Ria: Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story?…Raglak…Part 4

Ria: Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story…Raglak…Part 4
Hey friends I am back!
Firstly a big sorry for the delay!
And thanks a lot for your over-whelming love and support!
I hope I don’t disappoint you guys by losing the track, and make it boring!
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JAB ISHQ KI DUNYA MEIN..2 ANJAAN LOGON KA HOGA SAMANA…TABHI TOH SHURU HOGI RIA KE MA PA KI LOVE STORY!!
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The episode begins with Ragini making Ria ready for school!
Ragini: Ria! Did you keep your homework in your bag?
Ria: Yes Ma!
Ragini: Acha god! Here is your lunch box! Finish it, and don’t give it to your friends!
Ria: Okay Ma…But ma sharing is caring!
Ragini (stretching Ria’s cheek) : My shaitaan daughter, sharing means to share your share, doesn’t means to give the whole!
Laksh comes…
Ria: Papa! (And hugs him tightly)
Laksh: Papa ki jaan! (And picks her in her arms)
Ria (Whispering) : Papa, Hitler (ragini) has given me a box full of lunch!
Laksh: No worries, take this! (Silently giving money to Ria)
Ragini: What’s going on?
Laksh and Ria (Trying to act normal!) : Nothing!
Ragini: Ria where is the money?
Ria: Which money?
Ragini: Which your papa gave you a while ago! (Giving a killer look to Laksh!)
Ria (showing the money) : Sorry Ma!
Ragini: Beta! Having food from canteen is not a good thing!
Ria: But Ma, my friends have food from there!
Ragini: Beta, mama gives you lunch! Right?
Ria: Hmmm!
Ragini So beta, homemade food is hygienic! Canteen food is not hygienic! Understood!
Ria: Okay Ma! Sorry Ma!
Ragini (giving a peck on her cheeks) : Good girl! Now hurry up your school bus has arrived!
Ria: Bye Pa! Bye Ma! Don’t forget I will continue hearing your awesome love story!(Winking)
Raglak: Bye beta!
Laksh looks at Ragini, who ignores him!
Laksh (Murmurs) : Ghusay ka level high! Ab kya karein!
Ragini: Did you say something?
Laksh: Nothing!
Ragini: Here you go with your breakfast!
And she turns back to move, frustrated, when Laksh pulls her and she falls in his lap…they share a cute, romantic eye-lock! (Jia re plays in BG)
Ragini: Leave me, Laksh!
Laksh: Not so easily wifey!
Ragini: LAKSH!
Laksh: Okay baba, but first I need my morning kiss! (And smirks! While Ragini is left amuse!)
Ragini: Laksh!
Laksh: Ragini!
Ragini: Laksh!
Laksh: Come on Ragini! No one is here! Only you and me!
Ragini: You are mistaken Mr.Laksh Maheshwari! We are 3! (Looking at her baby bump!)
Laksh: Nah! Whatever! Our baby should also know how compatible we are!
Ragini: Laksh behave yourself!
Laksh: I am behaving Ragu!
Ragini: You are getting late for your office!
Laksh: I don’t think so! (smirking)
Ragini: Your daughter is enough for troubling me, and this new member OMG! Please don’t irritate me!
Laksh: Acha fine! No kiss! Okay give me a huggy at least!
Ragini: Aap kabhi nahi sudhray ge!
Laksh: Don’t think so! (And pulls her, and they hug each other tightly!) Jiya re plays!
Afternoon…
Ria comes back from school!
Ria (Shouts): And I am back!
Ragini who was in the kitchen comes out!
Ragini (Holding her forehead) : What is the need to shout when back? (In an angry tone)
Ria murmurs to hersef: Hitler’s mood is not good!
Ria: Ma! How are you and my brother! (Placing a head on Ragini’s tummy) How are you my cuchooo cuchoo little brother?
Ragini: He is also good and I am also good! (Brushing Ria’s hair by her hands)
Ria: MA!
Ragini: What is in food? (Making a baby face 😛 )
Ria: Exactly!
Ragini: So today I have made my angel’s favorite dish!
Ria: Alloo kachori?
Ragini: No!
Ria: Then??
Ragini (In excitement) : Halwa Puri!
Ria: Yay! Halwa Puri! (And hugs Ragini happily) Mom you are the best!
Ragini: Acha now go and change!
Ria: Yes Hit..(She was going to say hitler..she stops making an OOPPPS face) (Ragini look at her confuse!) Ria: I mean YES SIR! (And salutes and marches off to her room)
Ragini (Smilingly) : Pagal ladki!
At the evening…Laksh is back from office! All are having supper together!
Ria: Ma this Halwa Puri is the best!
Ragini: Thank you!
Laksh: You know princess your mom hated Halwa Puri, back in college!
Ria: Really Ma? You hated Halwa Puri!
Ragini sighs!
Laksh: Indeed!

Flashback 10 years back..Laksh is narrating!
Ragini is having lunch with Swara and Kavita!
Kavita: By the way Rags do you know that guy?
Ragini: Who guy?
Kavita: The same who insulted you!

Ragini remembers Laksh!
Ragini: No and I am least interested in knowing him!
Swara: Wait a second! Whom you are talking about?
Ragini: Wohi Mr.Flirt!
Swara: Ohhh the boy who was flirting with Kavya!
Ragini (Making an angry face) : Yes!
Swara: Handsome hai na! (Winking at Rags)
Kavita: Handsome?? He is so hot! OMG!
Ragini: Yes he is hot!
Swara and Kavita are shocked upon hearing it!
Ragini: Indeed his mind is hot! Badtameez kahin ka!
The very moment Laksh comes there, and sit on the table where all 3 are sitting, Swara and Kavita are surprised while Ragini is more angry!
Laksh: Hello Ladies!
Swara and Kavita: Hello!
Laksh: How are you all?
Swara: We are good!
Ragini: But after seeing you, we are not at all good! UNDERSTAND!!
Laksh: What?
Swara: Nothing! By the way what are you doing here! Never seen you before with us!
Laksh: Yeah actually I am one year senior then you all!
Kavita: Hmmm…
Ragini murmurs: Idiot! Na jaan na pehchaan Ban ke chale Mehmaan!
Laksh: Did you say something!
Ragini (Angry tone) : NO!!!!
Laksh: Well I am here to give you this Halwa Puri! Actually my friend Sanky, has topped this year so he has especially asked his mum to make Halwa Puri for whole college so he is distributing among all!
Swara: I see! Thank you very much! And say thanks to Sanky as well! (She giggles, after all Sanky sounds weird 😛 )
Laksh: Actually his name is Sanskaar!
Ragini murmurs to herself: Sanskaar…Jo aap mein nahi hain!
Laksh: Did you say something?
Ragini (Stands up in anger) : Yes I said! I said that you are Idiot! You are pagal! You are insane! You are Psycho! You are Ameer Baap ki bigri aulaad!
All look on shocked! The whole school listened this as this all happened in the college canteen, and above all Rags said in a go!
Laksh: Excuse me?!
Ragini: Excused!
Laksh: You have to pay for this! You have insulted me…Laksh Maheshwari!
He heads to leave!
Ragini: Apni Halwa Puri saath lete jao! Mujhe sakht na pasand hai! (Take this Halwa Puri with you! I Hate it very much!)
Laksh: Okay!
And picks up the packet! He heads to leave and turns back, this time he throws whole Halwa Puri on Ragini, with Chola and Alloo as well! All are shocked! Especially Rags!
Laksh: Abhi toh bas shuruwat hai aage aage dekho hota hai kya! (This is just the beginning now see what happens next!)
And leaves from there smirking while Ragini looks on angrily!
Ragini: LAKSH MAHESHWARI!!!!!!!!!!!!
Flashback ends!

Ria: Haawww! Papa you did that bad with Mama not fair!
Ragini: Look!
Laksh: What?
Ragini: Nothing! Just that be aware of Ragini Gadodia!
Laksh: You are mistaken, Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari!
The trio smiles! Scene ends on Ragini’s smiling face!

To be continued…

So the update ends here! Hope u enjoyed! Do tell your views via comments!
Love you all,
Zuha.

49 comments

  1. Angel

    OMG Zuha this is superb loved raglaks past it was amazing can’t wait till the next part 💫
    Till then
    Take care
    Keep smiling
    -angel

  2. Fairy

    Awwww…its a reallly veryyyy sweeet episodeee…😊😊loved it zuha dear.😊keep rockng.😀

  3. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    wow!!!!!!!! awesome Zuha and no yr it’s being interesting day by day …… u r just mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwww raglak r just adorable !!!!!!!

    Luv u darling!!!!!!

    From ur dear Yashu

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      THANKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSS a ton Yashu, my adorable doll😘😘Waisay tu apna Twinj wala OS kab post karegi? I wrote an OS on Sidmin aka Twinj yesterday and posted as well😊”The Unknown Fan {SidMin OS} When a celebrity falls for a random girl let’s see what happens!~Zuha”
      Hope you will read that as well! PADHNA PAREGA WARNA JAAN LE LOO GI TERI😜😜
      Love you 2 sweetie😘
      Yours,
      Zuha.

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      THANKSSSSSSSSSSS to infinity😘😘😘 I never knew that you guys are loving this boring and senseless FF that much, when there are so many writer ls who write way too better than me! After reading your comment I think I should post right away😃
      Take care!
      -Zuha

  4. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    zuha fatima it is a stupenduous chappy in raglak ffs it is one of the best one and dear i am reading your ff before u give link in my raglak ff actually i am swasanian so i read few of raglak ffs and this one is of them u rocked i love their parents and daughter bonding u are one of the best writer in raglak ffs keep rocking and writing like always dear love u loads keep smiling always

  5. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    zuha fatima it is a stupenduous chappy in raglak ffs it is one of the best one and dear i am reading your ff before u give link in my raglak ff actually i am swasanian so i read few of raglak ffs and this one is of them u rocked i love their parents and daughter bonding u are one of the best writer in raglak ffs keep rocking and writing like always dear

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Thanksssssss a ton dear! Your comment means a lot to me! And it is a honour for me to be liked by a gr8 writer like you! Thanks a lot!

      -Zuha

  6. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Zuhaaaaaaa woooooooowwww amazing amazing I just loved it…its being interesting…I love your ff a lot with a new storyline yaar it’s awesome…best ff…good job yaar keep rocking…love you…

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Afaaaaaaaa Api! Thanks for the beautiful cmnt😘😘😘And thanks for calling my FF the BEST although it is not! But still thanksss a ton!
      Love u 2!
      TC!

      -Zuha

  7. Dafsi

    |Registered Member

    At last made my day again it was so cute Zuha you nailed the past it was indeed cute yeah Ria is too cute as well as naughty hehehehe loved it in whole keep going take care load of live from your di

    • Zuha Fatima

      |Author

      Thankssssssssss Dafsi di! Actually your comment made my day☺ Such a beautiful and loving coment by a great writer like you! Thanks a lot Di! Your comment means a lot Di! Di one question…don’t mind huh! Apart from Raglak who is your favorite couple? Plz tell di!
      Love u 2 Dafsi di!

      -Zuha

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