Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 16


Thanks so much for your patience. Sorry I couldnt write the last chapter and post it yesterday. Shoulder is much better now after some pain ointment. So I am back with the next chapter. Thanks for all your love always. Things are heating up in the story now. I hope you enjoy this as much as the romance – Azure


Ragini looked at Sanskar, worry clearly reflecting on her face “Sanskar they are best of friends. Why will he hold Laksh captive?” she asked him “This is a trap to get you. Please don’t go” she said, holding his hand.

“Ragini” he said cupping her face with his free hand “I know that it is very possible that this is just a trap, but I cannot take the chance. How will I face Badi Maa, Bade Papa or the rest of the family, if this is not a trap and he is really in danger?” He told her softly

“I don’t trust them” Ragini told him

“I don’t either” Sanskar agreed with her “But I still have to go”

“Let’s tell Adarsh Bhaiyaa” Ragini told him “He might have some way to help without you having to go”

“He is out. I don’t know how I can reach out to him without Aditya getting to know about it. He told me that he is monitoring everyone’s phone calls” Sanskar told her, gently running his thumb along her cheek

“What about Ranveer bhai?” Ragini said, feeling uneasy with the entire situation

“It the same with him. I cannot take the chance of calling him” Sanskar said “Bade Papa and Papa are out of town today. They will only get back late in the night. I don’t have any choice. I have to go to his farmhouse”

“Sanskar, please don’t. You don’t what he has planned for your there.” Ragini said, clutching his shirt in her hands

“I don’t think he is at the farmhouse” Sanskar told her gently “He wouldn’t have given me the location well in advance if he was there”

“Isn’t that more a reason to be prepared and to be cautious. They could hurt you” Ragini told him, tearing up “If something happens to you, I”

Sanskar cut her off with a finger on her lips “Do you trust me?” he asked her

Ragini nodded

“Have I ever broken a promise that I have made to you?” he asked. Seeing her shake her head, he continued “Then trust me with this. I promise I am going to come back to you” he told her resting his forehead against her and hugging her tight.

It was a little before half past seven that Sanskar walked down the stairs, along with Ragini, holding hands. He walked outside the house. Ragini held on to his hand, not willing to let go. Sanskar walked back towards her.

“Remember what we spoke about” he said softly, caressing her cheek looking into her eyes. Ragini nodded gently, but didn’t say anything. She didn’t need to, her eyes spoke and revealed what she was feeling “I know you are scared” he told her “I am too” he admitted gently “But I have to do this”

Ragini nodded, avoiding his eyes, as hers teared up.

“You have to be strong. You cannot let any of the women know about this” Sanskar remeinded her.

Sanskar kissed her forehead, before taking her hand off his. He walked away, stopping by his car for a second, before walking back. He pulled her into a deep intense kiss. “To hold me till I come back” he told her, before rushing back to the car.

He asked the guards to let him be and not follow him. He drove out of the driveway, with a quick flying kiss to Ragini. Ragini stood there, watching the car until it would no longer be seen. She pulled out her and made a call “He is on his way” she said before cutting the call. She schooled her expression before going back into the house.

Sanskar drove alone, out of the city, hoping that things wouldn’t go too bad and that he could keep his promise to Ragini. There were really no guarantees, but he had to do this for more reasons than just Laksh. He wanted to deal with Aditya for good.

It was a little before 8pm when he reached the Raheja farmhouse. It seemed deserted. There was so sign of life there. He wasn’t surprised by it, but this put him on the alert. Before he knew it, there was a knock on the side glass of his car. There were some guards who had surrounded his car. They must have creeped on him from behind, he guessed, as he was too focused watching the front. They signaled him to get out of the car.

Not let with much choice, Sanskar got out of the car. One of the guards pulled him away from the car, and shut the door. He frisked Sanskar to ensure that Sanskar wasn’t carrying any weapons.

“Give me your phone” the guard ordered

Sanskar had the mind to resist, but thought better of it and handed it over to the burly guard. The guard promptly threw it on the ground and stomped on it a couple of times, breaking it.

“Your watch” he ordered again

Sanskar shook his head, but handed it over, expecting it to face the same treatment as the phone. But the guard put the watch on his own wrist.

“Nice watch” the other guard commented, to the first one.

The guard nodded before the two of them tied Sanskar’s hands with a rope.

“Look you don’t need to do this. I am not going to run away” Sanskar told them calmly, though he wasn’t feeling all that calm inside him.

“Boss’s orders” the guard said, not adding anything else.

They dragged Sanskar away from the car. Just then a SUV arrived there. The guards shoved him into the vehicle. The driver threw a small black cloth sac over to them. They put it on Sanskar’s face blocking his sight.

Sanskar took deep breaths. The entire experience was leaving him feeling anxious and he needed all his wits about himself right then.

He was in the car for about 20 odd minutes, when it finally stopped. The guards dragged him out of the car and pushed him along, guiding him along the path. He could make out that they had probably entered another place. He couldn’t be sure if it was house or some deserted shelter. He could make out other people/guards being there in this house, based on the limited interactions of the ones escorting him, with others.

A few minutes later, he was shoved inside a room and the mask/sac was pulled off his face. He felt a bit disorientated. Not just because of the sudden exposure to the light, but also because of all the shoving that he had faced. It took him a few minutes to get adjusted to the light.

“So you decided to save your brother after all” Aditya said, while Sanskar was still adjusting his sight.

“Where is he?” Sanskar asked, finally seeing Aditya, who was sitting on top of a side table, swinging his legs leisurely.

“What is the rush?” Aditya asked with a sneer

“I thought that was the reason you wanted me here? To let Laksh go, in exchange for me” Sanskar told him firmly

“Of course! That is the reason” he said with a snort “Get him will you” he ordered one of the guards in the room.

“Untie my hands” Sanskar told him in meantime

“You are really impatient” Aditya told him “Don’t worry, they will be removed in due time as well”

Sanskar looked around the room as he was waiting for the guards to get Laksh. It seems to be a large living room of sorts, but one that was devoid of all but some furniture. The room had two doors, but beyond that, they were pretty much walled in. Sanskar was flanked by two guards and there was other guard in the room, leaving aside the one who had gone to fetch Laksh.

The spent the next few minutes in silence. Sanskar taking in the surroundings while being aware of Aditya watching him closely.

The door on the other side opened and the guard who had gone to get Laksh, along with another one, walked in dragging Laksh with them. The way they were dragging him implied that Laksh was unconscious. They dumped Laksh in a chair and tied his hands to the arms of the chair, with a rope. Laksh seemed to have bruises on his face and blood on his t-shirt.

Sanskar took steps towards him, to check on him, but the guards, flanking him, stopped him.

“Umm Umm Umm. Not so fast” Aditya said, getting off the side table.

“You said that you were going to release him once I came here” Sanskar told him bluntly

“Did I ? I don’t remember using those words.” Aditya said with a malicious smile

Sanskar glared at him.

“I remember saying that I will let him go, in exchange for you. Which I will. Eventually” Aditya told him mockingly “But before that, I need to have some fun”

Aditya signaled his guards and they untied Sanskar’s hands. Holding his arms tightly in their own hands, locking him in position. Sanskar knew what that meant. He wasn’t dumb. But it still couldn’t have prepared him for the punch that landed on his stomach.

Aditya pulled back his hand saying “I always like to at least even the scores, if not better them”

Sanskar felt his breath knocked out, he leaned forward a bit, as much as his guards allowed him to, trying to gulp some air in even as pain started spreading across the area. Before he could recover completely from it, he felt the guards let go of his hands. In the next instance, he felt knocked down by the blows and punches that were being thrown by the guards. He felt down on the ground, only to be kicked by them.

He wasn’t sure how long they kicked him. It must have been a few minutes only, but he felt the impact from those for a long time. He crouched on the floor, trying to regain his breath and some semblance of thought/cognition through the pain that was coursing through his body just then. He was sure that at the bare minimum, he has some really bruised ribs. It was quite possible some might have cracked. He could feel his face throbbing, battered by the punches that had been rained on him.

After what felt like a long while, he found enough strength to sit down, resting against the wall as he looked at Aditya. Aditya was smiling victorious at him.

“You lasted much lesser than Lucky” Aditya told him “For someone who was throwing so much attitude and had the guts to threaten me, you turned out to be a weakling. All words and little action” he said mockingly

“I had the guts to hold your neck all alone, in public, without any help. Neither you, nor Laksh or your mother could free you from my grasp” Sanskar told him frankly “You on the other hand needed to blackmail me into coming here and needed your guards to beat me up. Not much of a feat”

Aditya looked annoyed “Oh you think this is it?” he said anger showing through his face “No. This is just the beginning”

Ragini had been quiet all the time since Sanskar left. She tried to keep to herself to avoid being questioned about anything.

“Where is Sanskar?” Badi Maa asked as they started getting all the food out on the table for dinner.

Ragini’s heart beats increased. Her breath caught in her throat. She looked away from them. Not meeting their eyes.

“Ragini, do you know where he is?” Mom asked

Ragini felt her palms sweat a bit “He has gone out” she said not meeting her eyes “He is meeting one of his friends who is just in town for the day”

“Why did he not tell any of us?” Badi Maa asked

“He told me” Ragini said softly “I forgot to tell everyone. Sorry”

“That is okay” Sujata said, busy in arranging things around the table

“I haven’t seen Laksh all day either. Where is that boy?” Badi Maa said pondering to herself

Just then Durgaprasad and Ramprasad walked in the house. They looked somber.

“You have returned” Badi Maa said with a smile.

Durgaprasad nodded, but didn’t say anything beyond that. He looked around the house “Where is Sanskar?” he asked

“Sanskar had gone out to meet his friend” Sujata told him

His eyes narrowed “That is not possible. He was holding the home ground” he said firmly

“Home ground?” Badi Maa said surprised, concern showing up on his face

“What is going on?” Sujata asked worried

“There is some rumour of sorts. You don’t need to worry. But where is he?” Durgaprasad asked again

“Ragini?” Badi Maa turned to look at her “You said he went to meet his friend”

Ragini felt her heart thumping inside her chest

“Where is he, Ragini?” Durgaprasad asked, coming and standing in front of her. She remained silent for a few minutes “I am asking you something” his voice roared

“He is gone to get Laksh” Ragini said finally after

“Where? Why?” Durgaprasad asked

Ragini looked up at him finally, tearing up a bit as she did “Aditya has Laksh captive. He asked Sanskar to meet him if he wanted Laksh alive”

“What! My son!” Badi Maa gasped rushing to her. She shook Ragini “Where is my son?” she asked as she continued to shake her “You lied!”

“Sujata” Durgaprasad called Mom, signaling her to take Annapurna away.

Sujata made Annapurna sit on a sofa even as she asked Pari to get some sedative and Uttara to get some water. While she tried to calm Annapurna, her own attention was completely on what was being said between his husband, Durgaprasad and Ragini.

“Sanskar went there without informing anyone?” Ramprasad asked concerned

“Aditya said that he had all the phones monitored” Ragini said through her tears “He didn’t want to take a chance of calling anyone. You were out and so was Adarsh bhaiyaa” she explained

“That was still no reason to take that chance and go there alone” Durgaprasad said firmly “It was stupid of him to. Why didn’t you try to stop him?” he asked Ragini

“I tried to” she told him “He said that he couldn’t take the chance if the threat was real” she added softly

Durgaprasad sighed. There was no point getting angry right now. A look passed between the two brothers. “We will handle it from here. You have done enough” he told Ragini firmly

Sanskar looked at Aditya critically “What do you mean” he asked

“I thought you knew me and my intentions” Aditya said with a sarcastic smile “You shouldn’t need to ask, really!”

“What are you planning?” Sanskar asked again, feeling dread at the bottom pit of his stomach.

Aditya clicked his tongue “You should have let Laksh die. It would have saved you some trouble” he said pretending to feel pity for Sanskar

“You would kill your best friend?” Sanskar threw at him

“I don’t like being attacked, you see” Aditya told him, as if trying to explain things to a kid “And your brother here, decided he wanted to confront me with my plans about Uttara. Not just confront, but attack. I cannot overlook something like that now, can I? What will others think? It is question of image you see”

“And what image is that?” Sanskar asked sarcastically “Bully?”

“That is such a childish term, isn’t it?” Aditya commented “I prefer to think of myself as a go getter. I go after what I want and others better not get in the way or they are going to go out of this world” he said with a smile “And I always always get what I want”

“There is always a first time” Sanskar told him “You are not going to get what you want this time”

“You think so?” Aditya asked

“I know so” Sanskar said confidently

“Let’s see, shall we?” Aditya said with a smile, pulling out his phone.

Ragini was standing by one of the pillars in the living room. Durgaprasad and Ramprasad were on their satellite phone. Annapurna had been lying down on the sofa, throwing angry words at Ragini for withholding the reality of the situation from her.

Ragini’s phone rang. She looked at the screen. It was an unknown number.

“Who is it?” Durgaprasad asked

“I don’t know the number” she said honestly

“Pick it up and put it on speaker phone” Durgaprasad said “No one say anything” he said especially looking at his wife “You understand”

Ragini put the phone of speaker “Who is this?” she asked

“Someone you are going to know intimately. Very very soon” the person on the other end said

“Who are you?” Ragini asked again, though she had a very good idea who it was

“The one who holds the life of your husband and his brother, in his hands” Aditya said

“What have you done to them? Where is Sanskar?” Ragini asked worried

“There are okay for now. Bruised. Beaten. But okay” Aditya said

“What? You hurt Sanskar?” Ragini exclaimed

Aditya clicked his tongue “Only barely. I could hurt him a lot worse if you don’t do what I want”

“What do you want?” Ragini asked, dread enveloping her

“You should know that by now, Ra-Gi-Ni” Aditya said “I want you”

“Stop this nonsense” Ragini said despite the fear enveloping her. Durgaprasad asked her to keep him talking. Ramprasad put a gentle hand on her shoulder for reassurance.

“It is not nonsense. If you want me to keep your dear husband alive, you will do as I say. You will come to my farmhouse in 30 minutes’ time. That is how long it will take if you leave now. Don’t be late. And I don’t need to tell you this, but no guards and no family nonsense”

Ragini was quiet for a while

“Did you get that” Aditya asked her

“Yes” she said softly

“Good. See you soon” Aditya told her before cutting the call.

“This is all because of you” Annapurna yelled from the sofa “My son is in danger because of you”

“Annapurna!” Drugaprasad warned her

Ragini felt drained, physically and emotionally. She sagged where she stood. Ramprasad held on to her and made her sit down in a chair that was next to them.

“Sanskar is in danger” she said softly, looking at Ramprasad

Ramprasad held her hand and gave her a small squeeze “Nothing will happen to him”

“What now?” Sujata asked them walking towards them. She glanced at Ragini for a second before turning to her husband

“We will tackle this. There is no need to panic. You hear me” he said looking at everyone, especially his wife “We will get them out of there. Wherever that it. This is not the first time we have faced trouble. We can handle this”

Ramprasad nodded at him, as he got up, from where he was kneeling next to Ragini.

“And Ragini” Durgaprasad said addressing her “You are not going anywhere” he ordered “No more stunts and trying to do things on your own. We elders are still around and capable of handling situations. You youngsters don’t need to jump in.” he looked at her critically before adding “Make sure you understand that”

Ragini nodded but remained quiet, sitting like a statue in her place, lost in thought.

“You bastard!” Sanskar screamed at Aditya, trying to lung at him, only to be held back by two of the guards, who pinned to his sitting position. Sanskar struggled against their grip.

Aditya let out a vicious laugh “You didn’t think I forget about my main target, did you?”

“You will never get her” Sanskar yelled at him

“Is that a challenge?” Aditya asked with a sneer

Sanskar’s expression turned grave “She is not some bet”

“You are right” Aditya told him with a nasty smile “She is a s*xy forbidden fruit that needs to be devoured”

Sanskar made to lung at Aditya only to be held back by the guards again

“You never learn, do you?” Aditya asked him mockingly

“She will never come” Sanskar told him, glaringly

“She will” Aditya said “If she loves you, she will. Does she love you?” Aditya asked him sarcastically.

Precap – Will Ragini go?


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Credit to: Azure

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  1. finally you post and superb no words to say. how is ur health? is pain gone and take complete rest dear love you

    1. thanks so much dear…..v v happy u liked it….shoulder pain is much better now. i am applying ointment…should be all okay by tomorrow. today only had a slight pain. yesterday was bad. thanks so much for checking on me dear. big big hug!

  2. oh god .my heart is panicking. what will happen waiting fir ur next update

    1. you will know soon here…..things are getting exciting now 😉

  3. Azure… dont make ragini to go there.. even if she goes ntng wrng shld happen to her yaar….. so eager to know what happens nxt… r u posting nxt epi tmrw? Nd take care dear…

    1. i will remember it dear…will try my best.

  4. plz post next part ASAP, daily I’m waiting for your update

    1. will be posting soon dear

  5. It was really good..I hated it when AP blames ragini for everything, she should’ve tried to understand the situation that ragini was going through

    1. she is thinking only as mother of her son….just like in the show. she will wake up eventually

  6. Awesome azure. ..even words are less to praise u

    1. thanks so much dear 🙂

  7. azure plz take care of ur health.take ur medicines regular . apply sm ice cubes where u feel give u relif.don’t use painkillers (tablet) much . Instead of tablet apply ointment or volini diclofenac spary to ur shoulder.donot stress urself too much .u can update after getting well.u r just like ny I said these blah blaah

    1. big big hug for your caring dear….really v v v sweet of you….don’t worry dear…i am not taking any tablets…..only applying ointment. and taking some rest. 🙂

    2. btw….it is much much better now…yesterday it was hurting a lot. today only mild pain. i should be hopefully completely okay by tomorrow 🙂 🙂 u r like my younger sis too! big hug again!

  8. its nice but ap’s attitude towards ragini is bad like a typical saas

    1. actually she is obsessed mother..otherwise she is good….but like in the show she thinks of laksh first…she may reprimand him but when he is in danger she will forget all others

  9. Please take care of yourself….

    God… I hate this adithya… ?????

    Want everything to be alright again…???

    Awesome update ….. ???

    1. thanks so much dear…..lets see…hopefully in the end all will be in the middle we will have to see.

  10. Superb azure u r really awesum

    1. thanks dear

  11. Mind blowing…who did Ragini call?plz tell is she becoming negative or something

    1. Also do take of urself

    2. you will come to know soon who she called….wait for one more epi

  12. As usual awesome dear… Pls do take very good care of yourself

    1. thanks dear

  13. Omg omg omg!!!!
    It was just ………….wow!!!!!
    Luvd it !!!
    Can’t wait fr d next part
    BT whom did ragini call
    Is she anywhere involved in all d stuff gang on !!!!!
    Really waiting fr d next part
    N I think ragini will go !!!!!
    Well superb as always
    U NVR fail to surprise us!!!!!!
    N every episode cums wind sum mystery
    Superb live it not only is deer romance BT way too thrilling

    1. u will know soon who she called. sorry i am keeping my comments a bit small today….will write proper comments soon.

  14. Wow….awesome epi…..poor ragini……I hope u will not make anything wrong….pls take care of urself …..don’t stress urself….I am really upset because of ur health…pls take care of ur health….I will pray for u…..

    1. thanks so much dear…..resting my hand mostly as much as work allows. it is not serious don’t worry…just muscle pain/pull.

  15. OMG! Ragini getting suspicious! I mean whom did she call and say that Sanskar’s gone? Big mystery coming up. Precap is soo much interesting and intriguing.

    Loved it today too. AP’S anger on Ragini Sanskar and Aditya confrontation- everything was soo well described!

    I need not compliment you. You are well over that. Love ya. Keep writing ♥♥ TC DI!! And from now taje care of your health too. Dont get so much busy with work di. Stay well

    1. you will know soon who she called dear….yes mystery coming up…thanks dear….i am taking it much more easier that i usually do

  16. Pls take care of yourself.

    Its really awesome.
    but right now i am so scared after reading this update.
    what will ragini do?
    One que, whom did ragini call?
    there are so many questions in my mind.

    1. you will know soon who she called…just wait for one more epi….am taking care….dont worry 🙂

  17. yaar you are simply awsome plz its not important to update but its important to take care of health plz take care as a friend i think your hand should have some rest for a while rather than giving your hand stress plz a request from your friend

    1. thanks so much dear….i have been taking it much more easier than usual…resting my hand

  18. U rocked it again, HATS off to u. Pls post the next one as soon as possible. Keep it up

    1. thanks dear…will do

  19. Hi sapna di! Oups sorry i forgot to ask! Can i call you dii? I am anamica! I am back! Not really i just have got little time thats why i read and commenting! I am so sorry i didn’t comment in your last chapter but readed and it was mind blowing like always but i was so tired thats why i didn’t comment!? i learn that you are not ok i mean your health is not ok? WHat happen? Are you alrigh? Nothing serious? Is your shoulder hurting? Do you put any ointment? Apply some ice cubes in your shoulder no no apply something hot in your shoulder you will get relief! Take rest ok! Take care of your self!!! Take proper rest! Dont take stress and dont cary anything heavy ok! Why you post hein? You know you are not well then! You are telling its still hurting then! You know your health is more important than this ff! Just take care of yourself! Take rest! We can wait! When you are perfectly fine, no pain nothing than write and post ok! Please take care of yourself and please take rest! You just like my sister thats why i am telling this things and also as a friend! I can totally understand your pain i mean shoulders pain because i have the same and its hurt omg its hurt so much! I pray and will pray for you! Get well soon big sister! Love you so much! A bigggggg hug for you! And about this chapter it was just out of the world,galaxy! Wow to much suspence,mysteri omg i just love it! You never fail to give me surprises! You just rock! You are awesome! I really need new thing to complement you and your ff because i am always saying the same thing! You must getting bore (lol) wait i am gonna comment you in french! C’etait sublime, manifique. C’est juste parfait! J’ai pas de mot tellement c ‘est manifique! Tu as beaucoup de talent! Pls pray for me! My exams are in wednesday pls pray for me! And once again i am saying pls take rest and take care! Love you! Lots of love

    1. thanks dear….and yes you can call me di. nothing serious just muscle pain/pull which happens to all of us. i have been resting it…taking it much more easier than usual. don’t worry…sorry i am keeping replies smaller today…but merci beaucoup

      1. please di dont say sorry! i am happy that you are feeling well! get well soon di! love you! lots of love

  20. Azure I just hope you get well soon?and coming to this part of your ff, you were soo soo soo amazingg?I, especially loved the line where Aditya says How could her 4get the main target and Sanskar’s reaction on that?Hawww! Aditya is too cruel. I enjoyed every line to the core?And one more thing I got to ask u…how did u find ny name last time??

    1. based on your profile logo dear…..thanks am taking good rest. glad u loved it….

  21. Hey azure….take care of urself buddy…..
    N a nc trap 2 b fallen frm both sanlak….
    I think rags calld ranveer wen sanky got out of house….n ap angry on rags 4 nt telling was a bit weird buddy…..n dps words dat eldrs r der n youngsters to keep low was an osm dialogue delivery…..
    N d epi was pretty much good…..n with traping dishum dishum….
    Love u lots….hugs…tc buddy

    1. ap is obsessed with her son….when it comes to him she forgets everyone….all i can say about ragini is that she was following instructions when she made the call. she was told to. thanks buddy

  22. Oh god there is so much suspense in this chap. I really liked how they comforted each other and then that face off with that nasty aditya. U r really gud in givin dialogue. But angriness of elder ladies is unnecessary. She did Wat she was told and that for their safety. But d ques is will she go nd whom she cld? Was he Ranveer?

    1. thanks dear…ap is crazy when it comes to laksh like in the serial otherwise she is okay. you will know soon who she called. she was instructed to make the call.

  23. awesoome arzue its to good lol
    i hope ur fine take complete rest get well soon……….. Love u ………..,

    1. thanks so much dear. luv ya

  24. Another rocking chpt… i hate aditiya.. poor ragini ntg wrg should happen to her… azure plz take care of yourself dear… Get well soon☺

    1. thanks dear…..glad u liked it

  25. Another rocking chpt… Each n evey scene is written very well… u r really a amazing writer… keep it up… Azure plz take care of yourself dear… Get well soon☺

    1. N azure plz write after ur completely get well… health is more important thn anything…

      1. i am taking it easier than usual don’t worry. much better now. muscle pain so it will go slowly..i cannot sit and do nothing.

  26. Hey Azure, its really beautiful n u know what actually I was waiting for the chapter 15 which u have posted already n I was unknown to that. But I had read that n u know what ur writing is just awesome.

    Hope u r alright dea!! Take care of urself we can wait for our goody-goody-healthy girl’s beautiful treat, always.

    Thank u so….much for the beautiful update…

    1. thanks so much dear…much better it is just muscle pain..will be okay.

  27. awesome are such a good can even write a should try for it.

    1. thanks dear….hope i can someday….making progress towards it with all these stories

  28. It was amazing.cant wait for next part. get well soon dr

    1. thanks dear.

  29. Di I didn’t read ur story as I m going out now….. L come back and read and cmnt wholeheartedly di…… And how r u now?? Hope u r fyn OK di l cmnt by nyt think so…. OK di take care of ur health don’t stress ur self di

    1. don’t worry dear

  30. Firstly take care and get well soon and also was missing ur updates badly . Reading this is the perfect start of the day. No need to tell it was awesome as always . U just nailed it as always . A lot of suspense poor Ragsan.

    Take care and get well soon.
    Loads of love ??

    1. don’t worry i am taking it easier….but next update is already ready so will post soon. lots of love

  31. Really awesome but please I need rags an plex for ever

    1. thanks so much dear…..ragini u will know soon

  32. Firstly m very angry at u…how can u do this??????Even after repeated advices too u didn’t take care of ur health…l have told u so many times di that ur health should be ur first priority and u can update the ff whenever u want…we can definitely wait for ur ff…the ff is not more important than ur health…So please be careful, u got me so worried when l read the first para???
    Howz ur shoulder??? Is it still paining??? If so take complete rest and update when u r completely fine,not before that…don’t take risks with ur health as it might lead to severe issues in the future (and l pray to God it never happens)…To lessen ur shoulder pain, apply pain relieving ointment like volini, systeflam, moov or himani fast relief and do put ice pack too b/w alternate breaks…it ll provide u some relief…and if u don’t follow my advice and again try pulling a stunt of overstressing urself than l won’t talk with u ( l think l hav the right to be angry with u as l consider u as my sister)…so do take care?

    Coming to the epi, l am speechless and u urself might be knowing how beautifully u have written today’s episode…starting from the deep understanding between Ragini and Sanskar, then the scenes where Sanskar gets badly beaten up by that slimy snake, Ap blaming Ragini, Dp’s warning and his stern orders of handling the messed up situation himself now…seriously if Aditya came infront of me, l would have beat him black and blue till all his bones cracked??? but now m scared to think what ll happen next in the sanskar will be saved??? But the biggest question in my mind is whom did Ragini call???
    U surely know how to hold ur readers’ attention by slowly unfolding ur cards of mystery one after d other…truly speaking today’s epi was really a blockbuster movie, actually ur all chapters are and l could imagine each scene happening right in front of my eyes…Hats off di!!!! Simply marvellous?

    Ok enough of my rants, so m going now…have a nice day and upcoming week too (as l don’t know if l ll be able to visit the site next week or not)….but please take care of ur health and keep smiling always?

    Lots of love and big big teddy bear hugs for u????

    1. dear i have been resting most of the weekend….as much as i could. it is muscle pain only nothing serious i am taking a lot of care. don’t worry. will keep the comment small today. hope it is okay. but big big hug dear

  33. How are you azure? I hope you feel better. And please somebody screw this Aditya!

    Lovely chapter as usual. Take care. Love you ???

    1. thanks dear…..glad u liked it…much better now

  34. hi di now only I came so read ur ff and going to cmnt…..going to my analysis of the chap and about the whole epi….I m damn angry at u now…….di y did u updated this epi with ur shoulder pain ha????y can’t u take care of ur health di ???? and di ur health is so imp than ur ff…we can wait for ur ff di……don’t update ur ff till u get well. ok????? when I read ur first para I got so much angry on u I thought to scold u when I post my first cmnt itself but I was in hospital for my badepapa check up so that can’t cmnt at the time….. u know wt u made me worried when I came home and read full epi…ok u updated ur ff …..that too in shoulder pain y u updated long epi???????di pls take care of ur health first!!!! sry I think I scolded u a lot but I was really worried so that only u r also like my sis for me I scolded u in that way which I scold my sis… ok did u take rest…. di pls don’t put pain killers and use move spray I think it l make ur pain less hopefully….. i m warning u again don’t update ur ff till u get well completely???ok sry for scolding u a lot don’t take me wrong….

    and now coming to my analysis
    first part is really emotional and painful ???ragini’s concern to sanky and sanky’s promise that really showed how much he love her and that too showed that he fulfilled his promise completely.. ..and the main thing is he knows that his ragini trust him more than anything….. really an awesome part which made me to cry (somewhat) while reading and the scene flashed in my mind(it came to my mind as a scene) …..and sanky gave her a peck to say that he l definitely come back for her……but the phone call is a suspence???but hopefully ragini is not negative in anyway…. bcoz ragini tried in every way to save sanky I mean call adarsh baiya or ranveer bhai that dialogue that shows that she doesn’t want him to go…..

    next part that shows even though laksh didn’t believe in front of sanky , he is really worried for his sis…that shows a good bro and good frnd… bcoz he doesn’t want to give up his frnd in any way but that aditya didn’t deserve it ….that aditya is really a worst person he can do anything he really made a big apman for the word frndship….

    the next sanky getting beaten up by him I m sure that aditya l get those things back from sanky ???

    the next part …ragini’s crucial position… she promised sanky that she l not say anything…. but ap is asking her wt can she do????really poor ragini….ap could understood her situation but we can’t expect it from a mother ryt???… as a mother she is ryt but as a wife she might have understood ragini’s position.. but at the situation a mother l react In that way only…. that’s a practical situation….that aditya’s call was really irritating….paagal insan…..

    last part but not the least part….sanky shouting at aditya for speaking like that to his ragini…. when he couldn’t even hear those words how could he will let that happen ☺☺☺☺
    aditya should have understood if he had brain but no way for that…. ????sanky had confident on that she will not be anybody else except him???that shows his love for her…and his trust on their love…hopefully nothing will happen….and the last dialogue of aditya really shows that ragini will come bcoz she truly loves sanky na??? and she should come then only their love l be defined….. hope she l come but ntng should happen to her di???and I know sanky l never let anything happen to her….

    overall a great epi… super hit!!!!!

    and cmng to the writer she rocked this fanfic ???but she should rock her health by taking rest now?????so di I m saying u again take care of ur health ok????
    love u loads and big big teddy bear hug to u??
    di if u love me like ur little sis u should take rest and u should update the next epi after getting well only!!!! I know I m blackmailing u but u know I use this technique to make my cousins to make them to take rest….. ??????ur my sis na so that tried that technique with u too???

    1. don’t get mad dear….i have been taking good rest and relaxing my arm. it is muscle pain/pull. getting it massaged regularly over the weekend. it is much better and will get better soon. glad u loved the epi dear….keeping my comments short today. but big hug

      1. Di that’s ok I m happy that u r fyn…. Hope u get well completely soon

  35. thx so much for your overwhelming love. i am much better now. i have been taking rest all day today. don’t worry please. i will reply can to all comments tomorrow. please please don’t worry i am taking good care.

  36. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz) (SuNusZuRah)

    First of all azure, take rest and don’t stress yourself on writing everyday aha. We can wait because we don’t want put writer to be hurt!!! Anyways coming to the episode it was super!!! AP is rude… And I hope ragini is fine

    But I hope you get well soon, lots of love

    1. thanks dear…have been taking care….glad u liked it. laksh is her weakness so AP forgets everyone like in the show

  37. Hope u r al right nw ?? to whom ragini was taking aft sanskar left, is. thr something between adithya and swara ?? lot Of. questions….. waiting fr next episode…

    1. much better dear…ragini was instructed to make the call…you will know more in just one more epi.

  38. As always todays episode is really awesome nd plz take care of ur health azure

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