Rishto ki Dastan (Part 16)

Hello everyone…okay..i saw many comments on my previous episode..many were like,,I admire u and u inspire me….people..u have given me so much honour….I’m planning for writing samjhota season 3..and just imaging the comments that I would receive when I start Samjhota 3..comments like….”Eva go and die somewhere ,I hate u Eva and all that”..they really inspire me to write and show them how strong I’m….if I write Samjhota season 3 then I will start that on 7th june..and this ff…i guess..i will finish it with in next 5 episodes….
So lets begin..
The episode starts with Laksh is in his cabin…Rags comes there..
Rags:May I come in sir?
Laksh:Yeah..
Rags:Sir…r u upset for some reason?
Laksh:No…
Rags;I know about u,Sanskar and Swara..
Laksh:Matlab?I’m warning u…not to interfere in my personal life…u have no right to speak about this..
Swara comes there….
Swara:Tameez seh Laksh…meri behen seh baat kar rahe ho..(Sanskar said thia same dialogue for Swara to Laksh in that serial lol)
Laksh:What?She is your sister?
Swara;Ya….my elder sister…she knows everything..she just saw u hurt and came here to talk to u…and u r talking to her like that?di chalo yahaseh…
Swara drags Ragini from Laksh’s cabin…
Rags;Why did u behave like that with Laksh?
Swara:Di…(smiling) don’t worry…he will come to u and apologize to u..
Laksh comes there…
Laksh:I’m sorry Ragini..i shouldn’t had said that to u…but trust me I didn’t know that u r Swara’s sister…..
Rags in mind:That means only Swara matters to him…..he is apologizing to me only because I’m Swara’s sister….
Rags:Its okay…
Laksh goes to his cabin..
Swara;See di…i was so correct about him…
Rags;Ha….its seems like he has changed a lot…previously he would never utter the word sorry..and now….
Swara:Ha di…he has changed a lot..
Rags:And I guess…u know this Laksh better than anyone else….
Rags leaves from there…Swara feels bad…
Rags is thinking about Laksh and Swara…Sanskar was passing by…he sees Ragini in deep thoughts….
Sanskar;Rags….u okay?
Rags is still in her own world…
Sanskar;Ragini…
Rags looks at him..
Rags:Ha?
Sanskar:Coffee peh chalegi?
Rags:No…mood nehi hai….
Sanskar:Tum apne Neil ko mana karegi?
Rags;Fine…
Sanskar and Rags leaves….Swara sees them…and smiles….Laksh comes from behind….
Laksh:What r u thinking?Why didn’t u accompany them?
Swara;They r friends….so..
Laksh:But u r his wife…..and Ragini’s sister…u should had accompanied them….
Swara sees him with a hopeless look and goes home…
Laksh in mind:Is Swara really happy in this marriage?I doubt….
Ragini is seen having coffee…..with Sanskar….
Swara comes to the same coffee shop….(She doesn’t know that Ragsan r even there)
She sits on the opposite table where Ragsan r sitting..just then she sees them…..
Sanskar:Now tell me…why was your mood off?
Rags:Nothing..just..
Sanskar:Plz tell me…..
Rags:Laksh loves Swara……
Sanskar;Ragini…
Rags:Swara told this to me before….but i…
Sanskar;Ragini….Swara doesn’t love Laksh…
Rags:How do u know that?Swara knows Laksh very well more than I know him….Laksh is closer to Swara….and he respects me as Swara’s sister…this proves..that for him..I’m only…Swara’s sister..This is all Swara’s mistake….she could have asked me na…she…she made Laksh and u fall for her..for her revenge…and now..Laksh doesn’t see anyone else other than Swara.Swara has spoiled everything..she could have told me the situation..but no…she wanted revenge….. Swara…Swara Swara and only Swara….i’m no where…..from childhood..she was loved more….when I was pregnant…it was Swara who made mom and dad forgive me……mom and dad listens to her..but not me…she requested…and that’s why I was forgiven…..everyone found Swara better than me…i never said anything..but….now my love…my Laksh even…
Sanky understood that if he says anything in favour of Swara…then….Rags would feel bad….
Swara listens to the full conversation….and leaves from there….she is in the car…

Swara’s pov..
Di….i told u before that Laksh loves me right?i did everything for u and u r blaming me?i was ready to give my life for u..because of u I married Sanskar….i did not misunderstand anything..i was misguided….and u know this..still u r blaming me…..how could u?Meh Laksh ko apke paas lana chahti thi..aur app…app toh yaha merehi pati ko bhakarahi ho….i even felt bad when u both went leaving me alone….but I didn’t question your relationship….then how could u suspect me?U told Sanskar…that I made both Sanskar and Laksh fall for me…………and Sanskar..he even didn’t say anything….i was behaving like an idiot….i was feeling guilty for what I did….with Sanskar…….but now I won’t feel guilty for that spineless man..who can’t support his wife….i was fighting for a selfish woman like Ragini…..now I will lead my life in my way..my mission of uniting Ragini and Laksh……ends here….i will concentrate on my life only……
Swara reaches home…and just then a girl shouts happily…shona….Swara looks at her…..
Swara:Radhika……………………………..
Swara hugs her….and starts crying…
(Radhika’s character will be played by Soumya Seth)
Radhika:Shona…y r u crying?
Swara;No Radhika….u came here after 5 months na….that’s why……I missed u…..
Radhika;I missed u too behena…
Radhika is Shekhar’s brother’s daughter……Shekhar’s brother and sister-in-law died in a car accident…..Aparna calls Sumi mamma and Shekhar papa….
Swara hugs her again….
Ap:Radhika beta…..u go to Swara’s room…..i know…u met your sister after so many days….so u must be wanting to spend some time with your sister..I’ll send snacks there…
Radhika comes to Swara’s room..
Radhika: So sorry shona…i couldn’t attend your wedding…
Swara;Its okay…
Radhika;Now..tell me..what happened?
Swar:What..nothing..
Radhika:Now u will hide things from me?
Swara;No….
Radhika:Shona…
Swara tells her everything……and hugs her..
Swara;Now u tell me….what is my fault in all these?
Radhika:Shona….Ragini di must have said that as she was emotional at that time..
Swara:No..how could she say that?And Sanskar..he even didn’t support me…
Radhika:Swara…
Radhika in mind:Di…u shouldn’t had said all these things…u always behaved badly with me..only because I was not your real sister…..u asked me to stay away from your sister Swara…i did….but now…now u r hurting her…..i thought u r possessive about your sister…but after what happened today…i think I was wrong….i respected u..and u….the girl who married someone only for u…..u told so much about her today….that too in front for her husband….app Swara jesi ladki ki niyat par shak kese karsakti hai? I loved u…but now…..u have hurt that person whom I love the most…my shona…thats why I hate u…..but I can’t let Swara hate u…..because that will give her more pain…..she loves u a lot….she can’t hate u…
Radhika:Swara…..Ragini di loves u a lot….she shared her feelings with Sanskar….he is her bestie right?She has the rght to share everything with her…
Swara:But her bestie is my husband too…….
Radhika:I guess…u r more hurt because your husband didn’t support u……i think u r in love with him……
Swara:Ra..
Radhika:Before u say anything like aisa kuch bhi nehi hai and all that…..plz just think about it….
Radhika leaves Swara’s room….
Swara thinks about Radhika’s words….she sees Sanskar’s photo and takes it in her hands..
Swara;I…i don’t know….what I feel about u…..i was actually jealous seeing u with Ragini di?i was hurt when u said nothing infront of di in my favour….why do i expect u to say something in my favour?Do I really love u?Ahhhhh…..this question is making me crazy….no…hooo…Swara doesn’t love Sanskar….yeah..its a contract marriage only..which will end within months….i married him only because of Ragini di….now I won’t do anything to unite Ragini di and Laksh….who knows…Ragini di may misunderstand me this time as well…..let destiny handle their life….
Its night..Sanskar comes back from office…..he enters his room and sees Swara sleeping……he even changes and sleeps…..

The scene shifts to gadodia house…
Radhika:Mamma..papa…when will Ragini di come?
Just then Ragini comes…..
Sumi:Ragini dekh….Radhika ayi hai…
Rags:So what should I do?
Radhika:Nothing…u can’t do anything for others…u can do everything for yourself only….
Rags;What do u mean?
Radhika:Mamma..i’m very sleepy..I’m going to my room….
Radhika leaves..Sumi and Shekhar looks shocked..as Radhika never behaved in this manner with Ragini…she always wanted Ragini’s love….but today what she did was totally opposite to her characteristics….even Ragini is shocked…
Its morning….Radhika comes and prays to god
Radhika:Bhagwan..yeh job dilwa dena…please..
Radhika leaves…..Ragini even leaves for office…
Radhika is very nervous…just then her turn comes……
Radhika:U can do it….
Radhika enters…..
And yes….if u people guessed that it is Sanskar..then u r absolutely correct…
Sanskar:So….Miss Radhika Gadodia….u look very nervous..
Radhika;No no..I’m not nervous…
Sanskar sees everything….and confirms the job…
(So Radhika is Sanskar’s new pa….u all know right..that Vidhi was fired by Sanskar’s wife….as in our Swara…)
Radhika calls Swara and informs her that she got the job….Swara congratulates her…
It’s the next day….as in first day of Radhika at her office..
Sanskar is leaving for conference hall for a meeting….He asks Radhika to bring some files from his cabin….Radhika comes to his cabin and takes those files…just the someone calls on Sanskar’s phone which is lying on the table..
Radhika:Its Sir’s phone…he forgot to take it….
Radhika takes the phone in her hand and just then the call cuts…She sees Sanskar’s lock screen photo…
Radhika:Shona?

Just then Sanskar comes there…and snatches the phone from her hand…
Sanskar:What r u doing with my phone?
Radhika:Sir…wohh…how come u r here….u were in the meeting right?
Sanskar:The meeting got cancelled as bade papa had to go somewhere urgently…and without him….this meeting can’t take place…..btw why am I telling this to u?U tell me….what were u doing with my phone?
Radhika:Jiju….don’t talk to me like that or else..i will complain to your wife..
Sanskar:What?
Radhika:Haaa..
Sanskar:Whn did I become your jiju?
Radhika:when u married Swara…that very moment..u became my jiju….
Sanskar:Matlab ki..
Radhika:Ha…Radhika Gadodia….Swara Gado…oh sorry sorry..Swara Sanskar Maheshwari ki behen..
Sanskar;Oh…..
Radhika:I saw Shona’s pic in your phone..so…
Sanskar:Nice to see u as my pa..salisaheba
Radhika;Same here boss…ok ok..i need to go now..i have some work….
Radhka is about to leave…just then she looks at Sanskar…
Radhika;Jiju…..u love Swara a lot right?
Sanskar smiles…
Radhika:Trry to tell this to her once..maybe…..kuch hojay…
Radhika smiles and leaves from there…
Precap;Vidhi tells something to Ragini she shocks her…..Mr and Mrs Khanna arrives at Maheshwari office……swasanlak looks shocked…

People…Radhika will play a very important role in my story…and keep guessing….how?

Credit to: Eva

104 comments

  1. want swalak yrr swara understands laksh easily and laksh tooooo soi don’t make swasan want swalak .it just my veiws firstly this wasff was very intrest ing but not now .im not telling that i hate u or ur ff but i think ur self want hate comments.u changed the story completey .swalak understand each other and ragsan understand each other soo wat if raglak has a child even sanskar can give live to both rags and her child …
    i don’t know ur reactions after reading this wat will u say but they are my views …

    • Swati

      Lol..Kriya….why will anyone want haters comments?Why will someone make herself bad?What an awesom thought…

    • Eva

      Hey kriya..u can’t just say that dear..i know u r a swalak fan..u supported me only because I wrote on swalak and now saying this …i’m hurt…so sorry if my words have hurt u…but no one loves haters comments…and I’m not different..I don’t write to get haters comments…no one does..

  2. sarah

    Eva…Plz…don’t make ragini as selfish….u can make swara as Mahan..I don’t have object..Nd swara did not sacrificed any thing she loved sanky…Nd married him…u hurt me today…I dnt expected this from u…

    • Niti

      Sweety…….its better not to expect anything when u r reading Eva’s ff….when u continue reading it…u will get a smile on your face because they will be beyond your expectations…that’s what I believe..cause Eva gives unbelievable shocks….and i love those shocks….

    • Eva

      That’s swara’s pov..according to her..she doesn’t love Sanky..so its a sacrifice for her..so sorry if I have hurt u..and yap..plz don’t expect anything..cause its a story which can go any way it wants..sorry for hurting u..

  3. Sahi

    Eva… U’r writing everyone’s general feeling…like Ragini…..yeah..she must be feeling insecure now…i loved this episode…and yap..u said that your name is Jaanvi…it means something as precious as your life…..see..your name even says that u r very precious…so keep going…and ignore someone who doesn’t know how precious u r dear(Bashing comments) I may not comment everyday…but i will read it for sure…..i have exams..and i’m commenting…i feel guilty that i’m not studying..still i don’t want to study lol…..have a good day… 😀

    • Eva

      Sahiii..thank u dear..and yap..your comment is even precious…and sweet..plz do study..and do well in your exams…?

  4. Ohh eva ur awesum.. I support shona always nd the going track was superb nd make ragini negative i lyk her only as negative jus suggestion there is no intetion to hurt any1..eagrly waiting fr nxt

  5. Hi Eva..
    Nice 2 c u again 🙂
    N coming to episode.. Rigini is right at her place.. N Swara I hope she soon realiz her feelings for sanskar.. N Radhika new entry.. Liked her.. Waiting for next episode how they will manage Mr n Mrs khanna..??

    • Eva

      Thanks Falguni..and it will be very hard for swasanlak to handle…Mr and Mrs Khanna..

  6. aarti

    Eva plzz dont make ragini -ve or selfish u want to make swara mahan than make its ok but plzz dont make ragini give her a strong role sorry if i hurt u but u r swara fan right can u imagine her as -ve or selfish no na so think about raginis fan she was already a wamp in serial and now ff also

    • Eva

      I can imagine everyone as positive and vice versa as per my choice since i’m a writer so lets go with the flow..

  7. Siyali

    Another mind blowing episode….I’m addicted to your ff…the day i don’t find your ff posted….i feel like….nooooooo…i want to read it…..and then when u post it…i’m the happiest person….keep writing….

  8. Someone u know

    U know wat..ignore the things make u feel vulnerable..face d things dat hurts u n pains u… And most importantly don’t give a crap for d people who bashes u just 4 something u wrote and not even real
    Hey..there is something called FREEDOM OF EXPRESSION but dat doesn’t mean we can hurt someone by our words… So Eva write ur ff in ur own style…don’t let anyone or a few coments affect ur imagination… Its ur story…ur idea..and only u have d right to decide d story’s path.. Tc.. Lots of love.. Blieve in HOPE..FAITH AND LOVE…

    • Eva

      Heard a lot and will hear a lot but Eva never stops….
      Thank u for having faith in me…

  9. tanu

    Eva u r very strong writer I have ever seen agr itna koi kisi dusre writer ko bolta to vo kabka likhna hi band kr deta but apne esa nahi kiya that’s y u r my favorite whather u write about swasan or swalak I will always be ur fan

  10. Superbbbb as always.Yapiee, samjhota season 3, wow, I am waiting for it . Waiting for nxt.
    #be happy
    * Stay Strong *
    ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

  11. Vidhi

    People…i have a request…plz don’t bash this girl….let her write in her way….she gets bashed by both swalak and swasan fans..this is not fair…why do people read it when they hate her so much?Is it very important to write on her page that u hate her?Bashers…try to respect a writer….and her hardwork….bashers here comment on things which have no connection with the ff….like her family and asking her die…..asking her to stop writing….don’t ask her to stop..if u hate her so much then just stop reading this ff……but no…u people enjoy bashing her only because she doesn’t write for u all….she does this for comments…really?If she would had done this for comments…then she would had left tu my now……comments don’t matter to her…u bash her more cause she doesn’t reply..and u feel insulted…..Eva…trust me..that’s the best answer for them….i love your attitude….hamesha eise hi rehne….

    • Eva

      Thank u Vidhi for this support.I ignore bashing comments…they r not worthy enough to be answered….

  12. Mugdha

    Yipiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………..Eva…Evu……Evui…..i’m soooo happy right now..Samjhota 3….wait kese karu 7th june ka…..our Samjhota queen will be back with another season…..yayyyy…..and let bashers go to hell…we will enjoy our Samjhota 3……

  13. Mugdha

    And yeah…today’s episode was another hit….Rags…okay if u make her negative even…i don’t care…….jab tak writer Eva ho….meh parne ke liye taiyar hu….cause i love your stories…..and u too……….

  14. divi

    nice ep
    i am waiting for ur new ff
    i love ur ff especially i hate u ep 13 its awesome ep
    cam give me links of ur ff

  15. Sanskari Girl

    Nice episode….and Samjhoat 3?I’m eagerly waiting for that…and yes congrates…u r going to start a 3rd season…your samjhotas has always been a hit….no doubt that this one will be another excellent ff..

  16. My kiddo rocked again.. Good .. Keep giving shocks and damn impatiently waiting for samjhota season 3…☺️☺️☺️

  17. Meghs

    bashers plz stay away… Y always couple matter just stry is matter more … If u don’t like don’t read but y r u bashing her..

    Eva i know ur strng u won’t mind bashers .. I waiting for ur samojata 3

  18. pls don’t make ragini bad.. she is not selfish she is right in her place & swara too.. everyone has their point of view.. it’s natural for anyone to get upset by seeing their love caring for others.. so pls let all the misunderstandings clear & show us swaragini bond..

  19. Raksha

    Eva..dear…i’m a silent reader of your ff..just wanted to tell u..u r my fav writer….not because I love your storylines…but also because I love your attitude towards everything..outstanding personality…?

    • Audrija.. Pls .. It’s good that u r supporting Eva.. But we should have a control on ourselves .. U can’t abuse anyone.. There should be a difference of decor between the supporters and bashers.. So pls .. Next time don’t ise abusive language

      • Yeah .. Ur life .. Ur choice.. I won’t bother but because of ur this negative and insensible attitude , someone will surely throw rotten eggs on u .. I just ask u to Support Eva decently like all others do but u… Sorry to say but u have no manners .. U can continue disrespecting me , saying spiteful words but I won’t mind because there will be a black hole in ur character and not mine.. May God give u some sense.. I know u r gonna comment something really very bad .. I am being prejudgemental but can’t help and sorry if u felt bad about my words but I felt more bad about ur words

      • Eva

        Riya..and Audrija plz..calm down..no one is going to rot in hell or will throw rotten eggs…..both of u plz and this argument..thats a request.?

  20. Misha

    Eva..i have a request..plz reply to your bashers…they crossed their limits already..by dragging your family into it…plzzzz..now don’t stay quiet…

    • Eva

      Misha….i really don’t care about those comments….cause they r not worthy enough to be answered…..staying quiet is a far better solution…silence is the best punishment…

  21. Audrija

    SO STFU lalalalalalalalalalalala
    lalalalalalalalalalalala
    lalalalalalalalalalalala
    lalalalalalalalalalalala
    lalalalalalalalalalalala

  22. Vishakha

    Hello sweet heart….yes..u r my inspiration…and I really mean it..u r an inspiration for every ff writer and also for other people too..cause u know how to handle situations…god bless u dear..

  23. Audrija

    MY EVA IS BESTESTESTESTESTEST.
    GET IT BASHERS???? U STUPID IDIOT NONSENCE PEEPS!!!!
    STUPIDS!!!!!!
    BASHERS ARE HATE>>
    STUPID BASHERS>>
    MY EVA IS BEST!!!!! BESTESTESTESTEST

    • Sakshi

      Awww..that’s great that u found the love of your life….and now u r so happy that u r expressing your happiness by commenting…and ya..u r not mad…but a true supporter…usmeh koi burai nehi hai..

    • Eva

      Audrija..darling thank u…for your support….i can see…that u r extremely happy…because u r in love..cool..love hota hii aisa hai…..u r not mad…..u r someone who is madly in love….

  24. Amna

    Those who r bashing her . I mst say u all r pathetic yr they are just characters of a story .l personally don’t like only d pair of swasan that doesn’t mean if she write swasan l will start bashing l, l will simply ignore that story. She showed both pairs in contrary so u couldn’t say that she chngd pair.
    Eva be strong, be u nd write d thing which gives u pleasure. Love you loads. ?

  25. Anjali

    Okkk….. I guess I am the last!!!!

    First of all, Eva, Loved this episode mainly for the reality of it….

    Insecurity, Jealosuy, all are emotions that are present in our lives and this was a very nice way to portray it!!! <3 <3

    I can see some ppl are back again, perhaps in a politer way… I know you are strong enough to stand up against themm… So am not gonna tell anything.. 🙂 😀

    SAMJHOTA 3 <3 <3 <3
    Am really glad!!!!
    Soooo can't wait!!!

    I do have a request though…. If ur storyline can allow it… Pls don't let anyone die this time!!

    But uk that I will read anything u write… 🙂 🙂

    Love you!!!

    I did have something else to tell you.. But i forgot 🙁
    If I remember, Will do soo!!! 😛

    • Eva

      I still did not think about samjhota 3’s storyline….but I will think about it..and write it..and as u have requested..i will try not to kill anyone in this season..do tell me the thing u forgot…love u too??

  26. Kriya

    Awsm epi….cant wait for next…..especially samjhota season 3…..love u eva…..

  27. Rey

    Eva soo sry dear i was little busy in my xams tats y i cn’t read ur ff dear nd today ly i read al previous episodes its jst fabulous awesum twists nd turns dear jst keep gng on eva … nd abt samjhota 3 it was a gud news dear i’m eagerly waitng fr tat dear…..

  28. bisha

    ufDARUUUNNNN!!!! I seriouslu love your maturity. You are so so much awesome dear.
    Todays epi was full of insecurities, jealousy and a greay Ragini. Not really lnegative but grey. Superb!!
    I am a vanishng reader. But I just cant express how much I love your ff and the person in you. One of the most wonderful persons I have met!
    Keep writing dear forgetting everything. Just nail it. You are superb and I love this cute short suspenses. Keep wriying and forgive this big fan of yours for her inconsistensy.♥♥

    • Eva

      Awwww..Bisha…u r back….good to see u…and thank u….and no need of apology….. 😀

    • Eva

      okay..i will give u my ff names….type them in the search box….u will find all of them….
      my ff names r
      Swaraginiti ki kahani
      samjhota swaragini ka
      samjhota swaragini ka intezaar
      Sanskar zindegi meri
      Manyata vs Ragini
      I hate u too…

  29. divi

    Thank u my little sis
    but sorry to say u that i already read them i thought there will be more ur ff so i asked
    i have 1 request for u plzz can u wirte a ff like i hate u too especially like epsiode 13

  30. Kiddo thank u for ur wonderful wish and my exam was superb .. I finished it before time … And yea I had put fire on the hall

      • Sorry Eva… Didn’t mean to have a heated argument.. So sorry .. Won’t rrprat.. I just couldn’t hold on the sight of people abusing and then speaking such rude words.. So sorry.. Chalo next time I won’t poke my nose in other people’s affairs.. I’ll let them do what they want.. Again a big big sorry.. Leave all that tell me how’s school going on .. U must have entered 9 .. So what’s ur experience..

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