Rhythm of Life – Tune 15 (RagSan)

Thank you sooooooooooooooo much frnds….. bcoz of u now I reached 15th tune…… Thnq sooooooo much who cmnted till now & big THANK you sooooooo much for silent readers (hope I’ve silent readers too)….. u too try to do cmnts…. Keep smiling….. hope u’ll like this chappy

Recap: Cultural competition

One fine morning……
@rag’s home

San: where is all cars? no one in home ?
Watch man: all went to temple except ragini mam….
San: oh ok….

In Her she is dancing alone romantically for sun sathiya song…… (she is in night suit) san came there n saw her dance n admiring with laugh….. suddenly rag turns n finds san standing there n feels embarrassing ……
Rag: when u came?
San: when u gave a sweet flying kiss then only I came….
Rag: offo….. she closes he face by both palms….

San: arey this jungle bili know to blush…..
Rag: shut up…. She blushes to hell due to her cute blush her face turned to red like strawberry
Rag: shut up n go…. I’ll come after fresh up…
San waits in hall, after sometime rag came….

San: u dances well….. I think u should participate in dance competition……
Rag: just shut up…. Don’t tell to any one…..
San: heya…. Till now I didn’t thought to tell this to our gang…. Good idea… now we r going to meet our gang only I’ll tell
Rag: I’ll kill u… wait I’ll bring juice

Ragini prepares fresh juice n gives it to sanky…. Both tell cheers….. rag pushed gls so juice split on sanky’s dress
Rag: oops sry… wait I’ll give u dress…. She gives pink shirt n blue jean…. He checks size….. this seems u brought it for me….
Rag: haan for u only brought…. Thought to give it on fare well day……
San: there is months for fare well….
He kept his wallet, watch on table n takes dress n enters into room

Rag remembers yesterday he pick his wallet…. She thought to check it now….. she took the wallet n opened….. (really very slow motion) san wears pant n keeps hand in packet n realise wallet on table…he came out with white sleeveless vest n blue jean (he is looking damn hot). He runs n snatches wallet from her hand….. she saw some photo in that wallet but not able to see the face clearly…..
Rag: hey what r u hiding…. Giving it to me…. she abt to pick….. he raises his hand….. he shifts wallet one hand to another hand n starts to run n rag chases him…. They ran all over house…… now they r chasing in rag’s bed room n rounding bed……

Rag: show me sanky….. there is a photo….. she caught him he lost his balance n both fall on bed n rosy pulpy lips of rag touched sanky’s lips…… both shared eye lock with shock….. rag came to sense n stood….
San went down wore shirt…… he opened wallet…… it was Ragini’s photos…… he smiles….. I don’t know ragini when my frndship towards u changed into love…… I really love u…. I wanna marry u with my family support…… but this is not ri8 time…..

FB shown
San: amma…. Enaku oru frnd irukan…. Avan oru ponna love panran….. (maa I’ve a frnds… he is in love with a girl)
Sujatha: adhukenna da? (so what?)
San: anndha ponnu settu(the girl is marwadi)
Ap: enna? (what?)
San: andha paiyan tamil…. Avan family kum nammala madhiri settu na aagadu….. (the boy is tamil…. His family also our family… they hates marwadi…..)
Sujatha twist his ears: is this ur frnds story or urs?
San: my frnd’s maa….
Ap: but it seems urs….. don’t dare to do such works
Suj: haan I cant talk to ur periyappa n thatha….. already they r angry on me for letting u go to Mumbai…..
San fakes smile
FB ends

San: at ri8 time I’ll convince them n I’ll propose u my dear
He came out……Both avoided eye contact…. San got call from aham: where r u both?
San: I’m…. we r coming….
San started his bike rag sat back…….. dead silence is btw them….. both feels unfortable….. they reached park where all r present…… both saw each other after seeing he/she also seeing turned other side….

All r talking n enjoying but this two r silent
Frnds: hey what happened to u both?
Ragsan: wh… what happened? Nothing….
Two days passed but rag ignored sanky completely……
San: hey what happened to u? y r u not talking to me?

Rag: y I wanna talk to u? san looks on
San: bcoz u r my frnd
Rag gave impossible look n said friend????? From frnd u’ll hide everything…
She get in bus n sat in window seat. San sit close to her. She faked a smile at him….n said y sat there…. Sit in my lap….. she glared him….keep distance…. She showed index finger

San: ok right…. I’m in this corner…. (in that bus there e three seat in a row, he leaved center seat vacant n both sit on both corner) I wont come near to u…… but u fell on me then u should do what ever I say ok?
Rag: deal…..
Driver took sudden turn bcoz worker digging road for some work….. rag fell on san….. san smiles n rag fumes…..

Rag gets down n san follows her……. A flight landing is shown
Rag: what do u want?
San: talk to me that’s enough for me….
Rag: hi… bye…. Is this enough? Or else tell me… I’ll talk bcoz I failed in game na…. I said I’ll do whatever u say….
San: oh… I’m really sry….. don’t shoot ur bulletins words…. She is not listening to him….. she goes…. A luxurious car stopped……. A man get down with his black coat suit….. he removed his sun glass in stylish manner…. He had attractive eyes with dark black orbs

Sanky hold ragini’s hand….. rag tries to frees her hand….. the man comes step forward
San: ragini if u want take this…. Take my wallet…. See it….. rag smiles as she achieved what she planned….. still san holds rag hand
The man said sanky to leave her hand
San: who r u to say?
Rag cant see the man’s face…..

The man holds sanky’s hand n tightens his grip so sanky leave rag’s hand……. The man gives tight punch on sanky’s face……. The man’s face is revealed as Vivian desana (RK from madubala)…..
Rag shuots sanky….. she sees the man’s face n shocked…..
Rag: u….
He keeps his index finger on his lips to indicate keep silence……

Screen freezes with angry RK, Shocking face of Ragini, sanky face which had red prints of fingers

To be continued………..

QUOTE OF THE DAY
“If u cant be a PENCIL to write someone’s HAPPINESS then try to be a nice ERASER to remove their SADNESS”

What is the role of RK in this story? How is the chappy? I know chappy is short but sry….. next will be long….. do cmnts…. Keep smiling by urs loving Aastha

53 comments

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Yup crt…. I theft that scene from Sachin movie only…. That’s my fav scene…. R u from Tamilnadu? Thnq soooo much for cmnt

      • Aasthu

        Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        No need of sorry…..its bcoz I never commented in ur story before…….I used to read it……since u don’t know me, I’ll introduce myself……I’m Aastha/u….the latter is my registered name……I’m not a SR fan but a crazy Manmarziyan fan…..but I read some SR ff’s…….mostly raglak….since there are a lot of swasan ff’s…its hard to keep track………soooo friends ????????

  1. Fairy

    Fairy

    |Registered Member

    omg omg omg my aasthu
    such an amazgggggggggg update yaaar…
    oh my god!!!i loved dis part soooo much 🙂 🙂
    ragsan kiss awww!!! * m blushingggggg
    i love sanky sooooo much in ur ff yaaar…
    rags is such a sweeetheart…
    oh god vivian entry wohoooo!!!! hes so handsome 😉 bt how dare he to punch my sanky 🙁 🙁 🙁
    waitng eagerly for nxt part dr…
    keeep rockng n stay bkessed sweeetypie…
    love u so so sooo much 😉

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq thnq thnq soooooooooo much for ur cute cmnt baby….. Happy that u liked it this much….oh u blushing….. Oh my doll while blushing u r looking sooooo cute.
      Yup RK entry…. But anyone in his place will do that. Y is it? U ll knew later. Love u sooooo much dear. Keep smiling 😊 n stay blessed 💕

  2. priyanka

    Cuteness overloaded😍😍😍…
    Superb epi dear…
    All scene are choo cute..
    Choo chweet just like u chellam..
    Aww ragsan bus scene was good ..
    Is Rk rag’s bro??…
    Chellakutty na unakku enaku puducha sng’ la puducha line a dedicate pandren..
    Veedhi ulah nee vanthaal theruvilakum kann adikum
    veedhu sella suriyanum mm adampudikumey
    Nadhi odu nee kuzhithal meenukkum katchal varum
    unnai thottu paarka thaan mazhai kudhikumey

    Bhoogambam vanthal kuda oho
    padharatha nenjam ennathu oho

    Poo ondru modhiyathaley oho
    patrendu sarinthathu indru ohh

    KaNNmoodi thirakum pothu
    kadavul ethirile vanthathu pola
    adada yenn kaNN munadi
    avaLey vanthu nindraLey😊😊😍😙😙😙…
    i hope you like this lyrics..
    Oh actually innaki na konjam over excited aeiten…sorry for my bak bak dear..
    Love you sooooo much dear…❤❤❤❤..
    take care..ummmmmmmma😙😙😙

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Ur cmnt made my day dear….. Really didn’t expected this…… Wow…. Its my fav lyrics…. Vijay songs r always melodic n cute.
      Bhoogambam vanthal kuda oho
      padharatha nenjam ennathu oho
      Poo ondru modhiyathaley oho
      patrendu sarinthathu indru ohh
      My fav line….. Just loved it my doll…. Very very happy taht u liked today’s epi this much…. Yup good guess its her bro…..
      Thnq thnq thnq sooooooo much chellam. Love u soooooo much 💕 😘😊

  3. Vk

    Na crt ah guess pannita akka….that was ragini’s photo….apro athu Sachin movie scene thana… semmaiya irunthuthu…..but rk yaru…..ragini Oda brother ah??

  4. fira

    Awesome epi…ragsan scenes are so cute…appa sanskar secret lover ra ragini ku…..sachin film scenes are superb…rk ragini oda bro va illa lover ra…..keep rocking…take care…

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      thnq soooooo much akka…. RK anna dan… lover lam illa…. namma ragini sita…. verayarum kedayadu ava life la…. keep smiling n tc

  5. Moni_ragz

    Moni_ragz

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    Sathyama super’a erundhuchu.. nan nanachu pakala tht sanky dhan 1st love pannuvanu.. rk yaru😕? Loved it 😍😍😍😘😘😘💟💟

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Ohh unku indalavku pidichiruka… romba happy dear…. Thnq soooooo much for liking it. Who is rk? Stay tune on…. Yup sanky first fall in love.

  6. suhani

    Awesome episode…..ragsan scenes are super…how romantic he is ….rk entry is super…I love rk also…bus scene semma super..and funny….waiting for next part soon… Keep smiling… And rocking. But chappy is short…. Make.it long…

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq sooooooo much akka. Yup my sanky is romantic…. In future u’ll see him more romantic n typical house head too. Sure akka next epi long ah irukum… Next epi will be on Wednesday…. Stay tune on

  7. Asra

    Asra

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    akka kalaikidenga semma akka…chance illa…..superbbb superbbb superbbb….Sachin movie scenes semma akka…..loved it akka….thalapathi scenes kuduthirkenga…so na thala dialogue ungaluku solren akka….therika vidudenga…..omg rk entry…na nenachu kuda pakala akka….na yeana solla loved it loved it loved it core akka….waiting for nxt one…tkcr akka..

    • Astha

      Astha

      |Author

      Thnq thnq thnq sooooooooo much chellam…. I’m very very happy taht I liked it… No… U loved it this much…. Ur cmnt gave me more strength dear. Pugal mazhaila nainaingiti iruken…. So happy dear…. Keep smiling 😊 stay blessed 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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