Rishto ki Dastan (Part 10)

Hello people…I’m back…I hope u r liking my story…..my previous episode’s comments reminds me of Samjhota 1..I was bashed badly….People I have two requests
1)Criticism is accepted…but criticize the story for improvements and not the writers..
2)U don’t have any right to bash readers…

I guess my ff is the only ff where people bash each other…someone said that I do this couple drama for comments…really? Is that my fault that people r commenting?And bashers themselves r increasing my comments..they r dragging such topic that r creating controversies…none of u know me personally..then y r u saying that u hate me?For this story?If u think that these things will affect me then that’s your misconception….I guess I’m the worst writer here…I was really hurt by the comments..many of u suggested me to take them positively..now u tell me how do I take comments like I hate u Eva and Eva is autistic positively?This won’t make any improvement in my writing but just discourage me…..I did not write for part 2 days because I was hurt…seeing bashers bashing everyone who wer supporting me….

I’M REALLY SORRY….MANY OF U TOOK MY STAND AND WER BASHED INSTEAD….So lets go for this episode…

The epsode starts with…
Swara comes to the office…Sanskar smiles seeing her…Swara goes to her place…
Laksh is in his cabin..he is thinking about Swara…he is founding Swara everywhere..just then Swara comes to hs cabin..
Laksh:Okay Swara..I know u r not here..but I’m seeing u everywhere…..i know u will disappear soon…
Swara:Sir..I’m here…
Laksh:No u r not..
Swara:Sir I am…
Laksh:Okay fine then if u r here then hug me…will u?U won’t cause u r not here…u r just my imagination….
Swara:What r u saying dir?
Laksh:See I’m correct..u r just my imagination..
Swara hugs Laksh…
Laksh is shocked and speechless….Swara breaks the hug…
Swara:Now r u sure that I’m here?
Laksh nods innocently..Swara gives him a file and asks him to sign…Laksh is about to sign when she stops him and asks him to read before signing….
Laksh;U read it right?Thats enough for me…i trust u..
Laksh signs the paper and Swara leaves from there…Just then Sanskar asks Swara to come….Swara comes with him..
Sanskar:Hello everyone…I wanted to share something with u all…I want to introduce u all to my fiancé
Everyone smiles…
Sanskar:So meet my fiancé…Swara Gadodia….
Everyone starts clapping…Laksh comes there and asks everyone or the reason for their happiness…
Sanskar:Lucky..i introduced my fiancé to everyone..and..
Laksh:Bha..where is my would be bhabi?
Sanskar:Areh u know her…..your pa….as in Swara…
Laksh looks at Swara…he stands speechless…..Swara gives a fake smile….
Everyone goes and congratulates them..and then get back to their work…Laksh calls Swara to his room..
Laksh:So Miss Gaadodia..or should I call u bhabi?
Swara;Swara at office and bhabi at home simple..(Sarcastically)
Laksh:U think everything is a joke?
Swara:What joke?
Laksh:Nothing..
Swara is about to leave when Sanskar comes there…
Laksh has tears in his eyes…
Sanskar:U crying?
Laksh:No

Sanskar:tell me the truth…
Laksh looks at Swara..
Sanskar:r u sad cause she is going to be your bhbai?U hate her so much?
Laksh:That’s what I can’t do bhai..i can’t hate her…..cause I love………..
Sanskar:Lucky?
Sanskar:Swara….u even love…
Swara:Sir…
Swara looks down…
Sanskar;oh so u both love each other..
Sanskar has tears in his eyes…still trying to hold back his tears…
Laksh:Bhai..I’m sorry….
Sanskar:U idiot..y r u apologizing?U loved someone…that’s not a mistake….I’ll go and talk to mom dad..u both deserve to be with each other…u both love each other….u will be together..that’s a promise…
Laksh:U r sacrificing your love for me?
Sanskar:Laksh….she is a nice girl…and this was an arrange marriage(he is lying)
Laksh:That means u don’t love her?
Sanskar:No….
Laksh:I’m relieved then..thank u bhai..
Sanskar leaves from there
Laksh hugs Swara…Swara feels irritated but still pretends to be fine…
Swara leaves from there..and meets someone…
The unknown person:Our plan is working…
Swara:ha….thank u so much..u r helping me in this mission…without u nothing would had been possible
The person:I’m happy to see Sanskar in that state..
Swara;Why?As in u don’t have any personal rivalry with her..right?
Person:no no..i’m just helping u..after what he did to Ragini…he deserves it…
Swara:I don’t know why I feel that Sanskar is the wrong person…i mean…i don’t think that he will do something like that….i planned of leaving him on the marriage day and marry his brother..so that he feels the pain of losing love….of being betrayed…….but he….he got to know everything today..i could clearly see that he loved me…he was in pain…but he…he backed up….just because he got to know that we(swalak) love each other…the person who respects the word love so much….can he betray his own love?
The person:No no..u don’t know him….he has 2 faces….he is not innocent..he plays with everyone”s feelings..
Swara;u r Di,Laksh and Sanskar’s college friend….u told me the truth..so I came here to take my revenge…thank u…

Precap:Who is the person?
Hint:I introduced that person in my story….

Credit to: Eva

140 comments

  1. Bisha

    Ore baba! I forgot. Sriously! Haha Eva another breathtaking wonderful chappy. And yes, you don’t have to be sad for we the supporters of you will keep on supporting you no matter what. And Niti, Kriya, please don’t misunderstand me. After all we are on the same line- fans of Eva and will support her come what may. So let’s just put our hands together and say HIP HIP HURRAY! 3 CHEERS FOR EVA THE GREAT! LOL. Eva you are a very strong girl. I never said such abusive words should be taken positively. I really pity on those abusive bashers. But see you will have bashers. U just keep on writing such wonderful chappies for your fans. Eva Rocks! You are such a sweet sis. I really wish I could meet you. Lol. Are you on wattpad? That would be fu. And keep writing..

    • Niti

      Sorry Bisha…I was too rude i guess…and yes Eva…u r amazing….i was surprised to see your comment and replies..u asked me not to taunt anyone for his or her english……that stupid idiot called u autistic..without reason..when i answered her taunting her for her english, u asked me to stop cause u didn’t want her to feel embarrassed ….hats off to an outstanding personality like you….that’s another reason why i read your ffs..BECAUSE OF U…and yes Bisha u r right..EVA ROCKS!!!!!

      • Bisha

        Thank you so much Niti for understanding me. EVA ROCKS!! And thus is also for Eva that our misunderstanding cleared. Right?

      • Niti

        Yeah..because of her only our misunderstanding is cleared and now this bechari is facing all these things which she doesn’t deserve…

  2. Anjali

    god…. no idea who it could be….

    Vidhi, Niti, Ashish…
    Too good Eva!

    Pls post soon. And people who think that Eva is autistic or whatever, FIrst learn the true meaning of the word. Then try writing a ff urself and see how comments are given. Don’t u ppl understand that there’s someone else out there who’s actually hurt by all this? You think that Eva’s a fictional being or what?
    She’s a human being.
    So at least out of humanity, Pls don’t criticise her. As she herself has told, Question her writing, not her.

    And Eva, Don’t worry. Your readers will take care of themselves. But I’ve had enough of this bashing. If they start again, I swear I’m gonna get soooo pissed off… I’ve seriously had enough of this..

    I swear, I dont know how you are so strong. It’s one thing when they don’t like ur work… But when they criticise you.. God…
    Anyways, Love you and will always be there for you so don’t worry… 😀 😀

    • Bisha

      U are very right Anjali. Yess like Anjali I too think now I am gonna lose my cool if I see any more abusive bashing. Bashers please Eva ko baksh do. She is really a young vivacious writer. Atleast dont comment on her ffs if you cant praise her writing. You reakly need to understand tge hard works behind any story that is being posted here. All of us take our time from our busy schedule and write just to fulfil our happiness, quench of writing and also try to make the readers happy. But we cant really make everyone happy. Try to understand that. Thank you Anjali.a big thanks to all the supporters of Eva who take her stand no matter what.

      • Anjali

        Please don’t thank me bisha…. I’m not doing this for me. I’m doing this bcos its not their right to criticise ppl. I agree with you. It take so much time just to write one chapter. And she’s done her utter best… These people don’t understand that. Now more than anger, I feel hurt and sad by all this.

        Anyways, Telly updates, When ur gonna review every comment, Then y can’t you stop the basher’s comments? Please try to do this. It will make this a whole lot peaceful.

  3. tanu

    don’t b sad Eva …in logo ki baato ka bura mat maano n just do best …yeh log ragini KO psnd krte h or kuch swalak n swasan KO inhe kahani se zyada characters pasnd h ….I m also swasan fan but story also matters that’s y I read it ….u r gud writer ..n don’t mind of anyone ‘s bad words ….

    • reader

      Tanu 1 question for u….do u hate d character ragini or tejaswi or both?
      don’t bash me bcos u might think me as a ragini fan but m both a fan of tejaswi and helly n amazed at their acting skills at such a young age….so if u don’t mind pls answer my question?

      • Niti

        Is telly updates your property that we need to take your permission to write a comment?Eva is stupid…and u r ILLITERATE!!!!

    • tanu

      mene ragini swalak n even swasan …I m swasan fan phir b mene sbhi fans k bare me likha Jo Eva KO bash kr rhe h chahe vo ragini swalak ya swasan fan ho …ragini n teju both r my favorite too ….sorry if I hurt any

  4. Anjali

    Sorry for the long comment…

    BTW I saw ur comment in my chapter… To change ur logo, Go to this website…

    https://en.gravatar.com/?logout=1

    Press sign in using wordpress and then give ur email address and make a password.
    After that, Go to wordpress settings, where you can change ur profile photo…
    Once you choose the pic it’s done.

    While commenting, you have to choose the email id you used to create this account. otherwise the pic wont appear.
    Hope this helps… If it doesnt, Tell me… And ill help u

      • Anjali

        Thank you so much for the concern divya… But I think I know exactly what I have to do.. A person has asked me for help and I will try my best to help her.

        Umm.. So u created ur id right??
        Now in the bottom middle. There will be wordpress settings saying change ur password, change ur profile pic and all.. .Then u choose ur pic, crop it and then it will show a page saying manage gravatars

        in that you have to select ur pic again and confirm that u want it for this email id… Then it will ask for rating. give the g rating. now try commenting.. It should work

  5. First of all,’shuvo noboborsho’.Amar jonno tumi best.Tumi amar smiley queen.Tai please onner kotha shune nijeke hurt korona.By the way,it’s awesome.Ami jani mysterious person ta ke kintu bolbona.Bcz I love secrets.
    #be happy
    Spread smile

    • Eva

      Shubho noboborsho to u too…and yes…ekhon ami oo karo kotha shunbo na….btw u can reveal your guess…..
      U too be happy…..

      • Siyali

        U go and read them na..why do u even visit this page?Just because she includes swalak even in her ff…u r comparing her story with other’s ones…Its Poonam’s opinion..why r u poking your nose in this?

      • Nidhi

        Oyeeee selfish Eva ki bacchi…tu kyu dusro ke mamlo meh apna tang ararahi hai?Koi kam nehi hai kya?Why r u writing your own wish in other’s comment as a reply?

      • djiej

        First look at your self Nidhi, what are you doing? The same as her, why are poking your nose in between, badi aayi “selfish Eva ki bachchi”

      • Vishakha

        hahaha and u r copying Nidhi….poking your nose,feet,hand and everything in between 🙁 :0 DJIEJ…

  6. Bhargavi

    Hai Eva, this was an wonderful update. You are such a great writer and I don’t know why others can think in other way as you have such a talent that with your words you made me to read your stories and no to miss even a single one. Yours is the only ff I will be reading keep aside my interest in the pairs.
    Eva don’t mind about the bad words . In life we will face such as some would be there to discourage, but don’t feel bad yar. We all are here to support you. We love your ff. Take care!!

  7. Anu

    Dear don’t feel sad. I never read ur ff but I know many people admire you here wholly and as a writer i think you should always take the positive things and neglect the negative things. Dont care about the bashers.

    And @bashers
    #SHAME
    Hiding behind ur real identity u r trying to discourage a great writer who takes hours to write this. I’ve no words for you all!

    Eva keep writing ♥ 🙂

    • Eva

      Hahaha..this time 😀 :D..I HATE U TOO..and I’m the worst writer then why do u even enter my ff page?.Anyways..keep smiling and bashing….

      • Eva

        Just one question for u SWASAN…If Sanskar would be in Laksh’s place today in my ff…then your dialogue be same?Would u say IF U WANT TO PAIR IT IN SWASAN SAY IT DIRECTLY…..never mind…no hard feelings for anyone present here…

      • eva even am smiling and bashing u even i hate u i will say it directly i want swasan will make it no na y r u saying if want say it directly u cheao am still smiling u said keep smiling and bashing

      • Vishakha

        Selfish eva……u go to hell..u smile like a b****….u r cheapo number 1 commenting from different emails…

      • Pari

        How is that Eva’s fault if someone writes in her ff page that she is Helly shah?And r u illiterate or something/Have u ever read any ff of Eva?She never asked for comments…i remember in Samjhota 1 when people were bashing her saying that she is doing everything for comments..she asked us to read..no need for comments…don’t bash anyone unless u know about her…

      • Tnk u darling for liking myff really iam very happy but I said it that day nd iam saying it today also iam really sorry if I hurt u plzzz don’t compare writers every one have their own style .nd one more thing if u don’t like her ff just ignore her ff y r u giving more imp to her by commenting.

    • Cm’on guyz… they r on screen characters… y u feel hurt for pairing …. even m swasan fan bt i read ONLY eva’s ff irrespective of pair… cz her story is osm… grow up ! If u cant appreciate then plz dont bash… n y only eva… there are many stories where pairing are lyk ragsan swalak or whatever… bt do u go there n bash them for nt wring YOUR fav couple… no u dont… then stop it… doing so… if u dont lyk her ff fine.. u only go for pair… nt for story… I LOVE U EVA ur an osm writer…

    • Anjali

      That’s enough..
      Pls stop telling that you hate her. When you know she never reveals the pairs and always brings a twist in her stories… When you think she might disappoint you, STOP READING HER FF…
      No one’s asking you to read her ff…

      Now you’ll probably just tell something about me. Idc…
      As long as I feel good about myself, I really couldn’t care less about ur comments. I have ppl and friends who support me in my ff… You don’t understand just how a writer feels when he/she looks at the comments. the sense of satisfaction, The thrill that ppl like it and the bitter hurt and disappointment when they receive personal hate comments…
      What’s wrong with you all?

      sorry for this. I know I’ve been extremely rude. But look at yourselves.
      I understand. You feel hurt by her way of writing. Then the solution is simple. Don’t read it. Or read it once she’s clearly stated her pairs. But don’t insult her. Give her suggestions to improve this story or whatever, but discouraging her is just cheap of you ppl..

    • Kayra

      Hey Swasan…y r u after Eva?What has she done to u?I bet….if u read it further and see that its Swasan by any chance then u would be quiet…such a couple freak u r….hay!!!….bhagwan apko satbuddhi dey….

    • tanu

      me to wants that ki Eva pehle hi pairs bata de taaki hume padhna chaiye ki nahi …bcoz generally me swasan fan hi padhti hu …lekin iska MATLAB ye nahi ki u hurt her …uski writing ka alag hi tarika h …plz don’t bash her ….

    • Anu

      Tell me if she is hurting your feeling then what r u doing….u r doing bwru gud job ha tell na….u r consoling her? U only care about your feelings have u ever care about others feeling,eva’s feeling..if u 1% humanity also na now or self respect then never bash her mid.ask her soory…..

  8. reader

    M a silent reader n a big fan of ur all ffs…m really sad 4 those demented people bashing u unnecessarily, but anyways u shuld b proud of urself bcoz at such a young age u have amazing writing skills,so carry on dear n u r a beautiful person from heart…it is seen in ur comments…..
    Coming to the epi…it was awesome can’t wait for the next part….n gud suspense…..
    N 1 more thing i know u r a swalak fan….but 1 request if in ur next ff can u giv same importance to both swara and ragini or a little bit more to rags bcoz in serial they r not giving any importance to her n as i only read ur ff so…..itz a humble request but if u don’t want then no problem n 1 more question do u like ragini/tejaswi?
    Sorry if u felt bad but no hard feelings for u dear n sorry for writing such a long comment…..
    ur ff’s silent reader?

    • Siddhi

      Shut up u nonsensical person….don’t u know how to behave? Khud ff likhegi na tu..toh I’ll make sure ki meh tujhe bash kar karke dho du….then u will understand Eva’s pain…and yes Eva is what? I really don’t care about what u wanted to say..but let me tell u what u r…u r a senseless,heartless,illiterate witch…

  9. Nice epi n the most imp thing I like in Ua ff is pair mystery …we can’t even guess until n unless u want to say n go on dea avoid bashers

  10. Anu

    Yaar how can u bashers hurt her….even I only read swasan ff..I have not read this ff fully but u guys doesn’t have any right hurt her……guys be mature y u bashers bejave like insane…u know how difficult is to write an ff..if u will try na nd then someone will bash u …..then only u will realize how it feels…..guys plz for god sake if u don’t like her writing then ignore it don’t bash…..she is fabulous write nd if u any problem y u comment ok she doesn’t tell about pair then what…its her wish this is her ff what’s your problem in that….in reply update even in fb there r many ff of different couples…..choose your favorite couple ff nd read them don’t bash her……u know without seeing or talking to her I can say she has a very gud heart

  11. Jhanvi

    Hey eva don’t pay attention to this bashers. Dont waste your time on reading their comments.. You are a gr8 writer. This fact is not going to change ?? by their comments. btw where were ot this two days? I was like wth!! Why she is not posting the ff? Is she alright. And one more thing you are too confusing

  12. dolly

    Awesome eva…i have read all ur fan fictions …u are a wonderful writer…
    And just keep writing like this…
    Waiting for next update…

    • dolly

      And one more thing which i like in u is that u don’t mind whatever people speak about u…
      Just keep writing eva…i love ur ff…all ur twists are awesome…

  13. zuha (Asya fan)

    Good dear and whosoever bash u do not take it seriously i read ur ff for the 1st time nd loved it , and especially for those who say bad about Eva please if u have problem with Eva keep them safe with you , and you have no right of insulting someone , just keep yourself in Eva’s shoe and think what if this happens with you and I myself write OS and FF’s ,so writers like when someone like their hard work coz writing is not an easy task , and we write for ourselves and for our readers who love reading and before saying to someone think twice , coz it may hurt and god dislike it……..

  14. Lee

    Hey eva u r a very gud writer…
    Just keep this in mind ..
    That keep writing..
    logo ka kaam hai kehna ( bash karna ) agar ham ye soch ne lage ki lo kya kahenge to log kya kaam karenge….so dont bother ..
    Keep writing kyuki agar aise log hai jo jinhe tumhare ff nai pasand to aise bhi to log hinge na ki jo sirf rumhare liye ye page kholte hinge n while doing so they r hoping ke tumhe ff post kiya ya ni

    • Pari

      And by seeing how u questioned on her family…I’m so sure that u belong to a low class illiterate family…b****

    • Anjali

      You are going too far…
      Insulting her stories is one thing…
      Insulting her is a different thing
      BUT INSULTING HER FAMILY?

      How dare you? I mean, Seriously what rights do you have to comment on that. Do you know her personally? Based on her writings you have gone so bl**dy far to say that her family is not nice.
      What rot…

      People such as you are deliberately cruel and harsh. Based on this comment, I can clearly see what type of a girl or guy you are….

      • Riddhi

        Anjali..can u plz tell me what does this idiot mean…I don’t know Tamil language..so plz tell me what she means..

    • Plzz its reallyy rude u can’t talk like that about her family if u don’t like her ignore her but don’t drag her family nd her personal life in comments really I can’t believe y r u soo heart less

      • Anjali

        Chi…
        What the hell is wrong with you..
        You think by talking tamil no one’ll understand you and you can say anything you want?

        You have no decency at all.. Not even a bit.
        I’m really glad I don’t know who u r….
        You are seriously a very rude person….
        Calling people dog and what not…

        This shows ur upbringing… And you are talking about hers. Seriously you are just…..
        I dont want to tell it..

        Just that u disgust me 🙁

      • Ha ha ha is that a [email protected]

      • Anjali

        Naming himself/herself swasan… seriously… It’s driving me nuts…

        I’ll summarize it in short for you riddhi…
        Basically this person is saying that we are overacting and it is his wish to comment whatever he wants. And if he sees you in person, He ‘s telling he’ll hit you with his chappals.

        yuckkk

        And he’s calling us all some bad names… I don’t want to tell it out loud

      • Riddhi

        Now when I understood the meaning..i would like to say that..your chappal is more pure than u r…u r so disgusting…agar mujhe tum dikhi toh meh toh tumjara sat hii phor du…np worries..uske liye mujhe chappal ki zarurat nehi padegi…mere hath hii kafi hai..

      • sindhuja

        you are just disgusting!! I pray to god that you get the same pain and I won’t regret for that.

    • Sakshi

      I’m so sure that u your ancestors,u,your parents and sibling….all r group of idiots…what an excellent upbringing u have gotten….insulting someone taking his or her family name…first see yourself…and then point at others..by seeing Eva’s behavior towards other….I’m sure that she belongs to a respectable family…who has perfect upbringings…of not critising anyone using their weakness….

    • Anjali

      Hey nisha… Leave her…
      Why should we talk like her…
      we are better than that… And pls dont talk about her family yaar… It isn’t fair…

      Ik she did it… But we dont have to do it… Let her be..
      sorry if u felt bad

  15. Crazygirl

    Awesome update. Eva just ignore bashers they don’t have a right to upset you. You are an awesome writer

  16. Anjali

    You know what…
    I actually thought you might leave her alone. Don’t know why I thought that. I never expected that anyone could be so cruel that they forget that a young girl is at the other corner, feeling so hurt and disappointed.
    I never imagined that people could be so mean as well. I am glad I don’t know you all personally.

    Eva, I really don’t know what to say to you. Telling you to ignore them isn’t the right thing to do. How do you ignore such people? I wish I could take away some of that hurt you feel. I can’t imagine what you must be feeling now.

    As for all the people calling Eva bad names, you guys are really cruel. She has hurt our feelings because of FICTIONAL PAIRS… And here you are, bashing her. Directly to her face. Chi! What the hell is wrong with you ppl?

    Now if any other supporters of Eva comment, you’ll bash them as well. Enjoy ur bashing. If for fictional things, you lose your sense of reason, I don’t know what I can say that will make you understand.

    • Eva

      Yayyyyyyyy..thank u so much Anjali…i did it…thank u for your help….i changed my logo yipppiii..thank u..and about bashing..who cares..i don’t…i can see EVA MATTERS A LOT IN THEIR LIFE….Thats why they named their name selfish Eva and all that shit..never mind…

      • Anjali

        no problem… Just keep smiling.. These ppl are not worth losing ur sleep or ur tears…. i know me Eva will rise above all this…
        Am so proud of you 😀

  17. sinzo

    Episode is awesome Eva…..

    juz dnt pay attention to Bashers……i love your story …..i love you…..keep rocking dear……

  18. eva plz go and die i hate u see the negative xomments if am there in ur place surly i will die from this i can clearly say that u have no shame

    • SHAMELSS KATE

      LOL…SHE SHOULD DIE?WHY?WHY DON’T U KILL HER?I WOULD LOVE TO SEND U TO JAIL…..AND YES…EVA MAKE SURE IF U DIE..KILL HER FIRST….U R SHAMELESS KATE….U R NOT IN HER PLACE….REMEMBER THAT..U CAN’T BE LIKE EVA….U R WORTHLESS…OKAY..U DIE…CAUSE NO ONE CARES ABOUT U…BUT OF SHE DIES…HER SUPPORTERS WILL KILL U SHAMELSS KATE…

    • zuha (Asya fan)

      Excuse me , stay in ur limits , don’t point on her shame coz shameless ppl are those who hurt others by their words , plz if u have a problem with her or story keep it with u and don;t hurt her , coz sometimes u hurt one that much thet he can never forgive u… i wished that tely updates didn’t post these type of comments….

    • U know what u are very funny .I think u r a school kid thats y ur way of thinking is narroww .wt is this go nd die what do u think of life die for ur silly comments ha ha ha its soo funny plzz bee mature nd think broad u have to see more life .iam saying it not only for supporting eva but for u too iam suggesting plzz don’t ever try to kil ur self for silly reasons

  19. Crazygirl

    Thats not at all cool to write to someone and say you should die. If you don’t like this ff then don’t read it and insult other people that’s for all the bashers because you guys are jealous that she is a really good writer and you aren’t because you have to use your own fantasie

  20. Lila

    Evaaa…..ur the best…awesome epi yaar…plz forget these basher….when u got bashed last time in samjhota 1 u sed u cried….plz no more tears for people who dont respect ur work…..they are haters and they are gonna hate….plz don’t loose hope…ur fans are with u….we love ur story…those are jealous people who can’t see u get praised….so keep going let them say what they want cuz we all knw ur story is one of the best

  21. Lee

    Hey u swasan pplzzz change ur name…due to ur shiiti comment ur spoiling my swasan name..plzz change ur name….n think before u speak…..n u kate plZzzz just stop it…every persin is not negative like u eva ek positive ladki. Hai n agar itna hi hai then visitng this page

    • faima

      Eva….ignore those bashers…I think they r joules….and ur awsme writter….am commenting rarely…but I can’t stop…when I saw these bashers…we r with u….be strong as always….

  22. kriya

    dont pay attention to the bashers……u r superb writer eva rocks!!!……all the bashers u commented a lot abt eva how much u ppl knw abt her n writing that i hate u bla bla bla first u see urself n think 1000 times to comment on others……

  23. Hi eva… shloka here.
    U know i feel like crying today by reading some comments… so can understand ur situation…….eva i would say stop listening….its time for u to reply them. Dont worry whatever u do we r with u. I know although there r many supporters..yet they cant actually make everything fine. All the bashers. Guys plz. I request u can say anything about stories but dont drag eva personally. She has a heart which hurts reading ur comments. …..
    Some one here tells her to die… so i would like to ask who r u too take decision on her behalf… have u given her life no na. Then stay in ur limits…dont dare to cross ur limits….
    I dont wanna say anything wrong .. but i feel very bad for u…eva still i will say… dont mind… let them say… when u go on a right path. Or do something exceptional … there r many who will try to demotivate u or will try to seak some weakness of ur. But never lose heart dear. Stay like u r now.. god is watching everything. So dont worry. Everyone gets punished of their deed. ..
    Eva dont be sad. Be happy always. U have entertained us and made us smile… so never get disheartened…..
    Btw… i think laksh is the real culprit.. is it???????

  24. Hey don’t take them seriously don’t be sad and ur ff is very good I liked it a lot. And maybe most people love ur ff a lot that’s why don’t be sad. And continue writing 🙂

  25. Are u nuts people?? O sorry why am I asking this stupid question u all are nuts maniac.. Idiotic.. Crazy.. Selfish.. Gone case people or I may say even cowards.. U know what u all are just shameless .. HOW DARE YOU KATE??? What do you think u all will say anything against my kiddo and we will stick to our seats and just watch u .. HOW DARE U KATE!!AND OTHER BASHERS IF THERE IS LITTLE WATER AT YOUR HOME TAKE IT AND DROWN IN IT FOR SAYING SUCH CRAZY THINGS.. THIS WAS THE MOST APPRECIATABLE THING I COULD SAY FOR U ALL BECAUSE IN UR TINY HEAD LOGICAL THINGS WON’T GO AT LEAST UR TYPE ILLOGICAL THINGS WILL GO .. AND I AM SURE I AM WRITE .. STOP BASHING EVA !! AS I SAID U ALL ARE COWARDS U ALL ARE SCOLDING A PERSON .. BASHING HER WITH UR NEGATIVE COMMENTS WITHOUT EVEN TELLING UR NAMES.. I AM AND WILL BE A SWASAN FAN BUT THEY ATE ON SCREEN COUPLES FOR THEM IF U ARE TRYING TO GLEE AN INNOCENT PERSON WHO IS JUST TRYING TO IMPROVE AND WORK OR HER TALENTS IS COMPLETE INJUSTICE TO HER .. IF SOME FAKE PERSON COMES AND CALLS HERSELF AS HELLY SHAH WHAT THE HELL CAN KIDDO DO IN THAT!! HUH!! EXACTLY THERE IS A BLACK HOLE IN YOUR MENTALLITY THAT IS WHY U ALL HAVE BECOME SO OFFENSIVE AND ARE STOOPING SO LOW. AND EVA IS DAMN MORE MATURE AND SMARTER THAN U SHE HAS THE SOLUTION OF HER OWN PROBLEMS.. SHE DOES NOT NEED OUR HELP .. SE IS VERY CAPABLE AND HAS HER OWN TENDENCY TO SOLVE PROBLEMS BUT WHAT WE CAN DO HER SWEET PERSONALITY HAS ATTRACTED US SO MUCH THAT WE CONSIDER HER AS OUR SISTER LIL SIS AND AN ELDER SIS RESPONSIBILITY IS TO PROTECT HER YOUNGER SIS.. YOU KNOW WHAT EVEN WITHOUT LNOWING HER WE ARE SO CLOSE TO HER THIS IS INDIA’S SANSKRITI , CULTURES WHICH U ALL ARE RUINING .. SHAME ON YOU AND UR PERSONALITY

    EVA, KIDDO I know it’s hard for u to ignore all these people but just chill .. They are extremely jealous of u .. Let them be in their sweet dreams u continue with ur story line .. Delete their comments and enjoy ur magic on us. Stay calm and and and idiots will be idiots so let them be idiots .. We can’t do much for these idiots.. After all as I said idiots are idiots
    #RIYA MALIK

  26. And ha Kiddo there are so many spelling errors because of the long update.. So BASHERS I think at least u will have this much knowledge in ur tiny brain that u understand what is written.. If there’s problem u can ask me I will give u a big detailed answer.. I know many questions are on the way.. After all u BASHERS are so interested in getting ur self insulted so what we can do
    NOTE THE SARCASM AND MY TAUNT IN THE COMMENT U IDIOTIC BASHERS .. I AM SURE U ALL ARE GONNA BE VERY HAPPPPPPY SORRY SORRY CONTENTED WITH UR INSULTS

  27. heyy eva….
    plzz dont pay attention to those bashers yr….
    i am seriously shocked to see tht how cheap mentality r these people carrying…
    nd to all those who r bashing her without any reason… u all should stop reading this ff….
    i mean lyk seriously how stupid u all are tht u r wasting ur energy as well as time fr insulting someone unnecessarily….
    n dear eva… i am seriously proud of u dear….
    u r an amazing writer…
    to pay attention to them coz they r nt worth it…. they r calling u a bad writer… bt can anyone frm them can even write a short story…
    keep smiling eva….. v luv u…

  28. Hey I am new here. can you plz tell who is the pair. i Will continue reading if its swalak . So lemme know plzzzźzzzz……….waiting for your reply.!

  29. Suhasini Khanna

    Guys lets stop bullying the Eva haters. Cause hating Eva is quiet natural for them. They never possessed talent so they are just jealous of talented people.

    Now for the bullies-
    Please stop showcasing your typically low standard. Your mentality is so sick that I pity the mother who carried you in her womb for nine months. I mean seriously? Before questioning someone else background and family please do the honor if standing in front of the mirror. I’m sure your parents got you guys from garbage. Like really! You are so pathetic that words would fail even Suhasini, the critic queen. We should encourage young and talented people. But reading your comments the only thong I learnt about your educational background is this – you were just taught to read and write English. No morals in you so you all are equivalent to illiterate b***ces. On a scale of literacy of 1-10 I’d rate you 0.00000001/10… Be happy cause that’s a huge score. I’m just being kind enough to give you that small mark. Or else you cry babies might go to your moms and annoy them even more. Already you guys are a shame to your families. So pathetic. I pity you.
    How can a person wish someone’s death? But since you dared to do so, I would call you a bl**dy swine…

    • Hi suhasini…..or suhasini di
      Even i am a eva ff reader… i have read her all episodes and even i hate bashers..
      But if u dont mind i would say that plz dont drag their mothers in between. Whats her fault.. plz di dont do this. Any mother has not grown her child with bad upbringing.. its the child who proves her wrong……. di i am sorry if u r hurt by my words. And di correct critic.. nice score……

    • Suhasini

      Shloka dear please read all the comments. A badger has questioned Eva’s upbringing. Its something like this, an eye for an eye, an insult for an insult. Their parents failed to give them moral values..
      I don’t see any reason forvwhich I should act sympathetic towards them..

  30. after seeing dese much of cmmnts i enter by a thgt of an outstandng stry here bt my shockng its eva’s ff who once i stppd to read her ff bcz of i didnt find my fav pair in der…bt now seeing others bashng badly me too feel bad…i dnt knw d stry nd i didnt read it but ur cmmnts made me to write…pls yaar dnt cmmnt like dis…if u guyzz dnt like dis ff den dont read nd leave it like i doo…der r soooo much of beautiful swasan ff us so pls enjy with that….i m nt a fan of eva not a supporter bt i stil feel sad for her…pls swasan fans dnt make a mess here…me too hate ragini nd sanky as a pair bt bashng others is really hurt yaar…dont doo hum logom keliye bohot sara wndrful swasan ffs hey….so pls leave frm here let her write..it hurt her soo much yaar…eva dnt bother abt harsh cmmnts i knw its difficult bt try…nd i thnk d major prblm is dat u wnt reveal pair like u did early i tnk soo…bcz after expectng der fav pair atlast bcmng fool is really hurts ithnk dats why dey bash u like dis(i m srry if i hurt u)nd bashers dnt spoil our swasan infrnt of othrs…pls itz a request…..if u dnt like den dnt read nd leave dis fictn like i do…so pls stp bashng her..

  31. sindhuja

    Hai Eva, i know it’s not the right time to introduce myself. Once i was a silent reader of your samjhota series and a swara story in which swasan have children. i don’t know what it’s name. sorry for that.
    i just returned to tellyupdates after a small break. i didn’t know it’s your story. i had just read a bashing comment in recent comment section and came to see what is happening. Seriously, you are brave yaar. you are trying to ignore the comments. you are such an awesome girl. I am impressed.
    if i was in your place, i would have left the site. i am so emotional type. really, i got tears while reading the bashing comments.
    I won’t say to take these comments positively. because we can’t do it when someone is personally bashing us. just try to ignore them. don’t loose your patience and self confidence.
    you are an amazing writer. no doubt in that. Keep do the amazing work. God bless you dear. Cheer up, girl!!!!

    BASHERS – Shame on you people. you all are disgusting. if you want to read your favorite pairs ff, go and read. There are so many websites if you haven’t had enough here. don’t enter into her page to bash her. I know, you all are deaf and brainless. that’s why again and again you all are bashing her. or you all are so obsessed with your hatred? I pray to god that you will get the same pain for a short period to repent. I wish it will happen soon.

  32. Oh my god wats wrong with u people
    Its a fan fiction ok
    Its all imaginary nth real
    Here we dont knew each other faces or atleast our original names then why r u fighting like that
    U knew wat if u cant control your self anf forgetting that all have their own lifes.
    When this fiction is effecting u and stops thinking u matured stay away from fictions and think onces by bashing each other wat we will get.

  33. Sree harini

    What the …..I really don’t understand how to react even. I was just surfing the pages and found a high number so opened it but…I am speechless. I mean how can anyone judge a person just by his/her words? I agree with everyone here that all have their right to share their opinion but that doesn’t mean that you can insult them. Where is the humanity? If you really don’t like her then leave. Why do you behave as illterates? Just place yourself in her and think. The words you used for her and for her family…this OS so disgusting yaar. We are matured and just behave like the one. And the major doubt I have is what wrong did her family do? Sorry to say like this bit whoever commented about her family are mentally disabled one…felt the pain right. If you don’t like her then ignore. For god’s sake. Just listening one negative will change the mood of entire day and you people are becoming the reason for her depression. The words you use may take your anger out but that will have adverse affect on other and this is my experience. I really feel bad to beg you not to irritate and hurt her with your comments. If you see, you really don’t have any personal reason for loathing her. Guys please grow up. Understand that it really pains to listen something about about oneself which they are not.

  34. WHAT THE bl**dy HELL? CAN’T TELLYUPDATES REVIEW COMMENTS PROPERLY or THEY JUST UPLOADALL THE COMMENTS RANDOMLY! Its heights of insults for any writer. All the comment writers are throwing mud at each other and abusing each other. Why the hell you insult Eva’s background? What has happened with you guys? Dont you ever feel how eva is feeling after tgese comments? i really dont understand why you people behave in such a way? Have you received education? I doubt! If you had you would not have been behaving like this. Bashers are saying her background is bad and on the other hand supporters are sayong bashersbackground bad. Whats the difference then? EVA SHOULD NOT STOP WRITING. TUI CHALIYE JA. KARUR KOTHA SUNBAR DORKAR NEI. And they are even using tamil telegu and bashing her as if others wont understand. But the one who has already blackened oneself will keep on doing that. I pity on you. Think she has a herat.she is a human. You dont like you dont read? But please dont abuse her. I think we should report to Tellyupdates and say what kind of hurling abuses at each other is going on here between the bashrrs and tge fans. Why do you people drive crazy always? Its really heights of insults. Please I request the bashers to stop reading or be polite. You dont even reveal your names!Lol. Funniest part of it. Some are saying she is a comment freak. Arey! We all get happy as those comments help us to imprive as well as encourage us. All tge writers here expect comments. SOme express that directly while some dont. And please those who want yheir fav pairs please go and read only stories which contains their fav pairs. U all are a shame under the name of reader. Fie on you bashers! Please tellyupdates, dont upload these abusive comments. It hurts like hell. Eva you carry on come what may. And SHUBHO NOBOBORSHO TO ALL OF YOU.

    Msg from team: Comments removed.

  35. Anu

    I agree Sree. Its just too bad. I don’t even know how to express my discomfort over this matter.
    Shame on the bashers. Just #SHAME

  36. Pranami

    Eva, u’r a very good writer n i love ur ff..plz bring more twists n turns..i’m just loving it..
    And those who have problems regarding her ff..u can give her some suggestions or just stop reading it..but don’t bash her like that..and yes, u have no rights to question about her upbringing..this is really shame..

    Dear, don’t care about the bashers and don’t stop writing..
    waiting for ur next update..??

  37. Anjali

    Lol…What’s the use of removing the comments now?
    She has already seen them and must be hurt…

    But anyways thanks TU team and pls don’t allow any more comments like these to be allowed.

    Eva, Now you’ll see exactly how many ppl are with you… Chill… And just keep writing…

    • Eva

      I’m not at all hurt Anjali….i understood many people’s mentality here….people…pointing at my family..and all that…but who cares i don’t..they r representing their own family…I’m hurt seeing people questioning on each other’s families…one say about hitting chappal..other say meh tumhara sar phor dungi..one says i should kill myself and other one says that i should kill her before i kill myself..one of them was using tamil language i guess….to irritate me…..yeh toh aur bhi acha tha…dil ki bharas bhi nikal di aur mujhe kuch samaj bhi nehi aya…..I’m full on chilled…MANY SMART PEOPLE SYMPATHIZED ME BY SAING THAT IF THEY WER IN MY PLACE THEN THEY WOULD LEAVE THIS SITE….MY QUESTION IS FOR THESE KINDS OF PEOPLE….WHY SHOULD I LEAVE?EVEN TELLY UPDATES UNDERSTAND WHICH COMMENT IS CORRECT AND WHICH IS NOT..SO THEY DELETED IT…..

  38. Though its of no use now, I still thank Tellyupdates for listening to me. I hope from now onwards tgey will review the comments and delete the abusive ojes then and there. Even comments which insult any author or reader are included in it. I want it for everyone who is doing this thing. So please tellyupdates, review the comments properly, try to understand the insults and delete them. Not only for Eva’s ff but also for all tge writers readers and comment writers. PLEASE.

  39. I am proud of u kiddo , the way u are handling this matter by ur extra out witty comments , bashers will surely have to buy some wit from u .. Let them be in their dreamland and let them enjoy .. I had already posted a comment and even many many others have given long lessons to the bashers … Due to my time problem I wasn’t able to communicate to all otherwise I would have surely thank ur supporters and bash the other crazy heads.. U just chill and post the other episodes .. Wee are there for u always and ever

  40. And now I am back in india .. So no problem and one more thing today is my birthday so I’ll be a lil busy if u will post any epi today so may be i will not be able to comment .. Advance me sorry
    ???????

    • Eva

      Umhhhh…Happy birthday ? Riya..many many happy returns of the day..god bless u..and thank u sp much for your support..?❤

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