Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Epilogue

We are finally at the end of the story. Thanks for all your support. Take care. until we meet again – Azure


5 years later

Sanskar entered the offices of M2W, returning back from an out of town meeting. M2W was the name of the architecture consultancy firm that he and Ragini has started, after her masters, with her friend Mark Wright.

Sanskar opened the door to his wife’s office, without making much noise. He saw her working, completely engrossed in her designs, even as she was trying to respond to Mark. Mark was in a jolly mood and was guffawing at some joke, that Sanskar was sure, he had told Ragini himself. Sanskar looked at him annoyed. Crumpling a piece of paper that he found nearby, he shot it at Mark, hitting him on the side of his face.

“bl**dy hell!” Mark said annoyed, as he turned to look at the source of the mischief.

Sanskar glared at him.

Mark responded to his expression with a “Mate!” and a shrug “What was I supposed to do?” he said justifying his actions “You cannot always get your wife to do what you want; how can you expect me to! As if she is going to listen to me!”

Ragini was amused by their interaction, a smile playing on her lips even as she continued to focus on her work without turning to look at them.

“I went off for that site inspection, with one request for you!” Sanskar said, still glaring at him “One simple request!

“Why do you think I am here keeping an eye on her” Mark told Sanskar, before turning to Ragini “Rags! Don’t kill me for this. It is all his doing” he told her, protecting himself from any retribution from Ragini and his girlfriend, and her best friend, Megan. He could handle Ragini alone, but the two of them together were bad, especially with the third one from their group Cat joined in. He turned to Sanskar, who, for the time being, was the immediate threat to him “You know I was keeping her happy and stress free while you were away” he tried to explain

“You were supposed to keep her from stressing too much by working continuously” Sanskar pointed out to him

“Hey, you try doing that!” Mark told him “You know you could thank me for putting my work aside and sitting with her all this time. I do have that meeting with the Bishops, to go over their plans, this evening. I am going to have to work my a*s off, to finish that on time”

“Sanskar! He really wasn’t at fault. He tried to stop me from working” Ragini finally told him, trying to save her poor friend.

“Thanks!” Sanskar muttered to Mark, half heartedly

“You are not getting off this easy. I am going to take a long break when Megan and I get married” Mark told him

“You need to pull yourself together to pop the question to her first” Sanskar said, now with an amused smile. It was a joke between the rest of the friends, outside Megan, because he had chickened out of doing it 4 times so far

Mark showed him the finger before adding “You try facing Megan and daring to ask her”

“You know, one of these days, she is going to propose to you instead” Sanskar said with a chuckle

“It would save me a hell lot of trouble; I am telling you!” Mark said as he made to leave the office. He turned back a bit and told Sanskar “You know you need the break more than her mate” he said tilting the head towards Ragini “You are going to drive yourself nuts!”

Sanskar rolled his eyes, but didn’t counter. Truth be told, he knew he was being a bit hyper – actually more than a bit – but then that was how he always seemed to be when it came to Ragini. He cared enough for her, for both of them and she in turn took enough care of him, for both of them.

Sanskar sighed as he slowly walked towards Ragini. She had tied her hair up, in a make shift bun, as she focused on her work. Sanskar rubbed her shoulders and neck as she worked. She sighed in relief “Was it hurting a lot?” he asked softly

“Not much’ she told him, without turning

“Liar!” Sanskar told her “You wanted to get the design done before you focused on it” he told her, voicing what they both knew “You need to stop pushing yourself so much. Why didn’t you get one of the interns to help you with this?” he asked her, knowing fully well what she was going to say

“I have spent the most amount of time with Emma and Jake. I know what they want from their home. I won’t be able to explain it to our interns, enough for them to translate it into the design. Emma and Jake have been working so hard for put the money together and build their own house, I want it to be everything that they want it to be” She told him

“And it will be” Sanskar assured her “But you need to take it easy as well” he told her

“I will. I just want to finish this while I can. You know our family is over in town, next week. I won’t be able to work for a while after that” she told him

“For a change, I am happy that everyone is going to be here” Sanskar admitted to her

“Sanskar!” she reprimanded him softly

“What! We never get privacy when they are around. I cannot even hug you without someone or the other disturbing us” Sanskar said a bit annoyed, before adding “But this time, they are going to ensure that you don’t work so much. You cannot get around them the same way you try to blackmail me”

“Sanskar!” Ragini said “I don’t blackmail you!” she said widening her eyes

“You don’t have to!” Sanskar told her “You wriggle your nose, pout and make puppy eyes at me and I give in, on my own”

Ragini giggled at his comment, but didn’t contradict him

Sanskar moved his hands to her lower back, massaging it for her “Feeling better?” he asked softly after a while

“Hmmm” Ragini said as she rested against his chest

“Why are you using this chair when we got you that special one?” he asked her

“I am used to this one” Ragini said making a face “The other one feels odd”

Sanskar shook his head, but didn’t say anything. He continued the massage her lower back for a while

“You are the best! Do you know that?” Ragini said sighing after a while

“I know” Sanskar said with a chuckle “I have been told that by someone very special” he said, kissing her hair. He wrapped his hands around her pregnant belly, caressing it gently “I cannot wait for Aru to be born” he told her

“You have been cranky lately!” Ragini told him teasingly “It is close to the due date after all!”

“Not you too!” Sanskar told her with a chuckle “You know that once our family is here, they are going to annoy you enough to make up for all the leg pulling that you and the rest have been indulging it, at my expense”

“You will save me from them won’t you?” Ragini said pouting a bit

“Not a chance! I am going to join them in making sure you get some rest in this last week before the due date” Sanskar told her, rubbing her belly gently

“You are bad!” Ragini complained

“But you still love me” Sanskar told her, with a kiss on her cheek

“Yup!” Ragini said as they staying there in each other’s embrace for a while, before Ragini gently brought the topic he had always avoided “You know we are going to be parents soon. We will enter a new phase” she said. Sanskar nodded against her neck, even as she continued “May be it is time to leave the bad things of the past behind and mend relationships” she said softly

Sanskar sighed. He knew who she was talking about. Laksh. They had spoken about it before, but knew why she still was trying “We have spoken about this before” he said, starting on that note “If it was just the prank, I would have forgiven and forgotten it long back. You know why I cannot forgive him” Sanskar said, even as she laid her hand on his, which was wrapped around her belly “He was lusting after you, despite being clearly aware of your relation with the family and with me. He pretended to be hurt to lure me into the trap, knowing fully well that I would be hurt. I went for the sake of family, but he didn’t think twice before hurting me – forget that I was his brother, he didn’t even think about it for his family. He was more bothered about saving his own skin. That is not what family does. I cannot forgive that nor can I forget it.”

“Badi Maa looks so sad every time she sees the two of you in a room and still being distant” Ragini said softly “I feel bad for her”

“I do too” Sanskar admitted “But this time I cannot overlook what has happened. I cannot trust him again when it comes to our family. I cannot trust him when it comes to us and especially not now with Aru soon joining us.”

Ragini knew as always, he was right. It was different when they were risking themselves for the family, and the expecting the other one to be strong. She felt that Laksh had changed. She could have asked Sanskar to give him a chance, for her sake and or the family and she had. She had wondered if she, they, were being a bit selfish. She knew Sanskar had as well, even when he wasn’t giving Laksh a chance. But now Aru was in the picture as well and he would come first. Someday, if it was meant to, bridges would get mended. She hated that she had upset Sanskar, even though she knew he would understand that she was asking this for Badi Maa’s sake.

Wanting to cheer him up, she changed the topic “Ashu is really excited about the baby”

“Still messaging you every hour?’ Sanskar asked, smile now back on his face at the thought of his buddy

“Umm hmmm” Ragini said

“He is really excited that he is finally going to have a brother” Sanskar chuckled “He had plans to play video games with Aru, the moment he was born. I had to remind him that it would be a couple of years before Aru could get to that stage”

“Oh god! I remember how upset he was when he realized that Risha had no interest in his games and then Pari Bhabhi had Preeti, much to his dismay” Ragini smiled, shaking her head

“I have to play games with him when he is here, to make up for it, since Aru cannot play with him for some time” Sanskar told her

“Is that an excuse to get out of potty cleaning duty?” Ragini asked him with a raised eyebrow

“Not a chance!’ Sanskar said “I am going to be there with you all through this. Even in cleaning the potty”

“I am going to hold you to that!” Ragini told him

“You can hold me forever!” Sanskar said teasingly “You know I love to be wrapped in your arms” he said nuzzling her neck and planting gentle kisses along it

“Sanskar! We are in the office!” Ragini reminded him

“So!’ Sanskar said nonchalantly

“Have some shame!” she said even as she giggled

“If we had any shame when it came to each other, we wouldn’t be having Aru” Sanskar told her

“Sanskar!” Ragini exclaimed blushing

“In fact, I am thinking that Aru might get lonely, being alone out here, away from his cousins. He might want a brother or a sister” Sanskar told her, kissing her jaw

“Sanskar! Aru is not even born yet! How can you think of that now!” she asked

“It is your fault” Sanskar told her

“How is it my fault?” Ragini asked

“When the wife is so bl**dy gorgeous, husband cannot be expected to control himself and stop with one child” Sanskar said with a smile “Our kids are going to be gorgeous just like their mother”

“And here I thought Ashu was the only one with baby obsession! You are worse than Ashu! He has been a bad influence on you!” Ragini said with a giggle

“Tell your brother that!” Sanskar told her with a smile “He thinks I have not been as cautious, as I should, about what I say around him”

Ragini just giggled at that but didn’t comment. That trio were a bit of crazy bunch when they got together.

Sanskar sighed and kissed her cheek. He loved it when she was happy. She looked even more beautiful “You know I never thought I would be here someday – a peaceful life away from that family business, a beautiful wife who I love so much and who loves be back equally and now a baby on the way. I thought fate loved to play games with me and show me mirages, so much so that, I didn’t realize it for long, when I had the real thing. Today I cannot thank our fate enough” Sanskar said softly “It gave me you!”

Ragini nodded “And it gave me you!” she said softly “I love you” she said turning her face a bit, to look in his eyes

Sanskar closed the distance between them, as pulled her in for a gentle kiss.

Finally, everything was just as it should be.


Links to the previous chapters

Credit to: azure


  1. Shailaja

    Hi Azure.I m a silent reader of ur ff.I read from the first episode.It was wonderful.I m gng to miss it a lot..Pls come back with another one..

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…..big hug…thanks for linking the writing. good to have u back. take care

    • azure

      will miss u too….but now i have some time to finally read the rest of ur army officer parts and comment…have been missing that one after the first few chapters 🙂

  2. Aastha

    azure miss u a lot. soon come back with next epi. i know u r surprised with my cmnt bcos never i cmnted u. i read ur story after many epis. sply priya told the sumup of story to me then only i read it.

    • azure

      hahah…it is great to have u comment on this. thanks for taking the time out to read the story….priya is a sweetly :)…..will be back soon 🙂

  3. liz

    To the end I got emotional.. Eyes were selling up.. Fate ….. What an amazing work.. Will miss this story.. The best Ragsan ff… Love YU and thankyuuu for giving us this pleasure of reading such a beautifully crafted story. Will wait for your next ff… Till then keep rocking.. Tkcr:)

    • azure

      hey no crying or welling up…this is not goodbye…this is see you soon 😉 🙂 thanks for loving the work all through the journey. big big hugs to you dearie……thanks u thank u for loving this ragsan so much 🙂 u keep rocking too! tc

  4. raglak

    azure I would like u to c u back with another fab nd awsm ff.i must say that this ff really awsm. nd u gave it beautiful end.i liked that u well portrait ed ur ideas in least no of epi.

    • azure

      thanks so so so much dear…will be back soon…promise. glad u liked the ff so much ..and even more the ending. hahah…i like to keep it short and sweet ;)….typing more would have driven me mad as well 😉

  5. poonam

    hi arzue i am bit angry that u ended this ff seriously ur ff is best of all u r a wonderful writer u r way to express each emotions has drived me crazy u r story its to tooooo………… Good how much ever i describe is less
    a love story that would be too memoreable i can’t forget this ff till end of life love fun pranks understanfing care every emotions value has incerased by u ………………..
    Mystrey suspense i loved most in ur ff each episode was incridiable i read it from first i waited for each episode so much that crazyness that u created was tooo good i was waiting for each part of it……………….
    I am geart ragsan /varun teju fan and beacuse of this ff i am still more big……….
    Hands of to u i’ll miss this ff a lot lolt means lot if possible then plsz season2
    lots of love
    i am still angry if u want us to forgive u ”we need another ragsan ff asap this is our demand and u have to fulfill it ” sorry for those last lines will misss this ff a lot love u dear
    but plsz one more ff on ragsan plsz heartly request………………….

    • azure

      hey…..bigggggg big hugs to you….and don’t get mad i have promised i will come back with another ragsan…..i will miss your comments here till have to come back soon to read them on the new one 😉 ..i like ragsan best in the serial too….even though i don’t watch it anymore. .lots of love dear

  6. Emz fasa

    Mindblowing 🙂 sanskar is crazy even ashu and ranveer i love ragsan alot i really miss them 😉 laksh i really hate him ;-> i really miss this ff 🙁 thank you for this wonderful epilogue 🙂 🙂 😀 pls come up soon with another ragsan ff and even manmarziyan 😉 and best of luck for your future ff 🙂 🙂

    • azure

      hahaha….yes they are all crazy. you can imagine what must be happening when they are together. best luck to you too dear…and will be back soon

  7. Sree harini

    I really have lot to say to you didi..first of all, I have commented once on your fiction..okay that’s a ridiculous start now. But yeah, I followed you on India formus and worshiped your works. When I found you here, I just jumped in joy like a lunatic that I recommend reading to my readers and today seeing their names here is making me more happy.

    I thought of keeping a regular check on your episodes but was unfortunately hospitalized for three weeks. Then when I came back to this site, I realized that you were left with epilogue and that twisted knife in my heart. I actually thought of commenting regularly to be in touch with you….but

    Leave all aside didi. I got to know that you are also a writer of wattpad. That’s really cool. Can’t wait to read your works there too. One thing I lived in your writings is Sanskar…you, vijji, sakura didi…you all just portrayed him so well that I fell in love in fact became obsessed by his character. You always hive us a Sanskar whom I picture in my mind, with extreme emotions.

    I felt bad when you said that you won’t write any swasan because of change in swara’s character. I can acceit swalka but not ragsan for some wiered reason but you did it….upu will never leave a chance to amaze me didi.

    I can’t say how much I love you, your sanskarand your fiction. Eye of the Strom is best of your works.. Okay for Me. The perfectionism in your writings is really good. I just wish you would wrote some dark story because you are very good at describing emotions.

    My eyes were paining a lot yesterday, yet I read all the episodes..nearly 13 just because of my love towards you. Please be back didi and I don’t mind the pairs until Sanskar is there.

    Sorry for not commenting but will make sure to be regular in next one.

    Love you so much sapna didi. I am really feeling bad for being in touch with you. In fact crying you and your writings..

    • Anjali

      Heyy sree…. Supp??? Lol….I’m just too happy that I’m not failing physics….????

      • Sree harini

        I am good anju. I can’t even say my hapinnes when I saw your comment on this story. The fact that you read this on my name( I presume) is overwhelming… BTW what is supp??

        Physics!! Ugh..that’s never a matter of conversation. Is this the last year for you to bear it or…oh my… I really pity you then.

    • Joya

      Hey shree
      How r u dear?????????

      How r u feeling……..?????
      After long time i opened this page……..
      Tc…..get well soon………..give my msg to army that i m missing them a lot……

      • Sree harini

        Hello joya…I am good buy weak now. Has started giving updates too. Felt relief and happy seeing your name…yeah sure, I will give msg.
        Love you.

    • azure

      firstly….what happened? you were in hospital for three weeks!! are you okay now? have you been taking care? please don’t stress yourself and esp not about commenting here. remember the story is going to be here always…waiting…it is not going to run away. and you know we can always be in touch on wattpad. please don’t go crazy trying to read all the chapters in a rush…and hurting your eyes….neither mine nor anyone else’s ….please get well first…okay!! promise that!

      hahaha….ya sanskar always stands out in my ff vs other heroes na 😉 hahahaha…..i liked enemy within sanskar the best but now this one is close to that as well..thanks so much for liking eye of the storm. it was my first SR ff…i wasnt sure if it wasnt sure when i wrote it if it was all that good.

      i am glad u liked ragsan in this one….sorry about swasan dear.

      i have heard a lot lot of good things about your ff and i have to read it soon. forgive me for not doing that yet. 🙁 🙁

      dark story…hmmmm…..lets see….if i find the right story i will. 🙂

      i will be back soon dear…..just finalising some story ideas in my mind.

      love u a lot too…..big big big hugs and promise u will take care of your self. and don’t cry…this is not as though we are saying good bye….this is see you soon..and i am there on wattpad… you can message me anytime.

      • Sree harini

        Frankly speaking, I really don’t know how to msg in wattpad.. I have created account just a month back.

        Oh are really sweet. I am good and fine but weak. The hospital thing is really complicated. Typhoid followed by paralysis and then pancreatic infection. I am taking care but I guess it takes another month for complete cure.

        Yes, I know that episodes will be here waiting ..but you u won’t be here and about reading all at once, you writing is simply irresistible.

        I promise you didi that I will get well soon.?

        I forgot to mention, Sanskar is enemy within is also my favorite. I just love arroagany snaslr more than any other shade.

        Lol..don’t even think of reading mine..that looks very immature before you didi. Thanks for thinking about my request about dark story.

        Hugs you back didi. Love you too. I was just upset yesterday as I wasn’t able to be in contact with you but magically now I am happy and looking forward for another.. You really know how to soothe me and o will take care. If possible, please share your wattpad name didi.

      • azure

        on watpadd if you click on my name foresight_azure there is a icon there for message. if you message using that it is like the pm in india forums.

        of dear! you went through a lot….please rest a lot lot lot.

        and i don’t think ur idea will be immature….please don’t say that…..or even lower ur work for anyone.

        take care over the next month and be hale and hearty.

  8. sima

    Helloo azure….i loved ur story..ur story is one of the best stories ever….ur way of expressing all emotions..ur dialogues…ur simple way of delivering romance just awesome…pls come back with another one…i am waiting for uuu love uuu by the way is ur real name azure..whre r u from…what r u doing

    • azure

      thanks so so much dear…i am so glad u liked the dialogues and story and emotions…will come back soon….i am sapna from mumbai dear…..i work in finance. big big thanks!

  9. sree

    It was awesome dear…..this ff will remain as one of ragsan’s best ff….plz comeback with a new one dear….we will b watng

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….so glad u loved this one so much ….yes will come back soon. 🙂 big thanks

  10. Dev

    Hey azure …….ive been on tour lately dats y dint gt time 2 commnt buddy….sorry……
    But hats off 2 dis wonderfully knit….a pure love story of ragsan……with d supporting of ragsan…….ranveers caring n brains…..d way sanky got 2 know abt swaras murderer…..n wat not …..all d sweet romantic sequences of d pair…..bubbliness of ashu…….n sankys way 2 lucky 2 d last……
    Lovd d ff n a vry catchy plot…..
    Will definetly miss u till d nxt ff…….???
    Lots n lots of love buddy……???
    Big big bear hugs …….???
    Take care of urself n ur family……???
    LOVE U??????

    • azure

      hope the tour was good… r u buddy? i am good….and no sorrys please…..
      thanks so much dear…..taking a bow :)…glad u lvd the plot …will come back soon ….u take care too! lots of love! and hugs

      • Dev

        Im fine ……just preparing myself 2 go 2 temples with family……n counting my days 4 d start of colg……n d tour was pretty good with frnds masti ???gud day buddy????

  11. S priya

    Beautiful ending…akka wen u come back wit new ff plz mention ur name in t title so tat v can identify ur ff easily…gonna to miss u..take care akka….

  12. K

    Come back soon waiting for u a bit sad because this was my favourite ff I will miss it a lot one thing which I like about u is that u gave a happy ending to it rather than dragging it . once again thanks for such a wonderful ff

    • azure

      thanks so much ….yes i like happy endings…i cannot end it on a sad one….and i don’t like to type more than necessarily….i am lazy…..hahaha….. 🙂 thanks for reading this one dear…..will be back soon

  13. sherin

    Ragsan scenes were so cute…..u r such an amazing writer….by reading ur ff only i started to like ragsan pair so much….eagerly waiting for ur next ff and i will surely miss this one

    • azure

      thanks so much sherin…big hugs! glad u liked their scenes. …and thanks for liking my wetting……i am glad i made u like them 🙂 🙂 they have a lot of potential based on their character’s personality. will come back soon

  14. Nami

    It was superb as always. As I always say I have no words left to praise ur writings. M sad that u ended this ff. Will miss ur updates a lotzz. I hope u will b back soon with another ff Vry soon. Plz come back with another ff for us Plz plz.

    • azure

      you saying this much is praise enough and wonderful and heart felt one dear. i will be back soon 🙂 🙂

  15. Anjali

    Awesome azure di!!!! Loved the chapter…. Y aru??? Some spl reason???

    Will wait eagerly for ur next ff…. though I want a swasan one… ragsan I don’t like that much…. but will read it bcos of the plot…????

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….aru…hmmm yes. actually aru because it is closest to ashu. and aru is their very own ashu na 😉 will come back soon dear….and thanks for reading these even when they are ragsan and not swasan 🙂 big big hug

  16. Lila

    Azure di….I am really emotional reading this can’t believe a perfect story has just ended….I will miss it so much and will also miss u loads… thank u for such a beautiful story. Ur an fantastic writer. I will be eagerly waiting for ur next ff. Fingers crossed for Ragsan… once again a huge thank u for entertaining us all. Hats off to u. ???

    • azure

      hey……please don’t be sad…..i will miss reading u comments too..but i am going to be there commenting on your stories in mean time na 🙂 ….and i will be back soon. thanks u so so so much for liking my writing… will be a ragsan don’t worry ….haha…..big big big hug and thanks and lots of love for always reading this one and for your lovely comments.

  17. Nupur

    I had already given myself a morning treat by reading it on wattpad…but ur story has such magical powers that I’m drawn towards reading and enjoying it once again???

    An apt and soulful epilogue! Definitely gonna miss it soooo much…Can’t express in words how much it meant to me…i.e… I ll miss waiting for it to be uploaded, waiting for Ragini to blush?, waiting for Sanskar to come up with his surprising theories and most importantly waiting to talk with u. U truly are a very sweet and understanding person and I have surely felt a sense of attachment with u…U might think me cranky but it is true I have imagined about ur personality through these talks (something like daddy-long-legs, I think u got my point)…will definitely miss u a lot?

    Have a great day, take it easy with ur work and till u come back with another mystery pot-boiler I ll satiate myself reading ur older stories on wattpad. Tkcr?
    Lots of love and big teddy bear hugs?

    • azure

      my dear sis….i will never mind you writing tons of comments….i look forward to each one of them 🙂 sony worry ragsan will be back soon making you eager to know their story ….just as soon as i know what their story is thing time…hahaa 😉 and we will be in touch….i want to read more of your stories….this time me commenting and you posting the updates 🙂 u have a great day and take some good rest….no stressing too much over the exams……take care and lots of love and biggggggggg huggggg

  18. Ananya

    Okay so i dont know how doni start.. But today i read your ff for the first time and i thought of reading from the beginning.. You have great great creativity and your command over the story and language is something beyond this world.. You should actually pursue writing in professional sense.. I mean it.. The Indian television industry is in desperate need of people like you who actually can have gripping stories without any excessive high voltage drama.. Great fan of you gurl!! Long way to go.. And yeah btw.. Comeback soon plzz

    • azure

      thanks so much ananya….you are very sweet to say all these kinds things about me. thanks so much for liking my writing and the story. let see….someone i will do just that….need to find the right story to base the novel on…… thanks so much for liking the story so much ….will come back soon….and big big thanks again for your wonderful words :)….

  19. methili

    Hii i m a silent reader of your ff fst tym commenting here i want to say that u r jst incredible writer it was a lovely story will miss badly this ff. Keep going like this:-))

    • azure

      thanks so much methili…..really glad u liked the story and my writing…big thanks for reading it…..take care

  20. Hi di… r u and di I have sent u some replies in last part see to it if u can…they may be boring.. But u r my sis na…So I cant stop by sharing my happiness to my sis….

    Coming to the epi…that’s amazing….. So sanky is still angry on laksh…..accha hai laksh deserves it….

    And ya nyc bonding shown in this epi…ragsan scenes r adorable…..sanky toh bahut feel karta hai ki agar uska parivaar ajaye toh vo apni patni ko hug nahi kar payega???? what a lovely hubby…haaa…?? …

    As usual u kept ashu in this part…may be according to that baby….in my POV ashu has big part….I can remember now also that “where does baby come” ???? may be that may embrassed them that time…..but now I think sanky l be happy and shy while hearing it????? …….

    And he kept name for that baby before it took birth…..”aru” wah wah sanky………

    And last but not least the sanky in prologue and the sanky in the epilogue has many changes???

    And di take care of ur health…. And dont take lot of stress over ur finance job…. But the truth is I m gonna miss u like hell??????…..loads of love☺☺☺☺☺…and a lots of teddy bear hugs to u☺☺☺☺☺☺

    Pls come back soon di…dont make ur sis to wait and miss u for a lot of time….and actually I m waiting to see the other phase of ragsan story from ur writing…..

    Till then… Bye di….take care… Miss u…

    • azure

      ohhh my sweety ..yes u r my sis….and u can share what u want with me….it is not boring. i am really proud of your achievement!

      so happy u loved the end…and yes he is fully excited about the baby….aru is his very own ashu na….sanky has finally found peace…that has brought about happiness in him. he has someone who truly understands him now and is focused on him as much as he is on her. it is not one way….

      i am good….and not stressing much 🙂 i will come back soon dear…..take care….big big hug and lots of love

  21. sss

    hi apu I’m a silent reader of ur ff i know i should comment from starting as u deserve to be praise for ur amazing story n writting skill bt never mind now i did..seriously I’m addicted to this amazing ff nd the pairs also my favorite…plz ape come back soon with new ff even if it not Reagan then also i will read that..pairs doesn’t matter in a story that what i learn from ur amazing ff n lastly i will miss this ff so much..i will cal u ape as u r bigger than me hope u won’t mind

    • azure

      thanks so much for liking my writing and the story….and yes you can call me appe… 🙂 i will come back with a ragsan story after a short break. 🙂 take care and big big thanks for loving the story and reading it

  22. Joya

    Ohhhhhhh yrrrrrrrrr………
    Exam preparations and trip………yr……………i really dnt remember ki humne last time yeh page bhi kab open kiya tha………..

    Yr tumhari story ne to telly updates ko bhi 4 chand laga diye………..abhi saare episodes padhe…………..kya kahe…………………..

    Kehte hai kalam me duniya badalne ki takad hoti hai…….
    Likhayi tumhari tarah ho to dilon ko bhi jeet leti hai……..
    Humesha aise hi likhti raho,
    Qki tumhari stories kaiyon k chehre pe muskan le aati hai……..

    Oooo my dear………..ur story is mind blowing, superb,perfect,marvelous……………………………….

    Bahot cute tha yeh epi………….can u plz share ur stories here also…..????i wannnna read…….plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz………………….bus pehli line me tumhara naam likhna taki hum miss na kar paye(i know i m selfish) par kya karre…..achchhi stories k deewane hai hum……..aur itni khoobsurat writing skill ko hum miss nahi karna chahte………..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz……….

    Waiting for ur next story…..i m not saying bye to u…….bcz u have to come back for me…………..

    Coming to dis story……as a read Amazing experience…..??????????

    • azure

      how was your trip? and exams? accha gaye papers? tumhari tarife char chand hoti hai…and laajawab and shayari or labz ka toh kya kahe…woh toh ekdam zabardast hote hai…

      thanks so much for always showing me with such wonderful words….it made me feel amazing….big hug for doing that :)i will come back with new one soon…and will remember to put my name there 🙂 good no byes in any way…will see you soon 🙂

      and glad u had amazing experience with this one

  23. taiana

    Amazing end. I was very shocked nd upset knowing tht ur ending such a beautiful stry. But i respect ur decision sis.
    I want to thank u fr giving this wonderful ff. I nvr thought that i will love this much a ragsan ff bcoz im a die hard fan of RagLak. But ur writing the way u portrayed ragsan made me fall fr ur ff. I was completely addicted to it. Nw im going to miss it fr sure. Plz sis come soon wt another ragsan ff. Lik priya said when u come back wt nw ff mention pls mention ur name wth the title sis. Take care nd bye sis luv u?

    • azure

      thanks so much dear sis……i want to thank u for always being there and reading all the epis and commenting 🙂 it was really nice to read them always. i am so so glad u loved ragsan in this one…i will come back with a new one soon…pakka…….love u too and big hug!! will miss u

  24. Piya

    Sad bcus my fav ff is ending now nd but every ending is starting of new chapter…. so plzzz come back with another ff nd ragini in lead…. nd miss this ff so much…. u r such an amazing writer. All the dialogues r so beautiful …

    • azure

      thanks dear…will be back soon…..thanks so much for liking my writing and the dialogues….big hug and big big thanks….

  25. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah) You need to rock the world!!

    God damn the ending is so cuteee :(( Please come back with another… You rocked Ragsan fam!! Love you lots :))~Nusz

    • azure

      thanks so much sweety…….glad u liked the ending and their fam… u too! and will be back soon 🙂 big hug and see u in ur ff till then

  26. fira

    Wow…..Awesome ending…..I really miss u dear….pls come back with another ragsan ff….pls take care of urself ……I miss u….waiting for ur next ff…..

    • azure

      thanks so much …i will miss reading ur comments too dear….will come back with something new soon…u tc too

  27. hi! how are you di? wow di it was awesome! wow its the end of this story! it was like yesterday that you start this story! i am gonna miss you a lot! a lot means a lot di! you are the best in every way! i just love you and your ff! i am gonna miss this ff a lot! di you know i don’t know you but i am sure you are a really understanding person, you have a great heart! you must be a great friend and lot of things! di when you reply to my comment i feel attached to you! when i talk to you i feel like sharing everything with you! i will miss waiting for your updates and replies to my comments! please come back soon! you are my 1st favorite writer! 2nd is dhamini from swaragini ishq love kaddal! i just love her ff a lot its my fav ff and after is yours! but you are my fav writer di! di you are such a talented person! one advise di! you have a great talent and that talent is writing so please think of writing a book! but when you will publish your book then you will be famous because it will be out of the world, then dont forgot us di haha! di i dont have words for your writing talent and your ff! di i wish you have a wonderfull life! i wish you get what you want! all my best wishes for you! take care of you! be happy! always smile di i am sure you look really pretty when you smile! be always your self never change for anyone di! i love you a lot! lots of love! big big hugs! your litle sister Anamica!!!

    • azure

      hahaha….u r so sweet dear……love u too! i am going to miss reading ur comments too….but i will be back with a new one soon. thanks so so so much for saying such sweet sweet things about me…u r quite wonderful ur self too…u know! and u can still share what u want on wattpad while i come back with a new story. thanks so much for liking my work so much dear. i hope i can find a plot good enough that i am compelled to write a story on it….nice big one…lets see…may be some day soon. u take care too….and best luck for the next set of exams….do well in them! bit hug lots of love and smiles and happiness to you!!! love u dear

  28. Akshata

    so this is the last update of my favourite ff. i will surely miss this ff.
    And of course i will miss you too.
    pls comeback soon with your new ff…. 🙂

  29. I just love this ???

    I hv no words to express my feelings about this… Though I never read RagSan… It was osm… I will never regret reading this… This was a beautiful piece of writing

    But hv a doubt why aru?!!! “

    • azure

      thanks so so much dear….i am really glad u liked it so much and read ragsan for me….big big big hug to you for you for doing this 🙂

      aru because he is sanskar and ragini’s very own ashu. aru is short for arush….ashu is a nick name as well.

  30. RSR

    Hey Azure, I always loved ur updates. I came back to the page today n u shocked me. Its really shocking to know that the beautiful journey of “Red String of Fate” came to an end, this soon. It was a great ff n I’ll definitely miss it n about u, u r always dea… to me n I’ll wait for ur next ff. Though, I haven’t going through chapter but know that it’s really awesome as always. Love u loads n be back soon dea…

    • azure

      i will miss reading ur comments too….but now we can be in touch in your ff which are quite amazing! will miss you ….but will be back soon 🙂 big big hug to you

  31. Vyshnavi (Vyshu)

    Loved this ragsan are awesome
    I miss this ff,I hope you to come back soon with a new ff,
    Miss you a lot

  32. Chhahat

    It was amazing the dialogues Ragsan scene their romance evry ting was soo awesome. I will miss ur updates Vry badly. This was the best Ragsan ff that I have read. I think I have no words to praise as Sone words won’t explain how amazing writer u r. Plz keep writing n come back soon with another Ragsan ff.
    Loads of love n hugs. Come back soon will miss u

    • azure

      thanks chhahat….glad u liked their dialogues and romance. thanks for liking the ff so much. and a big big thanks for liking my writing. will be back soon. take care and lots of hugs

  33. anonymous

    well it’s me again who posted a long comment in last episode (anonymous).i was searching in oxford dictionary for more words that would describe the beauty of ur ff………but in vain……………awesome ,mind blowing,fantabulous,outstanding……………….now i am tired of searching for more words…………………….plz come back with another raglak/ragsan ff .i will b happy if it is raglak as i am die hard fan of raglak.but it’s up to ur choice……….as i am noone to say about pairs in ur ff…bye……

    • azure

      haha…u r sweet dear….and thanks for so many compliments. i will come back soon with another ragsan…..i like ragini and sanskar actually and i don’t understand laksh so well for me to write his actions and reactions properly. thanks dear take care and big hug

  34. Ramya

    Azure??U r totally amazing?Firstly let me tell yu that I had a habit of reading only Raglak ff, but then one day I came across ur ff and as I read I started loving it so much?So I backtracked to the previous chapters and read everything at once?and then yu made me totally addicted towards your ff?Each and every single line you just keep in front of my eyes ?The most impressive thing was your last 3rd and 2nd part?I mean seriously! I was awestruck?Ur ff would remain one of my fav always!?I’ll make sure I suggest this to all my frnds?And yeah! Important! Important! Very important! I’ve read many ff..but this is the only one that changed a habit of mine! I don’t exactly remember the chap no..But I guess yu’ll get it..It is when Ragini would be very busy with her project and Sankar’ll tell her that he’ll convince Badi maa,mom n all to excuse her from household chore! But then she’ll say that she’ll ask for permission and that’s different from letting him convince! It seriously had a major impact! I keep doin it actually! I let my cousins convince my Mummy to let me for a sleepover with them! But then, after reading this I made my mind to stop it and seek permission all by myself?Thanks Azure?Thanks a lot for such a beautiful ff?I’ll wait for another one?Till that Tata Bye?Take care Sweety ?

    • azure

      thanks so so much dear….i am so so so happy u took a chance with this one and that time. i do like to read your comments and i would have missed having them otherwise 🙂 big big hug dear…i am so glad u liked the part where ragini says she will get the permission and you went that way in real life….yes best to fight your own battles na…makes u so much stronger. take care and stay blessed dear. 🙂

  35. Sorry for late was awesome dear.thanks for giving such a wonderful story to read.i am eagerly waiting for your new ragsan ff.All the best dear

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….i have posted the intro for the next story….wont be wetting or posting the chapters until a couple more weeks since i am taking a short break ……but hope u like it

  36. Amazing awesome fabulous fantastic and many more….your ff is just perfect thank you so much for such an amazing ff I am really very sad but also happy that we will get one more ff soon…. But going to miss you till then… Come back soon… Lots of love

    • azure

      thanks so so much….so so happy u liked it. hahaha….yes you will get a new one after a couple of weeks…though i am posting the intro today. lots of love

  37. azure iam a die hard fan of ragsan thank u for posting such a wonderful ff.
    P.S this is my first comment. hope i have not made any mistake.

    • azure

      thanks so so much for posting your first comment here and liking the ff enough to start posting because of it. tc dear…

  38. Ashrita

    I am too late to comment dear … anyhow I should say you rocked it once again dear… superb ending… Hope you would come back soon with another heart touching ff…. I have fallen in love with your writings… Take care dear 🙂

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…i have already posted the intro for the next one btw ;)…its called pride vs prejudice…….will start updating it in a couple of weeks time. thanks for loving this one. 🙂 and loving my writing…big hug

  39. Gauri

    Azure you really wote a beautiful story…where most are Sawsan…you made Sarag alive…amazing flow amzing words ….I read all your updates over the weekend….well to admit I have never watched the show…and I dont want to but your story brings everything alive loved it stay blessed and keep writing 🙂

    • azure

      thanks so much gauri… glad liked this one :)please don’t watch the show….trust me after mms it wont stand its ground. but ragini and sanskar as characters have a lot of potential…when sanskar started he was like arjun. 🙂 thanks for really all the epis despite not watching the show…and thanks for loving the story 🙂

  40. Sree harini

    Hello didi..I have just checked your profile on wattpad and understood that I was confused by the stories of enmey within and eye of Strom. As said earlier..I love eye of Strom but the entire praise I Gabe was to enemy within. The best sanskar I have ever read..just thought to share with you…love you didi and azure color has recently become one of my favorites. Sorry to ask you didi but what’s your occupation?

  41. Joya

    U said me to give link of my peom to u……..i m really feeling ashamed……….read my new peom under comment section of swasan fan fiction season 2 epi 43…….bus ab padhke jhoote mat marna hume??????

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