Hi all, sorry I had been a bit busy and couldnt finish typing this chapter before, as some of you had requested. I hope I have made up for it in someway with this chapter. I was overwhelmed by the love you have showered me with in the last update. I cannot thank you enough for it. Lots of love. Please forgive the typos – Azure
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Sanskar had been trying to knot a black tie around his neck, his face clearly depicting his displeasure. He had been dressed, in a black suit with a white shirt, getting ready for a party that he would have much rather avoided. It was a party thrown by one of the politicians that was part of his familyโs business nexus and the entire family had been ordered, by Durgaprasad, to be present for it. The reason for his displeasure have been two-fold, first that it was part of the world that he had no interest or intention in being part of and the other was because it was one more thing that was preventing him from spending some time alone with Ragini.
While he had been apprehensively about admitting his new found feelings with her two nights back, since yesterday, that was all that was on his mind. He wasnโt sure how she would react to it and wanted some good bit of time alone with her to really put his thoughts and feelings forward, in a way that wouldnโt distance her from him. But private time with her had been a luxury all of yesterday and today. If it wasnโt the Pooja, it was someone or the other trying to pull her in for some household work, Uttara and her nonsensical gossip, even Ashu has been particularly active on the phone and kept him away from Ragini. She had been so tired at the end of it that she had literally crashed and fallen asleep last night. Today was no different with Maa, Mom and Pari Bhabhi trying to pull her in different plans. If that wasnโt enough, his Bade Papa had thrown this party on this face now! He couldnโt even get her alone in their room for 5 minutes of peaceful talk.
Ragini walked out of the washroom, dressed in an elegant black saree with a light pink edge and full sleeves blouse with some work in pink. His eyes followed her as she entered the room and walked towards the dresser while still focused on fixing the saree. She brushed her hair and was about to tie it when he walked behind her and held her hand gently.
โLeave it open. You look beautiful with your hair letdownโ he told her softly, looking at her in the mirror.
She gave him a shy smile before nodding. As he looked at her, a though struck him and he moved towards the wardrobe even as Ragini got on with getting ready. She had just worn some diamond and pink tourmaline earnings when he walked over and stood beside her.
โThis looks much better, doesnโt it?โ he asked her pointing to his tie before pointing to the two of them in the mirror โWe look good together, nowโ he told her with a twinkle in his eye. She nodded with a shy but warm smile.
She was about to pick up the box with sindoor in it, when he took it from her hand โLet meโ he said as he filled it in her forehead.
โRagini, Iโ he started to say โI wanted to โฆโ he said. But even before he could finish the sentence, Uttara barged in and dragged Ragini out to help her get ready. Ragini gave him a helpless look as she went with Uttara.
Sanskar shook his head โI think the only way anyone is going to let me have some alone time with Ragini is if lock, bolt and seal this door with the two of us in it!โ he said annoyed.
Ragini and Uttara had been standing by one of the tables chatting with each other at the party as the others had been dragged into different groups. Sanskar had just gone to grab some soft drinks for them since the waiters seemed to have exhausted them by the time they got around where they were standing.
โYou should have better company at a party like this, than Uttaraโ Laksh said, coming and standing next to her โBetter yet, you shouldnโt be standing, you should be dancingโ he said, extending his hand
โLaksh Bhai! How can you call me bad company?โ Uttara asked him annoyed
โLaksh bhaiya, you should take Uttara dancing. She shouldnโt have to stand her with her Bhabhi instead of enjoying the partyโ Ragini told him with a warm smile
โNot this bhaiyaa thing again!โ He said annoyed โHow many times do I have to tell you? And this party is not for dancing with sisters.โ He told her
โLaksh bhaiyaa, you are forgetting that I am you sister as well. It wonโt look good if you are dancing with me as well, in that caseโ Ragini said maintaining her smile, though she always felt a bit uncomfortable around Laksh โBesides, I need to go look for your bhai and my dear husbandโ she said with a smile as she walked away from their quickly, before Laksh could say anything.
As Ragini walked towards the bar, she saw Sanskar standing with a middle aged lady. She was dressed elegantly. As she walked closer, she heard the lady talk
โIt must have been so difficult for youโ she said as she ran her hand along Sanskarโs arm as if to console him. He clearly looked awkward to be there. โShe was so beautiful. An angel really. To lose it so violently, seeing her die and then being forced to marry someone elseโ she sighed before continuing โNo one can come close to Swara angel. I cannot believe what you must be going through being forced to stay married to someone who doesnโt not even come close to being even Swaraโs shadowโ she added emotionally.
Ragini felt a catch at her throat as her eyes teared up. She took a few steps back from there.
Sanskar felt his anger rise at the way Sheila Raheja was talking about his Ragini. He had been listening to her for a while now, as matter of courtesy. He had felt extremely awkward about the discussion that was going on, and a part of him wanted to blast her for it, but he didnโt want to make a scene or be rude to her. After all, she was almost the age of his mother and he didnโt want to disrespect her. But hearing the last few words, he lost his cool.
โMy wife has a name. A beautiful name, Ragini. And she is quite amazingโ he told her firmly โI do wish Swara was alive. I do understand what you must be going through, as well as her parents. It can never be easy to lose someone close to you, but Ragini isnโt responsible for this and she doesnโt deserve to be dragged into such comparisonsโ he added as politely as he could, while still sending a clear message
โOf course! That is not what I meantโ Sheila said quickly โIt just thatโ she added emotionally, running his hand on his arm again โSwara meant the world to me. It is not easy to see someone, anyone in a place that was meant only for herโ
โMrs Rahejaโ Sanskar began to say, but before he could say anything more, Ragini walked over with a bright smile on her face
โThere you areโ she said holding his hand โI have been looking everywhere for youโ
Sheila Raheja looked a bit unhappy but schooled her look promptly as Sanskar looked at her with a proud smile on his face โThis is my wife Raginiโ he said introducing Ragini. Ragini nodded at her with a smile โRagini this is Mrs Sheila Rahejaโ
Ragini nodded before speaking โSanskar, Bade Papa is looking for you. We should goโ
They excused themselves quickly and Ragini dragged him to the furthest end of the party and stood by the lone table there. She looked angry and annoyed.
โWhat happened? Where is Bade Papa?โ Sanskar asked her
โBade Papa didnโt call you. I made an excuse to get you away from that horrible ladyโ Ragini said making a face
Sanskar chuckled โYou were fantastic! Thank you for saving meโ he told her
โI had toโ she said sincerely โHow could she say something like that? Does she not have any sense. How could she bring back all the sad memories for you and burrow on your pain of losing Swaraโ he said angrily
Sanskar quietened hearing her. He held her shoulders and turned her around โYou heard that?โ he asked her
She looked away from him, but he held a finger under her jaw and made her look towards him. She nodded. He sighed hearing that. He caressed her cheek with his thumb before speaking.
โLook donโt take anything she said seriouslyโ he told her honestly, looking in her eye โShe was just talking about things she has no clue about and all that did was make me feel awkward. There was not even a single grain of truth in itโ
โButโ Ragini made to say softly
โNo butsโ Sanskar said โJust hear me outโ he told her. He knew she must have been hurt and he needed to clear this thing immediately โYou are amazing! Fantastic! You are absolutely gorgeous. Swara may have been beautiful, but the truth is that she doesnโt compare to you. I am not saying this just to make you feel better. It is the truth. You are incomparableโ
Ragini heard him intently but didnโt say anything
Sanskar sighed โThe truth is that I never loved Swaraโ seeing her trying to cut in, he added โI just thought I did and I was delusion to think that. I was blind to the reality and blind to my own feelings. I fought those who wanted to make me see the truth and hung on to illusion for too longโ he told her, taking her hands in his as he spoke next โThe truth is that I was in love with the chase. I was in love with the adrenaline rush of pursuing the, well I guess, forbidden fruit so to speak. And one I thought I had her, it was about loving this feeling of accomplishmentโ he said shaking his head at the silliness of it all โThe truth is that she was only one in that relationship. She along with her demands, wants, desires. The only role I played there was to fulfil them. If in that picture, I was replaced by someone else, you wouldnโt have noticed the difference, because I was never there in that relationship โ if it can be called thatโ
Ragini looked at him at the end of it โSo you donโt love Swara?โ she asked again gently
Sanskar gave her a gentle smile โNo. Not even close. Trust me the only reason I was bothered there was because it was one hell of an awkward conversation and I was stuck in itโ he said squeezing her hand a bit โActually, there is something I wanted to talk to you aboutโ he said
โSanskar! There you areโ Adarsh bhaiyaa called out rushing towards them
Great! Sanskar thought. Not even a moment of privacy!
โPapa is looking for you. He wants you to meet Sharmajiโ He said referring to the politician who had thrown the party.
โDo I have to be there?โ Sanskar asked annoyed
โYesโ Adarsh said as he held one of Sanskar hand and started dragging him away.
โWe need to talkโ Sanskar said quickly, giving her a reassuring smile, as he was being dragged away.
Ragini looked at him from far. He was some distance away standing with the rest of the men in the family, listening to Sharmaji. She picked up a glass of cold drink from a waiter who walked by and sipped it as she looked at him, lost in thought.
The past month had been a whirlpool of thoughts and emotions. She had gotten married without much choice in the matter and then found herself in a situation where her husband had been in love with her half-sister. The same sister whose name held bitter memories for her. It was a reminder of how her father never did or could love her. But then things had changed. She wasnโt sure what had happened, but they had become friends, best of friends. Suddenly, she was going things for smallest of his happiness and he could see that he was doing the same for her.
It didnโt stop there. She hadnโt expected that she would get so close to him so quickly or even care about him so much that when he was sad, she felt sad as well. Seeing him happy brought a smile to her face. And then something changed in his eyes. There was an intensity about them when he looked at her. That intensity had her heart racing. It made her blush. Smallest of his touches sent her skin tinkling. She had never felt this before for anyone. It was all so new to it. She couldnโt make sense of it, beyond admitting that he had become so important to her that his happiness, his dreams, his smile matter to her a lot more than her own.
As she overheard the conversation sometime back, she felt shattered. It was just her sheer need to get him out of that awkward situation that made her gather strength and go and face them after what she had overheard. It was at that time that she had another revelation, that she loved him. She loved him more than anything or anyone. She suddenly found herself understanding preciously what her mother had said to her about love. In fact, she felt herself standing in the same place as her mother was.
She knew Sanskar wasnโt her father, nor could he ever be like him. She knew that Sanskar would never cheat on her or could have never left her and fallen in love with someone else after they got married. No, in that he was very very different. She trusted him more than she trusted herself. But she also realized one thing in that moment when she overheard the conversation. Something beyond the fact that she loved him. No, what she realized was that she also couldnโt stop loving him. She couldnโt stop loving him even if he didnโt love her. She couldnโt stop loving him even if he still loved Swara.
She had never been into analyzing her looks, but for the first time ever, she had felt unsure. It wasnโt because she was unsure of herself. It wasnโt even that he had made her feel anything but beautiful, no it was quite the contrary. When he complimented her, admired her, he made her feel as though she was the most beautiful girl in the world, but that comment from Sheila Raheja had made her wonder, just for those few minutes, it had been a compromise for him.
But Sanskar as always had been wonderful. He had realized the worry in her eyes, even before she had a chance of understanding it completely herself. His words had been like a soothing balm to her soul. She wasnโt sure if he loved her or could love her, but the look in his eyes was telling her something. She had always been apprehensive about translating it but now, she felt something akin to hope rise in her heart. May be what she was seeing was love. Just may be.
He turned to look at her, almost as if he heard her. She knew she was being silly but in that moment she had been too lost thinking about him and looking at him. Him turning to look at her, made her skip a beat. He threw a questioning look at her. She shook her head to let him know she was fine. There was nothing going on. He threw her a skeptically look. She gave him a smile, figures, he would catch her trying to hide something. He shook his head and went back to his conversation and she to looking at him as she gently sipped her drink.
She wasnโt sure how long she stood there. She vaguely remembered Uttara coming and trying to talk to her. But for the love of god, she couldnโt remember what was being said. Sanskar had been making funny faces at her from where he stood, signaling her that he was bored. She let out a giggle as she shrugged her shoulders helplessly. He rolled his eyes at her. Adarsh elbowed him and signaled him to focus on the discussion that was happening around them. He nodded sincerely and looked away. She smiled shaking her head at his antics.
As she stood there looking at him, she heard a voice behind her, really close to her ear โBeautiful woman like you shouldnโt be standing alone at a party like thisโ
There was something decidedly slimy and uncomfortable about the voice. The closeness of the person infringing on her private space didnโt help. She turned around startled, moving a bit away from the man in front of her. He was a stranger to her.
โExcuse me!โ she said a bit annoyed as she took a few steps back, away from him, only to trip on something that came in the way.
She was about to fall when the man wrapped his arms around her. She quickly tried to straighten as she pushed his hands away, but not before he slid a hand along her waist. She shoved him away โWhat are you doing?โ she asked him angrily
โI am just trying to help youโ he said with a sleezy smile in his place as he touched her shoulders.
Just then, he was pulled away from her. Sanskar walked over, standing in between her and the man, covering her from him โStay away from my wife!โ Sanskar screamed at him
โLook you are misunderstanding meโ the man said โI was only trying to helpโ he said trying to look at Ragini, but she moved behind Sanskar away from his eyes. She didnโt like the way he was looking at her โyour wife, is it? I didnโt mean any harm, Mr…..โ he trailed off looking at Sanskar
Sanskar was fuming by then. Ragini could feel it even as she touched his back. Sanskar held the man by his throat, wrapping his fingers around his neck tightly, trying to squeeze the air from it. โI have a very good idea of what you know and what your intention was, Aditya Rahejaโ he said in a voice that was colder than steel.
By then a bit of crowd had accumulated around them. Ranveer, Adarsh and Laksh came running there. Laksh rushed towards Aditya โAdy!โ he said before looking towards Sanskar โBhai! What are you doing? Let go of himโ he said trying to pull Sanskarโs hand off his throat. But Sanskar held Aditya in a vice grip. Adityaโs eyes widened.
Sheila Raheja rushed towards them, pulling at Sanskarโs hand as well โLet go of my sonโ
Sanskar was only focused on Aditya. His anger burning like coals through his eyes โStay away from my wifeโ Sanskar warned him โKeep her out of your cheap intentions and gamesโ
Ragini was worried looking at his anger. Worried not for Aditya but for her Sanskar. She didnโt want him to do something he would regret. She didnโt want him being touched by the world their families were part of. She tugged at his arm gently, to get his attention โSanskarโ she called out to him softly. He turned to look at her. He saw the concern and worry in her eyes. She shook her head, pleading him to let go. Sanskar took a deep breath and turned towards Aditya who was close to losing consciousness now. He let go of his neck and shoved him away โStay away from herโ Sanskar warned him again โNext time, I wonโt let go of your throatโ he told him before holding Raginiโs hand and striding out of there
โWhat is the meaning of this?โ Sheila yelled from behind, but he didnโt stop or turn or respond.
โThe meaning is simpleโ Adarsh told her firmly โAsk your son to stay in his limits and stay away from Ragini. That is, if you want him to stay aliveโ
โNext time if he tries anything, Sanskar wonโt be the only one he has to deal with. I wonโt think twice about killing someone who bothers my sisterโ Ranveer warned them even as Laksh and Sheila held on to Aditya.
โI am sorry, but I think it is best we leave nowโ Durgaprasad told Sharmaji, folding his hands in Namaste as most of Maheshwari and Gadodia family excused themselves from the party.
Sanskar was still fuming as he strode along the way out of the plan, holding Raginiโs hand securely in his.
โOww!โ Ragini yelped
Sanskar turned around concerned, seeing her holding her leg a bit.
โWhat happened?โ he asked, anger leaving him and concern for her taking over
โIt is nothing, I just twisted my ankle. I will be okay. Letโs goโ she said softly, trying to standing up and walk, but ending up limping.
Sanskar let go of her hand and picked her up in his arms, walking towards the car. Ragini looked at him and held on to him, but didnโt bother him. She knew he would need some time to let his anger out, and she would wait for her to, patiently, standing with him all through it. She wrapped her arms around his neck. He looked at her once, as they reached the car.
Their bodyguards rushed over, opening the rear door, but Sanskar signaled them to open the front passenger door. He gently placed Ragini on the seat and fastened her seat belt, before turning towards the bodyguard.
โI will be driving the car todayโ Sanskar told him firmly โGive me the keysโ
โButโ the guard tried to say
โThe key!โ Sanskar told him firmly โYou can follow us in the next car but no one is going to ride with us in this oneโ
Seeing the determined look in Sanskarโs eyes, the bodyguard gave in. Sanskar drove them back home, and carried her out of the car again, when they reached home.
โI am completely fine now, Sanskarโ Ragini assured him โI can walkโ
โShhh! Let me decide if you are fine or notโ Sanskar told her
โBut!โ Ragini tried to say
โCan you just let me do things my way this once?โ Sanskar told her, carrying her back to their room and laying her down on the bed.
He was about to get up, when she held his hand and made him seat next to her. Sanskar looked at her questioningly.
โAll Adityaโs are monkeys, ityadiโs with cuckooโs nest on their headโ she told him quietly
Sanskar looked at her โWell this Aditya is a slimy snakeโ he said annoyed
She nodded โSo donโt waste time getting angry on slimy snakes then. You donโt look good angryโ
Sanskar felt his anger calm down, despite his intention to not let go of it this soon โSo how do I look good?โ he asked her
โSmiling, Teasingโ she said sincerely โeven annoyed, just sometimes thoughโ she added quickly
โI look good annoyed?โ he asked raising an eyebrow โThat is a firstโ he said โAnd teasing. But what am I going to tease you about now? You had admitted that that Adi is a monkey with cuckooโs nestโ he told her, a smile making its way on his lips
โI am sure you will find somethingโ she told him rolling her eyes โyou are very resourceful in these mattersโ
He chuckled, not being able to hold it in. This was why he loved her so much. She just sense his mood and tried to make him feel better, even though it should have been him trying to console her and make her feel good after what she had been through.
He moved closer to her and cupped her face with a hand โAre you okay?โ he asked her gently โI should have never gone away for that stupid discussion. I should have been there with you. You should have never had to face itโ
Ragini turned her face a bit and gently kissed her palm, before turning to look at him โI am okay. When you are around, I donโt have anything to worry about. He is a horrible person and I felt really angry and disgusted by himโ she told him, her face cringing at the memory โbut then you came and everything was okay. You always take care of me and make everything okayโ she told him softly
โI wish you had never had to go through it, or need me to make it okayโ Sanskar told her sincerely
โBut I need you. I will always need youโ Ragini told him softly, her emotions reflecting in her eyes
Sanskar gasped, feeling a tightening in his chest at the emotions that seemed to be flowing through him. He moved closer to her, leaning his head against her for a second before pulling back โYou are wonderful, do you know that? I donโt know how I was this lucky to have you in my life, but I am thankful to whatever fate and destiny or whatever it was that brought you in my lifeโ he told her looking intensely in her eyes โYou make me smile, laugh. You make me happy. I miss you when you are not around, so much so that I feel lonely, empty without your presence. Seeing you smile, warms my heart. I cannot bear to see you upset or sad or worse crying. I donโt know when this happened, but you have become my world, my life, my happiness. I know that if you arenโt in my life, I would be as good as deadโ he told her softly
โSanskar!โ she gasped, her eyes tearing up โPlease donโt talk about death. I wonโt survive without youโ
Sanskar caressed her cheek gently, giving her a soft smile โRagini, I donโt know when you became the voice for my thoughts, window to my soul, but you have. I wanted to tell you this for some time now. I wasnโt sure what you felt about me or even if you felt the same way, but I cannot hold it inside me anymoreโ he told her, looking at her deeply โI love you. I love you more than life itselfโ he said, his voice cracking a bit with emotions as he said that.
She rested her delicate hand against her cheek โWhat took you so long to say it?โ she said softly, tears running down her cheek even as a smile broke along her lips
Sanskar wiped the tears away with his thumb โI didnโt have you tell me about my thoughts, like you always doโ he said with a smile as he rested his forehead against here
โI love you Sanskarโ she said softly, her voice laden with emotions just as his was โI love you so muchโ
Sanskar gently kissed her on her forehead, her cheeks before finally brushing his lips against hers. She gasped against his lips, parting them gently. He captured her lips in a deep emotional kiss that expressed the depth of their feelings. A depth that they couldnโt in express in words.
Precap – All is well??
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111 Comments
Wow…..super epi….finally ragsan united ….i am so happy….i really impressed ur writing skill….ur way of expressing ragsan feelings are awesome……ur story is unique… no one can take ur place to give a such a wonderful ff…U only deserve it….. I really enjoyed a lot….I am eagerly waiting for ur next updates…….
thanks so much dear….yes they are finally together….thank u thank u for liking my writing skills and the way i wrote the confession. i am glad you are finding it unique…i try to make it different but i can never guarantee if it is something likeable..glad that it is. thanks so much for your kind words and compliments dear…your words were really v touching……lots of hugs and love! ๐ ๐
This is stupendous, I really love it. @azure pls ur wattpad Id plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssss
thanks so so much aish….glad u liked it. wattpad id is foresight_azure
Hi azure di finally sanky has spoken heart out he fall for his lady love and he also recognized that he never loved swara ?????? u know I m going to give analysis for urur chap sry if u don’t like it!! But I want to…
Morning scene was really a funny scene and when our romantic sanky came out his sis uttara took her bhabhi….. Very sad sanky????? the next partyparty scene of raglak laksh bhaiya its seems funny for me?????? sanky spoke in favour of rags and said that she is incomparable and the way he said she has a name wow he gave a shocking reply to Mrs raheja…. And ragini saving sanky and their nokhjhokh and the way sanky started to say his heart out ,,, asusual adarsh came and took him bechara sanky??? their eye language was awesome
Next is the highlight of the episode wow my angry sanky the way he said that ” stay away from my wife “????thr possessive hubby who cares for his wife?? and the next scene rags worry for her sanky and his anger!!!!
The next part I felt that I m n cloud nine while reading…at last sanky has got spark light hahaha…. He said all his emotions loneliness, worries etcc….. Confession!!!!!!!!! I love u ragini!! I love u sanskar????????????????
And coming to my sweet sister’s writing skills as usual u nailed my sis….. U just made my day to the next level full of emotions funniness all ????? love u my di ??lots of teddy bear hug to u di??????
my dear dear priya….please go ahead and analyse as much as u want….and no sorries! yes sanky spoke his heart out and so did his lady love ๐ impatient sanky is fun right ๐ and this one is usually impatient about a lot of things…hahaha….and he is crazy in love with wifey now….cannot see anyone look the wrong way at her ๐ thanks so much dear….glad i made ur day….ur comments usually make my day too! big big teddy bear hugs to you and lot and lots of love!
superb dear
thanks so much dear ๐ glad u liked it ๐
Omg omg omg omg!!
Woah!!!!!
It was superbbb
D realization cnfrntation confession !!!!!!! N lyk seriously dats a bit bad bt den again u knw i was actually thinking about aditya n laksh i guess dey need to face mre n nt jst a warning frm our dear sanskar!!!! Bt den ur stry ur rules ๐ ๐
Superbbbbbb it was lyk wow
U rlly rlyyy hv it in u
I guess u shud actually think about writing a book n trst me i’ll surely be d vry first to buy it!!! ๐
superb as alwayz
N here i am agaim wid my silly requedt lyk always!!! Plz post d nxt prt soon!!!
It jst makes soooo hppy reading d title of ur ff
I mean i guess or rather i m sure dat i m vry vry vry mch addictd to ur ff….
Luvd it
Superb!!!!!!!!!
Waiting fr d new twist in d tale ๐ ๐
thanks u thank u thank u ahana dear……glad u found it superb…and don’t worry sanky will give it back to them. right now his first priority was ragini and getting her out of there. plus a few punches wont be enough for them. i hope i can get to a level where i feel i have the right story and skills for a book…lets see….working towards it…hoping for the best ๐ ๐ thanks so much for u wishes though ๐ v happy u are loving it so much…big hug and lots of love dear ๐
Awwww!!!! this is so cute.
Every bit of the story was so well written…completely captivating…
thanks so much akshata….v happy u liked each bit of the story…and found it captivating…v happy to read that and also that u like how it is writing. big big thanks and hugs dear
Are u ending the ff plzzzzzzzz don’t
no dear….this is a love story + mystery….only the love story is on track….mystery is still pending. still have 5-6 chapters to go before the story ends.
Finally finally.. al happened….. u nailed and its a very brilliant one… as told earlier a different one tooo…. keep rocking… every part was beautifully penned…. hope fr many more to come… u r really wonderful…
hahaha….yes finally it happened…they confessed. glad i got it right…i know confession was imp,….would have been bad if it turned out to be thanda. and even more happy that it is different…i don’t like to do it with roses etc in my stories unfortunately….they can come later….hahaha. thanks for liking the writing. there are a few more chapters to come yes. thanks for thinking i am wonderful….lots of love and big hug dear
Amazing!!!! amazing!!!! Ur ff is driving me crazy!!!!
thanks so much shammu…..glad u lived it….i hope i am driving u crazy in a good way ๐ big thanks dear!
Ok . The initial part was quite funny when he was trying to have her for himself and then the middle part was beautiful when u described her feelings towards him and last was emotional . And that kiss brought butterflies in my stomach.
haha….yes he was being a bit impatient in the beginning. i am glad u loved each part of it….and they went through a bit of emotional situation so i wanted to end it with the kiss….;) ๐ big hug and lots of love dear
Sry fr late comment
it ws just awesome,fantastic
love u dear
thanks so much dear…and please no sorries. that u took out time to comment is more than enough. ๐ thanks so much for loving the epi. love u too dear!
Aw what a cute episode
Keep smiling like a star my sister
Love you aha~Nusz
thanks so much nusz ๐ ๐ glad u liked it dear….love ya! keep smiling!
Hey ur ff is like a stress buster amidst my exam… As always it was amazing.. Specially the last part. Sanskar proposal.. Oh god it was so romantic.. I had a dbt.. Sanskar wore pink tie,ryt? To color coordinate..
yes dear…i ate the word pink when I was typing…you caught it correct ๐ I am really happy u liked the epi and even more that it was a stress buster. ๐
wow what can i say it was just wow i dont have any word! its just out of the galacxi, out of the world! when i read your ff i have smile till the end! you just made my day girl! you rock! i love love your ff! i am addicted to this ff! ur ff is driving me crazy! i totally fall in love with! you just nailed it like always! your ff is unique diffrent funny emotional lovely superb perfect mind blowing amazing… this word are not enough just add more words pls! (lol) pls think about writting a book! your writting is so natural and simple thats why it is so good! you are really talented! i am a bigggg fan of you!!!! a bigggggg hug for you! love you so much dear! lots of love!
i am so so glad that the story and the epis make u smile. that make me fell like job well done. and even better than i could make ur day! exams preparation going well? you are so so sweet with your compliments dear…big big hug to you for them and for your love! hahahah i will think about a book one day….i am trying to build up my skills towards it ๐ and you guys help push me there with the encouragement always! lots and lots of love!
Yeah its going well but i will be really busy for one or two weeks because i have 5 projects and my exams are soon so sorry in advance because i will not have time but phir be i will try to read and comment! Lots of love ?????
Plsss pray for me! I am so stressed because i have so much to d! My exams my projects! My presentations! My homeworks omg
of course! and best of luck! you will do well. don’t stress so much! and about reading and comments…the updates are going to be here…focus on your studies first dear
Wow….cant wait to nxt epi
thanks so much dear….glad u liked it ๐ ๐
I was legit waiting for you to post this chapter. And OMG they confessed their feelings my babies :’)))) So cuteeee โกโกโก thank you and eagerly awaiting the next episode (hope its the suhaagraat *wink wink*)
thanks so much fari for waiting for the chapter…really sweet of you…and yes the finally confessed ๐ hahaha lets see about that….;)
Awesome I really like your Story
thanks so much dear….v v happy u liked it ๐
Another awesome epi
thanks so much dear ๐
o….m…..g!!!first i totally luved it….
ragsan confession was s awsm in their confession der s no dramatic,action etc…,it was filled up wid only feelings,emotions dat s de speciality in ur script… dat’s why I luv ur ff so much…
nd dis aditya nd sheila r jst horrible yar…so no comments about dem…
adarsh nd ranveer’s dialogues was awsm..
both r perfect brothers i jst luv dem especially ranveer….
de way u described ragsan feelings r windblowning ….
nw what can I say,de full part was jst perfect…
thanks so so much kalai….really happy u liked the confession….i like to keep confessions private and with less props in my stories…i know that is not necessarily what everyone wants to read…i am really glad all of u have loved it ๐ ๐ i am really glad u liked the way i described ragsan feelings…big thanks and hugs for your wonderful comment dear.
Finally love blossoms… rocking epi with emo touches….. loved it to the core.. tc ๐
thanks so so much dear…glad u loved it. big big thanks! ๐
Awesome update and ragsan love confession was superb ????. I hope u could post the next part?
thanks so much dear….v v happy u loved their confessions and i just posted the next part some time back…lets see when it gets published
have posted next part….lets see when it gets published.
Plz post d nxt prt!!!!