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Ria: Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story?…Raglak…Part 4

Zuha FatimaBy Zuha FatimaJuly 19, 201649 Comments7 Mins Read
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Ria: Ma and Pa just tell me your Love Story…Raglak…Part 4
Hey friends I am back!
Firstly a big sorry for the delay!
And thanks a lot for your over-whelming love and support!
I hope I don’t disappoint you guys by losing the track, and make it boring!
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JAB ISHQ KI DUNYA MEIN..2 ANJAAN LOGON KA HOGA SAMANA…TABHI TOH SHURU HOGI RIA KE MA PA KI LOVE STORY!!
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The episode begins with Ragini making Ria ready for school!
Ragini: Ria! Did you keep your homework in your bag?
Ria: Yes Ma!
Ragini: Acha god! Here is your lunch box! Finish it, and don’t give it to your friends!
Ria: Okay Ma…But ma sharing is caring!
Ragini (stretching Ria’s cheek) : My shaitaan daughter, sharing means to share your share, doesn’t means to give the whole!
Laksh comes…
Ria: Papa! (And hugs him tightly)
Laksh: Papa ki jaan! (And picks her in her arms)
Ria (Whispering) : Papa, Hitler (ragini) has given me a box full of lunch!
Laksh: No worries, take this! (Silently giving money to Ria)
Ragini: What’s going on?
Laksh and Ria (Trying to act normal!) : Nothing!
Ragini: Ria where is the money?
Ria: Which money?
Ragini: Which your papa gave you a while ago! (Giving a killer look to Laksh!)
Ria (showing the money) : Sorry Ma!
Ragini: Beta! Having food from canteen is not a good thing!
Ria: But Ma, my friends have food from there!
Ragini: Beta, mama gives you lunch! Right?
Ria: Hmmm!
Ragini So beta, homemade food is hygienic! Canteen food is not hygienic! Understood!
Ria: Okay Ma! Sorry Ma!
Ragini (giving a peck on her cheeks) : Good girl! Now hurry up your school bus has arrived!
Ria: Bye Pa! Bye Ma! Don’t forget I will continue hearing your awesome love story!(Winking)
Raglak: Bye beta!
Laksh looks at Ragini, who ignores him!
Laksh (Murmurs) : Ghusay ka level high! Ab kya karein!
Ragini: Did you say something?
Laksh: Nothing!
Ragini: Here you go with your breakfast!
And she turns back to move, frustrated, when Laksh pulls her and she falls in his lap…they share a cute, romantic eye-lock! (Jia re plays in BG)
Ragini: Leave me, Laksh!
Laksh: Not so easily wifey!
Ragini: LAKSH!
Laksh: Okay baba, but first I need my morning kiss! (And smirks! While Ragini is left amuse!)
Ragini: Laksh!
Laksh: Ragini!
Ragini: Laksh!
Laksh: Come on Ragini! No one is here! Only you and me!
Ragini: You are mistaken Mr.Laksh Maheshwari! We are 3! (Looking at her baby bump!)
Laksh: Nah! Whatever! Our baby should also know how compatible we are!
Ragini: Laksh behave yourself!
Laksh: I am behaving Ragu!
Ragini: You are getting late for your office!
Laksh: I don’t think so! (smirking)
Ragini: Your daughter is enough for troubling me, and this new member OMG! Please don’t irritate me!
Laksh: Acha fine! No kiss! Okay give me a huggy at least!
Ragini: Aap kabhi nahi sudhray ge!
Laksh: Don’t think so! (And pulls her, and they hug each other tightly!) Jiya re plays!
Afternoon…
Ria comes back from school!
Ria (Shouts): And I am back!
Ragini who was in the kitchen comes out!
Ragini (Holding her forehead) : What is the need to shout when back? (In an angry tone)
Ria murmurs to hersef: Hitler’s mood is not good!
Ria: Ma! How are you and my brother! (Placing a head on Ragini’s tummy) How are you my cuchooo cuchoo little brother?
Ragini: He is also good and I am also good! (Brushing Ria’s hair by her hands)
Ria: MA!
Ragini: What is in food? (Making a baby face 😛 )
Ria: Exactly!
Ragini: So today I have made my angel’s favorite dish!
Ria: Alloo kachori?
Ragini: No!
Ria: Then??
Ragini (In excitement) : Halwa Puri!
Ria: Yay! Halwa Puri! (And hugs Ragini happily) Mom you are the best!
Ragini: Acha now go and change!
Ria: Yes Hit..(She was going to say hitler..she stops making an OOPPPS face) (Ragini look at her confuse!) Ria: I mean YES SIR! (And salutes and marches off to her room)
Ragini (Smilingly) : Pagal ladki!
At the evening…Laksh is back from office! All are having supper together!
Ria: Ma this Halwa Puri is the best!
Ragini: Thank you!
Laksh: You know princess your mom hated Halwa Puri, back in college!
Ria: Really Ma? You hated Halwa Puri!
Ragini sighs!
Laksh: Indeed!

Flashback 10 years back..Laksh is narrating!
Ragini is having lunch with Swara and Kavita!
Kavita: By the way Rags do you know that guy?
Ragini: Who guy?
Kavita: The same who insulted you!

Ragini remembers Laksh!
Ragini: No and I am least interested in knowing him!
Swara: Wait a second! Whom you are talking about?
Ragini: Wohi Mr.Flirt!
Swara: Ohhh the boy who was flirting with Kavya!
Ragini (Making an angry face) : Yes!
Swara: Handsome hai na! (Winking at Rags)
Kavita: Handsome?? He is so hot! OMG!
Ragini: Yes he is hot!
Swara and Kavita are shocked upon hearing it!
Ragini: Indeed his mind is hot! Badtameez kahin ka!
The very moment Laksh comes there, and sit on the table where all 3 are sitting, Swara and Kavita are surprised while Ragini is more angry!
Laksh: Hello Ladies!
Swara and Kavita: Hello!
Laksh: How are you all?
Swara: We are good!
Ragini: But after seeing you, we are not at all good! UNDERSTAND!!
Laksh: What?
Swara: Nothing! By the way what are you doing here! Never seen you before with us!
Laksh: Yeah actually I am one year senior then you all!
Kavita: Hmmm…
Ragini murmurs: Idiot! Na jaan na pehchaan Ban ke chale Mehmaan!
Laksh: Did you say something!
Ragini (Angry tone) : NO!!!!
Laksh: Well I am here to give you this Halwa Puri! Actually my friend Sanky, has topped this year so he has especially asked his mum to make Halwa Puri for whole college so he is distributing among all!
Swara: I see! Thank you very much! And say thanks to Sanky as well! (She giggles, after all Sanky sounds weird 😛 )
Laksh: Actually his name is Sanskaar!
Ragini murmurs to herself: Sanskaar…Jo aap mein nahi hain!
Laksh: Did you say something?
Ragini (Stands up in anger) : Yes I said! I said that you are Idiot! You are pagal! You are insane! You are Psycho! You are Ameer Baap ki bigri aulaad!
All look on shocked! The whole school listened this as this all happened in the college canteen, and above all Rags said in a go!
Laksh: Excuse me?!
Ragini: Excused!
Laksh: You have to pay for this! You have insulted me…Laksh Maheshwari!
He heads to leave!
Ragini: Apni Halwa Puri saath lete jao! Mujhe sakht na pasand hai! (Take this Halwa Puri with you! I Hate it very much!)
Laksh: Okay!
And picks up the packet! He heads to leave and turns back, this time he throws whole Halwa Puri on Ragini, with Chola and Alloo as well! All are shocked! Especially Rags!
Laksh: Abhi toh bas shuruwat hai aage aage dekho hota hai kya! (This is just the beginning now see what happens next!)
And leaves from there smirking while Ragini looks on angrily!
Ragini: LAKSH MAHESHWARI!!!!!!!!!!!!
Flashback ends!

Ria: Haawww! Papa you did that bad with Mama not fair!
Ragini: Look!
Laksh: What?
Ragini: Nothing! Just that be aware of Ragini Gadodia!
Laksh: You are mistaken, Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari!
The trio smiles! Scene ends on Ragini’s smiling face!

To be continued…

So the update ends here! Hope u enjoyed! Do tell your views via comments!
Love you all,
Zuha.

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    49 Comments

    1. Sindhura on July 19, 2016 8:52 pm

      Nice

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:19 am

        Thanks Sindhu di!

        -Zuha

    2. Angel on July 19, 2016 8:54 pm

      OMG Zuha this is superb loved raglaks past it was amazing can’t wait till the next part ?
      Till then
      Take care
      Keep smiling
      -angel

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:20 am

        Thank you so much Angel for this angelic comment? Keep smiling! TC!

        {Will post ASAP}

        -Zuha

    3. Ragz_teju on July 19, 2016 9:02 pm

      Nice

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:27 am

        Thanks dear!

        -Zuha

    4. nikky gupta on July 19, 2016 9:02 pm

      awww ria is so cute and next part soon

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:28 am

        Thanks nikky! Will try to post soon?

        -Zuha

    5. Fairy on July 19, 2016 9:12 pm

      Awwww…its a reallly veryyyy sweeet episodeee…??loved it zuha dear.?keep rockng.?

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:29 am

        Thanks a lot fairy for such a lovely comment! I will try to make it more interesting?

        -Zuha

    6. yashasvi on July 19, 2016 9:15 pm

      wow!!!!!!!! awesome Zuha and no yr it’s being interesting day by day …… u r just mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwwwwww raglak r just adorable !!!!!!!

      Luv u darling!!!!!!

      From ur dear Yashu

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:33 am

        THANKKKKKKKSSSSSSSSS a ton Yashu, my adorable doll??Waisay tu apna Twinj wala OS kab post karegi? I wrote an OS on Sidmin aka Twinj yesterday and posted as well?”The Unknown Fan {SidMin OS} When a celebrity falls for a random girl let’s see what happens!~Zuha”
        Hope you will read that as well! PADHNA PAREGA WARNA JAAN LE LOO GI TERI??
        Love you 2 sweetie?
        Yours,
        Zuha.

    7. varsha on July 19, 2016 9:27 pm

      Happy to see you back dear, I liked it, it was cute ma, just want more part

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:43 am

        Thanks dear Varsha! Will try to post soon!

        -Zuha

    8. lisa on July 19, 2016 9:31 pm

      nice waiting for next 1

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:44 am

        Thanks?

        -Zuha

    9. megha123 on July 19, 2016 9:36 pm

      Aww….enjoyed it to the fullest & ya plzz try to post nxt part ASAP plzzzzzz I’m dieing of anxiety.

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:47 am

        THANKSSSSSSSSSSS to infinity??? I never knew that you guys are loving this boring and senseless FF that much, when there are so many writer ls who write way too better than me! After reading your comment I think I should post right away?
        Take care!
        -Zuha

    10. Piya on July 19, 2016 9:43 pm

      Cute one

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 8:47 am

        Thanks Piya!

        -Zuha

    11. Ammu on July 19, 2016 9:54 pm

      It’s very interesting dear especially Raglak past. Waiting for next

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:06 am

        Thanks dear Ammu! Will post soon?
        TC!

        -Zuha

    12. hemalattha on July 19, 2016 9:58 pm

      nice n so sweet

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:07 am

        Thanks dear!

        -Zuha

    13. fouz arshi on July 19, 2016 10:03 pm

      nice dr

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:08 am

        Thnaks dear!

        -Zuha

    14. SPP on July 19, 2016 10:07 pm

      Awesome Superb Amazing one
      Loved it
      Waiting for the next one……

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:09 am

        Thanksssssss a ton dear! Your cmnt means a lot to me! Will post soon!

        -Zuha

      • SPP on July 20, 2016 4:52 pm

        U r welcome dear

    15. Deepika on July 19, 2016 10:32 pm

      NICE

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:09 am

        Thanks dear!

        -Zuha

    16. Moni on July 19, 2016 10:37 pm

      Really nice..??

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:10 am

        Thanks Moni di!

        TC!

        -Zuha

    17. Ruhani on July 20, 2016 12:54 am

      Superb dr.. Their family moments were so cute… Omg laksh did that to ragini Hahaha

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:12 am

        Thanks Ruhani di! Your comment means a lot to me! Keep supporting me like this! Thank you so much once again?
        TC!

        -Zuha

    18. lovely on July 20, 2016 9:17 am

      nice

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 9:51 am

        Thanks!

    19. dharani on July 20, 2016 2:27 pm

      nice

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 5:33 pm

        Thanks dear!

        -Zuha

    20. Sriya on July 20, 2016 3:33 pm

      zuha fatima it is a stupenduous chappy in raglak ffs it is one of the best one and dear i am reading your ff before u give link in my raglak ff actually i am swasanian so i read few of raglak ffs and this one is of them u rocked i love their parents and daughter bonding u are one of the best writer in raglak ffs keep rocking and writing like always dear love u loads keep smiling always

    21. Sriya on July 20, 2016 3:34 pm

      zuha fatima it is a stupenduous chappy in raglak ffs it is one of the best one and dear i am reading your ff before u give link in my raglak ff actually i am swasanian so i read few of raglak ffs and this one is of them u rocked i love their parents and daughter bonding u are one of the best writer in raglak ffs keep rocking and writing like always dear

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 5:35 pm

        Thanksssssss a ton dear! Your comment means a lot to me! And it is a honour for me to be liked by a gr8 writer like you! Thanks a lot!

        -Zuha

    22. Affaa on July 20, 2016 3:45 pm

      Zuhaaaaaaa woooooooowwww amazing amazing I just loved it…its being interesting…I love your ff a lot with a new storyline yaar it’s awesome…best ff…good job yaar keep rocking…love you…

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 5:40 pm

        Afaaaaaaaa Api! Thanks for the beautiful cmnt???And thanks for calling my FF the BEST although it is not! But still thanksss a ton!
        Love u 2!
        TC!

        -Zuha

    23. j on July 20, 2016 4:02 pm

      super

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 20, 2016 5:41 pm

        Thanks!

        -Zuha

    24. Dafsi on July 21, 2016 5:40 pm

      At last made my day again it was so cute Zuha you nailed the past it was indeed cute yeah Ria is too cute as well as naughty hehehehe loved it in whole keep going take care load of live from your di

      • S.Z.F.Z on July 21, 2016 6:46 pm

        Thankssssssssss Dafsi di! Actually your comment made my day☺ Such a beautiful and loving coment by a great writer like you! Thanks a lot Di! Your comment means a lot Di! Di one question…don’t mind huh! Apart from Raglak who is your favorite couple? Plz tell di!
        Love u 2 Dafsi di!

        -Zuha

      • Dafsi on July 22, 2016 12:27 am

        I like ZaYa (Zain and Aaliya)

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