Hiii peeps this is Nilash again with an OS. I know you all are waiting for the next part of my ff I will post it soon I promise. Please please please read this OS and drop all your comments. Criticism is also invited.
( The jungle scene. Shivika enters into the house and are intoxicated)
Anika: billuji billuji where we are?
Shivay: don’t worry my Anika when I’m here
Anika: I’m not worrying about me but about you
Shivay: why worrying about me I’m SSO
Anika: yeah that is the only problem of my life
Shivay: oh am I the problem of you my dear wife?
Anika: leave it stop the discussion about it
( Anika is about to fall and Shivay holds her)
Shivay: see the effect of those berries, you cannot stand on your feet
Anika: hmmm the house is nice
Shivay: ohhh! Thank God after long you talked like a wise
Anika: you are again murmuring something about me?
Shivay: hey look at that what can you see?
Anika: hey that’s a radio kept over there
Shivay: i can also see as eyes of mine are also present here ( pointing towards his eye sockets)
( Anika switched on the radio. A song was playing. They both started dancing and after they completed they looked at each other romantically)
Shivay: what are you looking at my wifey?
Anika: at you and your eyes my dear hubby
Shivay: I know I’m handsome stop checking me out
Anika: oh Mr. I’m also hot she said making a pout
Shivay: yes you are hot like the sun outside
Anika: stop looking at me like that I feel shy of that type of eyesight
Shivay: ok ok enough of fight now let’s do some romance
Anika: no not here, it’s may not be safe so we can only dance
Shivay: you are very naughty do you know?
Anika: hey don’t forget that Dara Singh’s power I can make you fall with just one blow
Shivay: please no one is here allow your hubby to go close
Anika: no Shivay you are intoxicated by that wild berry’s high dose
( Shivay held Anika through her waist and locked his lips with her)
Shivay: how are you feeling now, am I intoxicated?
Anika: no you made me go all suffocated
Shivay: ok now Anika I want to confess something to you
Anika: fine Shivay go on I was waiting for this too
Shivay: you are my life my destiny my dear Anika
Anika: oh god I’m so happy after all the confession came from the side of my Bagad billa
Shivay: now reply me fast do you love me also?
Anika: I will think and answer after one day or so
Shivay: not done not done I’m angry on you
Anika: ok my Shivay i love you to
They fought loads in their life thereafter
Please everyone say how was it? Did it cause a bit of laughter?
So my OS completed. How was the RHYTHM OF WORDS?? I chose right rhyming words na??? Please please tell fast eagerly waiting for all your comments and please do ignore typo errors and grammatical mistakes. Love you loadssss – NILASH