Regretted Revenge (SwaSan) Shot 1 by Marsuu

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Hello!!! This is Mars with a new Story on of course swasan. Before starting I want to say that don’t expect so much of sweetness and cuteness in this Story bcoz its a revenge story. As most of my stories are funny simple and cute type but this will be an intense love story with hatred. I tried something new. I really don’t know whether you all will like it or not but give a chance to it.
Let’s begin

Regretted Revenge(SwaSan)
Shot 1:
In a huge stadium,a concert is going on. Crowd is shouting “Sanskar Sanskar” as he is the one who is performing. Observing inside, one can easily guess his craze in girls as majority of girls are present there. He is singing with full passion.
Then only a girl in simple dress entered in the crowd hurriedly as if trying to take one glance of this handsome hunk. Pushing the crowd, she moved forward and stood near the stage. She also started hooting and shouting indicating that she is also crazy fan of this rockstar.
Sanskar stopped singing as he finished his one song and one staff member bought water for him. Now the noise is decreased.While sanskar was drinking water, she heard someone shouted from the audience and of course it’s girl’s voice.
” I love you Sanskar sir”
Its not the first time someone said him I love you. Being very popular, every day many girls propose him on social sites or sometimes directly but he always take that for fun but this confession straightly hit his heart. It remained him of his ex- love when she confessed
[“I love you sanskar” shouted swara standing at the cliff and the echo of her voice can be heard through long distance.
” love you tooo swara” followed Swara’s voice was sanskar’s.]
He smile sadly bcoz he is in dilemma whether he should consider that moment as best or worst. Soon his confused eyes got filled with rage as he remembered the true face of his so called love, swara.
His trance was broken when she saw a girl waving her hand and she again shouted
” I really love you sir”.
Sanskar was trying to see her face as he wants to know who is this girl who reminded him his past love. At last, getting the clear view of the beautiful face of that girl, his eyes widen and lips were able to mumble only one name and that is “Swara”.
Same hazel doe eyes, enchanting lips, slightly pink cheeks and long black hairs as always wandering on her pretty face. He felt like going across the crowd and bring that girl no no she is not any random girl but his ex. His eyes got filled with anger and hatred.
When the man from backstage asked him to sing, he adjusted her guitar and started singing passionately staring at swara with blood shot eyes.Swara is completely unaware of someone’s dangerous glares.

As the concert ended, Sanskar looked for swara but she vanished from the crowd. He stamp his foot on the floor as after damm 3 years he got her and how can he let her go that easily.
He went to waiting room where laksh was waiting for him. Laksh is his friend and pa. Sanskar has given the responsibility of finding swara to him but he failed till now.
Sanskar loudly closed the door showing his anger
Laksh: why u r upset??? The concert went successful.
Sanskar: She was here.
He said roaming his hand frustratedly through his hairs.
Laksh(confused): who???
Sanskar (shouted): swara
Laksh: she was here???? Not possible I had searched her in whole mumbai she was no where.
Sanskar: she is here in Mumbai and I can never do mistake of not recognizing her.
Laksh: u r obsessed with swara first for love and now for revenge.
Sanskar: yes I want revenge for double crossing Sanskar Maheshwari and I want her laksh at any cost.
Laksh: okay calm down I will activate my detectives they will surely find if she will be here
Sanskar took deep breathe trying to calm his inner turmoil.

A simple house is seen and girl tip toed inside trying to escape from her mother. As she reached till hall, her mother came from kitchen and asked
Shomi: where were you swara??
Swara(bite her lips): I was with my Friend.
Shomi: ohhh really but I think u went to see concert.
Swara(smiles sheepishly): you are very smart mom u know I can’t miss sanskar’s concert when its in Mumbai.
Shomil(seriously): why u love him so much?
Swara: I don’t know but whenever I see him or talk about him I can feel different happiness in my heart like I know him from ages.
Shomi: go and fresh up.
Swara: okay
Swara went to her room.
Shomi(teary eyes): u don’t know swara what an intense relation you have with sanskar.
She signed sadly and went from there.

Maheshwari house:
Sanskar entered inside his room and went to a pic and keep on staring it don’t know for how much time.
He got back to that worst night of his life which broke him to the core and turned that sweet loving boy to living devil.
[ Sanskar: swara u here??
Swara smirks and said
Swara: u did a big mistake by trusting me.
She said with venom in her voice. Sanskar look in her eyes which were totally blank.
Before sanskar could say anything, he felt sharp pain in his stomach. As
he looked down, blood was flowing profusely. He looked at swara who was holding knife filled with his red blood. Yes she stabbed him,his love of life stabbed him. His physical pain got overcome with his inner pain which his heart is feeling after facing his love’s betrayal.
Sanskar fall on the ground as his legs denied to support him. His eyes are still fixed on swara who has no expressions neither happy sad pain guilt regret nothing.
Swara came close to him and whisper
Swara: keep lying here till you die.
She got up and left from there leaving Sanskar fighting between life and death.
Sanskar’s eyes got heavy and eventually got closed.]

Sanskar is still looking at the pic. The pic is of swara he roam his hand on the frame and said
Sanskar: its pay back time baby now you will know the worst consequences of backstabbing Sanskar maheshwari.
He angrily threw that photo on the floor breaking it’s glass into several pieces
He passed stepping on the pic and went to the bar in his huge mansion and started drinking.

Gododia House:
Swara is lying on her bed and loud music is playing, she is listening sanskar’s songs. Her room walls have sanskar’s poster. She is seriously mad for him. She never understand that whether its just fan’s love or something else. She often get dreams when Sanskar kiss him and she can actually feel his touch.
Shomi entered inside the room and saw swara sleeping. She switched off the music system and covered the comforter on swara. Kissing her forehead she went from there.
To be continued….

Precap: SwaSan face off

Let me tell firstly only that Sanskar may have little gray shade but don’t blame me that this story is in swara’s favor or something bcoz she is also not that innocent. U also try to think by reversing their characters it won’t suit. So as it’s the demand of the story that’s why I m making it like this.
And it’s not like rebirth type so don’t take your thinking towards that side.
Its just a fan fiction and more over my imagination so plz its humble request that don’t Compare this swasan with serial. I know such things doesn’t suit to swasan but remember their tashan after six months leap while reading.
If you really want to read further then leave your comments.
Sorry for this long lecture but I want to clear everything and plzz no bashing.
Thank you
Bye
Take care

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56 Comments
  1. Mars I am confused but for bhi teri story hit hone wali hai . whenever I am reading ur story I am imagining swasan it seems impossible for me not to do it .swasan r still coming in my dreams but this stupid colors n rs r not understanding .kuch jyaada bol diya na par marsu I can’t help it as it’s about our swasan .missing them so much.

    1. Mars

      Yeah me too missing swasan a lot๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž๐Ÿ˜ž but nothing can be done well thank you dear tc

  2. Superb yar…. This is really interesting โคโคโค
    N I think swara has forgotten everything…
    Bt wanna knw that why swara did this…
    Plz update soon โคโค

    1. Mars

      Wait for the upcoming story everything will be clear thank you dear will post soon tc

  3. Awesome dear I loved it it’s interesting dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  4. well its really nyc u are trying something different and well just change your way of writing also

    1. Mars

      Well I was also thinking to change my way of writing as it will be boring when we read same type thank you tc

  5. NDSG

    Again new story ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Loved this grey shaded Sanku๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ . no matter how much he hates her bit he can’t stop loving her.
    Flashback is great shock๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ
    Shona stabbed Sanku. I’m still not able to believe in it. But kahi yeh lux soap to kamina nahi h…
    Shomi knows the truth… ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฐ too much suspense… Uff can’t wait for reading more

    1. Mars

      Right Sanskar’s love for swara can never be overpowered by his hatred๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ dhekte hai kyun aur kaise huya mai nahi btane vali๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ
      I will continue soon thank you depuu dear tc

  6. Tamil

    Awesome……Interesting…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  7. Komal

    Its quite interesting.. And u know what, this kind of plot really attracts me.. Waiting for it eagerly.. Its something new.. Try to post next part soon…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear glad you liked it will surely try to post soon tc

  8. I love to read further baby.it’s really interesting concept.iam damn sure thus story will shine yourself as a mature writter.
    All the best

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you dear I will be mature writer????? I doubt๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› tc

  9. Samaira_khan

    Amazing yaar marsuu uff swara hating his swara not possible.. And abt swara I don’t think it was her as seriously stabbing Sanskar..
    ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ฉ
    I guess tht its swara only stabbing Sanskar and she lost her memory and now startrd loving him.. No idea Eagerly waiting.. It’s quite interesting though..

    1. Mars

      Wait wait wait I m not gona reveal anything๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ thank you dear I will post soon tc

  10. Abirsha

    Interesting continue soon.

    1. Mars

      Thank you di will continue soon tc

  11. Amazing starting….waiting for nxt part

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  12. Amazng …. Different concept… Awsm…post soon
    ..

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  13. AnuAnn

    Interesting marssu.. continue soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc

  14. Harneet

    LOOVED IT …. its so suspicious story ….. waiting …. for next part sooon …. plzz

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  15. Japnaaz_gill

    Ripu dear…u always amaze me wid ur writing ……superb story….quite diffrnt frm ur previous stories….loved it …keep rocking Ripu darling ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Mars

      Thank you diii it really means a lot tc

  16. Superr dearr

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  17. Mumpi

    Wow !!!! Again a new story day too revenge type.. loved it. Continue yrr and post it in wattpad too.

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue on wattpad also tc

  18. I absolutely loved it..the concept is very different from ur other stories..I’m glad u r exploring and trying new things..
    would love to read further..tc๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you dear I’m glad to know you loved it will continue soon tc

  19. Adishu

    this is a killer one… I loveddd it… post soon…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  20. Nice concept. Post next part soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post soon tc

  21. Mica

    hihihihi, i always laughing to watch our swasan tashan after 6 month leap.. and now also.. love it

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear even I enjoy swasan tashan alot tc

  22. Interesting

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  23. Awesome….interesting… Continue soon

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will continue soon tc

  24. Jo bhi karana bas SwaSan ko mila dena separate mat karna

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear let’s see what happened in the story tc

  25. Gayathri.visu

    OMG….OMG! What was this Marsuuuu? Damn interesting yaar…. Sanskaar is grey shaded n somewhat Swara too…..unbelievable girl!!!! Keep going….

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear glad you like let’s see what is swasan in this story??? tc

  26. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear tc

  27. interesting i love it..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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