Review Book for Fanfictions of TU ( Review of Seventh nomination)

Hi guys , here is the review of Swasan-magical story written by a very amazing writer Shivika Oberoi.

TITLE – Title is good but u still make better choices according to story.

CONCEPT- Plot is pretty good & something different from normal love stories. It is somewhere inspired from Harry Potter series . Characters are amazingly presented by u .

DIALOGUES – Your dialogues are well written but I expect more heart-wrenching dialogues in emotional situations. Try to write some intense dialogues.

WRITING STYLE – This is the best thing if your FF. Your writing style is really fabulous. Bonds between character are well-described . Your description of Ragini’s character is amazing . Her character is really bold & that’s why I love your story.

STORY MOULDING – Your way of penning down your thoughts in the form of story is awesome. Your story is on right track.

FAULTS – There are not much faults except few which anyone can ignore . Try to avoid them & make your dialogues more intense.

Rating – 8.5/10

Those who want to read a love story with a twist of magic , then can surely follow the story .

Overall it is a nice story , I enjoyed while reading.

Hope u like the review .

Regards
Hania

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  1. Shivika__Oberoi

    Thank you 💘💘😘😘 I loved that!!!

    1. Hania

      That’s really sweet of u . I am glad u like it

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