Rishto ki Dastan (Part 22)

Hello people….see….i’m trying to be regular…and I think I’m very such successful at this….Kya karu? I’m very excited to write each and every part of this ff…specially this one…

The episode starts with Laksh leaving from the restaurant..
Rags leaves with Siya…
Swara is her room…..she is jumping in happiness
Sanky:Ahooo..someone is very happy today?
Swara smiles:I’m the happiest person right now….Sanskar…..just see…na…Ragini di,Laksh and Siya..they will be together tomorrow…..a happy family…..my di suffered a lot…now all the problems r solved….
Sanskar:Ha…all the problems r solved..now I was thinking….my younger bro made his family before marriage…..what about my family?(Winking at Swara)
Swara:Hain?
Sanskar comes closer to Swara:Don’t act like u didn’t understand what I meant….
Swara is about to leave when Sanskar holds her hand and pulls her…now her back is touching Sanky’s chest….
Swara:Sanskar..chodo mujhe…
Sanskar;Mrs Maheshwari mene apka hath chodne keliye nehi pakda hai….(A cheesy dialogue :P)
Swara:U r mistaken…..tumne mera haath chodne keliye hii pakra tha..u rememeber…our 3 month contract marriage…
Sanskar leaves her…and is about to go…
Swara holds Sanky’s hand…
Swara;araz hogaye?
Sanky:No….i was just thinking about the circumstances in which our marriage took place….u know what..i love u because of your selfless nature….u did not think for once before marrying me….only to reunite your sis with Laksh…..now u better understand this…take care of yourself….because I know u live for others….but remember…now someone lives for u too…(Oh god…knows what happened to me today….i’m writing such dialogues)
Swara hugs her….

Sanky;Accha…whom do u love the most in this world?
Swara;Ummm…..u and di….u know….di is like a second mom….i shared all my secrets with her….she helped me like a friend,understood me like a sister and guide like a mother…..god knows…mein unke bina kya karungi….
Sanky;And what about me?
Swara:Mr Maheshwari…i love u…u know why?
Sanskar;Because I’m very handsome and charming?
Swara;Ahaa..nehi….because u r veryyyyy cute…
(Swara pulls Sanskar’s cheeks)
Swara;Mere pyare seh cutie….
Sanskar;Hain?Cutie?I guess girls r called cutie…..aur mein toh tumhara eklota pati hu….
Sanskar places his hand on his cheek…
Swara:Aww…dard huya?
Sanskar looks at her innocently…
Swara gives a peck on his cheek…and runs…she stops at the door…and looks back..she sees him still holding his cheek..
Swara:Ab dard kaam hogaya kya?
Sanskar;Arehh..dard kaam nehi huya…dard toh chala hii gaya…issh dawah seh….
(Sanky is shocked by this action)
Swara giggles and leaves..
Its night….Radhika is looking at the moon…..
Radhika:My last night here…..after that my life is going to change…my title,house…..everyhting will change…
Sumi comes there….
Radhika:Ma..u here?
Sumi;I thought to spend this night with u my dear……i wanted to talk to u….
Both r on the bed…Radhika placed her head on her mother’s lap….
Sumi:Beta..u know that I’m not your mother…..but u know this as well na..that I never differentiated between u and swara or Ragini?
Radhika:Ma…why r u saying this?U r my mother….now u see..kanha ji even have 2 mothers..Yashoda ma and Devaki ma…and I cannot forget what have done for me….ma…its not easy to accept someone else’s child…but u did…
Radhika had tears in her eyes…
Sumi:When I look at u and I see my past,present and future,I see my little girl dressing up,covering her face with makeup,I see u running in the garden,picking flowers and bringing one to me,I see that beautiful smile on your face and knowing that moment the pride of being a parent.No matter how old u r,u will always be my baby girl…..(I read this somewhere)

Radhika hugs her….
Sumi:Beta..always remember this..u r going to a joint family….u need to do many compromises…but never do something or tolerate something that demands sacrifice of your self respect….remember..self respect and ego..both r very different…..
Radhika:Ma…u know right Ragini di doesn’t like me?So…..if something happens in future…and u get into a situation where u need to choose among us..as in Ragini di and me..then will u choose di?
Sumi smiles;No….i will support the one who is correct….
It’s the next day….everyone is doing the preparations…
Sumi calls Swara…
Swara;Ma….we will reach there within an hour…..btw…meri devrani ko acche she taiyar karna…
Sumi;Devrani?Behen she devrani ban gayi?
Swara:Ha…..double rishta..hai na…
Sumi went to Radhika’s room….She saw Radhika in the wedding attire….and kissed her forehead…..Radhika hugs her…
Sumi calls Ragini…Rags;Hello ma…
Sumi;Kaha ho tum?
Rags;Ma..i’m at my friend’s place….Siya is with me…
Sumi:Today is your sister’s wedding and u…
Rags;Ma..i don’t consider her my sis…so plz…now I’ very happy…we will get rid of her…
Sumi:Ragu…
Rags cuts the call….
Gadodias leave for mandir…on the other hand the Maheshwaris seen leave for mandir…
Maheshwaris in the car…
Swara;Ma..see your son..he is busy even today…he is not even attending my call….its hs bro’s wedding….
Just then she receives Sanky’s call…but it was not Sanskar not the phone…
Someone:Hello…..the the one whom this phone belongs to, met with an minor accident..
Swara;Kya?
Ap:What happened beta?
Swara;Okay…i’m coming..
Ap:What happened beta?
Swara;Ma…..oo…wohh….my best frend….ha…she met with an accident…..so I need t go right now….so…
Ap:Yeah sure beta….she is your best friend….u should go..
Swara gets down and takes an auto and leaves for hospital….
Everyoe reaches the temple…..
Sumi;Where is Swara Ap ji?
Ap:Wohh…she had to go…for some very urgetnt work…..u know na..she wouldn’t have missed her sister’s wedding….
(People..Radhika is in the car)
Radhika sees them from the car:Maheshwaris r here also?Oh..how can I forget..they r Swara’s in laws….but where is Swara?
Laksh is in sehra……this is what happens in serial lol….
Radhika is about to get down….but Vidhi stops her…
Vidhi:Ji.madam ji….u have to take this veil…
Radhika:But..i can’t see anything…this dupatta is not made of of net….i will fall down…
Vidhi;No no….malkin said for this…and I will help u…
Radhika take a long veil…
Radhika didn’t see Pari or Uttara…..ever….they take her to the mandap…and she sits beside Laksh…..
Sumi:Why did she take such a long veil?
Vidhi;Malkin…ajkal ka fashion..hai je…..shayad isiliye..
Sumi smiles….

After reciting some mantras…the pandit asks the bride and groom to stand up for the pheras…
The scene shifts to the hospital….
Swara;Meh kitna daar gayi thi..pata hai?
Sanky;Areh kuch nehi huya hai mujhe…just a hand fracture….
Just then Ragini calls Swara..
Swara:Di..how come u r calling now?U should be at the wedding right?
Rags;My presence is not important…
Swara:What r u saying di?Its your wedding and u…
Rags:What?My wedding?I’m at my friend’s place….its Radhika’s wedding…
Swara:What/No di..its your wedding…with Laksh…
Rags;Swara….i’m not understanding anything…..
Swara:Ma….herself said that she is going to make my sis marry Laksh….
Rags:Ha..Swara?
Swara:Radhika?And Laksh?Raggggini di……di…reach mandir asap…i’m even leaving from here…

Precap:No precap..
People..i said that before…ki Radhika will play a major role in everyone’s life….maybe as Laksh’s wife or as Swara’s sis…or by playing the role of a cupid in Raglak love story..keep guessing…..

Credit to: Eva

51 comments

  1. I just luv sumi’s advice to radhika she was so damn true…

    Can’t wait for next…

    Hopefully wedding na ho

    *fingers crossed *

    • Eva

      Meher…so that wishing for Raglak hah?I will post asap…? and Radhika and Sumi convo…it took me a long time to think….all those dialogues..

  2. I want to guess the last one… :'(
    u ended this part in such situation that my breath got stuck
    How can u bring such anxiety through ur writing?I am becoming ur fan day by day

    • Eva

      No begging plz sweet heart…i go for the best..as in the couple high suits my story…no worries?

  3. Superb, full of suspense . About guessing,I am very bad in it(Aj porjontho ekta guess o amar tik hoyni, lol)Yapiee, aj tumar notun ekta nam pelam’dialogue queen’,hehehe, nice na???
    #be happy
    * Stay Strong *
    ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡ ♡

  4. Niti

    Hooooohhh…..Eva…why did u stop here?Why didn’t u continue?Now i have to wait for the next episode now…ahhhh….wait hii toh nehi hoh raha hai….and Abdul Hafiz gave u a perfect name…aww..my dialogue queen……Radhika-Sumi part was so sweet..mother and daughter bond……again…u r unpredictable..so won’t guess…cause i know u r different from everyone….u r not going for north,south,east or west…u make your own direction…and walk to your destination….

    • Eva

      Niti? wait karlo yaar…kal hii post kardugi…hehehe…yeh baat toh sahi kahi tumne..meh ulta rasta pakadne meh mahir hu…???

  5. Hopeless

    Eva…..this track is awesome…still suspense..shadi hogi ki nehi….u can change the game with one move…..u r extra ordinary….sweety…

    • Eva

      Hey sweet heart..any prob…that u named yourself hopeless?btw I find that name cute..my bestie and sis calls me hopeless too…?? thank u..

  6. Mugdha

    Evu…..kyu?Kyu itna suspense….sochte sochte meh pagal hojagi…ek taraf hai yeh serial….jisme swasan ko alag karke mere dimag kharab kar diya..aur ek taraf tum…suspense queen……i’m feeling like to cry…just now saw a video of the upcoming scene…..my Sanskar….bechara….can’t see him like that…..any ways…awesome episode…AS ALWAYS…

    • Siyali

      Ha di..even i saw that video….and i have made my decision..i’m not going to waste my time by watching this part…i’m going to leave this serial..and catch it when i find my swasan together..i can’t tolerate that evil Sahil..kk he saved our Swara..still….swasan is the best…….no…the bestest…bestestestestest…

    • Eva

      Di…i also saw that video..Swara was shouting and all that..and Siyali..even I’m thinking to quit watching swaragini?? anyways tq?

  7. Maridakshi

    Hayyyy..Eva…update soon…i can’t wait for the next episode…i’m a silent reader…but your this episode made me comment…plz plz plz update asap….

  8. Dolly

    Super Eva di …..loved today’s episode …waiting eagerly for next one …..
    I am super excited for next

  9. Ridha

    Radhika and Laksh……awesum…and Soumya Seth is so beautiful……i find her better than Tejaswi….tbh….would love to see Radhlak together..

  10. someone

    Personally l don’t like Soumya Seth at all. But that’s my issue…

    Truly ur storyline is full of suspense and m eager to see how the story unfolds in the future and what storm does it create in the lives of Ragini, Laksh and Radhika…Truly speaking m not a big fan of RagLak pair though l like Tejaswi a lot…so even if u don’t pair them up in the end, no big problem but 1 request can u try to give Ragini a little bit more importance in ur next ff…but if not l have no qualms against u…U r an amazing writer and u do have bright future in the field of literature, so keep going?

    And 1 more query, do u like Swara or Ragini more??? Just asking…no need to answer if u don’t feel like…

    • Eva

      Okay..if between Swara and Ragini..definitely Swara…because of her character..Ragini sudhargayi..but we can never forget her past deeds…so between Swara and ragini..its definitely Swara..

  11. Rey

    its awesum eva … especially mom nd daughter bonding its really nice nd i’m vry excited eva plz update soon..

  12. meena

    Its awsome plz give long update nd update tomorow also plz plz nd I think it should be radlak bcoz ragini iz very selfish

  13. Seems I am the most late one.. Leave all that .. Meri maa, pyari Ma .. I died then I became bhatakti aatma then bhoot.. Now what are u planning to make me.. Credit genre goes to suspense.. Eagerly waiting for the next epi… No ways .. Next shock … ???

    • Eva

      Riya…ummm..i can make u a dracula….that’s my plan 😛 and wait for the next shock….

  14. Dharsha

    Hello Eva,
    U dunno me but I know something about u………I mean this ur ff…???
    Sorry for kidding but seriously saying…..
    I am just enjoying reading this ff…..I just read all the 22 parts at one go…..
    The way u write and the way u create suspense is like a perfect match……
    Am just lovingly admiring it….???
    This ff is just superb and am repenting now that why didn’t I notice thus before itself…………………
    And OMG this ur seventh ff….awhhh???awesome yaar and I must say u r such a great writer………….
    But pardon me I didn’t read all ur ffs coz I don’t even know their names…..this is the first ff of urs I read???
    And I really love ur courage……I mean the way u stood up against the stupid bashers…… (Sorry for reminding u about that but I felt I need to express this….that’s it)………
    And I think u r younger than me (I dunno exactly am just saying)……….I am just very happieeee that I have read ur ff or I could have missed this wonderful story which is wonderfully written by an wonderful writer???
    Hope u see my comment???

    • Eva

      Dharsha….such an inspiring and sweet comment….thank u..glad that everyone is liking my suspense….and bashers…..unka toh kaam hii hai bash karna….we should not spoil our mood..writers r hurt when bashers bash them by speaking nonsense about their stories….but u see my case is different….my bashers r very childish….writing i hate u Eva lol….anyways….tysm 😀 😀 😀

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