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STORY: NUMAY 🙂
This is a Story of two teenage girls(PAYAL & NUPUR) who are totally different from each other… then also shares and bound with a pure and precious relation i.e; FRIENDSHIP.
They were like 2 bodies 1 soul. They are so close to each other that if one shout another one’s name, she can come in front of her within a minute, bcoz they are neighbours too 😉 . Both girls understand each other thoughts and needs without speaking a single word from mouth.
Payal is sweet, shy and innocent characteristic girl. For her the most important thing in her life is her Family (Joint family of 16 members) and Nupur. She is talented in Studies or u can say a bookworm. She shares her heart only with Nupur.
On other hand, Nupur is totally different from Payal. She is a confident, bubbly, independent and Carefree nature girl. For her the most important thing in her life is Her Mother (Divorcee) and her BFF Payal. She can do anything for Payal.
Today they both are very happy because it’s their first day at their Dream College “KBC Institute of Management” Mumbai. They got stuck in Traffic caused by heavy Rain and gets late to reach on time meanwhile the gates of college got closed for the entry. Payal was calm at that moment same time upset also because they missed 1st day at their dream college. On other side Nupur was Furious about the incident.
NUPUR: How can anyone close gates of the college? It’s a college not a school off course. (she took out her anger by kicking college gate)
On mean time.. a handsome boy with Black Jacket, Goggle On his face ..enters the Screen on his Bike (KTM BIKE). On his arrival, the gatekeeper opens the gate and allowed him to go with a smile. He enters the gate when a voice made him to stop. The voice is of Nupur who called him Shameless and Idiot for throwing mud on her (Rain filled mud pothole). He gave her a look and moved on. NUPUR get more frustrated.
The Boy is MAYANK, head boy of college, football star Player and everyone’s favourite.He has a strong personality, helpful nature (secretly), tit for tat attitude, Intelligent and dashing look.
*1 Year Senior to Payal and Nupur (Protagonists of the Series) and their future neighbour also.
“Such a stupid he was.” Nupur exclaimed. “Oh girl just relax come let’s go”,Payal said. Payal liked that guy. Those eyes of his…his swag..his carefree attitude. She didn’t liked him but actually in real sense she loved him. It was like a love at first sight thing for her. She smiled to herself realising this. Oh god!!! She definitely wished to meet him again. They went ahead talking…laughing and gossiping..after this is all friends do together. They were walking by the road when they saw a truck standing by with huge boxes. “Someone is shifting in, I guess”, Payal said. “Yep…I wish there is a hot guy in there so that I can tie you up with him. Afterall if I am not there with you na you will stay single for life-long my girl”, Nupur teased her. Payal just gave her a look. Nupur laughed but her expression changed as she saw that guy..the same guy whom she met in college. “You” She shouted. “Yes, me do you have any problem?” Mayank replied. ‘He is full of attitude’ Nupur thought in her mind. “Hey hi..you appear to be nice..not like your friend” Mayank said looking at Payal. But wait…wait..she didn’t replied instantly cause she was mesmerized looking at him. Mayank waved his hand before Payal bringing her in senses. “Uhh..hi”. “So you both stay here.” Mayank asked. Nupur said “Yes, we do any problem.” Mayank gave her a look. She looked at him with angry eyes. “Let’s go from here Payal.” She held Payal’s hand and they left from there. Mayank wanted to concentrate on his work of unpacking his boxes but how much ever he tried to forget this incident…the more he got frustrated with Nupur..and then he smiled thinking of her. Never ever had a girl affected him so much. “I am definitely not going to tie you up with him.” Nupur said. “But if you do I will be really happy.” Payal said not being in her senses still under the magical spell of the ‘Mayank’. “What! You liked him.” Nupur said who was completely shocked. “Ya I really liked him. I know you didn’t liked him..but..” Nupur said,” No. It’s nothing like that. I am really happy for you. I will try my best to tie him up with you. This is my promise.”
It was evening. Payal was pouring her emotions in her diary.
‘My eyes always searching for you..
My heart always beating for you…
In my each breath it’s only your name..
My lips always taking your name…
I don’t know what it is…
Still wondering what it is..
But I just know that it’s always something different when I am around you…
Still wondering for me is it only you..
People say it’s called love..
But me here still trying to figure out is this really love…
Is this really love…’
‘Am I in love??’
Payal closed her diary and started thinking about Mayank..
Oh God!! Am I in love.. I mean I like him for sure.. I was flat when I saw him for first time.. His smile, his voice, his expressions are just perfect.. Any girl would go crazy for him.. He has a unique charm in his personality and that is the reason why I m attracted to him.. But, its not just attraction.. Its more than that.. Yes, it is love.. Love at first sight.. I m in love with Mayank..
Payal’s POV ends..
She started dancing like mad..
On other side, Mayank was also in same situation as Payal.. He was just lying down on bed with a smile on his face and he was lost in his thoughts..
Yaar, woh ladki paagal kar degi mujhe.. Par, uske liye toh mai paagal banne k liye bhi ready hu.. Afterall, she would be my wife in future.. Usse toh mai patta kar hi rahuga.. She is the kind of girl I want.. Her confidence, her attitude, her style.. I mean she is totally different from other girls.. She’s difinitely not a girly girl like her friend Payal.. And she has such a beautiful and unique name.. Nupur.. My jangli billi.. Be ready to be mine, my janglii billi..
Soon, Mayank dozed off think about Nupur..
In college campus:
Payal and Nupur were talking with each other..
Payal: Nupur, yaar sun na.. Mujhe ek baat karni hai tere se..
Nupur: Haa bol na..
Payal took a deep breath and said:
Payal: Woh, actually na.. I wanted to say that I m in love..
Nupur: What?? And with whom??
Payal: Woh.. Woh..
Nupur: Mayank, Right??
Payal just nodded her head positively..
Nupur: I knew it.. Tabhi tum usse kal itna ghur ghur k dekhri thi..
Payal was just blushing seeing down..
Payal: Par Nupur, tumhe toh woh pasand nahi hai na??
Nupur: Haa, Manaa woh thoda akkdu hai, irritating hai, par bura nahi hai.. I like him..
Payal was glaring her..
Nupur: I mean I like him, but not in that way..
Payal started laughing seeing Nupur’s condition..
Nupur just smiled seeing Payal.. But only she knew how bad she was feeling deep inside after Payal’s confession… It was because Nupur also had started liking Mayank.. Somewhere, she was also attracted towards him and she liked the way Mayank used to tease her.. His attitude.. Nupur, was confused with her feelings towards Mayank.. On one side, she was happy for Payal but deep down, she was also feeling sad and was not aware why??
Soon the day fly… but was the next day as usuall for this newly blossoming love triangle’s aangles ( 3 angles ,, nupur , payal and mayank ) …….
Next day , 1:00 pm .. living room .
2 beauties were settled in midst of living room with bitter guard shots ( karela juice shots ) .
Nupur said “so my next question is kiss ur all 20 fingers in 5 seconds” when payal litteraly shouted “ noooo , that’s next to impossible” . “ ur time starts now” payal added . she kisse her all 10 fingers and 5 fingers of her toe when payal exclaimed in victory “ yeah … I won…………. So here is ur shot” she handed over him a turkey shot of karela …… while nupur made yukky faces “aaj to rehne meri behen , plz” … she drank it in 1 go and payal gave a winning smile …. Nupur told “ ur turn , so my dare is lick ur elbow in 5 seconds” .. “ haw , ur cheating , my task was so simple . we cant lick r elbow …” ….. nupur passed her a shot and gavea victorious smirk …..
( the task was going on … on … on and on ..)
“ its my turn to give a task ….. so gusse this hindi song lyrics in English wordings” said payal …. Nupur have a look at 2 karelaa shots and then said “ u hav choose wrong question , u know how simple its for me , I love Bollywood songs” ……. Said praising herself , nupur . payal replied “ ok ok ok let’s see .. now u guess this
Light your cigarette from my bosom
There is a lot of fire in my bosom
“ whhhhhhhhaat . she gulped a lump of saliva from her throat .. she looked at juice and herself too the shot and said with a crying face “ I will drink this” .. when teases her “ jaanu , when u get to this song na u wil dance on this” …
payal stood on nearest sofa and said
Bidi jalayge . jigar se piya …..
Jigar ma badi aag hai ……
And they both danced crazily ..
They hugged each other said “ happy frndship day to my dearest frnd ,,,,, love u yaar”
Then payal ws emotional so she said “ kk so my gift” . she gave her a photo frame in which there were more than 50 pics of both their childhood till now . she loved it and kissed her cheek …. She said “ I love u sooo much” .. and then nupur gets her gift “ she gave her a beautiful anklet which she lost in childhood and said “ I loe u so much , u lost it na .. I love u so much” ….. they both controlling their pearls like tears .they smiled at each other and said “ last shot left lets see
This is my turn nupur said “ r answers should match “ wwhat would u choose friendship or love
Nupur : love
Payal : friendship
It was a bright Sunday morning, Payal and Nupur were walking out of payal’s house when they heard some noise coming from mayank’s house.
Payal: I think we should check in there….maybe he need some help.
Nupur: Or maybe you can’t live without having a single glance of him a day. Am I right?
Payal (blushed): Can we go there please.
Payal literally ran towards Mayank’s house door as she reached there, she composed herself and made sure her hair was set as Nupur stood beside her. Payal’s hands shivered as reached the button of the door bell………
Nupur: Oh c’mon ya…..
And Nupur pressed the door bell. Mayank opened the door, excited to find Nupur in front of him as he smirked and shifted his gaze towards Payal.
Mayank: Hi Payal!
Payal (stammering): Hh…..Hi. ac……actually we heard noises coming out of your house. So, we thought to check whether you need any help.
Nupur: Actually we came here to check whether you’re alive or not, because by hearing the kind of noises that were coming out from your house seemed as if there was a war going on.
Payal slightly hit Nupur’s arm.
Mayank: Well……. come in. I think I can use some help as setting up the things in a house cannot be done by just one person.
Nupur and Payal had a good time with Mayank while setting up his house and that day The three became friends, Payal’s feeling for Mayank took momentum whereas Mayank started to love Nupur.
On the other hand Nupur wasn’t sure about her feelings. On one hand she used to plan to get Payal and Mayank close, on the other hand she used to feel bad when they were close and somewhere deep down in her heart she has started to have feelings for him and use to be happy when around him.
Like this 6 months passed……their college year was coming to an end.
Payal: I am going to tell my feelings to Mayank.
Nupur (shocked): WHAT!
Payal: what happened……you don’t look happy.
Nupur: No, its not like that. I am just shocked that how my shy baby Payal got so much strength that she is now going to confess her feelings. You’ve really grown up. I am proud of you.( pats her back)
Payal: Don’t tease me please……
They both hug each other.
Mayank: That’s it! Tomorrow I am going to tell Nupur that I love her. ( smiles blushingly)
The night fades by and the morning sun peeps through Payal’s rooms window.
Payal: The day of truth is here.(Smiles)
Nupur sees her picture with Mayank and Payal in her phone when she hears a knock on her door.
Payal: Nupur……open the door, it’s me.
Nupur wipes away her tears as she opens the door.
In the evening, Payal is about to call Mayank when she finds her phone’s battery dead.
Payal: Oh god……hey Nupur can I borrow your Phone.
Nupur: ya sure.
Nupur hands over her phone to Payal. Payal calls Mayank. He picks up the call.
Mayank: Hey I was just about to call you, I want to meet you urgently. Come at ABC Garden. Bye
Payal was just speechless while she blushed really hard and told about this to Nupur who had bittersweet feelings in her heart.
At a garden, A gazebo right in the center was beautifully decorated with lights.
As Payal enters the Gazebo, everything is dark over there, no traces of Mayank. Suddenly, she hears the voice of the man she loves.
Mayank: The day I first saw you was the best day of my life, when I saw in your beautiful eyes, in that very moment I lost my heart to you. In these 6 months I just waited to know you more and to love you more but the fact is I have already fallen for you in our very first meeting. I am not good at expressing feelings nor I can say heavy words, all I can say is I LOVE YOU.
As soon as he says this and switches on the lights, Mayank gets a shock. In front of him stands a Smiling Payal who’s on cloud nine and just can’t hold on her tears.
Payal: I LOVE YOU TOO.
Payal hugs Mayank.
Mayank breaks the hug.
Mayank: How can you do this to me NUPUR.
Nupur: I said I don’t Love you. You have to accept Payal.
Mayank: First tell me,……you don’t love me………tell me god dammit(shouts)
Nupur: Yes I love you (shouts even louder).
As this happens Payal enters the scene.
Payal: Then whats the problem.
Mayank and Nupur turn to see Payal.
Payal: Just because of my one-sided love you two just can’t fight like this and you Nupur just can’t sacrifice your love.
Payal: what I said do you remember, If I had to choose between love and friendship, I will choose friendship. So without any further drama, accept Mayank. (smiled tearfully)
Nupur hugs Payal
Payal(Laughs): Don’t hug me, hug your lover stupid.
Nupur and Mayank hugs whereas Payal decides to leave the lovebirds alone and to have some time alone for herself and decides to spend the night alone. As she is crossing the road…….THUD….a speeding car hits Payal……..Everything seems to fade away in front of Payal’s eyes…….she can see Nupur and Mayank running towards her……..Her head in Nupur’s lap……Mayank picking her up and taking her to the car……..Nupur trying to wake her up and consoling you. Only Payal’s voice can be heard in the background.
Dil ke dard ko chhupana kitna mushkil hai…..
Toot ke phir muskurana utna hi mushkil hai……..
Kisi ke saath door tak jao aur phir dekho…….
Akele laut ke aana kitna mushkil hai………
Little Girl: What even does this mean…….
Lady: when you will grow up you will understand everything.
Girl: so, did that girl died……?
Lady: no, death wasn’t in her fate. And even she got her love of her life as her prom date.
Girl: How……he didn’t love her
Lady: yes, but as a friend he took her and it was enough for her. Her happiness was just beyond her limits that day because it was spend with him.
Girl: then what happened……
Just then the girl’s mother calls for her
Lady: I think that’s enough for today
It is revealed that the girls parents are none other than Nupur and Mayank and the lady is Payal.
The screen freezes with all the four happily going to their house.
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