Ria’s RAGLAK DRABBLE – Bas, Thodi Der OS



Hey, Ria is here with a drabble. Just a sudden thought.


She stared out of the window, at the raindrops splattering against the glass. The rhythmic and melodious sound of the raindrops was the music to her ears. The raindrops that splashed in the puddles of water, reminded her of how she once used to enjoy in the rains. Dancing in the rains, drenching in the cold, fresh water surged an immense pleasure through her. Everything about the rains still reminded her of him. Everything in her life related to him. Every minute, every second, she thought about him. But she did not complain. Whom could she blame? Her own self? Her fate? Or him?

She did not know. What she went through, what she surpassed was planned. It was destined. Everything that had happened right from the beginning was not her, or his own, but everyone’s fault. Had they stood by her side, Had they made her understand, Had they understood her, all of this had not happened. But still she did not blame them. And why would she? She herself knew whatever had happened, Whatever she suffered, was partly because of her too.

If there was the slightest chance, even a single opportunity, of going back in the past and rectifying what she did; She would have been contented. She could at least live peacefully, and not be swallowed in the in the grief-stricken memories. But those were all that she had with herself of him. Those tricks, those plans, those unnecessary fights, and the . . . Night he had loved her passionately. Probably, it did not mean anything to him, but she knew what it meant for her. She knew she had been claimed in all possible ways, and even if someone tried very hard, they could not claim her their own ever now.

Only he could. But what would she achieve thinking about what he could and what he could not? He had left her in all ways. He had finished their relationship, the day he had announced about his marriage. Those memories still seemed fresh in her mind, as if not even a minute had passed. Those words still hurt her; Injured her heart, and wounded her differently in a new way everyday, if that was possible. Not only he alone, but every Maheswari hated her. When, after all this, she had thought she could succumb to this reality, she was proved wrong. Her own Maa and Baba disowned her; And her Dadi, in a moment of spur, had forgotten all the affection she had brought her up with. She even refused to recognise her.
What was her fault? Was telling them that she was going to be the mother of his child wrong? Or was loving him truly had been her fault? He could not love her; He falsely accused her, yet she was to be at fault? Why could anyone not see what she was fighting within herself?

But she could not blame them. After everything she had done, believing her was unfathomable. She knew it, yet she could not believe it. Her mistakes were unforgivable, but still she had expected forgiveness. After all, every grievous mistake was forgivable.
Even he had made mistakes; He had mistaken to kidnap her, kill her. Because of him her mother suffered, but he had be forgiven. He could be forgiven. Weren’t his mistakes counted as ones? Wasn’t he to be punished? Why only her? But she dismissed those thoughts. She prayed for his well-being everyday; How could she wish for his punishment? No, she would not.
Her love for him was true. She had loved him despite what he had done to her, and she had been fateful to love him. At least he had not snatched that right from her. She could love him till her last breath, and no one could complain. Even he could not. She could love him in all the ways she had thought she would, if not for real, at least for surrealism.

Her love for him was strong and determined. She, under any circumstance, would have loved him, even if it meant she had to surpass death for it. That day when she had begged him not to break their marriage, he had asked her to reason. Asked her to define her love for him. And even, had asked her to prove the paternity of the child in her womb. That minute shattered her entire world. He had doubted the paternity of the child. After he had spent one night valuing her love, faking his lust as love, he had pointed out at her character. No. Even if she had loved this man, even if she would continue to do so her entire life, she could not spend her entire life with him.

She still remembered how, amidst everyone, she had mustered all her courage and swung her palm right across his cheek. Even if, that day he had killed her, she would not have cared. His palm had fixated on his cheek, and looked at her unbelievably. In that moment of spur, he did not have to say twice; She had broken all her relations with him. She had left his house, his life, everything that belonged to him. Yet everything that related to him, everything that reminded of him, was with her.

She was not embarrassed. And why would she? She had asked him to stop innumerable times, but he had dismissed her words. Even when she had tried rectifying her mistakes, he had dismissed her and only focussed on what he wanted to do.

Her dream of asking him to stop for a meanwhile had never been fulfilled. And now, she knew it never would be. Even if he begged her, asked her to look back, consider him for even once more, she would not. After all, through all these years, right from when she had left Kolkata, from losing her child in her womb, to today, she had changed. She was not the Ragini everyone knew before; She was now stronger and more determined. She could now live her life alone, only with his memories.

Today, she was the girl that the her mother, when she was young, had wished to see.

TODAY, she was only RAGINI. Neither a Maheshwari nor a Gadodia. ONLY Ragini.


Done with this. A little emotional, I suppose?
Acha chalo, scroll and comment phataphat se to let me know your views.

P.S.: Bawara Mann on its way. Shall be there by the end of the upcoming week.

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  1. Wow!? That was just amazing!!!
    You should have enrolled for the OS competition!
    Lovely OS…
    Please come up with more

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Naina! x
      This would be continued with a sequel, on reader’s request.
      If you wish to read more of my works; Try out – RagLak Few Shots: Bawara Mann.

  2. Sreevijayan

    Dt was a heart touching one..loved it dr

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Sreevijayan! x

  3. awesome & wonderful
    y dont u write a story or sequel based on it
    it wud be amazing

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Aashi! x
      A sequel of this is coming up on reader’s request. ?

  4. AimRagLak

    OMG.You are amazing!!!!I really hope you wouldn’t make Ragini forgive Laksh just like that.I loved how u made Ragini say that she wil love him till her last breath but would not forgive him.Because the love Ragini has for Laksh was not her choice it was a part of her being.She was cursed with it like a disease.So she can’t stop loving him ever but that doesn’t mean she has no self respect or shame to forgive a man who tricked her sleeping with him,pointed on her character & disowned his own child.He is heartless & poisonous.He doesn’t deserve any love in his life.And how the family members could even believe what he said when they all know everything she had done was only to get him.Make Ragini strong
    Someone who listens to her brain now not only heart.Please post the next part soon.

    1. Riaa

      Thank you so much AimRagLak! x
      I completely agree with you; Ragini had been mistreated a couple of times, yet she had chosen to forgive Lakshya very easily. I do NOT like this, at all. Her character must’ve been portrayed as a stronger one, because whatever had been done to her was completely wrong. Right from the beginning.

  5. Fats

    Wow Ria. I am in awe of this OS. You penned Ragini’s thoughts really well and gave full justice to her emotions. Plus, it’s nice to see Ragini coming out of everything she faced as a stronger person. Thank you for writing this. I had a great time reading it xx

    1. Riaa

      I had a great time writing it. ?
      Thank you Fats! x


    1. Riaa

      Thank you Arjuna! x

  7. Lovely7

    I wish to read laksh pov and his guilt
    Raglak tashan
    Please write one more part

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Lovely! x
      This shall be followed by a sequel on reader’s request. ?

  8. Mindblowing update pls update ur bawaara mann

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Megha! x
      Bawara Mann on its way. Shall be up by the end of upcoming week. ?

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Avika! x

  9. Asra

    awesome dear…heart touching os dear…loved it alot…plz write another part na…waiting for u..tkcr dear…

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Asra! x
      This shall be followed by a sequel on reader’s request. ?

  10. Awesome

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Aleeza! x

  11. Awesome dear

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Rehna! x

  12. Asw

    Amazing ria ? keep going

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Asw! x

  13. Awesome dear

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Sherin! x

  14. Ashu

    Hello Ms. Ria,
    As much as I’m pissed at you for not telling me abt this drabble earlier, I couldn’t help but marvel at the way you write!

    That definitely was emotional and heart touching, and it does seem like Ria’s work after all! I know I’ve not been able to read the drabble as soon as u sent the link, nevertheless I read and I’m glad I read it sooner than later. But ye kya yaar, Laksh ko villain bana diya? Ragini’s feelings were perfectly described, but Laksh ???

    Now, since I said I’m pissed for not telling me abt this, you better write the sequel for this to pacify me! I don’t wish for any happy ending or everything ends well… but write something! If not a sequel, then at least another drabble! Pls pls pls…

    All my love,
    FB or Hitler??

    1. Riaa

      FB would do better I suppose, FB!
      Although you’re pissed, looks like the quality of your comments have improvised, copying “Ahem-Ahem” . .

      Lakshya was actually a villain in the show, although his character provided later, but if thought practically: No one improves so quickly. ?

      Madam ke nakhre dekho! ??

      Love ya! ?

  15. Elizebathlovely


    1. Riaa

      Thank you Elizabethlovely! x

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Aamy! x

  16. Simply superb di

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Soumya! x

  17. Awesome superb amazing

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Ashly! x

  18. Laashya

    Awesome it’s heart touching story

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Laashya! x

  19. Mind blowing

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Monisha! x

  20. Bela

    Tu ekdum kaise tapak jaati hai? One day we are chatting and I tell you all about the stories I am writing and I have abandoned, and the next day, you give a drabble!

    But yes, this was really amazing. It was emotional, it was lovely, it was heart wrenching and yet it was beautiful. Remember how I told you that Ragini doesn’t need a man? This drabble had it and I am super glad(I take the credit!). Thanks a lot for this, I won’t forget this OS ever??????

    1. Riaa

      Arey main aisi hi hoon: Achanak types. Achanak hi tapakti hoon. ?
      I do remember, but the fact behind taking the credits seems a little incomprehensible. ?

      Thank you Bela! x

  21. Perfect shot

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Pearly! x

  22. Outstanding episode dear and plz write more Raglak stories. Me too want second part

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Ammu! x
      On reader’s request, the sequel to this has been submitted. ?

  23. IQRA222


    1. Riaa

      Thank you Iqra! x

  24. Awesome

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Vennila! x

  25. Amazing part and write more raglak

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Malu! x
      On reader’s request, a sequel to this has been submitted. ?

  26. Jiyani

    It’s Beautiful

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Jiyani! x

  27. Interesting

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Monu! x

  28. Awesome.

  29. Good one

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Vini! x

  30. Sus

    well in starting u are taking somewhere from serial track but i think its seperate one, u have described so awesomly ragini’s feeling.

    1. Riaa

      Yep, I’d initially started with the serial track, but to mould in to Ragini’s emotions, I added a little more and changed it slightly. About the paternity of child – That was added extra.

      Thank you Sus! x

    1. Riaa

      Thank you Hemlattha! x

  31. Anjali30

    This was absolutely heart wrenching and soooo sweet ????

    I’m a sucker for emotions, so this was just woooow…. The description of the rain.. The hurt inside her… The love and hate she carries for her husband and family .

    Well not hate exactly, but you get my point…

    All in all, I loved it .. Waiting for the sequel… Post soooooooooooooooon!!! ???????

    1. Riaa

      Anjali Diiiiiii, thank you so much!
      I’ve submitted the sequel on reader’s request; Waiting for it to be updated. ?

  32. Dharani


    1. Riaa

      Thank you Dharani! x

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