Rhythm of Life – Tune 22 (RagSan) (Surprise)

Thank you sooooooo much frnds….. i replied to ur cmnts

Recap: garpravesh

Rag: I’m sry did I asked any wrong question?
Har: not like that di…. Actually…
Swa: we lost our mom in childhood…. When she gave birth to me then she leaved this world
Har: our dad only took care of us….. 6 months ago he got heart attack n we….lost him
Ragsan: we r sorry

Swasha: its ok di….
San: didn’t ur dad married then? Is his family didn’t forced him to marry?
Har: no…. my parents r love marriage so they disowned…. But our dad is our super hero….
Swa: He never let us to feel that we don’t have mom….. our dad’s frnd n auditor of our company taking care of our company n us….. he is our mentor…. Here all r good…. All considers us as their children in this apartment….. this apartment is totally different from others…. In other apartment they don’t know names of next flat members here all r one family…..

Ragsan: that’s sweet
Harsha hugged sanky n swara hugged ragini…..
Rag: ok ok no more cries lets go for shopping
Trio: shopping? At this time?
Rag: window shopping…… we want furniture n tv n etc na…..

Swa: di u carry on I’ll bring new dish made by me…. u must taste this idiot harsha is waste fellow always finding faults in my dish…. Today u try n say how is it? swasha left from there…..
San: so sad na…..in this small age…..
Rag: by age they r small but by experience they r very matured…..
Both selects tv, cot, sofa n some basic things…. Just then swasha comes with dinner….

Har: di…. jeeju plz listen my words…. Don’t take her food….
Rag: u teasing her this much…. But I don’t know to cook then how much will u tease?
Har: di u r my di…. This is churail….
San: by the way…… what r u both doing?
Har: jeeju do u have any sight problem? Cant u see we r eating along with u?

Swasan irked n said very funny…. While ragini n harshad laughed
Swa: I gonna join clg 2nd year, he is 3rd year
Ragsan: That’s good….
Swaragini, harsha, sanky all shared good bond…..

Next day sanky woke up n heard mixer sound….. he found ragini in kitchen n amazed…..
san: do u know cooking?
Rag: not much…. Just to roll chapatti n gravy only nothing else that too learned in last three days when u went to office….
San: that’s so nyz but don’t wry abt cooking I’m a hostel student I can manage… I’ll cook u go n get fresh….
Rag: hey I got fresh? Am I not looking like that?

San: no these sweating drops…..
Rag: I cooked that’s y sweat….. u go I’ll cook…..
After fresh up she served him….. he tear single piece chapatti with struggled n successfully kept in mouth….. he gulped….
Rag: howz it?
San: good….. rag: don’t lie…. Its soooo thick na….. next time I’ll crt it…. what abt gravy?
San: this is also good
She tasted n gave stern look……. I forget to add salt but u r saying good….. she makes pout face….. even I cant serve u food also….
San: soon u’ll learn don’t wry…..

Like this one week passed…….

One beautiful day…… ragini wake up n searched sanky….. but she found small note on near by table…. “good morning….. today I’ve important work….. so wanna go earlier…. U was sleeping I thought to not disturb u….. eat well.. take care”

Just then she heard a calling bell…. She opened the door n found watchman of the apartment
WM: mam ur parcel…. Rag: excuse me?
WM: mam this parcel has ur name n address…. I found it on my table
Rag: I didn’t ordered anything…..
Man: but this address on parcel so this belongs to u….
Rag: ya….received the parcel n wm left from there…. She was confused….. she calls sanky but number was not reachable

She unwraps the parcel n sees a beautiful saree….. she thinks what to do…. Its evening… the saree attracts her sooo much….. so she wears the saree…. She felt bore in home so she thought to watch children playing in garden….. she came down in the beautiful saree with light make up n left her hair open…. She lovingly stating the children then someone tied her eyes with cloths n tied her hands n shut her mouth n closed her in car…… she tries to shouts but she cant do anything…..

The car was stopped in isolated dark place….Ragini sensed the car was stopped…. She heard the sound of the car door open….. she came out….. cloth in her mouth was untied….. rag shouts how dare u? who r u? what do u want? Then her hands were freed…. She removed clothes from her eyes n found only dark….. she got afraid…. She don’t know what to do n go in which direction…. She step backward n realised someone is there…. She asked for help…. Then she heard a cracker sound on sky…… she look up……. Cracker burst n I LOVE U RAGINI was appeared the dark sky….. beautiful pink fly lamp flew in air….. it made the atmosphere lovable… one by one lights came where ragini is standing… in few feet distance from ragini there was very beautifully decorated table for dinner is shown… lastly light came on the person who is standing near ragini…… of course u all r right…. Its none other than our sanskar

Rag with full range: you…..
San: how is my surprise? Do u liked it? with full smile on his face
Rag: u idiot…… rascal…. blo*dy stupid….. brainless skull…. Do u know how much I scared? She is breathing heavily….
San murmurs with pout face: if I didn’t do anything then too she scold n says weak in romance lesson if I do then also scolds….. I only understood y married boys advices others to not get marry…

Rag: what did u said? San: nothing
Ragini lightly smiles….. with pout face sanky asks sry n goes closer to ragini…. She pushes him n says stay away…..
San: no I cant…… he makes a cute puppy face….. rag tries her best to control her laugh n pretend to be angry but san saw her smile…..
San: u r kidding with me? this is not fair…..
Rag says anything is fair in love and war…….

San: aahaan…. Jungli bili knows this kind of sayings also?
Rag: omg….. finally u called me as jungli bili after long time….. did u know how much I missed this….
San: I know these all days so much happened…… ok leave that all… I wanna tell u one thing….
Rag gives questioned look
San kneels down by one leg…… he forwards a beautiful bouquet…..

Rag smiles n says hey idiot whats this?
San: let me complete…. He stands……

San: ragini I don’t know when u started to like me…… even I too don’t know when I fall for u…. but after aradya n aryan’s bachelor party I realised my love for u….. now we r married now no need to propose n tell these all things…. But I wanna tell…… I like u very much….. I like u as my best frnd….. I like u as my fighter cock…. I like u as my jungli bili….. I LOVE U…… I tried to propose on farewell day bcoz I’m not ready to accept my defeat without trying it…. but then…..
San: I LOVE U…. I wanna live my whole life with u….. u r my heart beat….. u r my sunrise…… I like to set my life with u only…… I don’t know how much I can keep u happy but I’ll try my best to keep u happy….. I REALLY LOVE U RAGINI…..

Ragini buries her in sanky’s chest….. happy tears escapes from her eyes…
San hold her shoulder, hey jungli bili…. What happened?
Rag back to normal n said nothing…..
San: what is this like kid? He wiped her tears
Rag: nothing…..
San with naughty smile: is it? he holds her hand n pulls her towards him….. she stick on him like bubble gum….. he locks her hair back to her ears which is being disturbance to admire her beauty…. She started to blush n her face turned like strawberry…..

San: u know to blush too? she blushes more….. he kisses on her forehead….. she frees her from his clutch n admires the decoration……
rag: amazing decorations… I just loved it…. I really thought u don’t know to romance but I think I’m wrong…
san: voh actually then job tensions n house matter n RK’s behaviour….. I lost my mind peace n more over that’s not ri8 time to….. now everything is alri8….. she rested her head on sanky’s chest…. He kept his hand around her…..he kissed on her head….. suddenly rag felt something extra on her neck n looked down…… she saw a golden pendent named SANSKAR….. broad smile appeared on her face…… san asked howz is it? she replied….. loved it she kissed on the pendent……. sanky forwarded his hands rag remained confused….. he played music….. she smiled n handed her hands…..

san kept his other hand on her waist….. she felt the touch n took deep breath….. both smiled beautifully n stepped matching the song TUM HI HO…… he twirled her….. while twirling her beautiful shining hair which has curl in end danced well in air….then he pulled her towards him n stepped like wave by moving in sides….. love was over whelmed in their eyes….. finally he took her up which made her shock….. she closed her eyes tightly in fear n asked to let her down….. like placed flower her let her down softly……
both saw dinner table n went there…. There was all her fav dishes….like pani poori, ice cream, milk shakes, deserts, meals, Tiffin items all….. but they had light dinner….. they both fed each other n ate pani poori in same plate, drunk strawberry milk shake in same glass with two straw…. They was enjoying their beautiful dinner date…

rag: sanky….. san signed what?
Rag: voh… I didn’t fell from sky to be abnormal…… I’m a common girl…… every girl…. No most of girls wishes that her future would be have to propose her n impress her…… I’m not a exception….. I also had the dream…. Marriage is the most biggest day of life…… but our marriage…. I loved u n we r unite….. but the feel of love….. I missed a lot….. I never expect that u’ll propose me….. I just loved it to core….. she hugged him….. then they continued their dinner…..
rag: did u felt? San: what? Then few drops of water was sensed on his hand….
Rain started but not so heavy one……

San: oh shit this rain spoiled my date……. Then he noticed rag was not there…. He turned n saw ragini out of shelter enjoying rain….. she kept both the hands wide opened n faced sky n rain drops touched her cute lips…… she twirling n enjoying the arrival of rain…. San was admiring her beauty
Rag pulled him out n both fully drenched in rain…… then heavy rain started…..

San: ragini its started heavy… lets go…… both reached home…..
Rag: till enjoying never minded now its soooo cold…. She rubbed both hands…..

san saw her….her wet hair…. Wet saree which was not closed appropriately attracted him…. He came near to her….. she stepped back at last he pinned her in wall…. With smile she said sanky to stay back….. he smiled back naughtily…… she pushed him n ran but sanky hold her corner of saree n pulled hit…. She kept hand on her shoulder to stop him to rip her saree….. but due to his strength she came closer to sanky….. he kept his one hand around her waist n by other hand he removed his shirt buttons…. He took of his shirt…. She freed her from him n ran but sanky hold her hand n both fall on bed which caused sanky on top ragini….

He locked her wet silky hair behind her ears while she closed her eyes n blushes…… he massaged her cheek by his thump…. He kissed on her cheeks then all over face…… she hold his cheek n locked her lip with his….. the kiss was very passionate….. both kissed till lack of oxygen level….. lights off…. Shadow shown as he kissing her necks…… both covered themselves into blanket. Both consummated their marriage life

Next day morning ragini was sleeping on sanky’s chest… slowly she opened her eyes n found herself under blanket with sanky n remembered last ni8…… she blushed n kissed on sanky’s forehead….. the sleepy face’s lips asked only on forehead…..

Rag hit playfully n said u rascal pretending like sleeping…. He dragged her under blanket….. ragini shouted hey its morning…… san said time is not a matter for love…..

Screen freezes with ragsan bed

To be continued…………

QUOTE OF THE DAY
surround yourself with people who make you smile more

Frnds how is the chappy? First time I tried to show romance…… hope u liked this chappy…..do votes n cmnts…. keep smiling by urs loving Aastha

48 comments

  1. priyanka

    Awesome…Awesome…Awesome…
    Wow…superb dear….Raginiya kidnap pannitu vanthu sanky propose pannathu semmaya irunthuchu😊😉…
    1st tym un story la romantic scene😍😍*aiyo enaku vekkavekkama varuthe🙈🙈*…semmaya irunthuchu…
    Mind blowing outstanding fantastic epi dear……i loved it to the coreee….
    competition lam mudunjurucha da…take care…love u loads..keep rocking😙😙

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Aiyo unaku vekka velkama varuda….. That’s my fav dialogue….. Yaravadu enna pugzhal da nan inda dialogue Dan solven…. I loved ur cmnt to the core. Mmm skit competition mudinjiruchi….. Dance performance iruku but adhu internal exam Ku apram Dan.
      Take care 😊 love da chellam umma…..

  2. suhani

    Awesome…mind blowing….swaharagsan bonding are super…especially ragharsh….and ragsan romantic scenes are cute and adorable… In flashback,first scene la ragsan meet pannum bodhu sanky oru old lady ya accident pannum bodhum help Panama povanla adhukku enna reason nu sollave illa…waiting for next part soon… Keep smiling…

    • Asra

      Asra

      |Registered Member

      ya suhani…Andha lady ku help panama ponathukum reason sollala…and Sanky marachu vacha dairy la yeana irukunum Indha akka inum nama kida sollala….tkcr suhani….

      • Astha

        Astha

        |Author

        Thnq soooooo much suhani akka… Happy that u liked their bonding and ragsan romance. But akka n asra, neenga rendu perum innum konjam wait pannanum…..
        Most probably 27/28 th chappy la suspense will be revealed….
        Stay tune on

  3. Fairy

    Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Haha aasthu m blushngggg 😀 :P…
    wohoooooo super super super amazngggggg update dr..
    ..date ws soooo beautifullĺll…
    ahh!!i reallly loved it yaar 😀 ..
    sanky is choooo chuweeeet…..romance king 😉 😀
    Ragsan r too cute….
    Swaragini sanky n harsha bondng is incredible!!!
    Waitng for nxt part….
    Keeeep rockng n stay blessssed doll 😀
    Love u sooo much…
    Thnx a lot for dis surprisee 😀 😉 😉 😉
    Take care sweeetypie 😀

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Awwww happy to see ur cmnt my doll
      Yup my sanky is romantic king.
      Happy that u liked their bonding
      Love u too my baby 👶
      Ha ha ha happy that u liked the surprise 🎊
      U too take care my cutie pie 🍰
      Umma….. Love u loads 💕

  4. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    update awesome amazing akka….ragharsh superbbb akka….wife’a kidnap panidu Poyi propose panrathu semma akka….Ohhh my poor ragu Unaku samaika theriyatha(na first’ ai solren enaku samaika theriyuma nu kedu assinga paduthirathenga akka)…ragsan romance superbbb akka…i loved it….aprm en oda suhani oda doubt ku future update paduchathan theriyum nu solathenga akka…waiting for nxt one…tkcr akka….

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Ha ha ha…. Nan keka maten yeanna enakum samaika teriyadu. Happy that u liked their bonding n ragsan romance…..
      Ha ha ha nan adhey dialogue Dan solla poren…. Future chappy padicha clear aydum…. But u need not to wait too long….. Just 5 more chappy ur doubt will be clear 😊

  5. Richa19

    Richa19

    |Registered Member

    Awww… That was so…. So romantic cute sweet… Everything… Loved it so much.. 😍😍😍 waiting for the next part… Take care.. 😘

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