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Rishto ki Dastan (Part 10)

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Hello people…I’m back…I hope u r liking my story…..my previous episode’s comments reminds me of Samjhota 1..I was bashed badly….People I have two requests
1)Criticism is accepted…but criticize the story for improvements and not the writers..
2)U don’t have any right to bash readers…

I guess my ff is the only ff where people bash each other…someone said that I do this couple drama for comments…really? Is that my fault that people r commenting?And bashers themselves r increasing my comments..they r dragging such topic that r creating controversies…none of u know me personally..then y r u saying that u hate me?For this story?If u think that these things will affect me then that’s your misconception….I guess I’m the worst writer here…I was really hurt by the comments..many of u suggested me to take them positively..now u tell me how do I take comments like I hate u Eva and Eva is autistic positively?This won’t make any improvement in my writing but just discourage me…..I did not write for part 2 days because I was hurt…seeing bashers bashing everyone who wer supporting me….

I’M REALLY SORRY….MANY OF U TOOK MY STAND AND WER BASHED INSTEAD….So lets go for this episode…

The epsode starts with…
Swara comes to the office…Sanskar smiles seeing her…Swara goes to her place…
Laksh is in his cabin..he is thinking about Swara…he is founding Swara everywhere..just then Swara comes to hs cabin..
Laksh:Okay Swara..I know u r not here..but I’m seeing u everywhere…..i know u will disappear soon…
Swara:Sir..I’m here…
Laksh:No u r not..
Swara:Sir I am…
Laksh:Okay fine then if u r here then hug me…will u?U won’t cause u r not here…u r just my imagination….
Swara:What r u saying dir?
Laksh:See I’m correct..u r just my imagination..
Swara hugs Laksh…
Laksh is shocked and speechless….Swara breaks the hug…
Swara:Now r u sure that I’m here?
Laksh nods innocently..Swara gives him a file and asks him to sign…Laksh is about to sign when she stops him and asks him to read before signing….
Laksh;U read it right?Thats enough for me…i trust u..
Laksh signs the paper and Swara leaves from there…Just then Sanskar asks Swara to come….Swara comes with him..
Sanskar:Hello everyone…I wanted to share something with u all…I want to introduce u all to my fiancé
Everyone smiles…
Sanskar:So meet my fiancé…Swara Gadodia….
Everyone starts clapping…Laksh comes there and asks everyone or the reason for their happiness…
Sanskar:Lucky..i introduced my fiancé to everyone..and..
Laksh:Bha..where is my would be bhabi?
Sanskar:Areh u know her…..your pa….as in Swara…
Laksh looks at Swara…he stands speechless…..Swara gives a fake smile….
Everyone goes and congratulates them..and then get back to their work…Laksh calls Swara to his room..
Laksh:So Miss Gaadodia..or should I call u bhabi?
Swara;Swara at office and bhabi at home simple..(Sarcastically)
Laksh:U think everything is a joke?
Swara:What joke?
Laksh:Nothing..
Swara is about to leave when Sanskar comes there…
Laksh has tears in his eyes…
Sanskar:U crying?
Laksh:No

Sanskar:tell me the truth…
Laksh looks at Swara..
Sanskar:r u sad cause she is going to be your bhbai?U hate her so much?
Laksh:That’s what I can’t do bhai..i can’t hate her…..cause I love………..
Sanskar:Lucky?
Sanskar:Swara….u even love…
Swara:Sir…
Swara looks down…
Sanskar;oh so u both love each other..
Sanskar has tears in his eyes…still trying to hold back his tears…
Laksh:Bhai..I’m sorry….
Sanskar:U idiot..y r u apologizing?U loved someone…that’s not a mistake….I’ll go and talk to mom dad..u both deserve to be with each other…u both love each other….u will be together..that’s a promise…
Laksh:U r sacrificing your love for me?
Sanskar:Laksh….she is a nice girl…and this was an arrange marriage(he is lying)
Laksh:That means u don’t love her?
Sanskar:No….
Laksh:I’m relieved then..thank u bhai..
Sanskar leaves from there
Laksh hugs Swara…Swara feels irritated but still pretends to be fine…
Swara leaves from there..and meets someone…
The unknown person:Our plan is working…
Swara:ha….thank u so much..u r helping me in this mission…without u nothing would had been possible
The person:I’m happy to see Sanskar in that state..
Swara;Why?As in u don’t have any personal rivalry with her..right?
Person:no no..i’m just helping u..after what he did to Ragini…he deserves it…
Swara:I don’t know why I feel that Sanskar is the wrong person…i mean…i don’t think that he will do something like that….i planned of leaving him on the marriage day and marry his brother..so that he feels the pain of losing love….of being betrayed…….but he….he got to know everything today..i could clearly see that he loved me…he was in pain…but he…he backed up….just because he got to know that we(swalak) love each other…the person who respects the word love so much….can he betray his own love?
The person:No no..u don’t know him….he has 2 faces….he is not innocent..he plays with everyone”s feelings..
Swara;u r Di,Laksh and Sanskar’s college friend….u told me the truth..so I came here to take my revenge…thank u…

Precap:Who is the person?
Hint:I introduced that person in my story….

Credit to: Eva

140 Comments
  1. Hey u swasan pplzzz change ur name…due to ur shiiti comment ur spoiling my swasan name..plzz change ur name….n think before u speak…..n u kate plZzzz just stop it…every persin is not negative like u eva ek positive ladki. Hai n agar itna hi hai then visitng this page

    1. Eva….ignore those bashers…I think they r joules….and ur awsme writter….am commenting rarely…but I can’t stop…when I saw these bashers…we r with u….be strong as always….

  2. dont pay attention to the bashers……u r superb writer eva rocks!!!……all the bashers u commented a lot abt eva how much u ppl knw abt her n writing that i hate u bla bla bla first u see urself n think 1000 times to comment on others……

  3. Hi eva… shloka here.
    U know i feel like crying today by reading some comments… so can understand ur situation…….eva i would say stop listening….its time for u to reply them. Dont worry whatever u do we r with u. I know although there r many supporters..yet they cant actually make everything fine. All the bashers. Guys plz. I request u can say anything about stories but dont drag eva personally. She has a heart which hurts reading ur comments. …..
    Some one here tells her to die… so i would like to ask who r u too take decision on her behalf… have u given her life no na. Then stay in ur limits…dont dare to cross ur limits….
    I dont wanna say anything wrong .. but i feel very bad for u…eva still i will say… dont mind… let them say… when u go on a right path. Or do something exceptional … there r many who will try to demotivate u or will try to seak some weakness of ur. But never lose heart dear. Stay like u r now.. god is watching everything. So dont worry. Everyone gets punished of their deed. ..
    Eva dont be sad. Be happy always. U have entertained us and made us smile… so never get disheartened…..
    Btw… i think laksh is the real culprit.. is it???????

  4. Hey don’t take them seriously don’t be sad and ur ff is very good I liked it a lot. And maybe most people love ur ff a lot that’s why don’t be sad. And continue writing 🙂

  5. Are u nuts people?? O sorry why am I asking this stupid question u all are nuts maniac.. Idiotic.. Crazy.. Selfish.. Gone case people or I may say even cowards.. U know what u all are just shameless .. HOW DARE YOU KATE??? What do you think u all will say anything against my kiddo and we will stick to our seats and just watch u .. HOW DARE U KATE!!AND OTHER BASHERS IF THERE IS LITTLE WATER AT YOUR HOME TAKE IT AND DROWN IN IT FOR SAYING SUCH CRAZY THINGS.. THIS WAS THE MOST APPRECIATABLE THING I COULD SAY FOR U ALL BECAUSE IN UR TINY HEAD LOGICAL THINGS WON’T GO AT LEAST UR TYPE ILLOGICAL THINGS WILL GO .. AND I AM SURE I AM WRITE .. STOP BASHING EVA !! AS I SAID U ALL ARE COWARDS U ALL ARE SCOLDING A PERSON .. BASHING HER WITH UR NEGATIVE COMMENTS WITHOUT EVEN TELLING UR NAMES.. I AM AND WILL BE A SWASAN FAN BUT THEY ATE ON SCREEN COUPLES FOR THEM IF U ARE TRYING TO GLEE AN INNOCENT PERSON WHO IS JUST TRYING TO IMPROVE AND WORK OR HER TALENTS IS COMPLETE INJUSTICE TO HER .. IF SOME FAKE PERSON COMES AND CALLS HERSELF AS HELLY SHAH WHAT THE HELL CAN KIDDO DO IN THAT!! HUH!! EXACTLY THERE IS A BLACK HOLE IN YOUR MENTALLITY THAT IS WHY U ALL HAVE BECOME SO OFFENSIVE AND ARE STOOPING SO LOW. AND EVA IS DAMN MORE MATURE AND SMARTER THAN U SHE HAS THE SOLUTION OF HER OWN PROBLEMS.. SHE DOES NOT NEED OUR HELP .. SE IS VERY CAPABLE AND HAS HER OWN TENDENCY TO SOLVE PROBLEMS BUT WHAT WE CAN DO HER SWEET PERSONALITY HAS ATTRACTED US SO MUCH THAT WE CONSIDER HER AS OUR SISTER LIL SIS AND AN ELDER SIS RESPONSIBILITY IS TO PROTECT HER YOUNGER SIS.. YOU KNOW WHAT EVEN WITHOUT LNOWING HER WE ARE SO CLOSE TO HER THIS IS INDIA’S SANSKRITI , CULTURES WHICH U ALL ARE RUINING .. SHAME ON YOU AND UR PERSONALITY

    EVA, KIDDO I know it’s hard for u to ignore all these people but just chill .. They are extremely jealous of u .. Let them be in their sweet dreams u continue with ur story line .. Delete their comments and enjoy ur magic on us. Stay calm and and and idiots will be idiots so let them be idiots .. We can’t do much for these idiots.. After all as I said idiots are idiots
    #RIYA MALIK

  6. And ha Kiddo there are so many spelling errors because of the long update.. So BASHERS I think at least u will have this much knowledge in ur tiny brain that u understand what is written.. If there’s problem u can ask me I will give u a big detailed answer.. I know many questions are on the way.. After all u BASHERS are so interested in getting ur self insulted so what we can do
    NOTE THE SARCASM AND MY TAUNT IN THE COMMENT U IDIOTIC BASHERS .. I AM SURE U ALL ARE GONNA BE VERY HAPPPPPPY SORRY SORRY CONTENTED WITH UR INSULTS

  7. heyy eva….
    plzz dont pay attention to those bashers yr….
    i am seriously shocked to see tht how cheap mentality r these people carrying…
    nd to all those who r bashing her without any reason… u all should stop reading this ff….
    i mean lyk seriously how stupid u all are tht u r wasting ur energy as well as time fr insulting someone unnecessarily….
    n dear eva… i am seriously proud of u dear….
    u r an amazing writer…
    to pay attention to them coz they r nt worth it…. they r calling u a bad writer… bt can anyone frm them can even write a short story…
    keep smiling eva….. v luv u…

  8. Hey I am new here. can you plz tell who is the pair. i Will continue reading if its swalak . So lemme know plzzzźzzzz……….waiting for your reply.!

  9. Suhasini Khanna

    Guys lets stop bullying the Eva haters. Cause hating Eva is quiet natural for them. They never possessed talent so they are just jealous of talented people.

    Now for the bullies-
    Please stop showcasing your typically low standard. Your mentality is so sick that I pity the mother who carried you in her womb for nine months. I mean seriously? Before questioning someone else background and family please do the honor if standing in front of the mirror. I’m sure your parents got you guys from garbage. Like really! You are so pathetic that words would fail even Suhasini, the critic queen. We should encourage young and talented people. But reading your comments the only thong I learnt about your educational background is this – you were just taught to read and write English. No morals in you so you all are equivalent to illiterate b*t*hes. On a scale of literacy of 1-10 I’d rate you 0.00000001/10… Be happy cause that’s a huge score. I’m just being kind enough to give you that small mark. Or else you cry babies might go to your moms and annoy them even more. Already you guys are a shame to your families. So pathetic. I pity you.
    How can a person wish someone’s death? But since you dared to do so, I would call you a blo*dy swine…

    1. Hi suhasini…..or suhasini di
      Even i am a eva ff reader… i have read her all episodes and even i hate bashers..
      But if u dont mind i would say that plz dont drag their mothers in between. Whats her fault.. plz di dont do this. Any mother has not grown her child with bad upbringing.. its the child who proves her wrong……. di i am sorry if u r hurt by my words. And di correct critic.. nice score……

    2. Shloka dear please read all the comments. A badger has questioned Eva’s upbringing. Its something like this, an eye for an eye, an insult for an insult. Their parents failed to give them moral values..
      I don’t see any reason forvwhich I should act sympathetic towards them..

  10. Bang on eva….. ur the best n u proved it again….
    keep it up

  11. after seeing dese much of cmmnts i enter by a thgt of an outstandng stry here bt my shockng its eva’s ff who once i stppd to read her ff bcz of i didnt find my fav pair in der…bt now seeing others bashng badly me too feel bad…i dnt knw d stry nd i didnt read it but ur cmmnts made me to write…pls yaar dnt cmmnt like dis…if u guyzz dnt like dis ff den dont read nd leave it like i doo…der r soooo much of beautiful swasan ff us so pls enjy with that….i m nt a fan of eva not a supporter bt i stil feel sad for her…pls swasan fans dnt make a mess here…me too hate ragini nd sanky as a pair bt bashng others is really hurt yaar…dont doo hum logom keliye bohot sara wndrful swasan ffs hey….so pls leave frm here let her write..it hurt her soo much yaar…eva dnt bother abt harsh cmmnts i knw its difficult bt try…nd i thnk d major prblm is dat u wnt reveal pair like u did early i tnk soo…bcz after expectng der fav pair atlast bcmng fool is really hurts ithnk dats why dey bash u like dis(i m srry if i hurt u)nd bashers dnt spoil our swasan infrnt of othrs…pls itz a request…..if u dnt like den dnt read nd leave dis fictn like i do…so pls stp bashng her..

  12. Hai Eva, i know it’s not the right time to introduce myself. Once i was a silent reader of your samjhota series and a swara story in which swasan have children. i don’t know what it’s name. sorry for that.
    i just returned to tellyupdates after a small break. i didn’t know it’s your story. i had just read a bashing comment in recent comment section and came to see what is happening. Seriously, you are brave yaar. you are trying to ignore the comments. you are such an awesome girl. I am impressed.
    if i was in your place, i would have left the site. i am so emotional type. really, i got tears while reading the bashing comments.
    I won’t say to take these comments positively. because we can’t do it when someone is personally bashing us. just try to ignore them. don’t loose your patience and self confidence.
    you are an amazing writer. no doubt in that. Keep do the amazing work. God bless you dear. Cheer up, girl!!!!

    BASHERS – Shame on you people. you all are disgusting. if you want to read your favorite pairs ff, go and read. There are so many websites if you haven’t had enough here. don’t enter into her page to bash her. I know, you all are deaf and brainless. that’s why again and again you all are bashing her. or you all are so obsessed with your hatred? I pray to god that you will get the same pain for a short period to repent. I wish it will happen soon.

    1. I agree with you…
      Completely… And eva is a strong girl… She will get over this hurt… 😀 😀

      Btw, Are u the one who wrote I dreamed a dream??

      1. yes, i am. 🙂

      2. OHHH Coool….. I just loved it…. It was really really niceee…..

  13. Oh my god wats wrong with u people
    Its a fan fiction ok
    Its all imaginary nth real
    Here we dont knew each other faces or atleast our original names then why r u fighting like that
    U knew wat if u cant control your self anf forgetting that all have their own lifes.
    When this fiction is effecting u and stops thinking u matured stay away from fictions and think onces by bashing each other wat we will get.

  14. What the …..I really don’t understand how to react even. I was just surfing the pages and found a high number so opened it but…I am speechless. I mean how can anyone judge a person just by his/her words? I agree with everyone here that all have their right to share their opinion but that doesn’t mean that you can insult them. Where is the humanity? If you really don’t like her then leave. Why do you behave as illterates? Just place yourself in her and think. The words you used for her and for her family…this OS so disgusting yaar. We are matured and just behave like the one. And the major doubt I have is what wrong did her family do? Sorry to say like this bit whoever commented about her family are mentally disabled one…felt the pain right. If you don’t like her then ignore. For god’s sake. Just listening one negative will change the mood of entire day and you people are becoming the reason for her depression. The words you use may take your anger out but that will have adverse affect on other and this is my experience. I really feel bad to beg you not to irritate and hurt her with your comments. If you see, you really don’t have any personal reason for loathing her. Guys please grow up. Understand that it really pains to listen something about about oneself which they are not.

  15. WHAT THE blo*dy HELL? CAN’T TELLYUPDATES REVIEW COMMENTS PROPERLY or THEY JUST UPLOADALL THE COMMENTS RANDOMLY! Its heights of insults for any writer. All the comment writers are throwing mud at each other and abusing each other. Why the hell you insult Eva’s background? What has happened with you guys? Dont you ever feel how eva is feeling after tgese comments? i really dont understand why you people behave in such a way? Have you received education? I doubt! If you had you would not have been behaving like this. Bashers are saying her background is bad and on the other hand supporters are sayong bashersbackground bad. Whats the difference then? EVA SHOULD NOT STOP WRITING. TUI CHALIYE JA. KARUR KOTHA SUNBAR DORKAR NEI. And they are even using tamil telegu and bashing her as if others wont understand. But the one who has already blackened oneself will keep on doing that. I pity on you. Think she has a herat.she is a human. You dont like you dont read? But please dont abuse her. I think we should report to Tellyupdates and say what kind of hurling abuses at each other is going on here between the bashrrs and tge fans. Why do you people drive crazy always? Its really heights of insults. Please I request the bashers to stop reading or be polite. You dont even reveal your names!Lol. Funniest part of it. Some are saying she is a comment freak. Arey! We all get happy as those comments help us to imprive as well as encourage us. All tge writers here expect comments. SOme express that directly while some dont. And please those who want yheir fav pairs please go and read only stories which contains their fav pairs. U all are a shame under the name of reader. Fie on you bashers! Please tellyupdates, dont upload these abusive comments. It hurts like hell. Eva you carry on come what may. And SHUBHO NOBOBORSHO TO ALL OF YOU.

    Msg from team: Comments removed.

    1. Ummmm…u know bengali?Glad to see that.. 🙂 🙂 🙂

  16. I agree Sree. Its just too bad. I don’t even know how to express my discomfort over this matter.
    Shame on the bashers. Just #SHAME

  17. Eva, u’r a very good writer n i love ur ff..plz bring more twists n turns..i’m just loving it..
    And those who have problems regarding her ff..u can give her some suggestions or just stop reading it..but don’t bash her like that..and yes, u have no rights to question about her upbringing..this is really shame..

    Dear, don’t care about the bashers and don’t stop writing..
    waiting for ur next update..??

  18. Lol…What’s the use of removing the comments now?
    She has already seen them and must be hurt…

    But anyways thanks TU team and pls don’t allow any more comments like these to be allowed.

    Eva, Now you’ll see exactly how many ppl are with you… Chill… And just keep writing…

    1. I’m not at all hurt Anjali….i understood many people’s mentality here….people…pointing at my family..and all that…but who cares i don’t..they r representing their own family…I’m hurt seeing people questioning on each other’s families…one say about hitting chappal..other say meh tumhara sar phor dungi..one says i should kill myself and other one says that i should kill her before i kill myself..one of them was using tamil language i guess….to irritate me…..yeh toh aur bhi acha tha…dil ki bharas bhi nikal di aur mujhe kuch samaj bhi nehi aya…..I’m full on chilled…MANY SMART PEOPLE SYMPATHIZED ME BY SAING THAT IF THEY WER IN MY PLACE THEN THEY WOULD LEAVE THIS SITE….MY QUESTION IS FOR THESE KINDS OF PEOPLE….WHY SHOULD I LEAVE?EVEN TELLY UPDATES UNDERSTAND WHICH COMMENT IS CORRECT AND WHICH IS NOT..SO THEY DELETED IT…..

      1. TRUEEEE

        Come back with another awesome epi sooon!!!!

  19. Though its of no use now, I still thank Tellyupdates for listening to me. I hope from now onwards tgey will review the comments and delete the abusive ojes then and there. Even comments which insult any author or reader are included in it. I want it for everyone who is doing this thing. So please tellyupdates, review the comments properly, try to understand the insults and delete them. Not only for Eva’s ff but also for all tge writers readers and comment writers. PLEASE.

    1. BTW…how did this happen?Who asked telly updates to delete them?

  20. I am proud of u kiddo , the way u are handling this matter by ur extra out witty comments , bashers will surely have to buy some wit from u .. Let them be in their dreamland and let them enjoy .. I had already posted a comment and even many many others have given long lessons to the bashers … Due to my time problem I wasn’t able to communicate to all otherwise I would have surely thank ur supporters and bash the other crazy heads.. U just chill and post the other episodes .. Wee are there for u always and ever

  21. And now I am back in india .. So no problem and one more thing today is my birthday so I’ll be a lil busy if u will post any epi today so may be i will not be able to comment .. Advance me sorry
    ???????

    1. Umhhhh…Happy birthday ? Riya..many many happy returns of the day..god bless u..and thank u sp much for your support..?❤

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