Rishto ki Dastan (Part 1)

Hello people….Eva is back…..starting my 7th ff…it feels great…..and thank u all for appreciating me so much…
Mystery,mystery and only mystery……and lets see what is the mystery of this story…
Australia
A 4 years old girl is shown sleeping……a lady comes there and kisses her forehead..
Lady:Good morning sweetheart…..
A child:Good morning mamma…..
Lady:And happy birthday…
Girl:Thank u….mamma…..where is my gift?
Lady:Your gift? Ask for whatever u want……i will try my best to get u that thing…
Girl:Oh hoo…mamma….its very simple….i want to go to India…..to meet nanaji..nani and masi…..
Lady:But beta….u know na..mamma has work here…
Girl:Mamma….i don’t like to stay here in Australia…..we r all alone…
Lady:How r u alone beta….I’m there for u and u r there for us….
Girl:Mamma….u promised me…..that u will give me whatever I want..now plz plz plz,,,,

India….
A girl is shown sleeping in her bed….peacefully….just then alarm rings……she gets irritated and throws the alarm…….Her mother comes there…she is Sumi….
Sumi:Shona…..abhitak teri yeh adat nehi gayo hai…….why don’t u wake up early?Today u have interview na…..
Yes the girl sleeping is Swara…
Swara:Oh shit..ma…pehle kyu nehi yaad dilaya apne?
Sumi:Now get ready….
Swara runs to the washroom…and gets ready in a pick kurta and white jeans…
She runs towards the door….Just then Sumi comes there and feed her dahi shakkar(curd and sugar)
Swara kisses her mom’s cheeks and leaves for office….

In the road…she doesn’t find any auto……she is walking..just then she sees a car coming in full speed……The car splashes the mud o the road on Swara’s face….
Swara:What the hell….
Guy comes out of the car…
Swara eyes him angrily….
The guy:So sorry mam….
Swara:U know..i have an interview..and u spoiled everything…
The guy:See madam….your dress is perfect…just wash your face…and go for your interview….
Swara:U don’t need to tell me what to do okay?
Guy:I’m talking to u politely and u…..
Swara:Just shut up…..your politeness won’t bring my time….back which is wasted only because of u……useless idoit monkey…
Swara leaves from there angrily….
The guy:How dare she talk to Laksh Maheshwari like that?….god..i just pray…yeh mujhe future meh wapas na dikhe…..ahh….
Swara reaches her office…after an hour….its Swara’s turn……she enters…..and sees a guy sitting in the chair turning the opposite way…
Swara;Sir..amy I come in?
The guy turns…..he is non other than our Sanskar…he is mesmerized seeing her…..a little bit nervousness…..a cute small smile……….there was silence for a while until Sanskar started talking….
Sanky:Yes Miss Gadodia….
Swara’s interview in over…Swara answers everything honestly and confidently
Sanskar:Immpressive…..welcome to Maheshwari group of Industries….
Swara:That means…i got the job?
Sanskar:Ha….u r appointed as the PA of my younger brother Mr Laksh Maheshwari….my PA Vidhi will make u understand your job…..before that u have to sigh this contract..u can’t leave this job before 6 months…u can join from today itself…u don’t have any prob…
Swara:Thank u Sir…..and I’ll work fro today
Swara goes with Vidhi…
Vidhi:U see Sanskar sir chose u because he liked your confidence,maturity and honesty….u need all these qualitites to become Laksh sir’s pa…..
Swara:Okay….understood…
Vidhi:Now u go and meet your new boss……btw he is very mean to the ones who r mean to him…but extremely nice to the ones who r nice to him….
Swara;Okay….
Swara knocks the door…..Laksh say “come in”
Swara enters….
Swara:Good morning Sir
Laksh stands up stunned…
Laksh:Tum?
Swara:Tum?
Laksh:What r u doing here?
Swara:He bhagwan….u r my boss…..
Laksh:Hay?Bhai chose u as my pa?
In mind:Bhai..i gave u the responsibility thinking that u will find a responsible and calm pa….but this jansi ki rani?
Swara;Ha…
Laksh:Now get out…
Swara:Excuse me…i just signed a contract that I won’t leave this job before 6 months..and even u can’t fire me before 6 months..okay?
Laksh:Mujhe shack hai ki meh tumhara boss hu yah tum meri?
Swara:U see sir….I’m your pa…and u need to tolerate me…
Swara is about to leave…
Swara:Btw…the person who appointed me was your brother?
Lksh:Koi shack?
Swara;Ha..shack toh thahi….cause u behave like monster and he is like a farishta….
Laksh looks at him angrily
Laksh shares this incident with Sanky…he is laughing….
Sanky:At last there is a girl…who answered u back…..
Laksh:Bhai…..why did u hire that girl?
Sanky:Kyuki mujhe aisa laga ki wohh ekloti ladki hai jise tu patakar jhut nehi bulwasakta……u flirt with every girl…..wohh tere haath nehi ayegi…
Laksh:Is she my pa or your jasoos?
Sanky:Jasoos hii samajle….your all previous pa’s used to lie to everyone for u…..u were in party..and they used to say that u r in meeting..but she won’t lie……
Laksh:U r papa ke chamche….and she is your chamchi….
Sanky:Btw..did she really say that I’m a farishta?
Laksh:Ha….

People…how was this episode?I’m really confused…I’m not confident about this story…..if u don’t like it then plz do tell me……

Credit to: Eva

92 comments

  1. swasantha

    Too good… Eva I read a few of ur previous ff and would like to read all. So can u name them if u don’t mind. Thank You !! Sorry for troubling you.

    • Eva

      Thank u Dr..and u r not troubling me..so no apology needed..my ff names r Samjhota Swaragini ka..swaraginiti ki kahani,samjhota swaragini ka ek naya adhya intezar,I hate u too,manyata vs ragini and sanskar meri zindegi…

  2. Awesome, outstanding di.It’s not bad and boring at all.It’s your 7th ff, congratulations di . Welcome Back . Thanks for returning soon.I am really happy . Waiting for nxt part as Always . Plz update soon . Love you di.

    • Trisha

      Eva neh ajtak kabhi pairs reveal kiye hai jo aj karengi?Its useless to ask her anything….she just plays with everyone’s feelings…..kabhi swalak toh kabhi swasan…..hate any story written by Eva…..

      • Rey

        trisha if u hate any story written by eva thn wat r u dng here nd no one ask u to read k nd rapanzuel here no one cared abt pairs we jst loved story lines ly

      • Kashish

        Then don’t read it sweetheart..who is pressurizing u? Yeah right she plays with feeling…according to u but u see u r direct hurting someone by writing this in her ff page…read her story and then talk…her story changed many people’s pov…now they read for the story and not couples…this is for Eva’s ff only where they ignore couples and read the story….so mean of u… ?? and I’m one of them…

      • Miss Trisha, if you don’t like it, then stop reading.At least stop bashing.Eva di writing it with so much affection, you have no right to hurt her feelings.

      • Trisha

        Oh what a strong group defending Eva…sab iske alts hai kya? Hey Eva…r u commenting with diff emails? Must be…cause u can’t have so many supporters…and I’m just telling the truth…u r a player…hate u….

    • Eva

      I never reveal the pairs..and yap Trisha..u can hate mu story..but so sorry dr cause your taunts and hatred won’t change my style of writing..i like to create my mystery..and of don’t want to read then I have no prob…no hard feelings…

  3. Niharika

    Hey Eva….
    just wanted to say…u have a extraordinary power…..i mean with an intro u gain so many readers…now I have to read it……such an attractive intro…full of mystery…

    • Eva

      Thank u Niharika di..good to see u after so many days…i believe intro is one of the most imp part of a story which needs to be interesting..:)

  4. Anahita

    Eva di….i named u samjhota queen……but now….it looks like u r a mystery queen……awesome as always…. 🙂

    • Eva

      Hey Anahita…after so many days…hw r u dr? Btw I like your names…first Samjhota queen and now mystery queen…

  5. Bhargavi

    Hi, I am so happy that you have started a new ff. You have said that you have already written I ff. Please can you name them as I have read only two of your ffs of samjhota. PLEASE PLEASE

    • Eva

      Thank u Bhargavi…my other ff names r I hate u too,sanskar meri zindegi,swaraginiti ki kahani and mqnuata vs ragini…

      • Bhargavi

        Thank you so much Eva for giving the names of your ff. You made me cry and also laugh. My favourite is swaraginiti ki kahani. Thank you so much once again

  6. Joona

    Awesome.. I like swara’s character in ur ff…keep going my friend…
    I always followed ur ff..but I couldn’t comment last ff due to my exam pressure and other imp works..I am really sorry dear..
    I just loved today’s episode…

    • Eva

      Joona..missed u dear… tq…studies come first..so no need to apologize….btw how were your exams?

    • Eva

      Thank u..and i can’t reveal the pairs..so sorry..btw..dr I’m really sorry..cause I could not read your ffs..is it in wattpad? I don’t use watt pad….

  7. Rey

    hy eva dr u r back soo soon i jst simply scrolling down suddenly i saw ur name i was amused nd i’m really hpy fr tat dr btw story its realy vry nice eva… plzz continue dr

    • Eva

      Plz dear..this is a request..read my stories and ignore tha pairs..i can’t reveal the pairs..and trust me i haven’t decided them yet…

  8. Jannat

    I’m 1st time reading ur ff
    …. n it was to funny… awesome … keep it up…

    can u plzz let me knw ur all ff links plzzz

    • Eva

      Thank u Jannat..and I’m giving u the names..u can type then in the search box and find them.
      Swaraginiti ki kahani
      Sanskar zindegi meri
      I hate u too
      Samjhota swaragini ka
      Samjhota swaragini ka ek naya adhyae intezar
      Manyata vs ragini

  9. Divi

    Im sorry to say
    u always gives importance to swara in all ffs sanskar,laksh loves swara thn wat about ragini
    u r hurting ragini fans

    • Eva

      I have written many ffs dear..and many were mostly Ragini..like I hate u too,Swaraginiti ki kahani and Manyata vs Ragini…so sorry if I have hurt u…Manyata vs Ragini was fully based on Ragini…

  10. Bisha

    HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Eva starting only killed me with laughter!! U started it with mystery mystery mystery and ended with laughter laughter laughter!! 🙂 Anyways, awesome to see u back, thereby making my Intezar a bit less. Do update soon and I love mysteries!!

  11. Nikki

    Hey Eva I am big fan of your ffs when I started reading ffs I read only three ffs and one of them was swaraginiti ki kahani ….I really love all ur ffs……. but in this ff are u going to include ragini….I am big fan of ragsan but it doesnt matter in ur ff……but I never read the ff in which ragini is not there and ur samjhota intezaar which I read but pls tell are u going to give equal importance to ragini……..sorry if I have hurted u………keep going and u are an awesome writer

  12. MISHA MALIK

    Oye TRISHA no body iss pressurizing u to read thiss EVA didn’t hurt other feeling she iss unique coz she never reveal the pairs
    u r hurting by writing this nonsense in her page
    if u don’t like then don’t
    read bt never ever say that u r hurting my feeling
    sick of u
    go to hell

  13. Anjali

    Heyy Eva…
    So nice to see you with ur 7th one soo soon… All the best for this one as well….. I like the beginning.. Liked it a lot.. Let’s see your EVAness in this chapter…

    And I saw some of the previous comments…. I don’t want to waste my time making them understand… But as a friend, I hope I can say this to you… Hope you don’t mind…

    LEt them be… Please don’t answer them at all… You have ardent followers such as myself and sooo many other ppl… So don’t worry….
    I finish my tests tomorrow…Am so happy about that… 😀

    • Eva

      Thank u Anjali…and u r correct..no need to waste time on them..time is precious..and congrates…exams r finishing..thats a big relief..btw how wer they?

  14. mitti

    Hey Eva. ..congratulations for ur 7 ff…..n u again started with a bang….looking forward to this new story of us N I m sure it’s gonna be a superb 1 as always

  15. Sri

    Eva rhe story is amazing. I’m totally into it. Pls update soon and try to make it Swalak and Ragsan if possible. It’s a request. Thanks

  16. Prateeksha

    That was an amazing start… Waiting for next episode… Hope it will be posted soon… Please continue

  17. IREENA

    oh my god it was just awesome i was missing ur last ff n now i saw ur name in recent comment box n read it ur awesome plz update soon n no doubt on ur writing skills

  18. Welcome back kiddo.. I know u will come back but so soon was really a surprise for me.. I am very sorry .. I have commented late.. Because college freshers really have a packed schedule.. I was extremely tired after completing my work but I needed peace of mind.. So u see I am awake so late .. I was very happy seeing ur ff .. Hope u rock
    #RIYA MALIK

    • Eva

      Hihihihihi? dear I’m already reading that…but I’m a silent reader , I’ll comment from next time..and thank you..

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