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Home»Fan Fiction»Rhythm of Life – Chap 5 (RagSan)
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Rhythm of Life – Chap 5 (RagSan)

AsthaBy AsthaNovember 23, 201631 Comments6 Mins Read
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Thnq soooooo much for being my support…sorry for not updating yesterday….. bcoz of some technical issue i’m unable to update.

Chapter 4

Recap: preethi tells that she is the girls chosen by sanky’s family n warns ragini

Evening

Children are playing in park of the apartment….. harsha & sanky is talking, swa admires children. She found ragini standing alone is swimming pool lost in deep thoughts.
Swa: di….. (no response)
She placed her hand on rag’s shoulder. With jerk she came out to reality n composed herself to hide tears.
Swa: di r u crying? Rag nods no….
Swa: di u know the fact….. anyone can lie…. But their face will show the truth….. that’s y elder says “face is index of the mind”
Rag: what I can do except crying? I’m broken……..

Rag gets a flash in that “ sanky is in marriage attire n holds the hand of bride….. pandit says u completed 6 rounds….. just one more to become husband n wife”
Swa: di…. Where u lost?
Rag: the nightmare
Swa: but di it wont happen again…. Once it happened…..

Rag: hope so…. If I didn’t come there on ri8 time?
Swa: di plz…. Be positive….
Harsha: no di id “O positive”
Rag smiled a lil bit.

Swa: u…. don’t u have any better counter or joke?
Harsha: but di smiled na….. both argues…. Rag smiles weakly.
All these conversation was witnessed by sanky with broken heart he left from there.

Night

KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR………. (long pressing soung of calling bell)

Rag murmurs: who is this at this time….. don’t they know how to press bell too…… she opens the door n found drunken sanky.
Harsha n swara also came from their home by calling bell sound
Harsha hold sanky who was not able to stand properly…… he made him laid on bed.
Har: di may i….
Rag: no u go ….. I’ll handle him…..

Swa: r u sure? Rag nods in assurance.
Diya n roshik already slept. Rag abt to sleep san hold her hand…..
San: I’’m sorry Ragini…… I never gave u secure life…… I spoiled ur life……. Bcoz of m today u r suffering….. he blabbers in half conscious.
Rag: no sanky….. ya I agree I’m feeling insecure…… but when u r with me then I don’t want anything….. plz don’t leave me….. I cant live without u…… I really love u….
San : I too…… rag sleeps in bed….

Rag pov: I know u loves me sooooooo much……and unable to tell the truth to ur family….. hope soon everything will be fine. Then she hears RAFTA RAFTA HO GAYI…. TUHE MERI ZINDAGI….. (song from Razz3) [for tamil readers…. She hears POONGATRILE UN VASATHAI THANIYAGA THEDI PARTHEN… KADAL MEL ORU THULI VZHLDADHEY ADHAI THEI THEDI PARTHEN….. (song from uyire)] she hears song which was playing in neighbours home…..She doze off soon bcoz of tears.

Next day morning……

shining sun rays disturbed sanky’s sleep. By holding his head he sat on bed bcoz of hangover. He found lemon juice near by table. He drinks that n searches rag….. as usual she is in kitchen.
San: ragini…. I’m really sry…. I drunk yesterday…..
Rag: no need of any explanation…. I know the reason. San smiled n hugged rag. She too reciprocated…. (soft n melodious music flows in background which was relayed in tv) He caressed her hair abt to kiss…….

Swa: di… oops sry I came on wrong time…..
Ragsan was embarrassed n prated their way…
Rag: nothing like that…. Any matter? Swara signed 1 min I’ll back….
San came from kitchen…. Pov: till now this diya n roshik disturbed our romance from today this swara also enrolled her name in that list.
Swara patted sanky’s shoulder, he turned,

Swa: jeeju I came here to insist u to talk to preethi not to disturb ur romance…. Remove my name from that list…..
Rag laughed heart out….
San: u started to read my mind voice also?
Swa: y I wanna read…. Ur face clearly showing na….
San grits his teeth…..

Rag: ok leave this all silly….. swara we told ns we don’t have her phone num or address…. How can we…
San: I’ll ask him…. (he calls the person whom he called yesterday also… n gets phone num n her hostel address)
Swa: di… I thing…
Ragsan: what?
Swa: we should not take harsha with us…..

San: y?
Swa: I told everything to him…. He is peak of angry on her…. U know na he don’t know to talk polite….. if he came he will spoil everything.
San: u r ri8.
Rag: u… 1st mistake u hear whole conversation by ur phone…. 2nd u told everything to him…
Swa gives weak smile.

Rag: I know u’ll add something extra to provoke his angry…. Bcoz u was angry so u’ll add more.
Swa keeps pout face.
San: hey drama princess… enough…. Tell harsha to mind this two chote saithans (pointing diya n roshik)
Harsha: drama princess? Y u don’t gave title of queen?
San: ur di took that title….

Harsha: ya u r ri8…..
Rag: u… chased both….finally caught san n beat playfully….
San: ok ok… harsha u take care rodi we’ll back soon.
Harsha: r u going anywhere?

Swa: tumhe pata nahi hai, ke jate vaqt kisko peeche se tokte nahi hai, ye ashubh hota hai? don’t u know that while going out asking this question is inauspicious?
Rag: we r going for small work n swa said she wanna buy some books so we r taking her out….
Harsha: ok carry on,…. All the best….

@ zzz girls hostel

A girl informs preethi that somebody came to visit her so she comes down.
Preethi: u….
San: I wanna talk to u…
Preethi: abt what?
Swa: y… cant u come…. ur future so called hubby na calling….. (rudely)

Ragsan eyed her angrily…..
Swa: sorry….
Rag: plz…..(with soft voice n pain in eyes)

Preethi: ok tell me what?
San: not here… any restaurant or in our home?
All enters into apartment street harsha goes opposite direction with RoDi they didn’t meet.
Ragsan n swapree sat on sofa.
Preethi: tell me now what?
san: we didn’t hid it intentionally….. our situation demands it….. u should know what happened in our life….

Rag: after knowing our story u wished to marry him….. then here is the divorce papers I signed in it…..
Swasan shocked…. Preethi is not less than swasan in shock.

Screen freezes with shocking face of Sanky, swara n preethi and determined face of Ragini

To be continued…………….

QUOTE OF THE DAY

“I’m a Lover not a FIGHTER but I’ll fight for what I LOVE”

I think this chapter is not so interesting…. Plz do continue reading….. from next Chapter u’ll see ragsan meet n their life in past…. Hope u’ll like that. Do cmnts…. By urs loving Aastha.

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    31 Comments

    1. CrazygirlS.P on November 23, 2016 11:54 pm

      Superb dear❤️❤️❤️

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 7:53 am

        Thnq so much Sam ???

      • CrazygirlS.P on November 24, 2016 11:21 am

        Welcome Asthu, love you???

    2. Ammy on November 24, 2016 12:01 am

      Interesting.update soon

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 7:53 am

        Thnq so much dear

    3. Ragz_teju on November 24, 2016 12:21 am

      awesome loved it

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 7:54 am

        Thnq so much di

    4. Sreevijayan on November 24, 2016 12:37 am

      Ending was shocking..awesome update deae…

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 7:54 am

        Thnq so much akka

    5. Sindhura on November 24, 2016 6:22 am

      Awesome

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:39 am

        Thnq so much akka

    6. inu on November 24, 2016 6:42 am

      Superb. Unexpected thing happened at end. Interesting

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:40 am

        Unexpected things will make interesting. Thnq so much for the cmnt dear

    7. lovely on November 24, 2016 8:41 am

      Superb

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:55 pm

        Thnq so much my dear lovely

    8. Asw on November 24, 2016 10:32 am

      NICE keep going

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:55 pm

        Thnq so much Asw

    9. suhani on November 24, 2016 1:21 pm

      Nice episode…ragsan scenes are super.. But its boring…I’m waiting for ragsan past…waiting for next part
      ..when will u update next part…keep.smiling..u write any abhiy and prabul ff…

    10. suhani on November 24, 2016 1:22 pm

      Nice episode…ragsan scenes are super.. But its boring…I’m waiting for ragsan past…waiting for next part
      ..when will u update next part…keep.smiling..u write any abhigya and prabul ff…nice…

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 4:09 pm

        Very sorry for the boring update akka. I’ll try my best to entertain in next part ???

    11. priyanka on November 24, 2016 2:19 pm

      Superb dear…
      Intresting….ragsan lyf laapdi ennathan nadanthuchu….???
      Pls update nxt part soon dear…

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:57 pm

        Thnq so much chellam. Enna nadanduchi avanga lyf la…. Morning paru nan post pannituven next epi ya… Keep smiling

    12. Vk on November 24, 2016 2:36 pm

      Awesome akka…avanga past ennanu therinjika Na romba eager ah irukka… next episode ah sekirama post pannuga

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 8:58 pm

        Thnq so much dear

    13. fira on November 24, 2016 3:38 pm

      Nice update…harshswara both characters are awesome…it’s not a bore epi…waiting for past …keep rocking…

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 9:02 pm

        Thnq so much akka.

    14. asra on November 24, 2016 4:17 pm

      amazing akka….last la ivalavu periya shock ka kudhudenga akka…eagerly waiting for ragsan past akka…tkcr akka….

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 9:03 pm

        Thnq so much chellam

    15. jazzy on November 24, 2016 6:07 pm

      superb astha

      • Astha on November 24, 2016 9:03 pm

        Thnq so much di

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