THE RHYTHM OF WORDS- AN OS BY NILASH

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Hiii peeps this is Nilash again with an OS. I know you all are waiting for the next part of my ff I will post it soon I promise. Please please please read this OS and drop all your comments. Criticism is also invited.

( The jungle scene. Shivika enters into the house and are intoxicated)
Anika: billuji billuji where we are?
Shivay: don’t worry my Anika when I’m here
Anika: I’m not worrying about me but about you
Shivay: why worrying about me I’m SSO
Anika: yeah that is the only problem of my life
Shivay: oh am I the problem of you my dear wife?
Anika: leave it stop the discussion about it
( Anika is about to fall and Shivay holds her)
Shivay: see the effect of those berries, you cannot stand on your feet
Anika: hmmm the house is nice
Shivay: ohhh! Thank God after long you talked like a wise
Anika: you are again murmuring something about me?
Shivay: hey look at that what can you see?
Anika: hey that’s a radio kept over there
Shivay: i can also see as eyes of mine are also present here ( pointing towards his eye sockets)
( Anika switched on the radio. A song was playing. They both started dancing and after they completed they looked at each other romantically)

Shivay: what are you looking at my wifey?
Anika: at you and your eyes my dear hubby
Shivay: I know I’m handsome stop checking me out
Anika: oh Mr. I’m also hot she said making a pout
Shivay: yes you are hot like the sun outside
Anika: stop looking at me like that I feel shy of that type of eyesight
Shivay: ok ok enough of fight now let’s do some romance
Anika: no not here, it’s may not be safe so we can only dance
Shivay: you are very naughty do you know?
Anika: hey don’t forget that Dara Singh’s power I can make you fall with just one blow
Shivay: please no one is here allow your hubby to go close
Anika: no Shivay you are intoxicated by that wild berry’s high dose
( Shivay held Anika through her waist and locked his lips with her)
Shivay: how are you feeling now, am I intoxicated?
Anika: no you made me go all suffocated
Shivay: ok now Anika I want to confess something to you
Anika: fine Shivay go on I was waiting for this too
Shivay: you are my life my destiny my dear Anika
Anika: oh god I’m so happy after all the confession came from the side of my Bagad billa
Shivay: now reply me fast do you love me also?
Anika: I will think and answer after one day or so
Shivay: not done not done I’m angry on you
Anika: ok my Shivay i love you to
They fought loads in their life thereafter
Please everyone say how was it? Did it cause a bit of laughter?

So my OS completed. How was the RHYTHM OF WORDS?? I chose right rhyming words na??? Please please tell fast eagerly waiting for all your comments and please do ignore typo errors and grammatical mistakes. Love you loadssss – NILASH

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56 Comments
  1. Niriha

    Awesome

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Niriha☺☺☺

  2. AditiB

    Chaap keno niccho my dear….it was amazing….it’s a fresh air of relief from the noisy track…honestly I love ShivIka to the core….kintu etto jhagda….my god it was the live telecast of the two world wars combined….khoob bhalo likhechho….aami banglay bhalo kore likhlam….for you…keep rocking…..lots of bhalobasha

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Aditi but we are friends right to amader majhkhane tumi ta ektu awkward lagche na??? Tui bolata I think better now it’s up to you…
      Oh god two world wars together??? tao amra ekhono beche achhi… uff it’s due to the crazy love for SHIVIKA???
      Loadssss of BHALOBASHA to tomakeo/ tokeo…..
      If you felt bad that I referred you as tui then sorry because I believe friendship e tumi ta really awkward but I respect your choice as well….????

      1. AditiB

        oh..come on yr….ek jaigai friend bolchhish and arek jaigai you are feeling awkward…not done et al….see you’re my friend and aamar keno kharap lagbe…it’s the thing I should have done…no sorry in friendship yet sorry and tui bola ta best coz tui increases the closeness….of course..e bar theke toke…tui bolbo..hehe….and yaa go on and on and on….I wont be writing anything but am going to read for sure…tai bhalo bhalo…likhish aamar jonno…okay…

    2. Nilash

      Ohhh Aditi at first sorry karon ato late reply korchi…. ok rege jash na aajker pore aar sorry bolbo na pakka…. and haan tui bolata e best… ei tor ff ta khunje paini next jokhon upload korbi amake msg kore dish link ta ami porbo….
      And last obviously ami tor jonno likhbo….
      Love you

  3. Thedreamsoul

    It was so cute Nilash di and yeah I laughed when they both were calling each other wifey and hubby. Awesome and amazing one!

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Sana….. hubby wifey part was really cute….. actually when I wrote it I was a bit scared that will anyone like this new rhyming concept or not…. thank you loads dear

  4. Awesome….Loved it.

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Mehak☺☺☺

  5. Jerry_36

    Nilash di first of all the cover page and your display picture is so cute. Really adore the os. So amazing, unique romantic hilarious…all at once. Loved everything.
    And yes I am eagerly waiting for your ff. Please do post soon. You are an amazing writer. I want more os from you di. Love you❤

    1. Nilash

      Awwww Jerry thank you loads dear…. first time tried to go with SHIVIKALICIOUS stuffs and my dear sister liked it yaayyyy…
      And now thank you for liking my OS and praising it so much
      Lastly about the ff My computer is still with those stupid mechanics they said may be they will return it back by Sunday and after that I will post the next part of my ff so please wait for some more days dear… love you loads???????????????

  6. Awesome

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Debdutta ☺☺☺

  7. Shrinidhi09

    Nilash. It’s so nice .I don’t know from where u r getting ideas like this.it made me speech less

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Nidhi… I am calling you Nidhi I hope you won’t mind……….
      Actually 2-3 years back I used to write poems daily. At least one daily and had a dream to publish them but due to pressure of studies I left that passion of mine but when I thought to write an OS this poem idea striked my mind and I tried to bring back my old passion and this came out as the result…. thank you Nidhi your comment made me to open my poem book again after so many days thanks a lot dear…

  8. It’s simply superb and cute little romantic too……and nice dr…

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Arthi…. I’m glad that you liked it☺☺☺

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Setu ☺☺☺

  9. Oh nilash dear its really cute nd lovely…
    Loved it!! Nd plzz dear do update ur ff soon.. I am eagerly waiting for it.. Nd did u got ur laptop fixed?

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Bhavana…..
      Actually My computer is still with those stupid mechanics they said may be they will return it back by Sunday and after that I will post the next part of my ff and my computer is ditching me not my laptop
      Actually my laptop is now my papa’s property for his official works so I am not allowed to touch the laptop…. this is the problem going on??
      But I will try to upload the next part of my ff soon

  10. AMkideewani

    Superb dear

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Crazygirls ☺☺☺

  11. Nilash dear, mind blowing yarr.and now try
    To post your ff..bahut din ho gaye. Tumhare ajerb atrangi.precao ko miss kar rahi hun..come back soon.

    1. Nilash

      Arpita thank you yaar…..
      My computer is still with those stupid mechanics they said may be they will return it back by Sunday and after that I will post the next part of my ff aur yeh wallaa OS maine mere Papa ka phone chori karke type kiya tha….. and secretly Shivika ko vote bhi kar diya tha???? Arpita secret……. ssshhh

  12. Nivedita

    Lovely rhythm of laughter and prose! ????

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Nivi di….. yeee you commented love you di…. thank you again
      Remember na HATTRICK….

  13. Awsome epi Nilash. Khub valo legeche pore ar rhythm o bohut valo.

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Anitaaa…. I am glad j tomar eita pore valo legeche…. and ei bohut word ta ami amar personal life e khub use kori thank you ei word ta use korar jonno

  14. Anu16

    Superb

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Anu☺☺☺

  15. Surbhi Sharma

    Awesome nilash . U nailed . But what about ur ff , post soon na . ??????

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Surbhi……. ab aur kya bataun my stupid computer is still with those stupid mechanics….. they said may be they will return it back by Sunday and after that I will post the next part of my ff

  16. Superb…. loved it

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Lilly….. I’m glad that you loved it☺☺☺

  17. AnuluvsIB

    Very cute OS dear!! Rhythm of words.. the title by itself got me drawn..
    Luved it!

    1. Nilash

      Anu thank you loads for this sweet encouragement…
      Dear actually may I know what is your daughter’s name I hope I didn’t make you feel bad by asking this….. I was to ask at PKJ page but forgot that time when I opened it so asking now

      1. AnuluvsIB

        My daughters name is pragnya?
        And I am absolutely clueless abt y u think I wud feel bad abt it!!

    2. Nilash

      No actually a bit personal question so thought maybe you feel bad but you are an ishqie so how can you feel bad…..?????
      Pragnya…. really a hatke type of name
      Loadssss of love, hugs and kisses to her
      And be careful this time or else little princess of your’s again will do gangaram of other stuffs of your’s and I will support her if she does so??????
      Anu loads of love to you also just don’t be jealous of little princess as I am showering more love on her and less on you….???????????

      1. AnuluvsIB

        Thanks for all kisses and hugs!! Will pass on to her?
        And of course am not jealous! Pinky thodi na hoon?

    3. Nilash

      Ya ya correct you are not Pinky ponky…. you are our awesome sister…. Anu you are just a amazing friend of mine…. love you

      1. AnuluvsIB

        Thanks Nilash!! I am no amazing…! Glad to have u around here!! ?? That’s what makes it all amazing!

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Lovely os….with cute little romance. Hubby n wifey! I wish one day in IB, ur didi n jiju call each other with these names!!!
    By the way where is ff dear???

    1. Nilash

      Yaaaa I’m also waiting for that day
      But yesterday my Anika didi said to that Amar-Prem that Shivay jiju is her husband and Shivay jiju said to that policeman that Anika didi is his wife…. it was a bit small use of hubby wifey word….
      Gayu my computer is at mechanic’s shop still now…. don’t know when will they return it the time they will return I’ll post the next part…. Pinky promise

  19. Amayaa

    Amazing as usual …….loved it as usual……….
    but this is not fair di ………….I’m waiting for ur ff ooohhhhhh sorry not ur ff but my ff nd u r giving us such a chotu sa OS. ……….
    Very clever………. but ur cleverness is not gonna successful in front of ur extra ordinary ( kidding ) little sis ………….
    Post my ff soon ……… otherwise I will do GANGARAM of ur pc
    How can it do so ????????
    I m waiting for obro ‘s love story. ………..
    Nd don’t try to take revenge by not posting my ff ………. I ended ur ff na ……….
    So author of my ff
    Do u get it ……..
    OKKKkk leave it ………..
    Nd thank u for informing me double. ……….. I m a real dumb ………..
    Remember my universe breaking dialogue
    I AM STILL ANGRY ON YOU

    1. Nilash

      Amayaa kya yaar kar na gangaram mere PC ka and usse pahle wo stupid mechanics ka. Yaar ye bhi to tera hi OS hai so kyun gussa ho rahi hai….
      I will surely try to post the next part soon
      Haan wayse ye baat bhi sach hai tune mera ff itni jaldi end kar diya to ek revenge to banta hai…. par bhi lungi mai revenge jaldi hi upload karungi next part
      Aur oo miss Amayaa how dare you to call my sister dumb next time se aisa kiya na to tera to gangaram pakka
      Aur ab mujhpar angry kyun???
      Chal a sweet sa tight hug from me

  20. Alekhika20

    Wonderful os

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Alekhika☺☺☺

  21. Akriti

    ekdam khidkitod nilash….
    soo romantic…..
    I very cute OS….
    and the way they confess their love to each other is just awww…..

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Akriti…. awwww such a space shuttle speedo DP….
      ‘Yun hi Kat jayega safar saath chalne se….. ki manzil aayegi nazar saath chalne se…..’
      Thank You again Akriti

  22. Nice os

    1. Nilash

      Thank You fffan☺☺☺

  23. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome my rocking girl… Simply superbbbbbb dear….
    Keep it up and post your ff soon…

    1. Nilash

      Thank You Niki…. thanks a lot…. and sorry for the late reply dear…

  24. Haridhra

    Sry 4 late comment.. Hope u don’t mind but I’m q regular follower of ur ffs .. N this one was madness overloaded..???.. I loved it Nilash di..( may I call u )..

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