The resplendent demoiselle of my dreams (Prologue)

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Prologue

She scurried past him looking flustered.
He just stood there gaping at her.
Oh! How beautiful she looked even with a worried face. The way her eyebrows furrowed…The way her nose scrunched up…
He could only imagine how heavenly she would look when she smiled.
“Excuse me.” A sweet voice took him out of his reverie.
He blinked and looked at the face behind that melodic voice. It was her. The girl of his dreams.
“Yes? How can I help you?” He barely uttered out the words in his bedazzlement.
“When I bumped into you minutes ago, my phone fell in your carry bag I think. Will you please have a look?”
“Yeah sure.” Oh! How beautiful her eyes looked this close! Those dark brown irises which narrowed in worry.
He took out a phone with a sea green cover.
“Here it is. And am sorry for bumping you.” He said giving her the phone.
“Thank you. And it was my fault. I was in a hurry and didn’t look.”
She smiled. “By the way, I’m Natalie.”
Her name’s as melodious as her voice.He thought.
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Hey guys! 🙂
If you like the prologue please comment. criticism is also appreciated.
It’s my first try at writing a romantic story.
So please share your thoughts as to whether I should continue with this plot or try something else.
Thank you for your time.
Love,
Clara
🙂

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6 Comments
  1. Awesome!!! Pls continue

    1. Clara

      Thank you?
      Yeah..Now I’ll post the 1st chapter soon.

  2. hey clara ..
    prologue is fantastic
    is this story related to any serial shows

    1. Clara

      Hey gaya. Thank you. ?
      And no. This isn’t a story related to any of the TV serials. It’s totally from my imagination.

      1. Clara

        Sorry. I meant *haya

    2. Clara

      Hey haya. Thank you. ?
      And no. This isn’t a story related to any of the TV serials. It’s totally from my imagination.

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