Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 19


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Sanskar turned to look at the person who had interrupted them.

“You told me it was just a prank!” the person exclaimed

“Stay out of this Lucky” Aditya warned “I don’t need you breaking my head now”

Sanskar looked at Laksh, who seemed alert for the supposed beating that he had taken. It was obvious, at least now, that it has all been as fake just as he had first suspected it to be.

“You used me!” Laksh spat at Aditya, feeling aggravated and pulling at the rope that was binding his hands to the arms of the chair he was sitting in “You told me that Swara Bhabhi” he paused “No! Not Bhabhi! Just Swara!” he uttered angrily “You told me that Swara wanted to play a harmless prank on Bhai. You told me that since I was good at pranks and had been around LA quite a bit when I visited Bhai, that I should help with the prank. I thought it was all fun”

“Don’t blame me for your dumbness!” Aditya shot at him

“You lied to me! When my contact called me and informed me that Swara had fought with the wrong person and gotten shot for real, I panicked. I came to you. I was worried about what would happen when Bhai found out! When my family found out! When Swara’s family found out! But you assured me! You! You covered up for me. I couldn’t believe that I had such a wonderful friend who chose his best friend over his sister. I trusted you! And you! You betrayed me! You made a fool out of me!” Laksh screamed

“I didn’t need to make a fool out of you” Aditya said sarcastically, with a sneer “You did it all by yourself. If you were so stupid to believe that I would favor you over family, you were an idiot”

“You did do it for the family!” Laksh screamed at him “No! Now I know that! No! You did it for yourself. Bhai was right. I was talking to Swara about the plan and she was messaging me till the end. You were worried it would come back to you, didn’t you?” Laksh asked him “Didn’t you?”

Sanskar looked at them and smiled. His thoughts went back to the chat he had with Ranveer two days back. He had gone to drop Ragini at the firm that she was interning with. As had become his practice, he had been waiting in the car outside the firm, till it would be time to pick her up and drive her back home. Having so much time at leisure without much to do, meant that he had been focusing part of it on trying to investigate leads in LA as he had promised Ranveer, and the rest on trying to work on the puzzle of what was going on. That day he had called Ranveer to meet him there, because he wanted to run some of his thoughts and ideas by Ranveer.

There was a knock on the rear car door, before the bodyguards stationed, outside the bulletproof BMW, opened the door and Ranveer entered the car.

“You are crazy; do you know that?” Ranveer commented

Sanskar gave him a confused look

“You have been waiting the entire day outside Laddo’s office for her work to get over!” Ranveer said looking amused. Sanskar had the grace to blush a bit, feeling embarrassed at the comment “I didn’t think I would see the day. You are really love sick! And I am saying this! The one who wanted you to keep my sister happy. That is something!”

Sanskar cleared his throat “Are you done?” he asked, referring to the teasing

“Not really!” Ranveer told him with a bright smile “But go on. Tell me what you want to talk about”

“I have been talking to my friend in LA. He knows Swara’s friends really well. He had been investigating this for me, at least in terms of seeing it any of her friend was involved in that plan or asked to role play at that pub” Sanskar told him, getting serious. Ranveer nodded, indicating Sanskar to proceed “It has turned out completely blank. Not even a single of her friends or when anyone at her theater company was involved in this”

“They might be scared to admit it” Ranveer reasoned

“I know that, but my pal is really in the good terms with them. If there was anything to be said, he would have known about it. There is a lot of crap that does go down there, it seems. Nothing that what we are talking about, but enough so that if you have the right contacts, you get the dirt” Ranveer explained

“So that is a dead end then!” Ranveer said

“Not necessarily” Sanskar explained. Ranveer looked at him a bit confused “What it means is that she didn’t use anyone that she knows. It is likely that she didn’t make the arrangements either. So who arranged for that show which was going to be put up? Why such elaborate preparation if it was a prank” Sanskar asked “You see where I am going with this? It means that there could have only been one reason for that show, and one reason only. And it had to do with what happened to Ragini”

“How do you answer my question on the need for the cover up in that case? Why did she need to do it instead of staying away? Especially when the linkage would have broken apart the moment the hired man was found any way” Ranveer asked him

“Do you have any leads on the hired assassin? Is there any way to locate him?” Sanskar asked, avoiding answering his question

Ranveer shook his head “It is not easy to locate him. These assassins done exactly advertise their work openly or are available to hire publically. They operate in secret. While their hit record might be well-known, the targets aren’t always obvious. This is not a film where they will leave their calling card. Most operate incognito and don’t have a style that stands out. They cannot be contacted directly”

“So how are you trying to locate him?” Sanskar asked

“Through the agents. Not all assassins have an agent or a dealer, but many do. Assassin is well aware of imminent death; you cannot torture the truth out of him. Dealers are a different matter. They want their cut without necessarily being ready to die for it” Ranveer told him “But the problem is that there are a lot of dealers out there. Weeding out the one that we need, isn’t always easy”

“What if this one doesn’t have an agent?” Sanskar asked

“Those kinds won’t take this contract. It will not be challenging enough for them” Ranveer explained “Trust me. I am sure it cannot be one of those”

Sanskar nodded

“Anything else you want to talk about?” Ranveer asked after they had been silent for a while

Sanskar snapped out of his thoughts “Lots actually”

“You have been thinking about this a lot” Ranveer commented

“I had a lot of time on hand and not much to do” Sanskar said shrugging his shoulders “Besides I do want to find out who is trying to hurt Ragini”

Ranveer nodded, in understanding. He too was, after all, trying to divert a lot of his time into the search.

“Swara’s mother and Mrs. Raheja gave me the impression that they were dying to talk to my family about a possible match with Swara” Sanskar told him “My family would have, of course, not agreed to it because of her mother’s background. And I am not all that convinced that Swara really wanted to marry me. But do you think Shekhar Gadodia could have missed knowing my family’s view about the relation to encourage this thinking?”

“Even if he had known your family’s views, Kaka would have been very confident about being able to change their mind” Ranveer told him “In the worst case, he must have expected you to marry her without their permission. He would have anyway bestowed you with all the wealth to help you keep her happy” he said before asking “They were talking to you about the marriage?”

Sanskar nodded “Though it was more about letting me know how she had many suitors and yet she had chosen me. Or to tell me how Ragini wouldn’t compare to Swara. They thought it would make me feel better” he said sarcastically rolling his eyes

Ranveer sighed “It might have just been to make sure you remember her and keep Laddo away”

“I don’t know how putting us down was going to achieve that. It’s crazy” Sanskar said “All it did was make me feel awkward and angry”

“Don’t break your head over them. They aren’t worth it” Ranveer told him “Besides, we might already have another problem in hand”

Sanskar looked at him concerned, raising his eyebrow.

“You know that Aditya is not going to sit still after your threat” Ranveer reminded him

“I don’t know why you cannot sort him for good” Sanksar asked him annoyed

“I did tell you that he is Kaka’s favorite nephew, didn’t I?” Ranveer commented “Kaka will shield him if I try to do anything to him. He will hit back at me instead. That would have been fine. But the issue is that I cannot guarantee that he won’t take his anger out on the rest of the family”

“But that is his family too!” Sanskar exclaimed, throwing his hands “I get that he doesn’t particular care about Ragini or Janki Maa, but what about the rest of you”

“We may be family but he sees the other family as his family first and then this one” Ranveer said

Sanskar sighed, but didn’t fight him on this “What are you doing in this business? Really?” He asked Ranveer

Ranveer just looked at him confused

“Ragini told me how both of you wanted to get away from this business and earn your own living. She said that you didn’t want the tainted money. But then all of a sudden you joined the business. She could never get the reason out of you. What happened?” Sanskar asked him sincerely “You don’t seem all that comfortable with the business either”

Ranveer sighed “It is a long story”

“I have a lot of time at hand” Sanskar told him

“Some other day” Ranveer told him “Let’s focus on keeping Laddo safe first”

Sanskar nodded “Why do you think Swara agreed to get involved in this plot?” He asked Ranveer “There had to be something in it for her. Something beyond creating the linkage” Sanskar said. Ranveer tried to cut in, but Sanskar continued before he could “I know you don’t agree with the linkage and cover up theory. But let’s leave it as gray area before we discard it” he reasoned “After all, didn’t you tell me, we couldn’t discard any theory too soon”

Ranveer sighed “Fine” he said “What is your theory on this? What was in it for her?”

“Shekhar Gadodia had given her everything she wanted, sometimes I am sure even before she realized that she wanted it. There wasn’t anything that he wasn’t willing to do for her. He was confident about getting her married to me, if needed against my family’s wishes, which wouldn’t have been risky. In short, I don’t think there was anything he said no to her for. Even if she wanted him to protect the person who hurt Ragini, he would have, wouldn’t he?” Sanskar asked Ranveer, breaking through his blabber of thoughts

Ranveer nodded “Are you trying to disprove your own theory of cover up with this one?” he asked shaking his head

Sanskar was lost in his trail of thoughts though. He didn’t stop to comment on this “They knew about Swara being with me, even when I never introduced myself to her as Sanskar Maheshwari. It makes me think, if there was someone in LA or one of the rivals here, who had been involved in this plot and been in touch with her, wouldn’t Shekhar Gadodia have known? He would have never let her risk herself, correct? And we know that Swara’s show of getting hurt, would have impacted him a lot, temporarily albeit, but still” he said almost as though he was thinking out loud, instead of talking to Ranveer.

Ranveer let him talk, listening to him, but not really disturbing his chain of thoughts for now

“So it had to be someone, who would not stand out even if the person was in touch with her. Someone she was used to meeting regularly” Sanskar reasoned “I cannot think of anyone in LA who would have any benefit in pretend hurting Swara and hurting Ragini fatally. They would not even know Ragini in the first place. Plus they are far removed from this other side of this business. So it would have to be a rival” Sanskar said now looking at Ranveer “A rival who wouldn’t stand out. Who she meets regularly. Who she would help, even at the cost of hurting her father. Who would that be?”

“I can think of a name” Ranveer said “Though I am not sure I can define them as rivals, since they do get support from Gadodias”

“I can think of a name as well” Sanskar said “But since I don’t know all the rivals, I am not sure if I have it right” he admitted

“I don’t know what they could gain from this though” Ranveer said “Why attack your own ally?”

“Swara wouldn’t have agreed if it was about attacking Gadodias, herself as well” Sanskar admitted “So there has to be more to it”

“What if the cover up was to show that they weren’t attacking their own ally?” Sanskar asked after a while, looking very unsure as he voiced this

“I still don’t get what they would gain from this. If they were discovered, they would face the wrath of both Kaka and I. They would be utterly destroyed” Ranveer reasoned “Besides, wouldn’t they have been better served by going after the Maheshwaris instead of their own ally? They had at least some potential for gain there and Kaka would have protected them”

“What if they could hurt both at the same time?” Sanskar asked “What if you and Shekhar Gadodia thought it was Maheshwaris who were behind this? You wouldn’t have spared any of us, would you? The moment those incidents happened, I was dragged back because of that same worry”

“But we didn’t doubt you for long” Ranveer explained “The moment Doug was identified, it was all clear and it would have been the same when we found the real actor involved. If this was arranged by this rival, there would have be no reason to doubt Maheshwaris. And even if Kaka would have tried to protect them, Dadaji would not have spared anyone trying to kill Ragini. Talking shit is one thing, sending an assassin is quite different”

Sanskar nodded “And I still don’t know why Swara would gain from this. She had everything, lots of money, her inheritance, all the wishes being fulfilled before they were asked”

Ranveer was silent for a moment before he spoke solemnly “There could be a reason” Sanskar looked at him startled “It wouldn’t be about gaining something. It would be because of worry of losing something”

“What are you talking about?” Sanskar asked

“Kaka had been pondering about retiring from the business. Handing the reigns over to me. He wanted to relax and enjoy with his family” Ranveer told him seriously

“But you wouldn’t have done anything to them” Sanskar reasoned “or cut them off”

“I wouldn’t have, but they couldn’t be sure, could they?” Ranveer asked “Even if not now, what if something happened to Kaka, then what. She might have been worried about that”

“Swara being at risk would certainly stop Shekhar Gadodia from stepping away, wont it?” Sanskar asked, though he knew the answer

Ranveer nodded “So if Swara helped him because of her fear, why would he still go through all these lengths just for her. He isn’t the type to do something out of the goodness of his heart”

Sanskar snorted “What goodness! He is a slimy snake” Sanskar commented

“So why was Aditya involved then?” Ranveer asked

Sanskar’s mind travelled back to his conversation with Adarsh almost a month back. Adarsh’s words kept coming back to him, as did the recent incident when he held Aditya by the neck “What if your trace on the actor involved in that Swara show led back to Maheshwaris?” Sanskar asked him “You don’t have any information on the assassin, let alone who hired him. What if Swara’s attack led you back to Maheshwaris? Would you believe they had attacked Ragini then?” Sanskar asked him

“Why would it led back to your family?” Ranveer asked confused

“I can think of a way” Sanskar told him somberly “I don’t think he knew the entire plot though”

“Who are you talking about?” Ranveer asked

“Laksh” Sanskar said

The atmosphere in the car felt heavy as soon as he said the word. Ranveer let out a gasp as he sunk into his seat. Sanskar was feeling miserable as well

“Aditya would be right in the middle of them, won’t he?” Ranveer commented

Sanskar nodded “Though I don’t think he could have thought this up” he said

Ranveer agreed “He is not the brains of this. If this is really what has happened, then he is the executor. The brains is elsewhere” Ranveer said looking at Sanskar “His mother”

Sanskar nodded “What now? We should take care of them” he said seriously

“Remember all this is just a theory. We don’t have anything but theories right now. And we cannot take care of them on the back of this. If we do, Kaka will stand in front of them as their shield and Gadodia’s and Maheshwaris will end up all fighting within the family”

“But Swara lot her life because of this. Isn’t it enough to turn him around?” Sanskar asked

“Without proof, it is their word vs ours and you know whose word he will trust” Ranveer said

“So we find proof then” Sanskar said determined

Ranveer nodded “Let me start with their call records. I will get someone to hack into their emails as well”

“Shut the f**k up!” Aditya screamed snapping Sanskar back from his memories

“Shut his mouth’ Aditya ordered his men, before he pulled out his phone and made a call “Is she there yet?” he asked

Sanskar’s heartbeats started rising again. He knew he hadn’t gotten everything that he needed, but he was getting there. He needed his Ragini safe. If she was already with Aditya’s guards, she would be far from it.

“Great!” Aditya said with a smirk as he looked at Sanskar “Give the phone to her”

“So you finally turned up” Aditya said still looking at Sanskar with his slimy smile “You do love your husband”

“You can talk to him when you get here” Aditya told her firmly on the phone

“Fine! Just for a minute and you will be on the speaker” Aditya said

“Talk to him” he told her putting the speaker on

“Sanskar” came Ragini’s broken voice from the phone

“Ragini” Sanskar uttered feeling guilt, pain, anxiety for her. His voice laden with emotions

“Are you okay?” she asked him softly

“You shouldn’t have come” was all he managed to say to her

“Enough of this lovers’ plight drama” Aditya ordered them “You can do the rest of it here”

“No wait! Just a second!” Ragini called out

“What it is?” Aditya asked annoyed

“Sanskar, I haven’t broken my promise” Ragini said

“What?” Aditya asked angrily “Enough of this. Hand the phone to the guard” he ordered, putting off the speaker

Sanskar breathed a sigh of relief as Aditya looked away. He finally let go of a breath he hadn’t realized it was holding. She was safe! She was safe! She wasn’t going to come here! His mind telling him again and again. “Thanks!” he said softly almost to himself

He took a deep breath. He knew his work wasn’t done and he had barely twenty odd minutes before Aditya would realize that Ragini wasn’t going to come. It wasn’t going to be pretty and Aditya wouldn’t spare him for sure.

“Does your mother know what you are doing?” Sanskar asked him as he ended the call

“You don’t need to concern much with what my mother knows and doesn’t know” Aditya warned him “It would do you well to worry more about what I am going to do with Ragini when she gets here” he added with a smirk

“Your mother doesn’t trust you much, does she?” Sanskar commented

Aditya’s face became serious “You will soon be begging for death”

“Those attacks must have taken a long time to plan” Sanskar said, almost pretending to muse over it “Or maybe not, your mother is quite resourceful. She can come up with the plan pretty quickly. Sad though that she couldn’t depend on son for a simple thing as execution”

Aditya’s phone rang just then. He looked at it annoyed

“Oh! Is that mummy checking on the baby? She really doesn’t trust you!” Sanskar said with a laugh “When she finds out what you have done, she will surely blow up”

“Shut up!” Aditya order Sanskar before cutting the call

“She doesn’t know does she?” Sanskar said continuing to prod him “Of course she cannot be blamed after your colossal failure last time”

Aditya’s phone rang again

“I guess she had intuition that you are going to mess this up and wants to stop you before you make things worse” Sanskar said sarcastically

Aditya picked up the call when it came the third time around. Before the person on the otherside could say anything he spoke “I am busy right now. Don’t bother me” before cutting the phone.

But unfortunately for him, it rang again. He threw the phone to one of his guards. “Take care of it” he ordered the person “Don’t answer it though!” he warned

“You would do well to listen to your mummy and drop this plan” Sanskar told him “This is going to be a bigger mess than last one”

“I don’t need advice from you” Aditya told him “And this time it won’t be a mess. Because this time, I am planning it and executing it. No one else! And she too will know that I can be trusted with the entire plan”

“It won’t change the end result” Sanskar told him

“Ra-Gi-Ni will be here any minute” Aditya told him “I will see your expression when she does. Let’s see if you can talk as well then” Aditya warned before ordered one of his guards to make him another drink.

Sanskar rested against the wall. The pain from the broken ribs and trashing was now taking a toll on him. He was sweating profusely from the pain. His body felt like lead. His motions had become sluggish. His eyes and sight, hazy.

His mind drifted again, this time to that very afternoon.

“Have I ever broken a promise that I have made to you?” Then trust me with this. I promise I am going to come back to you” he had told her, hugging her close to him, right after receiving the call from Aditya.

“Do you trust me?” Ragini has asked him after a while

Sanskar had looked up at her, confused

“Let’s call Ranveer bhai” she told him

“Ragini, you know that Aditya is tracking the call” Sanskar tried to reason

“I know. But he won’t know if it is not a regular call, will he?” she said

Sanskar looked at her confused, but she pulled out of the hug and rushed towards her iPad. Before Sanskar could stop her, she had made a video call to Ranveer via Facetime, using internet instead of the phone line.

Ranveer picked it up on the second attempt “Laddo?” he asked confused “Why are you Facetiming me?”

“Bhai, we need to talk to you” Ragini said as she and Sanskar explained the situation to Ranveer

“What are you thinking?” Ranveer asked Sanskar at the end of it

“I have to do” Sanskar said

“You know Laksh is with them. He was part of the attacks. You cannot really trust him not to lie in this” Ranveer said

“Attacks?” Ragini asked confused

A look passed between Ranveer and Sanskar, before Sanskar said “We think they were behind your attack in Cambridge”

“And you were still planning to go!” she exclaimed shocked

“I need to” Sanskar said “I don’t know if that theory is real. Laksh could really be in danger and I wont be able to face Badi Maa if I did nothing. Besides this is the ideal opportunity to get the proof we need”

“As much as I hate to admit it, Sanskar is right” Ranveer said

“Have you both lost your brains?” Ragini asked feeling really angry and worried now “You are going to go there just for the proofs! They are not worth risking your life! I am not letting you go!” she told him

“Ragini, I have to” Sanskar tried to reason “Please understand. We cannot live in his fear all our life”

“He cannot harm us here at the house. You don’t need to go. You are not going” she told him firmly

“Are we really not at risk?” Sanskar asked her softly

“He is not going to give up easily Laddo” Ranveer told her

“Then we add more security. We stay in the house our entire lives. That is better than my Sanskar being at risk” Ragini told him

“How long can we stay in this house arrest? We are going to get suffocated!” Sanskar said

“But you will be alive” Ragini countered

“What kind of life will we have?” he tried to reason again

“Better than what will happen if you do there” she said tearing up

“I will have security over around Raheja farmhouse” Ranveer suggested “We wont let anything happen to Sanskar”

“He won’t be there” Sanskar said quietly “He wouldn’t have given his address out if he was, right?”

Ranveer nodded, pondering for a minute before adding “I will send a button transmitter over to you. We can locate you and hear you through it to keep track. Just ensure that you have the button on you”

“Wont they get to know if you sent it over?” Sanskar asked

“Don’t worry, no one will know it is from me or what it contains” Ranveer assured him “Once Sanskar leaves, Laddo, give me a call to let me know. Call via internet again, okay?” he told her

“Why are you not listening to me!” Ragini told them angrily “He is not going anywhere”

Sanskar signaled Ranveer that he would talk to Ragini. “What will you do now?” Sanskar asked

“I will meet Kaka. If he can here the proof, Aditya will lose his shield and we can take care of him for good” Ranveer told him. Sanskar nodded and they disconnected.

Sanskar smiled thinking about it all now. He had what he needed.

Aditya looked at him and felt anger rising in him. “Why are you smiling?” he asked Sanskar

“Got you!” Sanskar said with a brighter smile, despite his dulling sense.

“What does that mean?” Aditya snapped angrily

But any answer that Sanskar could have given, was cut off by the sound of gun fire.

“What the hell is that?” Aditya asked his guards, even as some of them rushed out of the room to find out the cause for it.

Aditya looked at Sanskar angrily “What did you do?” he screamed, before walking over to the guard who was standing close to Laksh whose mouth had been bound.

Aditya took the gun from the guard and pointed it at Sanskar, aiming to shoot. But right then, Laksh surprised him with a kick that hit his arm and the gun flew from his hand, falling some distance away

“You bastard!” Aditya yelled at him, just as a barge of guards rushed into the room, followed by Ranveer and Shekhar Gadodia.

Ranveer ran towards Sanskar.

“Got your proof?” Sanskar softly muttered to him

“You silly bastard” was all Sanskar heard Ranveer say before he blacked out.

Precap – Sanskar?

Link to previous chapters

Credit to: Azure

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    1. thanks dear

  1. Awesome

    1. thanks dear

  2. Awsome update as usual.Commenting after so long..
    But i read every chapters.
    By the way how can you manage to update so.. long.Because i get huffed even in giving a short update. ha ha.
    One more question yaar are you elder or younger than me?I am 16 now ,will be 17 in the secomd last month.
    And yeah if you feel comfortable then only give me the ans.Otherwise no need.I am just curious.

    1. glad to have ur comment …..haha it is really tiring to update so much but what can i do, i couldnt leave the chapter midway. i am much much older than you dear. i am 30.

  3. Superb
    . Amazing…

    Idk what to say…
    Swara… swara is such a complex character here…
    I love swara in this… as u know I am a die hard swasan and sanskaar fan… but here I love Every one… ?
    And this shade of swara is really really nice to watch….

    1. thanks so much….the characters here are result of their upbringing and environment. given shomi’s background/insecurities that she would have definitely had. in this and sheila swara and aditya couldnt have turned differently.

  4. This episode is just mind blowing keep ur good work up u are brilliant writer and the way u portray tense humorous romantic scenes is just out of the world

    1. thanks so much. big big hug for your amazing compliments dear…..felt good to read this 🙂 thanks so very much

  5. I hope nothing will happen to him

    1. don’t worry….we are at the end of the story almost. just one chapter and then potentially an epilogue

  6. Azure you’re extremely amazing?I mean really! How does your brain work so much? All those theories and all! I was awestruck! Seriously! Oh God! Look at the way am blabbering!! I truly have no words to say. And I don’t really think I’m fit enough to comment about this part of ur wonderfull ff? This would definitely be my most favourite part of your ff! Mindblowing!! All the very best?Keep writing ?Love you ?

    1. thank u thank u thank u …big big big hug to u for your sweet words. my brain is weird ….lol what can i say…i go crazy over suspense stories that is where this comes from. thanks so much for liking this part so so much…..luv u too!

    1. thanks dear

  7. wow awesome as usual…

    1. thanks so much sherin…… 🙂

  8. omg!! creativity at peaks, awesome yar, plz post next part ASAP

    1. thanks dear……i hope this is not the peak though 😉 😉 big hug!

  9. Awesome 😀 just freaking awesome 😀 log sach kehethe hain sabr ka fal meetha hoth hain 😛 it was Laksh that person but my guess is also right atlast shekar and ranveer came thank you so much for this update 🙂

    1. thanks so much….v happy i made the wait worth it. thanks so much for reading this as well 🙂

  10. Sorry to say this but it was short chapter 😀 bcoz i love your ff alot so i became selfish 😛 and sorry once again 😉

    1. it okay dear….v happy u love the ff so much

  11. Loved it loving it and love you as well for giving this

    1. love u too for your sweet comment!

  12. awesome yaar seriously tell me how r u able to write so good what’s the secert ha has always its awesome superb…….. Waiting for next part plsz update asap………… Loved it dear…….

    1. hahahaha…..secret is that i read a lot of suspense stories….haha….just kidding. i don’t know dear. i am too logical for my own good may be!. thanks for loving it though! big hug

    1. thanks sanjana

  13. oh my god, what an update, amazing, superb, actually i have no words.
    what a writer you are….. just awesome.

    1. thanks so much for the compliments dear…lots of love to you

  14. Hi di how r u????how is ur shoulder pain now?????

    Wow di its so amazing….no words to explain this epi.. Its at top of the peaks☺☺☺☺

    The first part was really unexpected…. I didn’t even think that it l be laksh….. U just made us numb for a minute……
    There talk was also nyc…..but really adi Is not at all a good frnd.,…. One doubt swara didn’t love sanky….. Is she also played any trick by joining with aditya????

    Next part was quite interesting…..ranveer teasing sanky???sanskar ne toh ragini keliye pura din bahar car me bait raha tha?????kitna pyar kartha hai na sanky???wow so cute hubby…… And there talks was superb……”Even if she wanted him to protect the person who hurt Ragini, he would have, wouldn’t he?” this line really made me sad…….ya I admit that shekar loved swara I lot but that doesn’t mean that he l kill his own daughter ragini…..really I hate him a lot….. He is not worth to call a papa ragini should never accept him……

    Next part was somewhat painful…. Ragsan phone talk…… Adi can’t see ragsan happy ?? and adi’s ma phone call i loved the way sanky spoke to him…..then sanky going to that fb scene that was also nyc…..especially ragini caring for sanky was so nyc ???she scolding them……that shows her caring and atlast this was the planning of sanky n ranveer☺☺☺☺

    And the last part was nyc laksh realized atlast….great!!!! Ranveer is so nyc…..but what does shekar gadodia dng there??????

    I hope ntng happen to sanky???waiting for next happy di…..

    As usual u rocked it di….there s only 4 days more for my rslts di its on may 25….pls pray for me di!!!

    1. shoulder is all better now….dont worry. hahah…thanks so much for loving it. i threw a few surprise bombs at you huh? welll hopefully u enjoyed it in the end. well they do say right, father is the one who gives love and care and nurtures the child. ragini would have preferred if he was completely missing for sure. he is just her biological father. she doesnt miss him. only thing that used to bother her and hurt her was being called with someone else’s name. she gave up expecting anything else. sanky will be okay….we are after all almost at the end of the story. so he has to be. best best luck for your rests and big hug and lots of love

      1. Wt???? Di r u gng to end the story?????noooo I m just n love with this story…. Plsss dont end it……plsss…. If u want end it then pls promise u l come back with one more ragsan ff….actually in telly updates I read only ragsan ff n I l miss some ff which I didn’t get for one day… In that list ur ff is also there…. N u know these ffs r the entertainer of my holidays with my cousins … I l read this stories to improve my eng….. So pls come back with one ragsan ff…

      2. Yes dear will be ending it soon…the story has almost covered what it had to. Now if I stretch it will take away from the story. I will try to come back with a new one after a short break

  15. Wow …..awesome epi ….ur imagination sense was excellent …..ragsan part was really awesome ….I am eagerly waiting for ur next update …..

    1. thanks so much fira….glad u like the epi and thanks for the compliment dear. big hug!

  16. Fabulous chap arzure… Seriously any word woulb be less to appreciate ur writing skills nd creativity… Stay blessed nd keep on rocking dear..

    1. thanks so so much taiana glad u loved it…and also thanks for your compliment…lots and lots of love u dear

  17. Awesome Awesome. Was eagerly wating for ur post. M glad Ragsan n ranveer already had a plan against aditya . Now laksh will retreat for trusting aditya. I hope nothing bad happens to Ragsan ranveer and laksh no one gets hurt. Superbly written. Can’t explain how much I loved it.
    Loads loads of love n hugs ??

    1. thanks nami……glad the wait was hopefully worth it. yes laksh has had a good wakeup call. he needed it otherwise he wouldnt have changed his view. thanks so much for liking my writing……lots and lots of love!

  18. Wow!!!
    U r jst superbb!!!!
    D plnning theory execution plot i mean evrything seems perfect
    Superb !!!!
    Hats off!!!
    Waiting fr d nxt !!!!

    1. thank u so much ahana for liking every aspect of it….u r really sweet for saying all these beautiful things. big big big hug!

  19. U r blessed with awsm writing skill dear!!!

    1. thanks so so much for the compliment dear. big big thanks! and hugs

  20. Today will go down in history of my life obviously….”THE DAY OF GREAT SHOCKS”…
    Hardly had l recovered from ur last chapter, that u bombarded me with so many shocks in this chappy….seriously right now m seeing stars hovering on my head in broad daylight;););)
    Never expected Laksh to be the owner of the voice yet somewhere felt his beating was a farce all along…but today the mystery card u pulled out of ur hat, was definitely Laksh’s link to Swara’s drama…didn’t imagine it in my wildest dreams…But happy that at last someone came to save poor Sanky:):):)

    I m not going to talk much today as m lost in marveling at ur magical work…and also m recovering from another Zor Ka Jhatka in my personal life too…wanna know???
    Fine to hell with anymore mysteries!!! It’s my physics marks, l had hardly expected passing in that nonsense subject but then HOLA! l secured a good 95 in it and overall my percentage is quite good- 94.2%…but m dissapointed with my bio marks as l had expected a steady 98 but got 95 in that too…the person checking my paper must be too hungry that he ate up my 3 marks:(:(:(
    And yes a big one, l got the highest in english in my whole school, i.e. 96…u might be thinking where did l lose my marks, it’s another idiotic subject- mathematics-only 90:(:(:( and even though chemistry runs in my blood (seriously, it is a true story, my family has a big connection with this subject, quite an antique story, ll tell u some other day)…l got 95 in it again:(:(:(
    [l think Bhagwanji is taking revenge from me but nevertheless m happy:):):)].

    Talk about not writing a long comment, and here l have written my complete Ramayan Gatha…lol:):):)

    Coming to u, how r u??? how r u doing in ur life??? Enjoying or not…??? Has the shoulder pain completely gone or not???

    Lots of love and hugs for u and tkcr:):):)

    1. shabash mere sher mere cheeteh…. 😉 😉 very proud of you dear. absolutely well done. enjoy the day today. relish the good results and the relief that results are really good! big teddy bear hug and CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you were fretting over your writing skills i hope the english results tell you better now. but well done across all science groups dear.

      i am all well and shoulder pain is almost almost gone now! big love and hugs and v happy u loved the epi….i threw some shocks ur way huh…..haahah…..we all need jatkhas some time 😉 😉

      1. Hahaha…thank u so much. But seriously, u r d best di, bcoz u hav really captivated my mind by ur writing skills:)
        Btw u ll kill me 1 day by giving shock aftr shock…lol
        If u can, pls suggest me some gud mystery books, I ll read dem aftr my xams.

      2. Lots of good ones out there depends on what you like all time classic authors like Agatha Christie or latest ones like Dan brown, Tom Clancy, kiego higasino, ennin mysteries

  21. Commenting aft long time….I was wondering whom did ragini gave msg tat “he s on t way”so its ranveer great….ur story twists r really unexpected…hope everyone s fine…

    1. so great to have you back…how r u? i am glad i kept the story a bit unexpected….wouldnt have wanted to give you the same thing again and again. everything is great. big hug!

    1. thanks piya!

  22. Btw… if u don’t mind… can I ask you how old u r?? And what’s ur name on wattpad?? I want to read ur other ffs as well… after exams though… ???

    1. i am 30 dear…..much much older than all of u 🙂 my wattpad id is foresight_azure. best luck with your exams! do well in them.

  23. Such a long update…. it was really really good…… u r just amazing.. to be frank i thot thr ll be any big drama wic ll make sanskat to fall fr ragini… bt it was totally opposite.. it happened gradually.. ll think off some plot abt the stories bt it ll be different and more than expected.. u r just brilliant…

    1. thanks so much for your words and your compliments….it was a bit long…was typing like crazy yesterday after work. thanks so much for your compliments dear….i am really glad it turned out to be different from what u expected and surprised you hopefully in a nice way. lots of love!

  24. First of all sorry for not commenting for such a long time but it wasn’t my fault I was at my Nani’s house and I was not allowed to be on mobile for long time and that’s why I was not able to comment.

    About the episode it was as usual awesome you are giving shocking revelations I really never thought laksh would be involved in this…..and I loved ragsan confession I know I am saying it really very very late about this but believe me I typed a comment on that episode but the stupid mobile switched off because of low battery and I was not able to comment after that but there confession was loving.
    I am really not getting words for your appreciation you are just too good.

    Lastly I wanna request you not to end this ff soon please it is my favorite ff but I won’t force you but if you end this then do come with another ff

    1. it is completely fine nikki no need for apologies…..i am glad u are back and enjoying this. glad u liked the confession and these surprised. big big thanks for the compliments and lots of love dear. i will see about coming up with a new story dear….but this one really is at the end of its journey. i don’t want to forcefully stretch it and dilute it right now. thanks for understanding though.

  25. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah)

    Sorry i couldn’t comment on the previous episode.. But I really loved this episode!! Thank god laksh noticed what this adi did… Anyways love you sissy~Nusz

    1. Hey come it okay….I am glad u could comment on this… Yes Laksh finally had a rude wake up call hahahah luv u too dear!

  26. ya ya I know I didn’t comment fr last 3 episodes bt wht to do little busy…. I hope u noticed I m missing in ur comments list… k nw I m starting.,in ur ff ragsan oh Lord!!! I have no words dey don’t need words fr their communication their eyes r enough…
    dey understands each other vry well….nd sanskar well his luv,care towards ragini makes me crazy….nd his dialogues r awsm especially “I will come back to u” dat was dialogue of de day for me….i know dis dialogue in 16th part bt I m still sticking with dis dialogue in a hope dat he will definetly going back to his ragini bcoz he promised her right….and ya ragini also promised him….perfect couple I know all credit goes to u only….actually I liked ragsan in serial bt never admire dem bcoz I m a die hard raglak fan bt in ur ff I jst luv dem….nd ranveer ahhh I jst luv him he s something different… about ap no comments and I luved sujatha sooo much..she s a superb mother..she understands ragsan so well…poor lucky…. and ya aditya raheja he s such a dump and horrible I hate him idiot….finally ranveer came to sanskar as a saviour…. he s super man fr me bt sanskar is my hero oh no ragini’s hero….k dat’s it nw impatiently waitng fr ur nxt update… luv u alot …bye tc…meet u in nxt one….byeeeeee….

    1. Hey….was missing ur comment.. Great to see u back…how r u? I am so glad u loved his love and care 🙂 and that dialogue as well. Hahah I am glad u liked it. I am glad the story made them perfect couple inthis one …Ranveer is an amazing bro right? Will post next one soon….love u top! Big hug

  27. hey wait jst nw only I read ur reply to sindhu rm ….r u going to finish dis soon no way…it’s shocking… k I respect ur decision bt plz plz come back wid new one…

    1. Yes finishing this one in one more chapter and epilogue. The story is done conveying what it needs to….but yes I will come back with a new one after a short break

  28. Loved the epi….superb…
    howz ur shoulder pain nw?

    1. Thanks so much dear…shoulder pain almost almost gone 🙂

  29. It was awesome dear.plz dont end this ff.we will miss it very badly

    1. Thanks Ammy…..I will try to come back with a new one after a small break ok….new to finalise som ideas.

      1. *need to finalise

  30. Hi di! How are you? How is your shoulder now? Are you enjoying your life?having fun? Di!!!! I am shock!!!! You are 30!!!!! I thought you will be around 20 or plus but 30 never expected!!! Haha! You are much much elder than me haha! Di i want to tell you something! Its a really good news! You know i have done my big exams right? And i got the result i mean marks and guess what i have got? Guess and i will tell you later haha you always give suspense to me and now its my turn to give you a little suspense haha! Di i am a curious person so please dont mind if i ask some little personal questions! Di are you married? Di do you work? Di what is your proffession? Ok enough of questions now! Di guess what i want to be later? I will give you options ok! A. Advocate B. Doctor and C. Architect. I am sure you like suspens, mystery stories! Di i am so an idiot i got hurt in my 2 foots (back side of the foot! I don’t know if you understand what i mean) and it was bleeding omg and its hurt but you know the best part is i don’t know i got hurt stupid me! But seriously when i see blood my head starts peening haha its like i will fall unconscious!!! Enough of talking comming to the thing important di you give shock after shock di! Wow this episode was wow you know i am always saying the same thing so you know it was amazing out of the world…. di how you manage writing a so bigs chapters? I think its the passion you have for writting am i right? Wow di i talk so much haha now i will stop talking and let you! Ok di bye! Take care! Lots of love and hug! No waittttttt i forgot to say, di do you speak french? Ok now seriously bye di! Lots of love!

    1. *the best part is i dont know how i got hurt

    2. Hahaha yes lots of questions here. First some from is ur leg now? Take care of it….hope u have bandages them well.. ..u didn’t realise how u got hurt!! Be careful! Hmmmm I feel doctor might be the answer? Or advocate…..tell me? Which is it? Yes I am much much older…not mentally thought ha hahahah I am not married and I work in finance.
      Yes I love writing 🙂 I am really glad u loved the chapter …..and the shocks in this one 😉 big hug and lots of love. and take care

      1. Di my legs are better now! Yes my mamma has bandaged well! And i will be carefull! Di i want to be and advocate! My teachers says i have all capacity for becoming a doctor or advocate or anything else but they always suggest me to become a doctor but i don’t want! I just want to be an advocate! And di you know i have got my big exam result and i got…….. i got 40/40 here big exams are on 40! I am so happy and proud of myself! My parents are so proud and happy! Di take care! Lots of love! Bye

      2. congrats on the wonderful results dear!

  31. Hey azure….truely sorry for d late reading n commenting… problm yaar sorry….
    Bt a superb epi…..damn cool with d plot…..n yay my guess was ri8 as it was ranveer whom ragz called??? n lakshs involvement was just took me by surprise….bt a damn osm twist ovr de attack plot…..
    Keep going n smiling…..
    Love u lots……hugs…

    1. No sorrys pls….pls comment any time. Thx so much….glad u liked the plot in this one……hahah yes u were right about Ranveer ….glad u threw a Googly at u with Laksh though 😉 so v happy u liked the twist, but thx….and lots of love

  32. Awesome

    1. Thanks so much dear

  33. As usual it’s amazing

    1. thanks so much dear 🙂 big hug

  34. Hey did you read manmarziyan ?

    1. yes i did….commented there as well…it was amazing story. thanks for recommending.

    2. gauri is a really good writer. thanks

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