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RELAY OS COMPETITION: PHASE 1: ENTRY 2: SUM2 FOREVER :)

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HI, THIS IS DQ, PRESENTING YOU THE FIRST ENTRY OF THE COMPETITION, THE FIRST RELAY STORY.

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STORY 2: SUM2 FOREVER 🙂


A OBEDIENT DAUGHTER

character introduction:

SUMAN-Good nature.Kind hearted.loves her parents and sumit very much.
sumit-kind hearted.very soft.loves suman very much.
sunil-A successful cardioligst.parents only son.very kind nature.

let’s start….suman and sumit are new to college.They entered in college with lot’s of thoughts.seniors ragging juniors.Both saw that & feel very tensed.senior’s saw & call both suman & sumit.
seniors:r u freshers.
suman/sumit in unison:yes sir.
senior:then u have to wish seniors first.
suman/sumit:good morning seniors.
senior:first time we will leave from next time u guys have to wish in a special way.OK.
suman/sumit:ok sir.
senior:ok.introduce yourselves.
both introduced themselves.
senior:u both r friends or more than that.
suman:just now we meet sir.
senior:ok.go.
suman:thank u sir.
both suman & sumit went from their .both r seeing each other.
sumit:hey.Hi.I am sumit.
suman:suman.
sumit:which group u r .
suman:Msc.computer science.u
sumit:same.let’s be friends.
suman:sure.
then both went to class.after their college they didn’t meet each other.

at sumit home:
sumit is thinking about suman her expressions ,her voice mesmerised him at first sight.But he can’t able to know what feelings are those.That night he didn’t get sleep also.
next day in college:
sumit is waiting for suman.suman came in her car.
suman saw sumit from far only and feels very happy.sumit didn’t watch as he is thinking something.
suman:hi sumit.
sumit:is still thinking .
suman shake him then he came out of thoughts and mesmerised.she again shake him.
sumit:sorry suman.I didn’t saw u.
suman:it’s ok.
sumit:nice dress suman.u r looking gorgeous.
suman:thank u very much.my p.arents also say same when ever I wore this dress.
sumit:really.
suman:yes.u know I love my parents very much they also love me.
sumit:nice .me also.
suman:what
sumit(trying to cover):nothing .I am saying that I love (in thinking)u (to suman)my parents.
suman:wow u & me r same to same.
sumit:ya.lets move to class its getting late.
While in class a guy commented suman.With that suman started crying.sumit saw all these and his eyes r went red in anger.He started beating that guy.
suman went & stop him and left class with sumit.
suman:please cool down sumit.
sumit:how dare he has to comment u .
suman:sumit this is common thing in colleges.
sumit:these is common here u r crying is these is common.
with that words suman feels like
suman:I am very lucky to have a friend like u.
sumit feels very happy.
sumit:go home its getting late.
both went to home.
suman is not able to forget sumit & his words

@ Night
Suman – Y do I feel like Sumit is important for me…. Why do he often come in my dreams ya thoughts…. Let me say it to him tomorrow morning….

Morning
@ College
Sumit is waiting for for a long tym …. Nearly 15 mins he thought to go & check her out suddenly an Golden coloured Lamborghini car passes through the college gate.. every boy’s eyes are on the car so do Sumit’s …. All of sudden the car entered the college and stopped in Front of Sumit ….. A bodyguard gets out of the car
Bodyguard- Sir kindly get in the car … It is madam’s order
Sumit(who is already confused)- who is Ur madam huh… I’LL not come anywhere….
Bodyguard- here madam is calling you talk to her ( He gives the phone to Sumit)
On call- hello Sumit it’s me Suman
Sumit- yah say Suman … I have been waiting for u past 15 mins where are u…
Suman- Just get in the car Sumit I’ll explain u
Before Sumit could reply the call ended to which Sumit responded by getting into the car…
The car took him to a wired place where an another Golden Lamborghini parked … He got out of car he was amused by the sight yet his eyes waited for getting the sight of his princess….
There he saw Suman perfectly dressed as royal
Suman- Sumit I’m here just come..
Sumit-wht is the matter Suman y have u called me here
Suman explained him her situation tat whenever her eyelids take over her eyes she could only see a face with alcoholic eyes tat is Sumit’s…
Sumit felt happy tat the other end was also of the same feeling of him …. They both confessed Thier love ….. Thier relationship grew as fast as a bamboo …… they became inseperables they just selflessly loved eachother…. Soon Thier college lyf came to an end tats when a turn of table took place
@ after 4 years
Sumit-Suman we hav 4 days left for Farewell party… After that it’s hard for us to meet each other… Wht are u gonna do
Suman – I donno Sumit I think it’s better to talk to mumma papa abt this …. Wht do u say…
Sumit – well u talk to Ur parents 2dy after listening to the respond I’ll ask my parents to visit ur’s…. All Will be fine…

@ Suman’s house

(Competition organizers’ note: I just received this much of the writer’s story… unfortunately.. I tried contacting the participant regarding this but I did not receive any reply)
Suman’s House
Suman came to her parents’ room at night n just sat beside her papa, fidgeting with her fingers.
Suman’s father: What happened Suman? Do you want to say something?
Suman: papa, I know you love me the most..
Suman’s father: n I know you love me the most. Now tell me what is it?
Suman: Papa..actually I.. Papa, there’s a boy in my college, Sumit. He’s very nice. He helps me in everything. N Papa, I..I rilli like him, Papa. We both love each other Papa. Papa, please meet him once, I’m sure you’ll rilli like him.
Suman’s father agrees n suman calls Sumit to meet her parents the next day.

Next day
Sumit has come to Suman’s house to meet her parents. They have some formal introductory talks.
Suman’s father: so, Sumit, how’s your professional life going?
Sumit: uncle, I’ve applied for job in some companies.
Suman’s father: so who earns for your family?
Sumit: my father.
Suman’s father: anything you earn will be spent on your family, how will you keep my daughter happy? She will be burdened by responsibilities, which I don’t want. I want my daughter to have all comforts in her life.
Suman: Papa, he loves me a lot, I’ll be very happy with him.
Suman’s father: Suman, I’m your father. I know what’s good for you. Infact, I want the best for you. N Sumit is not the best for you. Go to your room.
Suman, being the obedient daughter that she is, goes to her room, while she n Sumit have an eyelock.

Next day
Suman’s mother had asked her to get ready as her father’s friend was going to visit them, with his family. Suman wasn’t interested in it but agreed, only for her father’s happiness. The guests arrived. The elders greeted each other. Finally after some time pass talks, they cane to the point.
Suman’s father’s friend: we want to fix our one n only son, Sunil’s marriage alliance with your daughter Suman. Only if you n Suman agree.
Suman’s father: of course. Your sin is a true gem, we surely don’t want to lose him.
Sunil’s father: n what do you want to say, Suman?
Suman is too numb to say anything. Sunil notices this.
Sunil: Suman, you don’t hv to hurry. Take your time.
After having dinner, the guests leave. Suman is sitting in her room, after changing into something comfortable.

Suman thinks of her n Sumit’s happy times. How they met, how they became friends, fell in love, confessed it n their college life as a couple. N today, she is in this situation. Her father has rejected her love n has chosen someone else for her. She knows that her parents would always want get happiness n choose the best for her. But what about Sumit. What about her love. What about the time they spent together, making their love stronger every time. She was facing the biggest dilemma of her life. On one side, she had her love, Sumit; n on the other side she had her parents. On one side she had d person she wants to spend her life with; n on the other side r her parents, who r d reason of whatever she is today. On one side is the person who will keep her happy; n on the other side is Sunil, d person who will keep her happy n her parents will be happy seeing her with him. How could she choose one of them?? N who should she choose?

Thinking all these things, pearls started coming from her eyes. She did not realize that she was crying. She was not able to decide. The room was very dark as she did not turn the lights on. Suddenly it started raining. Suman went to the balcony. Her silky smooth hair were flying because of the cold breeze. She folded her hands and gazed at the sky that was crying with her.

Suman’s Point of View (She was telling/talking to/with sky and speaking in mind)

What happened sky? Why are you crying? for me? or with me? You know what happened? I love a boy named sumit.(in a dim voice) His financial condition is not that good as mine (in a bit cheerful tone) but but He will keep me happy i am sure. (In a dim tone) But My parents want me to marry Sunil, a boy who is my father’s friend’s son! I don’t even know him! How will I marry him.(In a confused tone) If I choose Sumit, then he will provide me with a lot of love. He won’t let me down.(In a convincing voice) yes i will have some financial problems (in assuring tone) but i will get love so It will be HAPPILY EVER AFTER! but I will lose my parents!(in a confusing and dim tone) and IF I CHOOSE SUNIL then i would be financially well off. I would be able to get everything i like PHYSICALLY but Emotionally? Even if he would start loving me…I will not be able to love him! It would never be happily ever after for me! but i will have my parents by my side. I don’t know what to do!! Sky tell me something naaaa!! (Suddenly there was lightening which lightened her dark room for a fraction of second,revealing her red hopeless eyes father standing in her room staring her helplessly.)
(In a confused tone)Please sky tell something. What should I do? Go against my parents of listen them? Marry My love of MY Parents’ choice? Marry Sumit or Sunil?

Her POV ENDS~

She cries vigorously.

Suman’s Father’s POV

Suman, I am doing this only for you . I gave you everything you wanted. I bought everything you liked. Sumit will not be able to complete your needs! Love cannot feed empty stomach. All these Love and soulmate are filmy thingsI hope you understand this soon!! Hey God help my daughter! Give her courage to forget Sumit and give a chance to Sunil.

POV ENDS~

HERE,
Sumit was also standing outside, in his balcony. He was crying and his eyes were filled with rage and tears and sadness.
He was not able to bear his rejection, after all he loves Suman! His mother came to him holding an umbrella.

“Sumi what happened?”asked his mother
“Nothing Ma” replied Sumit in a sad tone
“Sumi you will not tell this to your maa?? OH wait you went to meet suman’s parents right? something happened there?” asked his mother in a tensed tone.
Sumit told everything to her mother!
“Sumi beta call her tomorrow! I will talk to her!” said his mother in a assuring tone
“Maa” said sumit crying and hugged his mother tightly.
She hugged him back and kissed him.

@Sumit’s house

Suman was sitting wearing traditional dress with an expressionless face. Sumit’s family was treating her like princess.

All were treating her as a princess !!! She was on cloud nine to get so much of love and care from his family . What an irony !!!!! She wished to live in a family like that and in the verge of getting it , she is gonna lose it !!!! Her mom came to Her and advised her to listen to her heart and left .

She was staring the sky blankly after she reached her home when sunil tapped her shoulder ,

“Hey sunil !!!! What’s up ???”

“Nothing yaar why are those pearls disturbing you ???”

She then realised that she was crying and wiped her tears with the back of her palms and composed herself ,”tell me what happened ??? Is there anything important ????”

“Are you in love ????? I don’t want to bet around the bush so tell me clearly !!!”

“Nothing like that !!!!”

“Something is there !!!”

“Yes ….. “*She broke down *

“Yeah I ….I… *Sob * love .. *sumit *”

“Happa !!!! Yayyyyyyy !!!! I ‘m really happy !!!! you also love someone !!!! Why don’t you go and tell your father !!!”

“Why didn’t you tell your parents ????”

“Because I don’t love anyone !!!!”

“What ????” Doubtfully

“Yeah I just wanted you to tell me everything that’s why I lied to you !!! Now also there is time go and tell your parents !!!”

“No I don’t want to hurt my dad !!!”

“What about sumit and most importantly you ????”

“It’s okay we ‘ll live !!!”

He gave up in defeat ,Before he was about to leave he turned back and smiled at her ,”Don’t take your decision in a haste . Listen to your heart !!!It ‘ll answer all your queries about you and your sumit ‘s love !!!!” With this he left .

After few hours , he called sumit ,

“Hello is this sumit ???”

“Yes !!!”

“I ‘m Suman ‘s fiancé !!! I just want to talk to you !!! Can I meet you tomorrow at 5 PM ???”

“Yes sure ”

Both met in the park the next day ,

“So what are you planning to do sumit ???”

“What is suman upto ???”

“She wants to marry me !!! ”

*He sighed *

“Won’t you fight for your love ????”

“I believe in my love !!! If my love is true then whatever happens we ‘ll be together in the end !!!”

“Man we aren’t in those filmy era !!!”

Sunil saw sumit ‘s eyes welled up &spoke ,”I ‘m sorry but the thing is that only you would keep her happy till the end !!! So please keep her happily !!! That’s my request !!!” With this sumit bid bye &left that place .

After a week it was suman ‘s . Before an hour of their marriage , suman ‘s sister ran to her father and informed him that suman is not there in her room and after hearing that sunil thought something and smiled . Here all were confused what would have happened ???? Sunil asked them to come with him

Here in a dark place a man ‘s hands are tied and when observed closely it’s sumit . A man came and asked him to get ready and come out !!! When he came out he saw a beautifully adorned place with suman in the middle for the second time in the same way in front of him

“will you marry me ???”she asked

Sumit smiled in between his tears & she went near him & asked how was her kidnapping ???? It was mine &sunil ‘s plan !!! He helped me !!! He widened his eyes in shock & pulled her close and hugged her and whispered ,” I ‘ll marry you rowdy girl ”

Sunil reached there with both the family and sumit married suman in front of them &parents blessed them happily !!! Suman thanked sunil through gestures for bringing her parents here !!!

THE END


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