Hi all, here is the review of Forbidden love by a very amazing writer AMkideewani .
TITLE – I love ur title . Perfectly suited on storyline .
CONCEPT – Concept is amazing . I never watch divergent series but u make me fall in love with it concept from ur imagination . I love the way how u portray emotions in ur ff . You are not rushing with mysteries & story . That’s really good . Chemistry between Four & tris is awesome .
DIALOGUES – Dialogues are on point & beautifully written but still my expectation is more from u . Try to write some heart touching dialogues in emotional scenes.
WRITING STYLE – This is what ur ff is worth reading . Your writing style is very clean, beautifully described. I love the way how u showing a situation from pov of both the leads. I really like how u always end ur chapters on cliffhangers which make readers curious about next update.
STORY MOULDING- I must say it is going in right direction . You have enough ability to make ur readers glued to ur story . There are not much chapters that’s why I don’t tell u more but I know u can manage well.
FLAWS- I don’t find any flaws in ur story except few grammatical errors which are very common. Check ur article before submitting to avoid them . Try to write some more intense dialogues for ur leads.
Rating – 8.5/10
Congrats dear , u get highest ranking in review book till now. Well done.You are free to send me link, I would love to follow ur fabulous book.
I am seriously disappointed with response , you deserve more readers . You are such a talented writer.
Those who love cliffhangers ,mysteries & a twisted love story , they will surely follow this ff . Believe me it’s a worth reading book.
Hope u don’t feel hurt. Keep writing & Stay blessed.
Hania, Negisanyukta & Neha