REVIEW BOOK for Fanfictions of TU (Review of fourth nomination)

Hi Friends , here is the review of My life is ur smile – Ek deewana tha ff by a very sweet writer Dishani

TITLE – Your title is very sweet & I loved it .

CONCEPT – Concept is actually good & full of suspense but still it’s very common . I love how u revealing secrets with the pace of story.Characters are well written & the bonding between them is appreciable.

DIALOGUES – That’s good u are giving importance to each character but don’t give them useless dialogues. Keep ur dialogues relatable .

WRITING STYLE -Your writing style is pretty cool. Try to avoid short forms . Your way of revaling secrets is fabulous . You just have to take care of punctuation.

STORY MOULDING – You are moulding ur story in perfect way with blend of secrets & mysteries . I am loving the way how u holding the suspense & make a tight grip on ur readers.

FLAWS – Use punctuation properly & check ur article before submitting to avoid grammatical mistakes. Try to write some heart touching dialogues & enhance ur vocabulary.

Rating – 7/10

Those who want lot of mysteries with love story , they will surely follow her ff .

Hope u don’t get hurt with ur review . We try our best to be honest .

Stay blessed & Keep writing .

Regards

Hania, Neha & Negisanyukta

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  1. Dishani01

    Thanks a lot dear it’s my pleasure to read my mistakes and obey that.. I really need this to improve my ff and I’m also new this ff writing so thanks a lot for your favor I’ll try to improve from 7-10?? thanks

    1. Hania

      First of all thanks for understanding dear & this is not any favour . I like ur spirit & my expectation is more from young talented writers like u . Of course i would love to read how u will improve , so please send me links whenever u update ur ff .Thank you & Take care

      1. Dishani01

        Thanks a lot I’ll send my link

  2. Hi dishani01
    Are u not in watt pad
    I had search in wattpad
    Plz tell me and clear my doubt

    1. Dishani01

      no dear I’m only in here and writing only 2 ff currently and firstly ..

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