Rhythm of Life – Tune 21 (RagSan)

Thnq soooo much frnds… i replied to all ur cmnts…..

Recap: sanky got job

San: ok tell what to do next? Today only I’m free from tmrw I wanna go office….
Rag: ya… what to do….. she thinks…. Y don’t we search house?
San: ya good idea…. In which area u like to be?
Rag: it will be good which is in medium distant from ur office…. Very near or far is not good so middle is better
Both goes to some houses….. but ragsan is not satisfied with those…..

Rag: now its almost 6:30…… till now we didn’t selected one…..
San smiles n says finding home is not a easy matter…. It will take some time….. just then both sees flat for rent board….. they drives in apartment (the same apartment where they lives now)
Both stands near stairs…..

Rag: here a flat is vacant but in which block…. In which floor?
San: how I know… I’m also with u na….
Just then a girl nearly 18 passes by side n stopped seeing ragsan….. her face is revealed as Swara….
Swa: who r u? seems like new to this apartment…

Rag: voh… we heard a flat is vacant here so….
Swa: oh… come the vacant flat is just opposite of mine…
Swaragini both introduce themselves n introduce sanky too….
Swa: we came…. This is the flat u came to see…..
San: omg….in 7th floor?

Voice: its ur luck….. getting flat in 7th floor is not at all easy boss….
All turned n his face revealed as smart Harsha….
Swa: he is my bhai Harshad… u guys carry on I’ll bring flat key from vani maa.. I mean secratery….
In few mins swa came with key n showed the house to ragsan….. both saw house….
Ragsan at a time: I like this house what abt u?

Swasha laughs…..n says good wavelength….. ragsan gives cute smile n talks abt facilities n advance payment to secretary…..
Both reached rag’s home n all were present there….
Rag: thank god u all r present here….
Amba: y? do u wanna tell anything?
Rag: yup….. 1st news san got job….

RV: which company?
San: metha industries….
RV: good choice…. All the best….
Rag: the most important thing….. we found house……
Smile disappeared in everyone’s face….

RK: what? Ragini looks on….
RK: I meant in this soon u got?
Rag: ya we visit many places but nothing was good…. Finally found….
Kailash: where is it?
San tells the address…..

Madhu: what abt facilities like water… n etc…?
Ish: is that spacious?
Amba: its in which floor?
San: its in 7th floor….. ya its spacious actually it’s a 2bhk flat
Rag: haan no worries abt facilities,….. its all pakka.

RK: what abt advance payment? Rent n furniture?
Rag: voh… bhaiya….
San: voh… I have some amount…. We will pay that…. That will be nearly 80 to 90 thousand…
Rag: I too have some amount…. We can manage with it…. if we want then surely we will ask u bhai…
RK: then when u gonna do garpravesh?
Rag: kaaki kaaki u tell the auspicious day we will go… but see near date…..
Amba n kailash nodded in yes, then all finished their dinner n slept

@ room
Rag: hey how u have that much amount?
San: I have habit of saving….from home they sent me enough amount…. Most of times u n rest pays the pill very few times I’m paying so I had saved it…
Rag: good job…. She pinched his cheeks n both doze off

Next day sanky joined in company as normal labour….. in just one day he made all his frnds by his frndly nature….. in ni8 he shared his experience with ragini…… three days passed casually

A BEAUTIFUL DAY IS WAITING FOR U…. A BEAUTIFUL DAY IS WAITING FOR U….. WAKE UP….. alarm made this sound in cute child voice. In sleepy san switched off the alarm…. With lots of difficult san wake up…. He saw light in dressing room….
San: oops… today we r doing garpravesh na…. rag getting ready… soon I too wanna get ready… he went to bathroom…. He rubbing n drying his hair while coming out of bathroom…. He widen his eyes…. Ragini u wore saree…. Is ishani or madhu di came here?
Rag: don’t forget that I’m a quick learner

Sanky is wearing blue shervani n rag is wearing blue colour designer saree
Amba: arrey u both got ready….. good.
RK stunned to see rag…. Rag: y r u staring me like this bhaiya?
RK: voh… tum… saree…? I cant believe
Ish: jeeju… this is not a first time… this is second time….. san like to see rag in saree…. So….. she told in teasing manner….
Madhu: ohh is it? in teasing manner… RK gave a plain look

All headed towards apartment…. Their flat was beautifully decorated with flowers…. (yesterday ragsan went there n decorated…. N placed few basic vessels, induction stove, pillows n blankets…. (no cot n chairs bla bla…. Bcoz they don’t have enough amount to buy those) (they used induction stove bcoz they don’t have gas connection…. They have to apply for gas connection n ration card) (trying to produce story with logic don’t know how much I can fulfil)

Amba nodded madhu, madhu took arti to ragsan n applied thilak on their forehead….. ishani brought rice pot n placed near door….. ragini politely pushed rice pot by cute feet n made rice flow on floor…… both entered into house by stepping their right leg…… amba instructed them to light the lamp in front of god….. ragini does the same…. Then ragini put new vessel on induction stove n poured milk in vessel……. In few mins the milk came up n leaked in east direction…..

Amba: very good n auspicious sign….. it leaked it east direction….. the place was filled with happiness.
Ragini made coffee with the help of amba, madhu n ishani while gents sat on hall in floor (there is no chair na….)
Ragini served coffee to kailash amba, rk madhu, ishveer then to sanky…..
Rag: sorry I made u all sit in floor but soon we will buy further things……
Kailash: its absolutely fine…. Actually its good to sit in floor.
All glanced the house……RK signalled madhu…..

Madhu: ragini.. sanskar…. Come here….. both came near to rk n madhu.. they gave a cover.. it seemed like post cover
Ragsan: what is this?
Madhu: open n see….. ragsan opened it n saw a paper n some amount…… ragsan stared each other while ishveer n amlash also gave confused look
Rag: what is this bhaiya?
RK: papers of this flat… madhu: the advance amount paid by u……
San pov: RK doesn’t have drop of faith on me? cant I take care of ragini?

Rag: bhaiya what is the need to this all?
Rk & madhu: its ur marriage gift from our side….. we don’t have ri8s to choose ur life partner even we don’t have ri8s to present u something?
Rag: not like that bhaiya but….. she stared sanky who gave faint smile with much difficulty
Finally ragsan accepted the gift then Ishveer n Amba kailash gave nearly 5 lacks…..
Ragsan refused to get that much huge amount but rv asked then u can get from rk bhai but not from me….. its ok….. rv black mailed emotionally….. so ragini accepted their presents n got blessing from elder. All were talking happily….. rk noticed sanky standing in balcony with dull face….

Rk placed his hand on sanky’s shoulder….. san turned n asked do u want anything?
Rk: I know u r not happy with our presents…. I know what u r thinking….. to be frank I like u…. but not as my sis’s husband….. I have faith on u that u’ll try ur best to keep rag happy….. but I don’t know what will the reaction from ur family….. I’m not satisfied with u… that’s only bcoz u r tamilian…. These presents r not to hurt u… we didnt gave this to prove u cant give this all to rag…. We gave this to u to be more strong… ur basic needs can be fulfilled by this papers n money….. u both can think abt ur future…. If u don’t have this basics then u have to pay rent n wanna buy more things n have to run family….. its difficult…. It can made ragini feel that if their marriage was fixed by parents then no need for this struggles….. so I like to make her feel comfort…. Hope u also want the same…. Ur marriage is biggest shock for me…. I don’t know how to react…. I have some maintain that….

San: I’m really sry…. Actually from few days I thought u r my villain…. Ya I was thinking u r trying to dominate me….. but u r ri8…. At any cause rag shouldn’t feel that if her parents fixed her marriage it will be better…. I wont give any chance to she think like that….. I’ll keep ur family’s princess like my QUEEN. Don’t wry abt her….. both hugs….
Rk: ok… take care of ragini…. Today evening my flight….. we r going back to Switzerland
Ragini just then comes n hears…. What u r going back?
Madhu: haan we came when ur exams were on going….. it has been a month now…. Our visa expires so we wanna go….
Ragini makes a pout…. Nisha diverts the situation by her chocolate n ice cream demands…..

In evening rk told to amba n kailsh n ishveer to take care of ragini….. all assured him n came to airport to send off…. Ragsan joined there…. Rk again told sanky to take care of ragini n soon sought out problems…. He assured him n send off them to Switzerland

@ ni8 ragsan came to home…….they saw swara n harshad fighting sound…n asked them what happened?
Swasha came out their home n said nothing di…
Rag: nothing? then y sound came out?
Swa: di he is not giving remote to me
Har: di she always watching stupid serials….. always crying

Swa: no di… he is lying… I’ll only watch comedy series
San cant suppress his laugh
Swasha: jeeju…. We r complaining n u r laughing?
San: no my sis n bro also do the same…. My bro asks ww channel n my sis will ask music channel but in mid my mom will come n snatch remote from their hands n will put devotion channel then both makes pout n keep hands on cheeks…. Cute smile was visible on san’s face

Swasha smiles to hear
Rag holds san’s hand n nods yes
Rag: where is ur parents?
Swasha face becomes pale

Screen freezes with pale face of swasha

To be continued…………..

QUOTE OF THE DAY
Two thing define u
Ur patience when u have nothing,
And ur attitude when u have everything.

Howz the chappy? Did u liked it? if it is not then don’t wry next will be good,….. keep smiling…. By urs loving Aastha

52 comments

  1. priyanka

    Awesome chappy dear…
    Ragini mela rk vachurukka care semma dr…nd swaha part very funny😂😂😂..enga veetlayum idhe mathiri tha nadakum…en anna cricket papan..na srrial papen..remote a paruchu vachukitu kaalla vizhu apatha tharuvenpa…aparam suryavamsam kadhai than(namakku self respect thaana mukiyam)😂😂….
    Suprrr dear…i really enjoyed it….nd my bday on aug 8..keep rocking baby…im eagerly waiting for nxt part dear..luv you dr..tc😊

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq soooooooo much da chellam…… Always ur cmnt brings very big n broad smile 😊 on my face…… Love u loads….
      Nan vituku ore ponnu so no sandai…. Amma kuda Dan sanda pottutu irupenda…. Yup RK n rag bond is very spl…. I love it…. Umma….. Merry Christmas 🎅

      • priyanka

        Oh nee unga veetuku ore ponna..kk..bore adicha sollu nama sanda poduvom*summa velayattuku ketten dont take it serious baby😉*
        Merry christmas Aasthuuu…🎅🏻🎄
        All the best for ur competition dear…when will you update nxt part??will waiting for u😉
        Keep smiling baby😊😊

  2. j

    superb dr enala watpad la vote and comment pana mudila da en watpadla etho prob pola only one ffku than vote pana mudiyuthu aduthathu pona vote pana mudila. once problem solved nan vanthu vote pandra kva enala padika kuda mudila ethuma receive agala late aguthu ena ena competition la join pani iruka

  3. fira

    Amazing epi…..rk is very caring bro… rv also…..ragsan rendu perum ore time la pesunathu superb’i like this house…what about u’…..same pinch sis….naanum enga vi2 tu ku ore ponnu than…..naanum enga mom kooda than sanda poduvean…keep rocking…take care….

  4. suhani

    Super episode…rk is super and caring bro….and rv also super ….swahar intro is nice ….rendu perum.fight panra.scene semmaya irunthuchu….ragsan scenes are super….waiting for next part soon….. Keep.smiling…

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq soooooo much for ur sweet cmnt akka….. Most probably next chappy will be on Wednesday I think….. Keep sming n stay tune on akka

  5. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    fabulous akka….ragsan scene semma akka…ragini mela rk rv vachirga caring superbb akka….ellarum v2la remote ku than sanda poduvanga pola….na than sanda podven….aana jeyikirathu yeanamo en bro than….aduchu podu vangirvan akka….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Ha ha ha remote matter is common in most houses…… Happy that u liked rk n rv caring towards rag…… U too tc dera. Merry Christmas 🎅

  6. Vk

    Awesome akka so cute…..
    Apro I think Sanskar Oda grandfather Oda ponnu tha ragini and RK Oda mom……Avanga mom oru Hindi person ah I mean RK and Ragini Oda dad ah love panni odi poi marriage pannirupaga……So sanskar family Ku Hindi peoples ah pudikala…..Apro RK Ku Sankar family Ku Hindi peoples ah pudikathathanala ragini life ah nenaichu konjam bayam…..So finally ennaku sanskar Oda athai ponnu tha ragini nu thonuthu…..Crt ah Akka….Intha rendu episode munadiya sollanunu nenaicha but time kadaikala atha eppo sonna akka
    And most important thing akka. MERRY CHRISTMAS

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq sooooooo much for the beautiful cmnt……
      Hey idiot unaku edhuku moolai ivlo velai seidu? Ni en thangachi ofcourse unaku moolai irukanum Dan but romba velai seidu…..
      Ipadi climax ah starting laye kandu piducha nan emga poven???
      Any way good guess. Keep smiling 😊

  7. Fairy

    Fairy

    |Registered Member

    heyyya my aasthu…
    howz u dear…. 🙂 😉 🙂
    update ws soooooo awesome…..loved it so so soo much…ragsan r such a cute couple….while readng dis story ,i feel connected to dem;dats bcoz of d way u write !!!! so hatts of to ur writng skill sweety..;) 😉
    swara-harsha scene ws really funny hehe 😀 ..
    wow rags learned to wear saree jst for sanky..hehehehe dats so sweeeet!!!
    dere grah pravesh ws amazngg!!!
    alll in alll fabulous update dr…
    post nxt part sooon..m waitng for it!!!
    keeeeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety 😀
    love u sooo much 😉
    merrrrrry christmas aasthu :D..

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq sooooooooo much my doll….. Very happy to see ur cmnt……
      Not able to reply immediately due to network problem…..
      I’m shivering baby bcoz I drenched in ur praise rain.
      U too keep rocking….. Stay tune on …..
      Stay blessed my doll…….
      Love u loads….. Umma….. 💕 😘 💕

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