- ok I won’t come

Swa:- promise me..

Ragu:- yes promise..
Swa:- nooo do pinky promise…

Ragu:- areeee…meri maa..pinky happy.!!!

Swa:- are.. Super happy!!!

Sanky was smiling seeing the childish swara..
Ragu went upstairs
And swasan and sumi shekjar were sitting in hall..

In ragu’s room…
Ragu took her phone and she was about to go downstairs but stopped as her gaze fall on the open door of the almirah..

Ragu:- why this door is open..I should close it..

Ragu went near the almirah and locked the door which was slightly opened..

She was about to go but stopped hearing a familiar voice..

Ragu:- laksh..???? Nahhh.. How he can be here.. Maybe..I didn’t talked with him today that’s why I am remembering him that much that..his voice is echoing in my ears…
I should call him…
She went downstairsm..

Swa:- now don’t dare to come there.. Understood ragu..

Ragu:- yes bossss…
Then all started laughing..

Swara hold sanky’s arm and dragged him upstairs while saying:- maa..baba.. You both also come fast..I want to discuss on a very important topic..

Shekhar:- yes..beta..we are coming…!

In ragu’s room..

Swa:- tomorrow is raglak’s sangeet na.. Let’s do something special for themm…

San:- yes….but what​ we will do???

Swa:- we will….
She stopped there hearing that sound again..

Swa:- sanky did you heard it’s Lucky’s voice..
San:- which voice..I didn’t heard anything…

Swa:- I heard Lucky’s voice coming from there..
She stood up to go near almirah but her leg stumbled and she was about to fall but sanky hold her..

Both were sharing a lovely eyelock..?
But they came in sense as that sound came again…

“Sanky bhai..!!!shona…”
San:- lucky..??is that you??(sanky asked loudly to get answer)

Hearing the sound sumi shekhar and ragu also​ came there….

“Yeah bhai…!!!its me..I am in almirah.. Please open​ the door..bhai I am feeling na..I got afraid in darkness…bhai open the door”(laksh said while sobbing)

All were giggling hearing that afraid cute kid like voice of lucky..
But ragu stopped giggling as the most important question striked in her mind…

Ragu:- but you got locked in this almirah..???

Lak:-ragu you locked me..!!!! I will tell you unlock me please..!!!!! Ragu I will give you a big chocolate.. Please open the door..I am feeling dizzy..I am afraid of darkness…aha ahnn(laksh said crying like a cute lil kid)

Swa:-hwww…ragu very bad.. You locked lucky for getting a chocolate…how can you do that…

San:- hahaha…swara please tell me how can someone be so intelligent..’hww ragu you did this for chocolate …vely bad'(sanky said imitating swara)..

Swa:- hey why are you​ imitating me..??
San:- ooo sorry miss intelligent..!!
Swa makes faces..

San:- but lucky what are you doing inside??

Lucky:- I am doing breakdance.. Come join me!!aree bhai I told you..I am shivering with is darkness every where..I am feeling dizzy and you…..

Shekhar:- stop you all…there laksh is locked and you all are doing fun..Ragu bring the kry and open him…

Ragu:- yes..baba…

After sometime she brought the key and they opened lucky…

Lucky:- pani!!!pani!!(water..water!!)

San:- areee mere jindagi ke tufaan kabhi to daya karke baks de…
(Ohh my life’s tornado… Please do sometime mercy on me and leave me)
Now tell how you came here???

Lak:- wo bhai…I also wanted to come with ragu…After you all left I came down from my room’s window without being noticed by papa then I came up in ragu’s room from the window… And I thought that someone will notice me so I hid in cupboard but ragu locked me …

Swasan were giggling and sumi shekhar were surprised to know about their will be son in law’s talent…. And ragu was blushing..

San:- now you wait.. I will tell about this to bade papa…

Swa:- hey sanky! How you can do this… You should be a protective, caring bro instead of jumping to tell all this to your bade papa…

San:- Swara I know very well how to react with my bro… This marriage is happening just because of me…ask ragu when you have time..

This unknowingly hurt swara..
San:- lucky now come with me..
Shek:- areee sanskar he came here after lots of struggle to meet ragu..let him meet her…

San:- lucky only 10 mins..I am waiting outside..
Saying​ this he left..

Sanky was sitting on the top of his car’s front..
San:- oh god how I can Talk with swara so rudely… She is very innocent.. Today only she came in my life and she changed my life…

He started gazing stars…

Here in ragu’s room..
Raglak were alone there…
Ragu:-so lucky where is my chocolate?

Lak:- which chocolate??? You should give me choco..I came here to meet you after crossing the India- Pakistan border like place… You know na…how dangerous my dad is…

Rag:- soo did I invited you???
awww… Lucky.. You are afraid of cute…(she pulled his cheeks)

Lak:- Don’t call me cute…

Ragu:- I will call….
Lak:- I won’t melt with this, you have to give me​ chocolate…
Ragu:- lucky be serious sometimes…
Lak(winked):- you know na..I became serious once in love not again…

She kissed his cheek…
Lucky smiled…
Precap:- nachdene sare…(raglak sangeet)

Sorry friends as I did changes in it but What I would do…I forgot the exact lines I wrote yesterday…
Please comment….

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  1. Berdilla

    Superb choti i loved it

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you dii for commenting again..I simply wasted others time for my small mistake…
      Love you
      Take care ????

  2. Shivi21

    Awww.. Superb superb??? mickey my cutiepie lucky? I love him and love u for this outstanding part????

    1. Yashu24

      Love you diduuuu????? and I wrote the​ whole part again so I forgot the exact lines and I am not feeling it as good as it was before…but I can’t do anything now…
      But I am delighted that you liked it ??
      Take care ?

  3. Mintu

    Amazing micku…

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diii…
      I am feeling very nice that you liked it ??
      But I am thinking that it was more good yesterday..I wrote it in hurry and spoil it…
      Take care
      Love you ????

  4. Fairy

    Awwww!!!!!!such an amaznggg n super cute update yaaar..hahahhahah lucky??? so so sooo sweeeet ?????fabulousss update dr…totally entertaining???? waitng eagerly for nxt uodate??? n omg u”ll put “nachdene sare” song for raglak Sangeetha???? Heheh actually it’s my fav..????? keep rockng n stay blessed sweetheart????loatz of love..umaaah???

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww…my fairy didu commented in my ff.after a long time..I am jumping with happiness…????????
      And I am really really really…… Very happy that you found it entertaining and good.?
      Ohhh nachdene sare is your fav…?.. That’s great..I also love this song..?..
      I will try to post the next part soon..
      Love you sooooooooooo muchhhh??????????????????????????????

  5. Superb….
    Lucky Soo Cute….

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very very much dear!!!!!
      I am happy that you liked it..?????
      Keep commenting
      Take care ????

  6. Follybraverl

    So good kidoooo love it

    1. Yashu24

      Love you sooooo muchhh diiii??????. You commented here again that’s very very sweet of you….???

  7. Kitkat

    miku update was as usual awesome….. really loved it…… n don’t worry about the part that got deleted…… this part is more awesome than previous……

    1. Yashu24

      Love you loads choco diiii….????…. You supported me like always ..I am blessed to have a elder sister like you..?????????

  8. Asw

    Nice keep going

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you veryyyyyy muchhh!!!for commenting here again…I am really very happy that you commented again…
      Love you
      Take care ???????

  9. Lovely7

    Try to add more raglak scenes please

    1. Yashu24

      Sooo sorry dear for giving less raglak scenes… If you felt them less then​be ready you will get lots of raglak scenes in the next part..???
      Take care..

  10. Shrilatha

    Mikku it was awesome awww. My sis had to do double work….

    1. Yashu24

      Awww shri diiii love you ?????
      And I had to do double work but it’s ok If I didn’t wrote it again how you would able to read it… And how I would get your comment….soo it’s okk…???
      Take care
      Love​ you ?????

  11. Darshini

    Aww so cute…
    I was laughing again whn sanky imitated swara saying”hww..ragu…you locked laksh for chocolate”
    They r so funny dear…
    Lucky b serious na…lucky asking cutely for a Choco…hehe!!miku u got d answer na…lol…
    Tc dear…waiting for the next part

    1. Yashu24

      Di I changed the reason…I forgot my own ff..I am thinking that at this small age only I started​ having memory loss problem ?
      Hehehehe….??? But di I remember that I shouldn’t say thanks to you as our deal? so….. love you very very much????????????

  12. Dharani


    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diiiii ????
      I am super happy to get your comment..
      Keep commenting..
      Take care diii???

  13. So nice dear. Loved Laksh’s antics

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dearrrr!!!!!????…I AM very happy that you liked it ..?
      Keep commenting… Take care ??

  14. Awesome episode and loved Raglak scenes

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very very muchhhh dear ..?????????..I am Very​ very happy by getting your comment ?
      Keep commenting..
      Take care?

  15. awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Hey thank you very very much dear sanju??????I am super happy with your comment ?
      Keep commenting…
      Take care…?

  16. Asra

    as usual awesome my princess Mickey….u rock it…laksh almirah scenes superbbb dear….loved it…ragu u do it for chocolate….so sad laksh…ohh swara chatterbox feeling bad ah?…don’t worry dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one….takecare my princess…love u sweety…

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwww my dear asra diiiiiii…. Feeling like to hug you tightly..!!!!????????
      Love you diiiiiii
      Feeling very Very​ happy that you liked it…..??????

  17. IQRA222

    Angel even if you wrote it again let me tell you it was rwally a perfect blockbuster one i loved it??
    It was funny that licky is so childish and swara too is no less ??
    Overall it was heavenly
    Waotong for the next part

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwww my cutie pie ?????
      Love u, love you, love you sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhh????????????????

      1. IQRA222

        love you too angel <3

  18. superb

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you soooooo much dear!!!!! ?????????
      Keep commenting
      Take care

  19. Sreevijayan

    Vrry sweeet update dr

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very much dear for commenting again… Your comments meant alot for me ??????
      Take care dear
      Keep commenting ?

  20. Superb dr

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear…!!!!?????
      Keep commenting
      Take care ???

  21. Varshni

    Extraordinary baby sissy !!!!! Awww laksh cuteee and choco !!!!

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww my didu love you very much ??????
      Thanks for commenting again diii
      Take care
      Love you​?


    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear…I am very happy to get your comment… Keep commenting.. Take care ????

  23. Astra

    superb micku dear.

    1. Yashu24

      Hey diiii… First of all tell hows your studies are going on..??? And​ then tell me when you will post FELLING IS OUR LANGUAGE…

      And di love you very very much.. You read my ff after being busy…,???????

  24. Akshata

    its really amazing part

    1. Yashu24

      Love you very very very much diiii??????????????

  25. IME

    loveddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ittttttttttttttttttttttt
    waiting for nxt partt eagerly
    and type the story on wattpad so you can save it 🙂
    post soon
    love you

    1. Yashu24

      Love you my sweetest don ever in the world……???????
      I will try to post the next part very soon…
      Take care ishu????

  26. A.xx

    nice xx

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you soooo much dear!!!????
      I am very happy to get your comment ?
      Take care
      Bye ?

  27. Tigeress

    Hahahaha amazing micku, I m loving this swara , chubby bubbly girl, amazing , awesome, and raglak scene hahahaha poor lucky , u know na I love this lucky , ab mere swasan bhi saath saath I m loving it, precap is also nice, waiting for next , I will accompany them in their dance bachche ne saare in my imagination coz I can’t in reality , awesome , incredible but apne trouble maker ka tadka zyada daalna in next chappy missing his naughtiness for which I fall for him

    1. Yashu24

      Ohhhh ho positive VIP commented ?????? I am feeling very Very​ very ×100
      Happy that you liked it….????
      And ya..ya.. Surely give your company to​ them in dance ??
      I wrote it nearly..I will post the next part soon
      I hope you will like lucky in next part?
      Love you soooooo much…. Very much×1000000000000 times more??????????????????

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