REVENGE vs LOVE – I Will Kill You (EPISODE 16)

Hellooooooo I know thodi lambi hogayi
So a big wala happy Krishna janmastami everyone!!!
So thank u everyone for commenting I replied to all of ur comments hope u all saw it
Hey angita sorry if my words are going to hurt u really big sorry but u wanted to call me neerja actually she is really great and I don’t think I deserve to be called like that really sorry if I hurt u and u can call me NavyaπŸ˜‰ once again sorry if I hurt u!!!! And thank u guys for supporting me so let’s start

Episode 16
UV: u promised us that v will go to trekking this year
K: really
M: don’t tell me kunj
K: OK baba v will go ab kush now let me work
A: so decided tomorrow morning 9:00 we r going to trekking!!
K: what nooooo
UV: now only u said OK no
K: not morning
A: matlab
K: yaaa v will go to trekking in the evening haan yeh hi sahi hai
Uv: r u serious
A: bhai what’s your problem with sun why do you always cover ur self fully whenever u go out in sun ….
Sun se koi allergy hai kya??
K(himself): now how should I tell this buddhu that vampires Burn out into ashes when sunlight falls on them
Abhay continues
A:now just tell bhai what’s the problem not even a single part of ur body get exposed to sunlight u cover ur self sooo much…..
K: chuppp abhay how much will u talk yes!!! I’m allergic to sun when my body parts get exposed to sun I get rashes
Twinkle n abhay n mavi were shocked
M: u never told about this
K: I don’t want u all to get upset that’s why
T: but it sounds bit strange
A: yes bhai
T: haven’t u consulted doctor
K: bas yaar aur kitna questions…. Stop taking my interview and doctor doesn’t have a solution for it so I have to cover my self and roam okkk now enough
Mavi: OK now take care and if u want don’t want trekking tmrw
K: noooo we will go OK end of discussion
A: yes that tooo evening 5 wow its gonna be fun
M: yaaa
UV: I thought u will be scared mahi after all we r going to xyz forest and from there trekking is gonna start

Listening to the forest name twinj and abhay faces turn pale
A: UV bhai that forest…
UV: itna kyun dar raha hai anyways there ur friends will be there u r gonna meet
A: bhaiiii
Then suddenly he come to twinkle
A: bhabhi tmrw u r also coming with us
T: what me why me u all planned no
A: so what u r coming n that’s final kunj bhai pls tell her to come na
T: no abhay how can I you all go
K:na na abhay is right ur coming with us and birthday boy ki wish ko mana nahi karte
M: yes twinkle u r our family now and ur coming
UV: Yessss
T: OK OK ab kush
K: double kush
Saying that he pulls her nose
A: yayy chalo packing karte hai and baby ko bhi batana hai na
K: what packing we r just going to a trekking and we return by day after tmrw mrng 6
T: matlab v r going to spend the whole night in the forest
Listening to the forest name twinj and abhay faces turn pale
A: UV bhai that forest…
UV: itna kyun dar raha hai anyways there ur friends will be there u r gonna meet
A: bhaiiii
Then suddenly he come to twinkle
A: bhabhi tmrw u r also coming with us
T: what me why me u all planned no
A: so what u r coming n that’s final kunj bhai pls tell her to come na
T: no abhay how can I you all go
K:na na abhay is right ur coming with us and birthday boy ki wish ko mana nahi karte
M: yes twinkle u r our family now and ur coming
UV: Yessss
T: OK OK ab kush
K: double kush

Saying that he pulls her nose
A: yayy chalo packing karte hai and baby ko bhi batana hai na
K: what packing we r just going to a trekking and we return by day after tmrw mrng 6
T: matlab v r going to spend the whole night in the forest
T: OK kunj I’ll leave byeeeee
She leaves…..twinj abhay r really tensed thinking about trekking but why do u all think so???
Screen freezes on on their 3 tensed faces…..

PRECAP: trekking and twinj abhay r getting attracted…………………..

So how was it??? I know I’m a bad writer but u all have to bare me and give ur suggestions as this my first ff pls guys!!!!!!☹
And thank u guys pls tell me how was the episode and yeah
Love u all❀
Byeeeeeβœ‹πŸ»
C u allπŸ™„

16 comments

  1. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Oyee thanmy not bad writer yaar
    Amazing story nice epi
    Very much excited for next epi
    Plshh post soon 😘😘😘

  2. SIDMIN-Daamini

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    Navya
    Superb dear
    N u r not at all a bad writer in fact u r amazing one
    UR story is attracting me n ur plot is amazing but Plzz show some twinj scenes coz i would love to imagine our sidmin in ur ffs
    Plzzz
    N love u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜Ž

  3. SidVee

    Awesome epi.. loved it.. and ur not a bad writer.. I love ur ff.. in fact this is the first ff I’ve read abt vampire and warewolf so I’ll get to know more about them.. do cont soon πŸ’•

  4. Kruti

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    Thanmy dont u call urself a bad writer……ur very good at it
    Infact ur moving from better to best with each passing epi

    Superb epi…..eagerly waiting for d nxt one

  5. Romaisha

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    Don’t call yourself a bad writer!! Please nahh dont … With ur ff i learn so much .. These fictional characters, vampire and werewolves ; i love them yaar and mysteries are my thing so don’t u dare decide to end this ff or stop!! Ok?

    Good… Now this episode .. I really wanna no the mystery with Twinj and Abhay .. Getting more interesting by the minute !! 😍😍
    Do post soon nah .. Can’t wait !!

  6. Chiku

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    Dear its not bad at all…😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    I luv it. It’s awesome πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Nd i like ur name alot

  7. SidMin

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    Interesting each episode makes me eger to know what follows next please post the next part soon Loved it and that part where Kunj pulls Twinkle’s nose was so cute πŸ™‚

  8. Jisha

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    Awesome… superb…n I have one complaint… don’t call urself a bad writer…u r not….
    U know wat I generally don’t get into much of these fictional stories like vampire n all… Ur’s is the first ff which generated interest in me for these kind of stories…

  9. Sayeeda

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    Thanmy dear r u serious yrr??…. Dekho ab gussa mat dilao 😠😠😠…. Thode din pehle Romu ko mera gussa dekhna pada tha aur ab tumbhi dekhna chahti ho kya πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’…..

    Why u called yourself as a bad writer…. U r an amazing ; flawless writer… Ur writing skills always amaze me….
    I told u earlier only that Iove to imagine Twinj differently in ur ff….
    Ur ff is one of my fav one….

    U know u r a very good human being at the same time… Yesterday ur comment made me felt so happy… Though I wanted to revert back but my mind was overpowered with different emotions coz of which I didn’t replied back…. But believe me after reading ur comment I felt that I have such a good sis like u in my life….. Ur each nd every word made me realise that u were able to feel my pain…..

    Love u so much for giving me a sis like uπŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ˜‡

  10. Monica

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    Okay, i am really really sorry for commenting so late .. But i couldn’t cuz i was busy .. tho i read this yesterday itself. Coming to the episode .. it was fab. I am so tired explaining that you write so good. Don’t even dare to call this ff boring alright? This ff is just the most creative piece of writing i have seen in tu. So no more discussing your ff is boring, because it is just one of the best ones. Write soon as i love to read your ff. Thank you so much for giving this wonderful ff to read and sharing your writing with us. Makes me feel special. Thank you and love you πŸ’•

  11. Baby

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    amazing thanmy wow trekking
    n dont no y r dey tensed post nxt asap dear cnt w8
    luvd d cute sa episdoe asap
    luv u deary

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