The resplendent demoiselle of my dreams (Prologue)

Prologue

She scurried past him looking flustered.
He just stood there gaping at her.
Oh! How beautiful she looked even with a worried face. The way her eyebrows furrowed…The way her nose scrunched up…
He could only imagine how heavenly she would look when she smiled.
“Excuse me.” A sweet voice took him out of his reverie.
He blinked and looked at the face behind that melodic voice. It was her. The girl of his dreams.
“Yes? How can I help you?” He barely uttered out the words in his bedazzlement.
“When I bumped into you minutes ago, my phone fell in your carry bag I think. Will you please have a look?”
“Yeah sure.” Oh! How beautiful her eyes looked this close! Those dark brown irises which narrowed in worry.
He took out a phone with a sea green cover.
“Here it is. And am sorry for bumping you.” He said giving her the phone.
“Thank you. And it was my fault. I was in a hurry and didn’t look.”
She smiled. “By the way, I’m Natalie.”
Her name’s as melodious as her voice.He thought.
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Hey guys! 🙂
If you like the prologue please comment. criticism is also appreciated.
It’s my first try at writing a romantic story.
So please share your thoughts as to whether I should continue with this plot or try something else.
Thank you for your time.
Love,
Clara
🙂

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