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RELAY OS COMPETITION: PHASE 1: ENTRY 1: MAHIDAY :)

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HI, THIS IS DQ, PRESENTING YOU THE FIRST ENTRY OF THE COMPETITION, THE FIRST RELAY STORY.

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STORY 1: MAHIDAY

Camera zooms into flight where a beautiful girl with sad face sitting besides her father cluching his hand
Dad- Mahira dear I know that you are very sad because you are living your place and friends but in rahgarh also you can find new friends dear
Mahira- but dad , my all my friends stays in devgarh not here. But don’t feeling bad dad im ok ..
Dad- that’s like a good girl.
He kisses her on her forehead.
Soon flight lands.
Both mahira and her father took a cab and goes to some place,
Meanwhile mahira scans the new city while far different than her old city with tall buildings , wide roads, well maintained traffic and little more pollution also, little more noisy.
Even though she like the new city but still misses devgarh,

The screen shifts to mansion,
A boy is shown in sleeping in his king size bed.
Boy’s mom- uday get up its time to go to school dear..get up..
Uday- mom only 2 mins please.
Mom- you will get up or shall I call your dad.
Nooooo., I will mom go..he said
He got ready for the school and came down for [email protected]
Dinning hall is shown with long dinning table and variety of dishes..
He ate breakfast and went to school.

Here mahira goes into her new house near by her uncle Raj’s house and gets ready to go to new school as raj already took admission in the school

Both uday and mahira comes to school .
Uday goes to class and mahira goes to her class..
Uday is somewhat naughty , fun loving but respects girls very much..
Mahira is calm, bulby and intelligent girl, little resevred.

Mahira enters the class and scans the whole class which well furinished but little noisy which was created by students.
Slowly she moves in and try to sit in first but few girls blocks her and says this is their place..gradually she reaches last bench and sits there.
Teacher comes to their class and class starts..

Screen shifts to uday’s class.

Uday enters in the class and did hifi and hugs his friends..
He chitchat with his friend .. Meanwhile teacher comes and starts the class.

Time passed, mahira had now turned into beautiful young woman, with time she had adjusted herself with this new world, due to her kind nature she had become the pet of everyone.
A beautiful girl is standing in mid of hall, all of sudden lights goes off and flashlight fall on her, making her more brighter than star, she squeeze her eyes and kept her hands to cover her eyes as she couldn’t take the intensity of light when she felt some cold hand dragging her hand down, she was mesmerize to see the dark manly eyes looking deep at her, It was like he was hypnotizing her, he slip his hand to her petite waist and made her to waltz dance, she forgot to breath, experience this new feeling, gosh how badly she wanted to see his face but it was impossible because of his mask, he suddenly stopped and cup her face, her breath became uneven when he forward to kiss her, she closed her eyes … MAHIRA ‘she waked up from her deep sleep panting heavily
Get up or else u will miss your 1st day of college ‘her dad said,
MAHIRA: 18 year old sweet, cute girl
I’m up dad’ said mahira, she started getting ready for her 1st day, god what was that, who was he, y he always comes to my dream, she sigh, I think I should stop reading these romantic novels or else he won’t stop bothering me, but y my dream always broke before we kiss, OMG mahira u had gone mad, I smile at my stupidity and leave to college after saying dad bye.
Rajgarh, what should I tell u about this country, beautiful hill, forts, one of the main tourist attraction, every year lakhs of people visit here, it’s a different world and in this world me, mahira a girl belong to small hometown is ready to face new challenge of surviving in one of the best college ‘she sigh looking at the hustle bustle of her college, she started walking towards the college when a bike crossed her almost making her fall
WTH ‘she yelled, bike stopped, the guy who was riding came to her, he took of his helmet and look deep in her eyes, for a moment the world stopped for mahira, she got mesmerized
UDAY’ his friend yelled ‘hurry up we have to go
Uday smile devilishly, ‘sorry, I didn’t mean to hurt u’ he left,
I have seen these dark eyes before ‘thought mahira

Mahira was walking through the college corridor…lost in thoughts.. oh God….i have seen those eyes…but where…think Mahira…think….think.. suddenly her eyes got widened,mouth opened and jumped in excitement.. “ yes…..yes….I got him…I got him..he is the one who came in my dream” she yelled… without realising everyone else looked at her being crazy… Mahira… closed her eyes..cover her face with hands and started to run..from there…being embarrassed…
She was running like somebody chasing her..so he bumped into someone and about to fall…but she didn’t hit the floor..she felt two pair of hands held her back… she opened her eyes to saw…the same beautiful eyes again… Mahira felt like her breath stopped… he looked deep into her eyes… Mahira wanted drown in the deepness of his eyes…
Uday smiled…” hey….careful…”
He made her stand up…. Uday asked “you ok..”
Mahira…was speechless….she just nodded her head with blank face… Uday felt an uneasiness while Mahira still staring him… Uday left there with his friends…. Mahira came back to reality…after he left… she completed all the formalities to enroll…

Mahira was really passionate in music…so she enquired about Vocal band in the college… the band leader asked her “ Mahira if you want to be a part of band you have to prove it.. ok.. tomorrow night..there will be a Freshers party.. you have a chance.. be ready..”
Mahira shook her head in pleasure… she came near the curved part of corridor looked around the college… it’s really fully covered in greenery… she inhaled deeply… she looked down to saw Uday sitting on his bike chitchat with his friends… her lips curved up…

Next day…she practiced all night…but still nervous.. she was eagerly waiting on back stage… just then she called for the performance.. Mahira took deep breaths…came in front of the people who were busy in partying.. nobody paying attention to her..
She looked at crew members… they gestured her to start…

Mahira closed her eyes…she can hear her heart beat.. getting faster… then started to sing(Sun Raha hai na… from Ashiqui 2)… Everyone mesmerized with the beauty of her sound…they all stopped whatever they were doing..and moved as if they were under some magic spell…

Uday was partying outside with his friends..but the voice was pulled him where party was taking place.. he saw Mahira singing.. she wears a white anarkali with silver work on it along with matching silver earrings… he felt like intoxicated by her magical voice.. when she stopped..a loud applause was ringing in the hall…

Mahira heading back to home after party.. she was busy in checking her phone in her bag.. didn’t noticed drink spilled on the floor… she slipped..but Uday catches her in time.. she opened to see the eyes again..
He made her up..composed himself but Mahira staring him.. Uday rolled up his eyes..
Uday “ why you always staring at me like you saw some ghost..”
Mahira didn’t respond.. Uday nodded her head..in disappoint..he took a soft drink can started to drink..

Uday “hello… “ he snapped his fingers made her out of trance…
Mahira “ I..I..have seen you before.. ”
Uday “hmm…yeah yesterday…”
Mahira “ no.. “
Uday looked at her quizzically… “ from outside…”
Mahira “ no….in my dream…”

Mahira said it innocently…Uday spitted out the soft drink…and gazed at her in disbelief. “ wh…what….seriously.. ”

Mahira nodded.

“Why have you seen me in your dream?” Uday asked her.

Mahira shrugs fakely.

“Because I love you Uday” Mahira thought in her head.

Uday snapped his fingers infront of her.

“Anyway I’ll meet you tomorrow” Said Uday and he waved slowly as he left.

Mahira managed a slow wave.

……

Mahira skipped along the streets happily. Mahira was overwhelmed of the fact that Uday talked to him and also catched her with his arms.
Mahira opened her door slowly.

“Mama I’m home” she shouted.

She ran to her bedroom and kept her bag on her bed. She quickly opened her cupboard and took a box out.

“Here it is” she mumbled.

She opened it and kissed the pictures which were in it.

“I love you Uday!!”

She took the pictures of Uday out and smiled.

With the sound of her Mum’s footsteps she quickly kept her box back in the cupboard.

“Mahira” she said.

“yes?” she asked

“How was your song?” she asked sitting beside her.

She smiled at her.

“It was awesome mama!!” she said.

Her mum hugged her.

“I’m so proud of you” she mumbled.

…..

Mahira took her books and started walking to her class.

“Mahira” came a voice.

Mahira looked back and saw Uday.

“Uday?”

“Mahira..I’m moving my house..” said Uday, after he came back and stood opposite Mahira.

“What?” asked Mahira.

Mahira was shocked. She thought that Uday was leaving her and the school.

“Next to your house!” Uday replied.

……

As Normal Mahira took the pictures and kissed it.

“I can’t believe you are moving next to my house.”

Mahira looked out of her window. She saw the big mansion next to her house.

A very rich family has lived there before, but as they were going abroad they selled their house.

“I can’t believe Uday is going to be my neighbour” She screamed.

Next day in college
“Mahira” called Uday. For Mahira it was as if the world stood still. Oh how good her name sounded from his mouth. “Hey Mahira, I wanted to invite you to my housewarming party on New Year’s Eve. Well you must be knowing that the Royal Family always organizes a ball on New Year’s Eve so we have kindda combined it with the housewarming party.”
“Hey Uday! Can I ask you something? You are the Prince of Rajgarh and you live in such a beautiful palace, then why are you shifting?” asked a confused Mahira innocently.
“Well the palace is going under a major renovation so we’ll have to shift you see. Okay so now I’ll get going. But you must come to the party. You’ll get the Royal invite soon but I thought to inform you in person. See you in the party dear neighbor. Bye.”

It was soon the day of the party. The Royal House was beautifully decorated in the colors of purple and silver. In the center was the dance floor and in one corner stood a Christmas tree. It was beautifully decorated with bells, fairy lights and a golden star sitting at the top. There was a soft music playing in the background and the waiters were moving all around with trays of glasses of Champagne.
As I entered looking around in complete awe, my eyes fell on Uday. Never before in my life had I seen him look so good. As he looked up at me and I got sucked in his eyes, his grey eyes sparkled as he watched me walk down to him. I got a closer look at what he was wearing; a pair of black trousers, white shirt and black blazer, perfectly styled hair. Oh well he really looked dashing. “Stop staring” I scolded myself.
As I neared him, he walked towards me, took my hand and gently kissed it. “Oh so much of a gentleman, aren’t you?” I am surprised that I actually spoke that. I just went numb when he kissed me I was sure that I wouldn’t be able to say even a word.
He grinned. “I’m just glad those awful lessons in ‘acting the noble’ I had to go to as a child could be put to good use.” I couldn’t help but chuckle hearing that. “Could I ask this gorgeous lady standing in front of me for a dance?” He said as he asked for my hand.
I felt all eyes on us as we entered the dance floor. I was dancing with the prince after all. I was really getting nervous. But as I looked into his eyes, all the nervousness vanished. All the other people in the room blurred out. It was just me and him. It was how this was supposed to be. It was perfect. It was just like the dream I often had. As we danced to the beats of the music, and I looked into his grey orbs, I recognized the masked face in my dream. The mask dropped and I finally saw my man’s face. It was him.
I don’t know what our fate will be. I don’t know what destiny has in store for us. Will he ever know how much I love him? Will he ever love me or he just sees me as his friend? Will he ever be mine? Will I ever get to say ‘I do’? Will this girl from the small town of Devgarh, a nobody, get her Prince Charming, the Prince of Rajgarh? That only time will tell. But for now we were together and that is what mattered the most!

THE END



NOTE: ALL OF THESE WORDS ARE WORK OF 5 WONDERFUL WRITERS! AND I HAVE ONLY PUT UP AS MUCH AS I HAVE RECEIVED FROM THEM.

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11 Comments
  1. Honey

    I vote for this….lovely crafted story

  2. Zaveesha

    I vote for this….
    A big kudos to all the 5 writers…

  3. Varshni

    I vote for this

  4. Tvfan1

    Wow!!!
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  5. Fenil

    Cool
    well written !!
    I Vote For It.

  6. Aadya114

    I vote for it.
    It was just awesome👏✊👍. Looked like it was written by a single person.

  7. Naina0411

    Lovely! 😍
    I vote for this.

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  10. Tanz

    If the deadline for voting would not have ended, I would have definitely voted for it….
    The catch of this story was the ending….You didn’t give it a’ happily ever after’ ending and that was what I liked the most…. overall too the story was incredible…great work 😀

  11. AMkideewani

    If would have voted for this story as it’s mindblowing, if the deadline would have been still on

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