Rishto ki Dastan (Part 24)

Hello people…..i hope u all liked my twist…..now lets go for this new episode…
The episode starts with…
Sumi goes and slaps Ragini……
Sumi:Ita bara jhut?Aur…tuune toh….apni behen ko marne ki koshish ki…..pyar andha hota hai suna tha….par itna andha?
Ragini:Ma..maf kardo plz….
Radhika goes near her…

Radhika;Ragini…u wanted Laksh right?Now see…if u would had tried to win his heart with honesty…..then u both would be together…u applied so many tactics….and see now what happened……i always thought that u hate me because u feel insecure…..u think that I’ll snatch your sister from u….but u…..u tried to snatch your sister’s life….jo ladki apni sagi behen ki na hosaki who meri kya sagi hogi….
Niti:Pyar Sanskar neh bhi kiya tha Ragini……u loved Laksh and he loved Swara….he backed off from marriage only because Swara said that she loves Laksh…….Sanskar wanted Swara’s happiness….this is what we call true love….your love was selfish…..u tried to kill Swara because u thought that bth loved each other…u tried to snatch your love’s happiness…..love demands sacrifice…and if u love someone truly then u would not back off from sacrificing anything….see now Sanskar and Swara r together..but u…u r alone…..pyar hasil karne ki chise nehi hoti..kash tum yeh samaj paati…

Ragini goes near Swara who is standing still…..
Ragini;Swara?Swara…won’t u say something to me?
Sanskar:This girl put her life at stake only for u….and u did this to her…..how can u expect he to say something?
Police comes there..Vidh shouts…
Vidhi:Inspector….this girl(Pointing at Ragini) was even with me in my conspiracy…
Inspector:Then we have to arrest u even Ms Ragini…
Swara:No….no…she didn’t do anything..Vidhi is lying…(She is looking at Ragini who is looking down in guilt)
Inspector takes Vidhi and leaves…
Laksh is about to leave when Ragini comes and holds his hand….
Laksh:Leave my hand Ragini…..
Ragini:I loved u truly……u can’t leave me like this…

Laksh frees his hand..
Laksh:Thank god…that I married Radhika and not u……u don’t deserve love….don’t forget that I’m a married man now…and I have a wife…
Radhika looks at him…
Laksh;Radhika….will u come with me?
Ragini grabs Laksh’s hand again..
Ragini:No Laksh…everything happened because of a misunderstanding…..she can’t be your wife…
Radhika comes and holds Ragini’s hand and frees Laksh’s hand…
Radhika:Leave my husband’s hand Ms Ragini Gadodia…
Radhlak leave…
Sanskar assures the gadodias that he will take care of Swara…the gadodias leave…Niti,Uttara,Parish,Suju,Ram,Dp,Ap…everyone leaves…..
Ragini starts crying vigorously….
Sanskar:Chalo Swara…..
Swara;I want to talk to di…
Sanskar;Par…

Swara;Alone….
Sanskar leaves….Swara goes near Ragini…
Swara:Di…u remember I used to tie rakhi on your wrist?U always promised to save me…..di I can do anything for u….u want my life right?I won’t back off from giving my life for u even di..di I love u..even now…..plz don’t cry…..
Ragini runs from there…Swara follows her…
Ragini:Don’t follow me Swara…..
Swara;Di..plz hear me out…
They r running on the road…..Just then a truck comes from the opposite direction…
Swara:Di…..stop running…..
Just the the truck is about to hit Ragini when Swara pushes Ragini on the other side…..and the truck hits Swara…
Ragini shouts:Swara!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
After an hour..everyone reaches the hospital…..
Doctor comes out of the OT….
Dr:Mrs Maheshwari is now out of danger…unhe sahi samay par yaha nehi layi hoti woh ladki toh unhe bachana mushkil hota…
Sanskar:Konsi ladki?

Dr:She said that her name is Ragini…
Radhika:Di?Now where is she?
Nurse;Don’t know..she was here sometime before….
Just then Shekhar gets a call.
After hearing the caller…the phone falls from his hand…and he sits down….
Sumi;What happened ji?
Shekhar:Raginiiiii…..meri bacchi…
Sumi:Kya huya Ragini ko?
Sanskar picks up the phone and talks…he gets shocked..he has tears in his eyes..
Sumi:Sanskar…..what happened?
Sanskar:Ma…wohh…
Sumi;Bolo…..
Sanskar:Ragini jumped off from a cliff…

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After 9 years…..
Swara is seen doing the arti…..she is wearing a baby pink colour saree…
She turns and gves prasad to everyone….
Just then a girl comes from behind and calls mamma…my socks……were r they?
Swara:Ragini…tumhare room meh hi hoge beta…..dekho na..
So Ruhanika Dhawan as Ragini Sanskar Maheshwari…(7)
Swara goes with her to her room…its all messed up..
Swara;Ragini?U messed up the room….
Ragini:Sorry mamma…..

Swara;Beta don’t u know your socks r kept at that left drawer?
Ragini:Sorry..bhul gayi thi….
Swara;Beta….now u go…your sisters r waiting for u….
Ragini runs downstairs….
Siya comes to her…
Siya;Ragini…tum hamesha ham tino ko late kardeti ho..
Ragini;Sorry di…
Swara comes to them…
Siya:Mamma…we have parents teacher’s meeting tomorrow….
Swara;I will be there baby…
Siya Sanskar Maheshwari…role played by Jannat Zubair Rahmani..(13)
Radhika;Kya?Parents teachers meeting?
Ragini;Ha…choti ma…even mine one is even tomorrow…
Radhika;Mere shaitan bacche..they didn’t even bother to tell me…..kyu Riya?Aur Anjali?
Hehehe….cool na?My best friends here r Riya and Anjali….so thought to do something for them….
Riya Laksh Maheshwari role played by Harshali Malhotra(7)

Anjali Laksh Maheshwari role played by Aarna Sharma(7)
Twin kids of Radhika and Laksh
They send their kids to school…..
Swara;Aj Ragini di ki barsi hai……9 years have past…..
Radhika hugs Swara……
Radhika:U named your daughter Ragini…now she is our Ragini….Siya was only 4 when she lost di….so she now doesn’t remember her even…she thinks that u r her mother…..meri baas itni si duya hai…ki hamari bacchio ke rishte pakkeh rahe….koi rishtoh ki dastan nah ho….
Swara:Haam tino behene saath nehi hoh paye..toh kya huya….hamari bacchiya….Siya,Ragini aur hamri Riyanjali……..woh toh sath hai na?
Radhika laughs:U see…we make Swaradhika…u and Ragini di make Swaragini..and my Riya and Anjali makes Riyanjali……(:P…specially for u both Riya and Anjali…)
Its evening…Radhlak wer out..when they enter home..they saw…it was all dark…..just then lights wer turned on……
Everyone shouted;Happy marriage anniversary….
Everyone’s talking to each other…
Radhika looks on with tears in her eyes…
Swara;Y r u crying?
Radhika;No I’m not…

Swara:U will lie to me now?
Radhika:Swara…we shouldn’t celebrate this….Ragini di left us today right?
Swara:Yeh sab bhi tumhari Ragini neh hii plan kiya hai….
Radhika;Matlab?
Swara;Ragini ki zid thi..that she wants to throw a party for her choti ma and chote papa’s anniversary…..u did not celebrate it for last 8 years…..but today..plz be happy…..Ragini di will be happy only if we r happy…u remember her voice call?
FB is shown…
Swara received a voice call from Ragini…
Ragini:Swara…..i’m sorry…i did so many mistakes…..for my love I did so many conspiracies……my love was selfish..it was an obsession……i can’t live with this guilt….Radhika….i know I as always mean to u…so I want to apologize to u too….i’m sorry sister….i want u both to stay happy..Sanskar and Laksh will take care of u both….Swara….plz take care of Siya…maybe she won’t remember me even….and u promise me that u won’t let her know about me……u both be happy…..aur hosakeh toh apni Ragini di ko maaf kardena…
FB ends….

Radhlak cut the cake….and then..they take a family photo……

Hoohhhh…finish….
The end….

Sorry people…if u did not like this ff…..or the ending….i love u all…thank u for your support…..and something..i wanna say about Riya..i got to knw that Riya is a brain tumour patient…..guys she need our prayer….she is like my sis…and a sweet heart……so please pray for a successful operation……

I’ll be back with Samjhota 3 on 7th June……till then tata…..take care…. 😀

Credit to: Eva

103 comments

  1. Amna

    It was something like samjhota only but l really liked it. U r awsm in potraying different emotions.
    About Riya may Allah help her in going through thia battle and may she come out winning.

  2. shloka

    Awesome yaar…. so now this has ended too.
    And about riya di… di i must say u r a real fighter… di i would say never loose courage…. we will always be ur friends…isnt it eva…..di get well soon ….

  3. jasmine

    Loved it eva…i love all ur ff.but this one was full of twist n turns…i love u yaar…n pls continue sanskar..meri zindagi n start a new ff if possible.

    • Eva

      Love u too? Jasmine…..i can’t start Sanskar zindegi meri…that had ended..but I will surely come back with another ff…thats samjhota..?

  4. As always ur endings are beyond osm…

    M eagerly waiting for samjhota 3…

    Dont worry dear.. Nothing will happen to riya.. HE is great.. HE will sort everything… She will be fit n fine soon… Afterall sabki wishes uske sath hain…

  5. sethooty

    Yes I read whole epi…be honest not satisfied.. But still love ur courage ..bz u fight against all that bashing comments… Twisty queen.. Waiting for samjhota..3
    In Your samjhota2 swalak was superb..
    Don’t know who is Riya..there r many Riya..
    prayers r for her..Get well soon Riya..lots
    of chocolates for u ?????

    • Eva

      K..u did not find it satisfactory..sorry for that…i’ll start writing samjhota 3 soon…and yeah its Riya Malik…a close friend of mine on Tu..? and an awesome person..?

  6. Eva .. I made riya di read the. Ff.. Just in nick of time.. And I thanks God that I madr her read it.. She was smiling whole time.. Full time.. Thank u for this wonderful update of urs.. Di has been taken for surgery,, bhai and papu scolded me that I am stressing di but when they listened this update.. Eventually they also smiled,. People think we are insane that one is reading a sort lying on the hospital bed.. But that is something which gives genuine, true happiness.. Thank u Eva for making my di smile.. Thank u.. Dropped a short message by di on ur previous chapter

    • Sitting on a chai and just seeing those red light.. Fills my heart with pain,, I have seen riya di getting attacks.. Those were so miserable.. Her forehead became red and swelled.. Her beautiful face wrinkled.. Her body shivered and then body parts became numb.. It was so painful to see then I don’t know the intensity of my di’s pain.. It ached to see her .. And yesterday ‘s panic attack was worse .. Such that the decision of sudden operation had to be taken.. Pls people pray for her., she is a really nice person.. A lovely soul

      • Niti

        She will be fine….i don’t know her…but i do see her comments in Anjali and Eva’s ff….she is a awesome person….and she will be there with us….she need to read her Kiddo’s samjhota 3….

      • bisha

        Hello! Riya will be all right. Thriugh her comments and her stand ups I got to know heras a superstrong and wonderful person. I nvr talked with her but i have always admired her way of talking and the soothing she gave for eva. For such a petson, God always has a sprcial place in His heart. So she will be alright. Say All Is Well. Do tell us after she gets operated successfully. After she comes back, I will definitely make friends with her. I was actually thinking of doing so. Bhagwan ne rasta dikha di. Loads of love chocolates and flowers and wishes for u dear!♥♥♥ Make a blasting return on this site!!♥♥♥ 😉 😉

      • Halima

        Nothing will happen…we are praying for her. Don’t worry, Riya is brave… She has that courage and Inshallah she will get better. ?

      • Eva

        Thank u sooo much for making Riya read this..meri mehnat safal huyi..and Riya will be fine..she has our prayers…i’m glad that my gf could make Riya smile….take care..

    • Don’t worry dear… I don’t know neither riya nor u… But I can see ur luv for ur sis.. Don’t worry she will be fine… N soon she will comment here by herself… She has soooo many ppl to pray for her… Ese kaise theek nahi hogi… ???

      Stay strong…

      Dont worry… We all are with you ????

      Take care… ????

    • Anjali

      Misha… pls give my love to her…And tell am so sorry that I wasn’t online the whole day… I am waiting for the day when she will type her messages… ????

      She is my riya… and I have utmost confidence that nothing will happen to her…

  7. Rey

    awesum eva…. many twists nd abt luv ur words r realy suprb dear … s luv always demands sacrifice.. sacrificing anythng for our loved ones happiness s called true luv nd our sanky always did dis tats y v ll luv him alotttt… Riya ll definetely cum soon wit gud health concious nd she ll b perfectly alrgt dn’t wry dear v al r here 2 pray fr her .. aftr ur xams u plzz start ur samjhota 3 dear riya ll definetely cum soon nd comment n ur samjhota3 .. riya , anjali, oops riyanjali u , me nd al our frnds hav our swt chit chat n ur nxt ff so plzz cum back soon … i miss u baby…

    • Eva

      Thank u Rey…yap..our riyanjali and we will have a sweet chat….I’ll start samjhota soon…?

  8. Vidhi

    Vidhi ko tumne first episode seh last episode taq dikhaya…..an excellent villain..she is…Ragini died….sad…..but this time evn i did not expect this ending…..

  9. Niti

    Sis….another awesome episode….what a bond u three share…never knew..that telly updates can give us such true friends….a chotu sa faily of tu….Anjali,Eva and Riya….u three r the most sweetest persons i have seen on tu….who has an outstanding personality….the one commenting from Riya’s name..u r Misha right?Riya’s sis….tell your sis that she needs to come back…i need to do friendship with her…..

  10. Nimisha

    Hey Eva…Nimisha here…u three never met each other..still such a cute and strong bond…..true friendship….for me u three make up Evanjaliriya….the three amazing people….shan of telly updates….Anjali…i’m a silent reader of your ff…..but telling u now….u r an awesome writer….Eva….shocking and dhamakedar ending….u r actually unpredictable….and Riya…get well soon dear…

  11. Akashi

    Riyanjali….and u can make also Evanjali…..three’s mixture……Riyanjalieva…..nice name na?Like Eva’s swaraginiti…..Eva..i’m a silent reader….after reading this episode…i’m sure that u r amazing at keeping every relationship…a good daughter,good sister..and an excellent friend….also an amazing human being….

  12. Mugdha

    Evu dear…..your mugu di here…. 😛 rhyming haina? Acchi shayari karleti hu mein… hehehehehe….Riya has to be fine….we will see her appreciating her kiddo in her Samjhota 3….and bashing the ones those r bashing her kiddo….Riya,Eva,Anjali..u all r younger to me i guess….i’m 21…but i must say u r more matured than i am..more stronger than anyone here….i read a quote somewhere…WHEN A PERSON RESPECT U,THEY ADMIRE U.WHEN THEY RESPECT U AS A FRIEND,THEY LOVE U.WHEN THEY RESPECT U AS A LEADER,THEY FOLLOW U….u three have become many people’s inspiration..and i admire u three…

    • Eva

      Mugu di?? acchi shayari karti ho app sachi…i never imagined that I would be someone’s inspiration….

  13. In one word ‘ Best Ending’.You are awesome.Ami ekta hindi gaaner line bolte chai,
    Tarif karu kya uski,
    jisne tujhe banaya.
    About riya, ami or jonno definitely pray korbo.She have to come back, especially for her kiddo . You need her.So, be strong . Take care and come back soon.And yeah, all the best for your exams once again.
    #be happy
    * Stay Strong *
    ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡
    Love you a ton.I will miss you.
    ☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°☆°

    • Eva

      Uma….thank u dear? and i really need a friend like her…who can always cheer me up by her sweet words..?? love u too..

  14. Jannat

    Eva i thnk u forgot tht u r writing … swasan the curse ek paheli also… plzzz write for tht too…

  15. bisha

    I will miss this beautiful story dear. Loved the beautiful rishto k fastan. U r truly amazing and wonderful. Anything I say willbe nothing for u.
    I loved Swaradhika and Riyanjali was the fav here. HOW SWEET!! Ragini died but at least she could realize her mistakes n then died. Vidhi was a wonderful villain but.

    An emotional end. But happy end. A feel good feeling. All because of your amazing hand n brain sweetheart. My lil sweet sissy!!♥♥
    But now that u ended. How to know further about Riya! Lol. I will talk to her though. Wish she gets well v v v v soon.i know she will. 7th june?!! Omg! Soo far apart! Waiting…waiting…waiting..♥♥♥

    • Eva

      Bisha…sis…thank u…i was thinking about their names..when my di said does Riya or Anjali write a ff or not..she is not in Tu..but as she heard from me many times about Riya and Anjali…she asked me…just then I got this idea..of riyanjali…?

  16. Jannat

    Waiting for samzota3….
    n so sad tht it ended bt i enjoyed a lot
    thnzzz

    keep it up
    love u

  17. IREENA

    awesome but I’ll miss this ff waiting for samjhota 3. n I don’t know about riya but I’ll pray for her I’ll tell my friends also to pray for her. she will be fine

  18. Kashish

    Oh god Eva…apki tarif mein har shabd chota hai…amazing….fantastic….u portrayed all the emotions in such a nice and excellent way…my first comment on Risto ki dastan ki guess…on its last episode…..u r brilliant…..and the best part was Riyanjali….i’m sure when Anjali read this..she will be extremely happy…..friendhship ho toh aisi…love u sweety…

  19. Sahi

    Eva…again…again….u shocked me….i’m now speechless…..when i read this…i was …in deep thinking about this episode…..this story was over all one of the best ff of yours….and one of the best ff of tu too according to me…full of suspense….u left no clue for us….by which we could predict the future..u change the kahani in a single episode…..amazingly written…

  20. Meghs

    Jan from swaraginiti to kahani till this ff all had been awesome in its own ways .. N ur samjotha is stry where u rocked not only as writer but being strong person too ..
    I will be waiting for♡ samjotha 3♡

    Ending its superb … I never thought u end it today but every story has ending n u end on good note..
    ☆☆☆ ☆☆☆

    About riya we r all pray for her
    N the way i saw her comments here i feel she is more strong person …

    • Eva

      Di..thank u..i never write about my last episode…or announce it…cause that’s a jhatka…from.my side?

  21. Niharika

    Eva,the most unpredictable person i have ever met.U surprise me in every single episode,most junior writer of tu and soooo talented.U won so many hearts by this talent.Everyone here treats u like their younger sis.U r an eight grader,so maybe 14 or 15,i’m 7-8 years older to u,still i can’t think of these things…maybe that’s why i didn’t ever try of writing a ff…lol…amazing imagination power and about Riya…..Riya..u will be perfect fine.U will come back and support your kiddo in her next ff,that is Samjhota 3.I’m waiting for that.Please please please…start that soon..

    • Eva

      I bet u can be a awesome writer if I try writing…I’m 14…I’ll be 15 within 13 days…I’ll start Samjhota on 7th…?

  22. Siyali

    Eva…we will be waiting,come back soon…with a bang!!And Riya,get well soon.Your kiddo needs u…

  23. Sanskari Girl

    Fabulous and mind blowing.I never expected this.No one did i guess..Ur writing r out of the world yaar..

  24. Hopeless

    Eva…that day i commented with my another email address…..i’m the same hopeless…who commented on your other episode.U asked me right that why i named myself hopeless?This chap is the reason.Mujhe lagai tha ki tum yeh end karne wali ho.I’m having a hopeless expression on my face after reading this.I will miss this so much.

  25. Kayra

    Eva..u gave me unbelievable shock.Your all ffs were so unpredictable.Your stories are different,actually u are different.That’s why I enjoy reading your ff,
    Love u dear…and Riya…get well soon.. 😀

  26. Anjali

    You know what… when I was reading this chapter , and I saw the name anjali and riya,it didn’t strike me at first… then you told.best friends… even then I was like…awww so sweet….

    Later I scrolled down and I stopped… I was like… wait… this is eva… that means that anjali is me??

    And I was literally shocked….???

    Love you for that amazing gesture… and this story…. ????

    Idk how I’m going to wait until 7th June….

    • Eva

      Anjali..glad that u liked it…Riyanjali r my best friends here….so a small gift for u both..? I talk about u both to my sis….yesterday when I was thinking about the names…just then she asked if my Riyanjali writes ff or not..she is not an n Tu…that time..this idea hit my head…???

  27. Shy Shy Girl

    I don’t know why but I think Riya and this sister are same people. This is attention seeking… Or else ‘brain’ tumor has nothing to do with making forehead read or head dwellings.. If you are lying please stop this cause you are playing with a lot of peoples emotions….
    And if not.. I’ll pray that you get well soon ?

    But… You don’t get dwellings or red in brain tumor. Brain tumor is a clot within the brain cells..

    • Mam.. I don’t know who u are.. But how dare u.. Yes brain tumor is a group of cancerous cells in the brain.. I know that.. But u don’t know its symptoms.. Have u ever seen a tumor patient suffering right infront of u ,.. No na.. So how will u know.. Di used to get severe headaches and she used a strong medicine,, the head becoming red were the after effects of consuming that medicine.. Happy now,, my di is not any attention seeker,,, do U think she is doing some publicity stunt by making a fool out of her,, u know how much my di has suffered., tumor is not her only suffering., we are a motherless child … Do u know how much it pains.., no na.. Unfortunately u don’t know me, neither I do .. Otherwise her mri, ct scan report,

      • Otherwise Her mri report, ct scan report , eeg report and biopsy report.. All would be in ur hands now and then

    • The message I have written down is completely out of anger.. If I spoke harsh words or I sounded rude so sorry.. But first of all u called di attention seeker which I coyldn tolerate,,, second di has slipped into coma .. All my frustration came out on u.. My di always taught me to say thank u and sorry… So I am doing it .. Thank god shanaya read the message and told me otherwise I don’t know what misconceptions u filled in ur brain,,,

      • bisha

        Misha! She has slipped into a coma!! Oh!! All will be well. She will definitely get up. God will help her DEFINITELY. BE STRONG RIYA. YOU CAN DO IT. U HAVE TO!!♥♥♥♥

    • Nivedita

      Oyeee shy girl….is she a celebrity that she would do a publicity stunt? No one would lie that he or she has brain tumor…agar app issh situation meh kisiki himmat nehi barasakti…toh kamsekam uske prob Ko chuta bolke unki insult toh maat karo..

    • bisha

      Listen Shy girl, I dont get why are behaving like this! Why would anyone go for publicity!! That also messing with brain tumor! If you cant pray for her well being whole heartedly itsokay never to commment such rubbish!! Its not at all a good mannerism that u mock other people’s feelings. thats a shit to do. I hope u understand. What kind mindless people pop out sometimes!!

    • Eva

      Dear..plz don’t say so…u can’t hurt someone like this…atleast think about their situation….for humanity’s sake don’t say such things..

    • Halima

      If you don’t know anything then please don’t say anything…you can’t judge people…respect everyone so that they respect you? You should pray for her and wish that she could survive and no one gave you rights to say that…?

  28. Halima

    Awesome…can’t wait till Samjotha 3… You simply rock all your FFs. Will miss you..?

  29. Sorry people… Couldn’t give you the update,,. All were in extreme tension as doctor in mid told that riya di’s condition is very critical and it’s constantly detiorating.,. The operation was successful.. Tumour had been removed but di slipped into coma.. Can’t write more… It’s a very painful news for us

    • Dharsha

      I dunno who is Riya but I came to know she is a beautiful soul…….
      Don’t worry….God will never leave the good ones…..
      She will definitely be back fit and fine….
      My prayers are always with u

  30. Dharsha

    Just perfect ending…….I have read this in a short time and have commented only 3 times and this is the third…..
    Bye Eva….take care

    Don’t worry out prayers are with Riya…..
    U will get well soon and we pray the almighty

  31. Anjali

    How is riya??? What’s the latest update??? Am eagerly waiting for the news….

    Tell her to get up quickly… I wrote an os
    … she wanted mmai but I think she will like this also…. so tell her to wake up
    ….

  32. Sorry for not giving any updates.. But was in a too sad mood.. Di is still in coma.. She is under observation.. Doctors have planned that on 3rd they will give get a sort of radiotherapy.. Don’t know clearly what is this.. If she wakes up before then well and good.. If not then the therapy will be done and whilst the effect had to be seen

  33. Eva pls inform anjali di and others .. I am really in no mood and extremely disheartened and sad to tell anyone else

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