Revenge Love…(TS by shreyanvi) shot 1

Hello friends….This is Shreyanvi (saku ishqie)….i hope u all remember me…๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ..i was kinda bored of writing OS…so thought of trying something new…so this time I m back wd another story..basically itโ€™s a TS i will try to complete it in 2 or 3 shots…..i hope u will like my story…enough of my bakbak…lets get into story…
Happy reading…

Kindly ignore grammatical mistakes…

Character sketch…
Raj Malhotra:-Great businessman nd rival of Oberoiโ€™s…
Gauri Malhotra:- daughter of Raj Malhotra…
She is a carefree..outspoken..bubbly type of girl…..can do anything for her dad…
OMKARA is businessman in my story nd his nd tej relation is like normal son nd dad relation… ..he donโ€™t hate tej…..
Rest characters r same as in show…

So letโ€™s get into story…
Mumbai, India…
Man:- Sir…if this happens then we will b at great loss…we will hv to do something otherwise oberoiโ€™s will get this project….
Man 2:- no this canโ€™t happen….no one can beat RAJ MALHOTRA….we hv to get this project anyhow.. otherwise hw will I take my revenge frm oberoiโ€™s…
PA:-Sir ..i think if u want to destroy oberoi empire nd tej Singh Oberoi.. ..then first u should destroy OMKARA Singh Oberoi..
Raj:- Yeah…u r r8…Tej Singh Oberoiโ€™s whole ego is cz of his son…so if we will hurt his son…whole empire will get hurt…(laughs evily๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ)
PA:-sir.. but hw will we do this..??…
Raj:-just leave everything on me..he calls someone……

Next Day…
A girl is shown Chating nd walking at middle of road….she is wearing denim mini skirt nd crop top…hairs r open nd highlighted by chocolate brown colour…
Suddenly a car comes from another direction nd was abt to hit her..but the man in car applied breaks wd jerk so it stopped at nick of the moment but cz of slight push she felled down..nd she got lil scratch on her elbow
Girl:- Hey u ??..cant u drive properly???..(she goes near window..nd start patting window glass asking boy to come out)…
A boy with long hairs comes down wd swag..he removes his glasses …..
Girl:-Wht kind of person u r???..u almost killed me nd instead of saying sorry u r showing style??….(boy was mesmerized seeing her beauty..u can say love at first sight๐Ÿ˜‰)
Boy:-hmmmm..
Girl:-Wht??
Boy:-(realising wht he said…)..i mean..i m really sorry…btw where u got hurt???
Girl:-u canโ€™t even imagine..hw big wound I got cz of u??..(start crying๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ)
Boy:- worried…is it hurting alot??..
Girl:- ofcourse…. .
Boy:-show me…
She shows her scratch…nd boy starts laughing๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Girl:- hw mean u r???๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก…instead of taking me to hospital…u r laughing at me..huh??
Boy:- sorry…come letโ€™s go…ur condition is really critical..(again bursts into laughter๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)..
Girl was just admiring his laughter…nd was lost in his smile…but horns of other vehicles brought her to senses…nd both of them realised that they were in middle of road…
Boy:- ok…lets get into car..i will take u to hospital so that they can do ur dressing nd also we can check if their r any internal injuries…
Girl:- Fine…but hw can I come wd u.. nd trust u..? ?afterall we r strangers…
Boy:-..hmmm๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”..well in that case…forwards his hand..omkara..OMKARA SINGH OBEROI…will u b my friend???..
Girl:- (acts like thinking)…gauri..GAURI MALHOTRA…nd shakes hand wd him…friends…๐Ÿ˜Š
Om:-so now can we go??..
Gauri:-ofcourse..come letโ€™s go….

@hospital
Doc was cleaning her wound by detol….
Gauri:-ahhhhh…its burning doc…
(She was doing like small kids…dancing nd jumping..nd om was laughing at her antics
Suddenly his attention was brought to senses by Gauriโ€™s scream)
Gauri:- Noooooooo….i donโ€™t. want this injection.. .I m perfectly fine…..plz nothing happened to me..
Om:- (teasingly) y Gauri?? ?…before sometime u was saying that itโ€™s hurting alot…nd u was abt to die…wht happened now..???..๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ˆ..
Gauri:- om…its not time to take revenge on me..plz help…i donโ€™t want this injection…(she tries to run..but Iโ€™m stopped her forcibly nd doc gave her inejection.. .nd she screamed so loudly dat whole hospital was shaking)…
Om:- come on Gauri.. .we can go now…all formalities r over..
Gauri:-ok…but wht was doc saying to u ???…
Om:- doc was saying…….
Gauri:-he was saying????…wht nxt..
Om:- he was saying…not to bring u back to his hospital…(starts laughing nd making fun of gauri๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ)
Gauri:-๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ก u…wait…comes to hit him…but stumbles nd was abt to fall but our om saved her…nd now she was in his arms….both share eyelock…
Hua hai aaj pehle baar ( frm film sanam re plays in BG)
Om breaks eyelock…
Om:- so where should I drop u..? ?
Gauri:- suddenly gets silent…actually…i m new in this city…i was leaving in hotel but I lost my vallet nd my credit cards debit card nd cash..everthing was in dat…so I had to check out from their..
Nd now….
Om:- nd now u donโ€™t hv place to stay r8????…
Gauri:- r8…
Om:-ok..lets go???..
Gauri:- but where?? ?..
Om:- at my place..
Gauri:- u r place???..i mean hw can I come to ur house .
Om:- y canโ€™t u ??… u r my friend so by that r8 u r coming thatโ€™s it…or else I will think that u donโ€™t consider me as ur friend….
Gauri:-ok fine…
Both of them leave for oberoi mansion…

In car…
Gauri:- so tell me hw many people r in ur family???
Om:- well we hv a joint family.. .
Gauri:- (excitingly) joint family…u know wht I always dreamed abt joint family…but in my family itโ€™s just me nd my dad..nd…..
(She became silent )..
Om:-what happened y u stopped..
Gauri:- nothing…just tell me..hw much time more…i m hungry?..
Om:- yeah..we r their…nd here comes my house OBEROI MANSION…
Gauri looks at house nd msgs someone…plan A successful…i m in oberoi mansion…nd smirks…

So thatโ€™s it for today….
Whts Gauriโ€™s plan???…to knw…stay tuned…nxt episode coming soon…
I hope u guys liked it…plz share ur views by comments…love u all…saku ishqies signing off..
Lots of love๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
Take care…
Bye๐Ÿ˜˜

24 comments

  1. Verna

    Verna

    |Registered Member

    So Miss. Naught is back with khidki tod track.. its interesting.. let me see my naughty sister save my good name and skill or not ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

  2. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Oh god, what’s gauri’s plan???????????????????????? Saku , choti behan…..u have come up with a new idea…..luvd it …very interesting 2 read yaar….I just luvd it…….suspense was well handled and om’s-gauri convo was so nice 2 read…u brought dbo before me…..i simply luvd it..can’t wait…updtae by today itself yaar….luv u….

  3. UF

    AWESOME CUTE EXCELENT FANTASTIC INTERSTING SUPERB๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    Dear Shreyanvi
    Mera Ek Request Accept Karungi Please๐Ÿ˜ŠRudy Ki Opposite Bhavya Ko Nahi Soumya Ko Add Karna Please๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™Iam Really Miss RuMya And Soumya In IshqBaaz.Main Sirf Wahi FF Storys Read And Comment Karthi Hu Jiss Main Rudy Ki Opposite Soumya Ho.Agar Rudy Ki Opposite Koi Bhi Nahi Tho Thab Bhi Main Wo Story Read Karthi Hu.Agar Aap Rudy Ki Opposite Kisi Ko Add Karna Chaatha Hai So Please Add Soumya.Show Tho Main Dekthi Hu Aur Uss Main Bhavya Ko Dekh Ke Soumya Ki Yaad Aathi Hai Aur Usse Bahuth Miss Bhi Karthi Hu.Aur Soumya Show Main Na Hone Ka Sadness Main RuMya Include Storys Read Karke Kam Karthi Hu.I Just Want Soumya Opposite Rudy I Just Want RuMya.Agar Bhavya Ko Iss Story Main Supporting Character Ya Important Character Main Add Karo Tho No Problem.
    I Hope You Understand What Iam Try To Say
    Your Story Is Suuuperb๐Ÿ‘ŒI Really Love It๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Keep It Up๐Ÿ‘

    Take Care๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Shreyanvi

      Shreyanvi

      |Author

      Thank u so much uf…
      Nd coming to ur request…i will surely cast saumya opposite rudy cz I m also RuMya lover…but basically it’s RiKara fiction so my main focus will b Rikara but for u I will surely write RuMya scenes in nxt part…love u dear…๐Ÿ˜˜…
      Keep commenting๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. Karina

    Karina

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    Saku sweety it was very nice…cant wait for next part.
    Gaurika is my favourite couple. I like Om and Gauri even more then shivika, so thank you for writting about them. Lots of love…take care.

    • Shreyanvi

      Shreyanvi

      |Author

      Thanks kaaaruuuuu diiii๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜…
      I was waiting for ur reply….nd even I m ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•fan of Rikara…thats y I always write rikara story๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Karina

        Karina

        |Registered Member

        You re welcome dear. Sorry for the late comment but i was not online since yesterday. Im glad we are both Rikara fans. Waiting for next part. Love u…

  5. Sanaa.khan

    Sanaa.khan

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    Hi, it’s Sanaa here. I had been a silent reader to most of the ff’s here and each one is unique but Shreyanvi , yours is an outstanding piece of writing. What I liked the most is how you managed to add suspense, romance and comedy all in one shot. Anyways I’m eagerly waiting for the next shot so pls try to update asap dear.

    • Shreyanvi

      Shreyanvi

      |Author

      Hiii sana…u know wht.. .I just made my day…ur words really means alot๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜..thanks for opening up nd commenting dear……nxt part i will post it by n8..
      Stay tuned๐Ÿ˜‰

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