roke na ruke naina (raglak) last part by Mickey

Hey friends​…
It’s last part of this ff..
And really very very very sorry for updating late…
I was super busy… and the biggest thing ideas were not coming ?
It was the most awaited day for raglak!! for you and me…
The day when raglak will become married..!!!

Soo the story starts with
Lots of sounds of different musical instruments
People were dancing
It seems that the prince of ragu’s dreams​ came with baraat..

In ragu’s room
Ragu got ready like a bride..
Looking extremely gorgeous…
She was dressed in a red bridal lehnga… looking like the prettiest red rose in the whole world…
Shona and sumi were there with her…
Swara was also looking very pretty in a dark pink lahenga…
Swa:- ragu your Prince charming came!!
Ragu blushed..
Sumi:-I am going down to welcome them…shona you too come…
Swa:- I am coming in 5mins…
Sumi went….
Swa:- hey ragu…. you are looking awesome…!! I am thinking how lucky is looking… I can go downstairs but you can’t (swara showed her tongue to ragu)

Ragu:- shona di… don’t tease me..
Swa:- awwww…ragu sorry…ok you wait for me in the adjacent AC is not working… your makeup will spoil here…
Ragu nodded and went in another room..
Swara smirked and came downstairs…

Here our tornado boy was looking like a royal Prince in red and golden sherwani..
And again by coincidence ( my idea) swasan were dressed in same colour dress…
Sanky was in dark pink coloured sherwani…

Swa:- lucky you are looking great!
Lak:- thank you shona !! You are also looking gorgeous in this dress…right bhai…

Sanky who was staring swara said:- yeah……. really gorgeous…..

Swara blushed..
Laksh laughed by which sanky came in scense..
Lucky went from there as ap called him​…

Swa:- hey sanky looking great!!
San:- thank you…

Swa:- ummm…sanky
don’t you think that lucky will come to meet ragu once before marriage…

San:- maybe.. but why are you tensed with this.??

Swa:- ufff…I am not tensed.. You hear my idea…
(She told him something which is muted)
Sanky it will be funny.. please agree na…

San:- noooo..
San:- ok ok ..
Swa:- but where is lucky ????
San:- come with me…it will have fun..
Both chuckled​ and went..

Here lucky was talking with some relatives..
There is still 1hour left for the mahuraat of all rituals…

Lucky(in mind):- I have to go to meet ragu…or else it will be late..
(Omg what he’s up to now)

Just then sanky came there…
San(whispered in Lucky’s ear):- tornado boy..shona told me that ragu is calling you in ragu’s room… Go there after 10mins… I asked adi to handle bade papa and ma here…

And as acception Lucky’s face glowed up like a 100volt bulb…

Lak:- ok I will go after 10mins…
Sanky smirked and went from there…

After 10mins⏱⏱
Lucky went upstairs without being noticed by anyone…
He entered in ragu’s room.. and found her sitting in balcony…he saw her from​ behind… and back hugged her…

Lak:- hey ragu!!why You are so strange today….I am feeling like I am hugging Bhai…

Then a voice came…
“Awww…mera tornadooo… you love me that much that you felt exactly right..”

Lucky immediately broke the hug… and went in front of the swing to see who is the person…

he is shocked to the find that sanky was sitting there covering himself with a chonri
Lucky screamed :-what r u doing bro??
Swara is hiding behind the curtain..swara also came near sanlak.. Laksh saw swara again he is shocked..
Lak:-What r u both doing???What r u both doing in ragu room???

Then only lucky realised swasan prank.
swasan r laughed seeing his condition

Lucky :- once ur marriage is fixed.U both r going to see my new face which u dont know

After listened to his statement.. They laugh more harder…
Swasan:-Best of luck for ur mission..
They both hifi to each other.
.laksh :- you both are choooo bad(he said cutely)

Then lucky got sad for don’t see his angel..
Just then ragu entered the room
Ragu:- sshona di why you called me here???
Then he saw sanlak there
Laksh started staring his angel… what he will do.. she was looking so gorgeous na..?

Swa:- your Prince charming was missing you so I called you here…
Lucky came in sense and ragu blushed…
And swasan gave hifi to eo…

San:- now we are going downstairs… and Mr.trouble maker tornado… please.. without making any issue and without being noticed came down soon…

Raglak nodded
And swasan went…

Lak:- ragu…. you..are looking very very nice today..I have a surprise for you..
Ragu:- what surprise???

Lak:- for this we have to go down from window..
Ragu:- what????I am not going anywhere…

Lak:- ragu come na.please…..
Ragu:- areee you mad can I come.. today is my marriage..
Lak:- sooo?? Is it your own marriage.. it’s mine too..if I am coming with you then what’s the problem.
Ragu:- lucky all will search us then??
Lak:- I will manage..

Raglak eloped secretly through tieing the cloth on the handle of the balcony…
Laksh get down first then he helped Ragu in getting down…
Ragini struggles in getting down because of that heavy lehenga and the jewellery…she can’t proceed down further…

“laksh…i can’t…the cloth is getting loosening…”said Ragini and she felt the shiver throughout her body…
Laksh(sounds cool):leave your hands Ragu…
“what!!”Ragini screams…

Laksh:shshh…don’t shout…trust me Ragu…leave your hands…
Ragini leaves her hands from the cloth trusting laksh…the next moment she landed safely on laksh’s arms…

Ragini slowly opened her eyes and found herself in laksh’s arms and their eyes gets locked…
After few seconds they came out from trance…she buries her head against his chest and blushes hard…

Raglak sat in Lucky’s car and drove off…
Lucky stopped the car… and tied a cloth on ragu’s eyes
Ragu:- lucky what is this??? Where you took me???…lucky????

She untied the​ cloth from her eyes after not getting any response…
She found darkness everywhere…
She became afraid and screamed:- lucky.!!!!!where are you!!!

Just then the earthen lamps and candles started glowing. Everywhere….

Then a voice came:-
Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum
Chandani bhar gaye (x2)

(Ragu found lucky there…. standing in between a round of lots of candles)

Kare chaand taaron ko mash’hoor itna kyun
Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu
I Love you tu ru ru yeah….

(Lucky came near ragu and caressed her face)

Din bhar kare baatein hum
Phir bhi lage baatein adhoori aajkal
Mann ki dehleezon pe koi aaye na
Bas tum zaroori aajkal

(He took ragu’s hands in his and kissed them)

Abhr main hoon,tu aasmaan hai
Paas hai tu, par kahaan hai
Zidd meri tu nahi, meri aadat hai tu
I love you…
(He twirled Ragu and ragu placed her hands on lucky’s chest both looked in each others eyes and got lost)
Lak:-Kabhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh puchhta
Main tere qaabil bhi hoon kya
Itna toh mujhe hai maaloom
Milke tujhe behtar main insaan ban gaya
Thoda thoda tujh se seekha
Pyaar karne ka tareeka
Dil ke khuda ki mujh pe inaayat hai tu
I love you….
(He kissed ragu’s forehead and started doing normal steps​ of couple dance)

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai
Jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum chandani bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu

I Love you oo…
(He kneeled down and hold a rose in his hand..
Lak:- You are the best gift which I got in my this whole life….
I do not know that how to spend my life without you. I don’t know its good or bad but you have become my habit now. I can’t resist you. All I know is that I love you!!! Will you marry me???

Ragu hugged him..
Ragu:- yes!!!!!

Here in mm..
The time of mahuraat came…swasan went to call raglak but they didn’t found themmm..
They told this to family and all became tensed..

All guests there started gossiping about raglak and especially about ragini.
Just then they heard car’s horn sound and and​ all turned to the entrance and all becoming totally shocked…
A silence surrounded everywhere….

Let’s see what they saw…
Ap:- hey bhagwan!!!laksh-ragini what is this??

Raglak were standing there with garlands in their necks and ragu was having manglsutra in her neck and vermilion in her hair line…

Sumi :- ragini…!!! Laksh…beta…what is this..
Swasan were standing with their mouths open in O shape….

All were dumbstruck , they don’t know how to react… and our raglak were standing there smiling…

Dp:- you both got married??..but we did​ the marriage arrangements na… then why this eloping.???

Lak:- papa we are really very sorry..but..

The time
When ragu hugged​ lucky.. after the proposal..
Ragu:-lucky we​ call you lucky,but the reality is..I am lucky!!! Not only lucky , I am luckiest person in the world to have you….
You know laksh!! If You Are A Chocolate,You Are The Sweetest,If You Are A TeddyYou Are The Cutest,If You Are A StarYou Are The Brightest,But If You Are MineI M The Luckiest.
I love you!!!!!!!!! I love you laksh!!!!!!!!!

Laksh kissed her forehead…
Lak:- soooo any other wish madam…
Ragu:- my all wishes got completed after meeting you…but….
Lak:- what but…????..

Ragu:-there is my biggest wish that I want to become true from my childhood…

Lak:- and what is it???
Ragu:-umm… lucky…I…I..
Lak:- yaaa..say….
Ragu closed her eyes and said in one breath:- I wanted to marry by eloping…

Lak:- what??????????????????(he asked being totally shocked from her answer)

Ragu:- yes was my wish but our parents are ready for our marriage so….I can’t fulfill my this dream….(she said in very cute way?)

Lak:- hahahahahhah…..
Ragu:- what happened…??

Lak:hehehhehe..hahhahahaha…let… first…oh my god…hahhahahaha… you… want to marry by eloping… really..hahaha..

Ragu:- you are chooo bad lucky… you are laughing on me…(she pouted cutely)

Lak:- awww..mera baccha… sorry sorry…
Ragu:-I am not accepting your sorry…

Lak:- Ok… then….what if.. I fulfill your wish…
Ragu:- what???..oh my god.,!!!are you mad laksh..what about our parents…??

Lak:- I am mad in your love and I will manage…so let’s marry by eloping…

Ragu hugged him…

Flashback end

All:- what???????????
Lak:- yes… it’s true….!!!
Swasan were standing near raglak
San(murmured):- tornado can never be serious…
At least take marriage seriously…

Ragu(whispered):- He says na..”I became serious once in love not again”

At this swasan and raglak giggled…

Dp:- why are you all laughing ??? and you Mr.laksh maheswari…. idiot….

Ap:- leave na…baccha hi toh hai(he is a kid only)

Dp:- ohhh really !!! I never saw a kid who is married…is this a child marriage..

Sumi:- bhai sahab leave na….
Shekhar:- yes dp ji sumi is right.. let it go..

Dp:- nooo he will get get punishment..!!!! Not only he..both raglak will get punishment..!!

Raglak:- what???
Dp:- yes!!!! And your punishment is , you Both are not allowed to see eo..

Raglak:- nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
All:- yes!!!!!
Swasan:- but it’s impossible as their eyes can’t stop looking each others face….
Because ROKE NA RUKE NAINA!!!!???

Then all looked at raglak who were staring eo lovingly…????
Swasan clicked a photo of them..
This line got played in bg:- roke na ruke naina….hummmm..teri aur hai inhe to rahna?????

Ok dear friends..
Finally completed this ff yipeeee….
But I know it was not as good as you all want… because I wrote​ it in hurry… sorry friends…

Dharani di, dharsini di and my one sweet di helped me very much to write this… love you my sisters???????

And if any one wants to read my new ff… it’s a swasangini ff…”kis kis ko pyaar karu?” Then please read it…it has a beautiful character of ragini….
Bye bye..
Love you all???????

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  1. Nice part

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks for reading and Liking it…I am happy that you liked it.
      Take care
      Keep smiling dear?????

  2. hi mickey what can i say
    raglak elopig from marriage and lucky’s surprise
    lucky proposing ragini awwww
    ragini calling him with names teddu, chocolate etc
    swasan prank
    mostly how you justified title in the end
    i have one word ie awesomeeee

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very very muchhhhh sanju dear????????????
      I am very very happy that you liked it..
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  3. Akankshanna

    Awrsome……… Bhaag kr shadiiiiii

    1. Yashu24

      Hahaha… thank you very very much ?????????
      I am really happy that you liked it
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  4. awesome dear, loved it

    1. Yashu24

      Diiiii thanks alot for commenting here..?
      I am very very happy that you liked it
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      Love you di?????

  5. Mintu

    Awesome micku..Its not boring da..Its superb..!!! Ohh..RNRN finished..??? It’s nice story dear…!!! Ragu dialogue which she used the word lucky is superb…!!! If possible write more raglak stories sweetie ?? take care dear

    1. Yashu24

      Akka I am very very that you liked it.
      And it got finished ?
      Sorry for thanking late..
      But as you know I started another raglak enjoy my new ff.?
      Take care
      Love you ?????

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diiii…
      I am happy that you liked it
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  6. Nice

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear??

  7. A.xx

    fab and will miss this xx

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks di?????

  8. tëìtō kUn

    It’s Amazing…
    Lak: Hehehe. Hahaha let me laugh first & punishment from dp is hilarious…

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks​ dear i am happy that you liked it???

  9. Awesome ff will miss it

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear?????


    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear????

  11. Superb dr…

  12. Awesome dr…

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear…I am happy that you liked it???????

  13. Darshini

    Aww miku it’s so cute dear…
    I loved it…
    Ragu’s dialogue abt lucky was too gd…
    Wow laksh u r superb…fulfilling all d wishes of Ragu…that’s so sweet…
    Dp’s punishment…haha!!
    RNRN ended so soon…
    I will miss this ff…
    Swasan’s prank was awesome…poor laksh!they fooled him…
    Swasan’s last dialogue was damn good…
    Lovd it a lot dear…
    Come back soon with another raglak ff…
    I will b waiting for u dear..
    Love you loads dear ????

    1. Yashu24

      Darshu akka
      Love you very very much
      I am really happy by getting your precious comment.
      Take care
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  14. Asra

    fabulous princess…swasan prank r supper dear….ragu dialogue about lucky awesome dear….loved it alot….dp punishment hahaha…
    ohh no u end it….sooo sad…plz write another one dear…waiting for u…tkcr dear…

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks diiii.I am happy that you liked it????
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  15. Awesome ending and loved it. Raglak scenes are superb.

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear??????
      I am really happy that you liked this part
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  16. Dharani

    aww mickuuu it is an awesome update…. loved it to the core… swasan prank and sanskar’s this dialogue “Awww…mera tornadooo… you love me that much that you felt exactly right ” i loved it so much their bond is awesome… and while going from window laksh asking her to leave her hands and he holding her aww it is damn cute…. laksh surprise is awesome and fulfilling her wishes everything is awesome??… i am going to miss this ff a lot??… love u so much sissy??… take care

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww..dharu diiiii thank you very very much… For this wonderful comment I am really glad that​ you liked my ff this much??????
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      Love you so much ??????

  17. Lovely7


    1. Yashu24

      Thank you diii???

  18. Shivi21

    Awesome ?? superb ???and very very cute ???u r awesome Mickey plzz come soon with another ff like this cute ff?????

    1. Yashu24

      Awww ..shivu diii love you…?????
      I am really happy by getting your comment?????
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  19. Awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear???

  20. Harinipriya

    Ok Mickey! Now I am going to give u very long comment. Read it at ur risk!
    At first, Sanlak scenes, Swasan pranks r all amazing! I am laughing loudly that my mom shouted that ‘have u gone mad?’ 😉
    Next, my lucky’s super duper brain and his surprise made my mouth open with wide eyes!
    Next, Aww mera bachha lucky’s each and every dialogue made me mesmerize and here I imagine myself in place of Ragu *lol* :joy:
    Next, Ragini’s wish, my god! What a wish man! I was shocked and surprised to her wish!
    Next, Raglak and Swasan’s giggling chooooooooooooooo sweet! 🙂
    Next, DP’s punishment haa haa haa! I wish I could see lucky’s face at that time!
    Next, Swasan commenting Raglak, meri maa! I can’t say more sorry type more!
    At last finally Raglak’s lovely eye lock is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo lovely!
    If u r in front of me, I will slap u for saying that it was not as good as we thought!
    U know what this out of my imagination!
    Really Micku! U r AMAZING AMAZING and AMAZING!
    I will read ur all ffs, os, ts, ss only for u and ur imagination!
    Really ur brain is extra ordinary!
    I think I had gave u more ice for this hot summer. 🙂
    Ok enjoy it and all the best for ur other ffs. and I thank those 3 sissy who had helped my micku!
    Ok Mickey read this and say how is my comment 🙂
    Keep smiling and stay healthy and most importantly remember me always! Bye!

    1. Yashu24

      I accepted this risk?!!!
      Oh my god sooooooo biggggggggg comment!!!!!!!!!?????
      I know I am replying to your comment late but that day after reading your comment my expressions were like:-
      ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????? and some were like that I can’t describe ???

    2. Yashu24

      Really diiiiiiii love you sooooooooooooo muchhhhhh for being so supportive and Caring​..??????
      I love you ???
      Soooooo sweet of you for giving this beautiful, sweet and cute comment..
      Take care
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  21. Amazing superb awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thanks dear I am happy that you liked it???

  22. I’m a silent reader.awesome

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you very very much you were silent reader of my ff I am happy to get your precious comment dear.

  23. IQRA222

    it was awesome awesome awesome awesome episode angel
    swan pranks, raglak moments, di’s punishment and raglak eloping wedding was something really out of the world and amazing
    you know angel right now i really feel like crying as this was a ff which i really loved and now it is finished i really didn’t expected it to finish this fast i am literally crying while writing this comment
    this episode is something which i read 10 times again again
    and angel you have to promise me that you will be back with a raglak ff soon haina
    now i can’t write more didu as i am getting blur vision
    so bye bye
    and take care

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwwwww…my sweetheart!!! What to say after your comment princess… You made me emotional too…I will also miss this ff… This was my favourite ff from all I had written till date..

      You read it more than 10 times!!! Omg…my cutie pie ??????!!!
      I am feeling like to hug you tightly…?????
      Such a beautiful comment cheenu!!!!
      Awwwww…my cutie I will surely write a ff of raglak for you…?????
      But I don’t have any idea for it…as soon I will get any idea I will surely write cutie pie…I PROMISE ????

      Love you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo×100000 muchhh
      Take care
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  24. Fairy

    Awwww!!!!mera baccha?????? Miku loved it soooooo soooo sooooooo muchhh yaaar..hahahahah sacchi ka roke na ruke Naina????omggg fabulous…hahahah ragsan ,she, chooo cute n lucky awww!!!! ???Hahahahahhahahahahahahaha …mindblowingg story dr…wl surely miss it!!…it’s d cutest story on raglak ever????Miku love u yaar..umaaah?take care sweetheart?

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwww… love you fairy didu????????
      I am really very very very happy that you liked​ it??
      I started a new raglak ff..if you r free check it..
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  25. Jazzy

    Wowwwww my cutieee y sweetie u r soo cute yaar and the ending wassss just fav i just loved it…. The raglak marriage was just superb like them hehheheeh i haven’t seen bride and broom escape from their marriage like this.. Sooo sooo sweet just loved ur story

    1. Yashu24

      Awwwww…jazzu diiiii I am very very very happy that you read it and liked it too…??????
      And about my sweetness…so I was sweet,cute, crazy all these things from my childhood it’s natural…??????
      I am flying in happiness that you liked this story this much..!!!
      Take care jazzu diii
      Keep smiling
      Love you very very very muchhhhh?????????????

  26. Sreevijayan

    Very lovely ending dear…loved it sooo much….

    1. Yashu24

      Thank you diiii
      I am very very happy that you liked it ??
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  27. IME

    it was superrrbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
    keep it up
    keep writing more ffs like this
    love u
    take care

    1. Yashu24

      I am very happy that you liked itttt…
      Love you my sweet don ji?????
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  28. Tigeress

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, so cuteeee, mazaa aagya bachhaa, superbbbbb ending and ragu ki wish to hahahah. vese ek baat bataun its my dream too but with a twist , i want to kidnap my lover and that too on a red sports bike, and then marry him, i know its crazy , but kya karein agar meri chhoti behen 10000% crazy h to badi behen to khud hi sochlo, hahahahahahahahahha, superb ending yaar mazaa agya sachhi, prank was damn good, and sachhi this is called a trouble maker tornado’s marriage, but mere trouble maker tornado beware, your soon to be bhabhi is really ur bhabhi in doing all these stuff, hahahhah ragu aur sanky best of luck yaar hahahahahahhaha best besttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ending everrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, love u infinity bachaa , and roke na ruke naina toooo, and my trouble maker tornado, thunderstorm, Mrs. trouble maker tornado and soon to be mrs.thunderstorm tussi chhhaaaa gaye , love u and will love u always, by my rnrn will miss u soo much, second season kab aa rha h madam ????????????????? can not wait and epilogue compulsory h okkkkkkkkkkkk., bye bachaa take care sweetie pie

    1. Tigeress

      ek chiz to reh gayi, madam aapko das baar samjhaaya h ki u r an amazinggggg writer, samajh nbhi aata, vese u r right it was not at all good , na na kisi angle se nhi bilkul nhi

      samajh aaya , and aapko pata to hoga hi m apne aapko kon imagine kr rhi thi afterall touble maker tornado mere crush jo there, hahahahaha

    2. Yashu24

      Di I am really very very very happy that you liked it???????????
      And ohhhhhh hoooo your dreams aaaaahhhaaaaaa???????
      And di really sorry I can’t write any epilogue ???
      And I don’t know about any season 2 till now ?
      Concrete on your studies.. study well ???
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      love you infinity????????????

  29. Astra

    micku.. I’m sorry for lateeeeeee comment.. but I’m back at last.. what to say yar? u said no single word.. but there r no words for me.. i really say in three words dear.. “i love this ff”
    keep it up sissy and waiting 4 ur more works..

    1. Yashu24

      Awwww..di I am really happy to get your​ comment it means alot when someone say that ‘i love this ff’ when they​ r awesome writer themselves..
      I wrote another raglak ff..if you have time read it
      Take care
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      Love you diiii??????

  30. Kitkat

    awesome update miku….. sorry for late comment but u know the reason sweetheart….. n again one of ur ff ended….. will miss it a lot….

    1. Yashu24

      Di no need of sorry and worry as I no na.. you were busy..
      I am happy that you liked it??
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      Love you ??????

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