Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 12

This is the next part of the story. Sorry I haven’t been able to proofread it, so there could be some typos. Thanks so much for all your comments. they truly keep me going and make me want to take out the time to write the story regularly despite busy worklife. thanks for keeping me motivated. – Azure

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Sanskar has been trying to enjoy the cool breeze on the terrace, in the past three days, he had been a regular visitor to the place and it had nothing to do with the cool breeze or enjoying fresh air, though that is what he had been using as an excuse. No, the real reason for quite different. It was the decidedly unfriendly thoughts that he was having about his best friend.

He was no child. He had dated before and been around attractive women. In fact, if someone asked him, he would have also said that he had been in love before, but in the light of the confusion around Swara and what he really knew of here, he wasn’t all that sure he knew her, much less be in love with her. This wasn’t about Swara though. No, he hadn’t thought much or even at all about her in the last couple of days, unless it was in the context of Ragini. No the problem was that he was attracted to his best friend. He was feeling attracted towards Ragini.

He had not been able to read beyond one paragraph in that book in the past few days. When she was out of the room, his thoughts drifted to her and her smile and her laughter. When she was in the room, his eyes, on their own violation and much against his wishes, would drift towards her eyes and the way they lit up when she was happy or excited. His eyes trailed her swan like delicate neck and the locks of silk gliding down it. If that wasn’t enough, his eyes seemed to be drawn towards her pink lips. Those accidental touches that were so common place between them before set his heart racing. The blush on her cheeks made him want to caress her cheeks and even find ways to make her blush. He basically felt like a teenager high on hormones. And that was problem. A big big problem!

They may have become the best of friends now, but he hadn’t forgotten that their relationship first started as husband and wife in a relationship that was forced and unwanted by both of them. He had come to mean a lot to him, so much so that he couldn’t imagine her not being part of it anymore. Just because he had brought attraction into their equation didn’t mean that it was mutual and he could never ever risk her and their friendship over this.

But there was a reason far bigger than this. Ragini was the most wonderful person he knew. She deserved all the happiness in the world. But most importantly, she deserved to be loved and loved truly. He did love her as a friend. But loving someone as a friend and being attracted to them didn’t equate to being romantically and truly in love with them. And he couldn’t give that to her. It wasn’t something to be forced. He hoped for both their sakes that he would get over this phase soon and things would go back to normal, because he hated rushing out of his room to put in some distance between him and Ragini as he had been.

He closed his eyes and took a deep breath trying to calm down the anxiety and the attraction that were building inside him and fighting to take dominance. He missed spending time with her without wondering what was going on. True she had been busy trying to finish her project, but she always had time for him, and he hated running away.

As he took a deep breath, he felt her fragrance tickle his sense. Warm, flowery, alluring. Great! As if he wasn’t driving himself crazy staring at her, now he has started imagining her fragrance around him. He was really losing it, he thought annoyed at himself.

“It is really nice in here” came a soft voice beside him

Sanskar opened his eyes shocked and looked around to see Ragini standing next to him. His heart beats raced. So he wasn’t imaging her fragrance then. That god for little mercies. He hadn’t become crazy yet.

“I thought I would check where you have been going off to these days” Ragini said softly

Sanskar nodded “Taking a break?” he asked her

Ragini nodded “But there is so much to do”

“You are stressing yourself too much” Sanskar said feeling concerned

“I barely have three days left before I need to submit the project” Ragini said, tension showing on her face even as she moved her hand towards her neck, rubbing it a bit

“Is it paining?” Sanskar asked indicating her neck.

“Just a little. It is okay” she assured him

But Sanskar felt concerned. He walked over and stood behind her, pulling her hand away. She turned her neck to the side, but by then he had moved her hair away from her neck to one side. Ragini turned her head back, looking in front of her. She bit her lip to prevent a gasp from leaving her lips, as his fingers trailed across her neck leaving her skin with charged. There had been something about Sanskar in the past few days. There was something in his eyes that was leaving her feeling, well she couldn’t entirely say what she was feeling like because she had never felt this way. She just felt a bit besides herself. Actually more a bit besides.

Sanskar had been wondering in the past few days if he hair was as silky as he looked. Now he knew as he moved the delicate strands of beautiful silky mass away from her neck. As he started at her neck and small part of her exposed back, he was left screaming at himself. Asking him what the hell was that. He had been trying to put some distance until he got over this attraction and now he was getting closer! How was this going to help? But wasn’t she his best friend and wasn’t she in pain right now? Didn’t he want to help? Correction, she wasn’t his best friend. She was his best friend who he was attracted to! So what? Did that mean he didn’t care for her? And if he cared shouldn’t he help ease her pain.

“I should” he muttered

“What?” Ragini asked softly

“Nothing” he said softly as he moved his hands towards her neck and gently rubbed his thumbs along her neck to try and ease her pain. The silence would have been hard to bear as he focused on massaging her neck even as his heart was thudding loudly inside his chest. The feel of the soft skin didn’t help much. He decided needed to distract himself from this.

“You are really stressed about this, aren’t you?” he asked looking at the back of her head and not trying to see what his fingers were doing.

Ragini nodded “I don’t know if I will meet the deadline” she said, her voice giving away her nervousness. Though only she knew that it was for more reasons that just the project, though she was really worried about it too.

“How much do you have still left to complete?” He asked softly

“I still have to finish the greenhouse in soft copy version and then I have to finish the top floor and greenhouse in the main blueprint submission. I also have almost a third of the back-up blueprint copy to complete”

“You are stretching yourself too much” Sanskar told her concerned “You are trying to complete the project and help with the house work. You need to drop the house work for the next few days. That should do it”

“I don’t want to put all the work on them” Ragini said referring to Badi Maa, Mom and Pari

“You can also cannot keep on doing the crazy things you are doing, trying to get up in the middle of the night and work on the project. You are going to make yourself sick.” He told her “Talk to them. Or I will”

“Sanskar, please don’t” Ragini pleaded

“I cannot see you like this. You are so stressed. Please, just listen to me on this” Sanskar tried to reason “Please”

Ragini nodded “Okay” she said giving in “I will talk to Bhabhi”

“Why Bhabhi?” Sanskar asked

“Because she will be the one left to do my work as well” Ragini explained

They stood there in silence for a few minutes as Sanskar continued to massage her neck and her shoulders “Feeling better?” he asked whispered softly near her ears as he leaned in

“Ummmhmmm” Ragini managed to mutter even as she felt a shiver pass through her body

“Are you feeling cold?” he asked her gently seeing her shiver

Ragini shook her head “Just some chilly breeze” she managed to answer

Sanskar rubbed his hands along her arms to make her feel warm “If it is too cold, we can go inside” he offered

Before Ragini could answer either way, they heard “Looks like someone is on romantic date”

Ragini and Sanskar turned around startled to find Adarsh bhaiyaa and Pari Bhabhi looking at them amused

“It is nothing like that” they both said together, before turning to look at each other

“I was just taking break from project” Ragini quickly explained at the same time as Sanskar said “I was here for fresh air” both overlapping their responses.

“Is that what it is called these days?” Adarsh asked them

“Adarsh! Stop teasing them” Pari told him, without really meaning it.

“Bhabhi! Not you too!” Sanskar said annoyed

“We have upset my little brother. We disturbed their date” Adarsh said looking at Pari

“They weren’t on a date, Adarsh” Pari explained amused

“Didn’t you see what was going on? I would call that date” Adarsh told Pari raising his eyebrows suggestively “Even our dates are lame in front of them”

“Adarsh, they are turning into tomatoes. Just look at them” Pari said looking at them. They were both blushing a lot, Sanskar feeling annoyed as well

“What are you doing here?” Sanskar asked annoyed

“We were hoping for some quality romantic time together” Adarsh explained, amused “We are really sorry we disturbed you, aren’t we Pari?” Adarsh said looking at her

Pari took pity on Ragini who had been blushing red by then “Let them be Adarsh” she told him gently. Adarsh smiled at her and nodded.

“Have you been able to get much done on your project?” Pari Bhabhi asked her

“I have done some, but there is lot still left” Ragini told her, still recovering from the blush

“Actually I was going to tell you that you should focus on it for the next few days. You don’t have much time left for submission, right?” Pari asked her. Ragini nodded “Leave the house work to me”

Ragini looked at Sanskar, they shared a smile before Ragini rushed and hugged Pari “Thank you so much Bhabhi”

“She was going to talk to you about it” Sanskar explained

“Why didn’t you?” Pari asked

“We just spoke about it today” Sanskar answered for Ragini

“Well you better get on with the project then. Enough break” Adarsh said seriously

“Adarsh!” Pari scolded him

“What? They are done with their date. Now we can spend some time together peacefully” He told her

Sanskar and Ragini smiled at them and made excuses to rush out of there and give them some privacy. But before they left, they heard Adarsh say “We are going to have to make a timetable with them now, on when each one uses the terrace, so that we don’t disturb each other” making them blush all over again.

The next three days had been hectic for Ragini and Sanskar was trying to ensure that she wasn’t drowning herself in the project so much that she forgot to eat and sleep on time. Once the project hard copes had been couriered, one to her uni and one to her friend Mark for submission, just in case the uni courier messed up, Ragini has been anxious to track their progress. Sanskar had to get his Badi Maa, Mom, Pari Bhabhi and even Uttara to keep her busy while her assured her he would track the package for her, so that she wouldn’t drive herself crazy with anxiety. She had only calmed down once both the uni and Mark confirmed they had received the project.

Sanskar was sitting with Ragini in their room, after they had just received confirmation of the package delivery. Family had had lunch and everyone had retired to their respective rooms for some siesta.

“We should celebrate the completion of your project” Sanskar told her warmly “What do you want to do?”

“I can ask for anything?” Ragini asked

Sanskar looked at her questioningly but nodded

“Add you will do it?” she asked “Promise?”

“What are you planning to make me do?” he asked suspicious

“You have to promise me first” Ragini said with a bright smile. He couldn’t deny her anything, when she was looking so happy, so he agreed.

“I want to watch a movie” Ragini said excitedly

“Okay. Which one? I will have the tickets booked” Sanskar told her

“I want to watch Adi’s movie” Ragini said brightly “I have the entire collection” she said rushing to her section and getting all those DVDs out and placing them on the bed

“Not that Itaydi with cuckoo’s nest” Sanskar moaned “I am not watching his movies”

“You promised!” Ragini cut in

“That is cheating!” Sanskar exclaimed

“How is it cheating?” she asked, glaring at him

“Okay! Fine!” he said giving in, making a face “Get some popcorn ready”

Ragini rushed out of the room and came back fifteen minutes later with a bowl full of popcorn.

“Which one do you want to watch?” he asked looking at the DVDs, turning them around

“Ummm” Ragini said thinking

“Ohhhh! Katrina! I like her!” Sanskar said looking at the cover of one

Ragini looked at him “Actually that is a bit boring. It is really slow. I don’t want to watch it today” she told him

“Ohh! Aishwarya! Now she is a beauty. I haven’t seen this one before either” he said looking at the name ‘Guzarish’

“That is a sad story! I don’t want to watch sad stories today” Ragini told him

“What about this one?” he picked up another cover “This one had Aishwarya as well” he said with a smile

“I don’t like Akshay Kumar that much. And you will tease him more because of his hair style in that” She said pulling it from his hands and putting it in the rejected pile

“What about one of these? Shradha is really pretty and Parineeti is so cute and bubbly” he said smiling brightly at her

“He dies in that one” Ragini said pulling the DVD of Ashiqui from his hands “And I don’t want you teasing him because of his look in this one” she said pointing to Dawat-e-ishq.
“I won’t tease him. I will focus on Parineeti” Sanskar said sincerely

“It is celebration for my project completion. So I get to choose the movie” Ragini said primly “And I choose this one” she said picking up the DVD for ‘Yeh Jawani Hai Deewani’

“Are you sure about this one?” Sanskar asked calmly. Ragini nodded “No going back and keeping on changing your pick, okay?” Sanskar told her. Ragini nodded again.

Sanskar beamed at her “Great! Deepika is my favorite. She is so s*xy” he told her pulling the DVD out of her hand

“That is cheating!” Ragini shot at him

“How is this cheating?” he asked her.

“You made me choose this one?” Ragini said glaring at him

“And how exactly did I do that?” he asked with a teasing smile as it put the DVD in the player and came to sit next to her

“Ummmm” Ragini said but didn’t explain further

Sanskar leaned closer to her “You weren’t trying to pick one with an actress that I didn’t like, were you?”

“Why would I do that?” Ragini asked shrugging her shoulders “And you seem to be crazy about all of them!!” she said annoyed before lying down on her stomach to watch the movie, with the bowl of popcorn in front of her.

Sanskar gave her an amused smile before mimicking her position and lying next to her “You don’t like my liking those actresses?” he asked her with a soft teasing smile

“Why should I care?” Ragini trying to focus on the movie

Sanskar gave a smile and looked at the movie as well “Oh! I cannot wait for the second half. She looks really hot in those lehenga. She had such an amazing figure” Sanskar said pretending to focus on the movie as he looked at her from the corner of his eye.

“Sanskar! How can you say such things about a girl? And those clothes! She should wear something more covered up” Ragini complained

“If she wants to wear those, why are you getting so bothered?” He asked her casually

“What do you mean? Would you be okay with me wearing such clothes?” She asked trying to counter him

“No” he told her honestly

“Why are you so happy about her wearing it then?” she asked annoyed

“I don’t care about her or what she wears. But I care about you. You are” He trailed off

“I am what?” Ragini asked him, still feeling mad

“You are a lot more beautiful than her” he told her softly

“Ohh!” she uttered even as she began to blush

“Shall we watch the movie now?” Sanskar asked her teasingly seeing her blush

Ragini blushed at focused on the movie ahead, as Sanskar grabbed some popcorn and munched on them.

Ragini was soon lost in the movie and more into watching Aditya Roy Kapoor. Sanskar was looking at her from the side of his eyes. She had been holding a popcorn close to her mouth for some time, but was lost in the scene. Sanskar felt a bit annoyed. He leaned over and ate the popcorn directly from her hand.

Ragini looked at him and then her hand and then back at him again. Blush rising on her cheeks as she realized what he had done.

“Oh! Were you going to eat that? You were holding it for so long, I wasn’t sure” Sanskar said casually, before adding “I am sorry. Here, have this” he said, picking up a popcorn and taking it near her lips for her to have it.

Ragini looked at it for a second before gently eating the popcorn out of his hands. Sanskar went back to watching the movie with an accomplished smile on his face even as Ragini blushed some more.

They had been watching the movie from some more time when a scene was played where the actor’s tom boyish friend picks up a fight with some other tourist. As Sanskar was watching it, something struck him. He sat up and rewinded the scene.

Ragini looked at him puzzled “Sanskar?” she asked him gently

But Sanskar just signaled her to be quiet for a bit. He saw the scene and was lost in thought for a while. She sat there watching him, feeling confused and concerned about whatever it was that was bothering him. Before she could ask him about it again, he jumped off the bed and reached for his mobile. He messaged someone and then waiting there watching the screen. There was a ping of a message. He messaged something back and rushed to the wardrobe. He picked up some clothes and rushed to the washroom before she could ask him anything.

He was out of the washroom in literally 5 minutes.

“Sanskar?” she asked him confused

Sanskar saw her “I have to do somewhere right now. I promise I will watch the movie with you some other time. I will make it up to you. I promise” he told her before adding “I am really sorry. I will be back soon, okay?” he asked her

He didn’t wait for her response. He quickly walked over to her and gave her a peck on the check, lost in his own thoughts, and rushed out even before she or for that matter he realized what had happened.

“Ummm” she squeaked softly as she realized what had happened. Blush rose along her cheeks and a shy smile broke on her lips.

Precap – meeting with the person messaged

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Links to previous chapters

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Credit to: Azure

72 comments

  1. Ramya

    Azure its always a pleasure reading ur ff?The way u describe things in such a cute manner! The way u make me realize each and every single thing! Especially the blush they get?Awww! This part was really cute? the way he said she looked more pretty than Deepika?n his sudden peck? Wow! Now this is really cuteness overloaded?Thank u?

    • azure

      thanks so much ramya……i am glad u like the way i write and describe…sometimes i wonder if may be i describe it in too much detail but i am glad u like it….hahaha….he didnt realise he did it…it was really unconscious ….but sometimes your desires come out best when u don’t think much 😉 🙂 welcome dear…and thanks a ton for your comments

  2. Nuszat (T!B!H!) (~Nusz)

    Aw the movie scene!! Deepika haha lol… Man I enjoyed this episode a lot… It’s so damn cute!!! Also your background is beautiful too, amazing keep up the Great work on ragsan aha~Nusz

    • azure

      thanks so much nusz…..glad u enjoyed it….and found it cute. thanks and big hug dear!

  3. Lila

    Oooo suspense…very nice…Azure yaar I literally don’t have any words to say.. ur an mind blowing writer….u write so beautifully. Seriously hands down to u?

    • azure

      thanks so much lila….big big hug to you for ur lovely lovely comments. it means a lot to read such beautiful words…….i just found out you write as well…..can u share your ff names? would love to read them 🙂

    • Azure

      I don’t want to assume but are u the same lila who has been writting power of love?

  4. Mahima

    Yu nailed as usual… his attraction was awesome.. and not less ragini blush.. even she got attracted?? and peak was not at all expected.. and the meeting is regarding swara ??

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…..and glad u liked how his attraction is progressing to love and ragini’s blushes as well. she is unclear what she is feeling right now because she has never felt this way before….remember she only experienced crush on aditya roy kapoor before and fan crush again not a bit one at that, wont compare to this…..peck wasnt expected by either of them….it is more sanskar acting unconsciously as he was preoccupied by other things….else he would have been very cautious to not risk doing anything overt that way. the meeting……may be 😉

  5. faima

    Ohhh…cute one…I was waiting for ua ff…really I bcme mad fo this…update soon

    • azure

      u r so cute dear….thanks so much for waiting for this ff….big hug for doing that….and i hope it is always worth the wait…..thanks dear 🙂

  6. taiana

    I luved this chapter… it was so cute n at end suspense… Seriously u r doing a fab job keep it up…

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…..v happy u loved it…and yup suspense is back 😉 there are after all a lot of loose ends besides their love story 😉 thanks so much for your wonderful words taiana 🙂 🙂

  7. liz

    Ohhhh… It’s so beautiful.. The character of ragini is amazing… Can’t stop asking both.. I think YU ahud include mre rags POV on sanskar Nd her feeling for him also.. Juz curious to know haha.. So NW shud wait 2 days for next update. Sad. If possible make it mre longer.. Being selfish.. Juz luv to read ur ff DTS Y.. Idid he swara in the movie?? New twist awaiting or wat?
    Nd azure thanks fr being such a sweetheart.. Replying each Nd everyone’s comments. Pleasing everyone it’s NT that easy. Since YU r working HW YU find time for all dis.. Don’t YU get exhausted???

    • azure

      please don’t say you are being selfish…..when u ask this it makes me feel good because i realise u like the ff so much and want more of it…..i will try to write longer dear…but it is more based on where i need to end a chapter without making it seem incomplete….so will try but cannot promise.. i am really glad u liked ragini’s character…i like her this was as well. i will include ragini’s pov soon as well….she needs to have a bit more clarity about her feelings before I can do that. there was something that did click for him….but i will tell u more in the next one 😉 may be it is related to swara….willl see ;)…….and about commented to everyone…it is the least i can and should be doing for all the love you shower on me!

  8. liz

    I already posted a comment BT it’s not shown.. Dnt knw wt hapnd.. If two comment seen don’t mind.kk Nd wt shud I say such beautiful story.. How cute they are. Raginis character is the beat.. She is adorable.. The show is nothing compared to ur ff.. Waiting fr nre romance..BT 2 days. Wish YU posted daily.. Nd I know it’s difficult for YU since uu are working.. Don’t YU get exhausted?? Updating.. Replying to all comments. It’s pure dedication.. I think YU love writing a loott.. YU got a future in it.. I must say Nd AL ur readers will agree with me also.. Your. U r such a talent. God bless.. Nd now waiting for next update.. Mae it bit longer plss. Juz want to keep on reading.

    • azure

      thanks so so much for always likely the story and thinking it is beautiful…u are feeling me on top of world saying my ff is better than the show 🙂 big big hug for your sweet words! romance will come as well…along with the suspense….hopefully it will all add up in the end. it is exhausting some times…i get home late and then get only about an hour everyday to write..i enjoy it so take the time out for it….after the story i will take some break…that is what i usually do….i do like writing…it is a nice break and change from work….thanks for saying i have a future in it…may be some time….fingers crossed. lets see what fate holds.

  9. poonam

    seriously ur writing is mindbolwing really u nailed it awesome loved ragsan chemistry awesome superb mindblowing i am becoming crazy fan of ur writing and ff update soon………….

    • azure

      thanks so much poonam for your wonderful words……. v v glad u loved their scenes and chemistry…..i am glad i have a fan in u who is there with me through every update 🙂 big hug dear

  10. I was so dat waiting fr ur update!!!!!
    Superb!!!
    I rlly luvd it!!!
    So attrction hmmmmm superb n the peck!!!!!
    I mean superb it was all so natural
    Luvd it
    Ur ff nvr fails to bring a smile on my face involuntarily!!!!!
    Luvd it
    Plz update d nxt prt soon!!!

    • azure

      you are sweet dear…i know u wait for my updates…i hope i am making it up to you each time…..v v happy u loved it dear. ….hahaha yes attraction and the peck..what can i say…sanskar is falling for her 😉 glad u found it natural….and i am very very happy that the update brought a smile to your face…i hope each update does that for you…but hug

  11. Azure u r such a grt writter that I cant explain I only read some stories and ur storh is one of them I just luved ur story and also u 😉

    • azure

      thanks so much meghna…..bit big thanks for the wonderful compliment….feels good to read this….i am glad you like the story and it is one of the few that u read. love u too dear!

  12. Azure u r such a grt writter that I cant explain I only read some stories and ur storh is one of them I just luved ur story and alsoo u 😉

  13. Ashrita

    Azure you rocked it once again dear, the minute things brings a smile, and I feel even Ragini started to love Sanskar, as the story is running per Sanskars pov his views are clearly expressed……. She seems to be jealous when he spoke about Deepika, and why should she blush if he took away popcorn from her or just gave her a peck if its not something else than just friendship, even she might be in dilemma!!!!! You rocked it dear… A simple things you portrayed in a lovely way, can’t keep myself away from praising you, but I guess I am praising you a lot…. lol…. but seriously worth praising…… Is Sanskar going to mess up with Aditya so did he rewind the scene once again!!!!!! I am eagerly waiting for the next update dear…. tc…. have a nice day and a happy weekend too….

    • azure

      thanks so much ashrita dear…..v v happy that it brought a smile to ur face 🙂 🙂 mission accomplished….v happy to read that. ragini hasnt experiences true love or infatuation or attraction at this scale before….she feels for him but is unclear what it is….that is why i haven’t added her nov yet..though we started the story with hers…..right now i wanted sanskar to discover her and for us to discover her with him….that is why his thoughts are more clear to us….plus he has been in relationship before so understands what is happening to him better. thanks so so much for your wonderful praise….i really feel elated reading these words. hmmm aditya….you will need to wait and read 😉 hahaha u have a nice day too! and have a good weekend!

  14. Wow di it’s mindblowing , outstanding, excellent, superb, amazing , awesome there is any other word to say then add it…???? now sanky started to get attracted on rags and slowly that attraction is going to become love…..and that peck thats so sweet…actually before realizing that he is in love itself our sanky is feeling jealous,, being romantic, concerned( even it can happen to frns) blusing?????????awwww thats so sweet day by day i m falling in love with u and ur ff di….but at this time i have one doubt..y didnt u choose literature field instead of finance……bcoz if u were a writer u l be at the top……bcoz di ur story is really awesome than the swaragini real story……i dont know y the writer didnt feel this type stories…..I dont want to stop appreciating u but i dont want u to get bored…….☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ love u loads and a big big hug to u diiiii……..

    • azure

      dear dear dear priya….u r sooooooooooooooo sweet…..and ur compliments….you are sending me to cloud 9 …hahaha…..thank so much for it…and loads of love and big hugs to you too always! that is true…..sanky is feeling a lot for ragini…may be even more than he understands. and while realisation may be late, feelings are always there na? 😉 v happy u are loving this more day by day…..it make me happy to read that. hahah about literature vs finance…lets just say i was/am a bit better at finance than at literature….and this way i am trying to pursue both. but thanks so much for ur wonderful wishes for me dear…..i hope i can find a story in my head that i love enough to write a book on it. big hug for saying i am writing it better than the serial….actually i didnt like some of the tracks in the show that is what pushed me to write so if they gave me what i wanted i probably wouldnt have written….so lets just say i am happy they didnt deliver 😉

  15. S priya

    I wish if u were t writer of swaragini serial…oh my god can’t tel in words hw it s u nailed it…

    • azure

      thanks so much sweety…..i am so glad u like my story better than the serial…..i was just telling priya that part of the reason i started writing was because i didnt like the serial tracks. if l liked them i wouldnt have written…so i am thankful to the CVs 😉 ;)….but big big hug to you for such an amazing compliment dear…..it does mean a lot to me!

    • azure

      thanks so much rakhi…..glad u liked the cuteness of ragsan scenes in this one…they are really something na….. 🙂 i really hope we get to see varun and teju together as a couple in some show…

  16. Dev

    Azure….wat an epi yaar…….n lovd wen adarsh n pari teased dem n made a plan 4 tim table….haha funny…….n sooperb massage scene…..n lovd d last peck……..
    Keep going n smile……love u lots tc

    • azure

      thanks so much dev dear….glad u liked the teasing….adarsh does have a way to torture sanskar….hahahaha………glad u loved it….such comments do make me smile…so it is may be a self fulfilling prophesy 😉 u keep smiling too dear. tc

  17. adu

    Aaaawwwww….what a cute epi….actually cuteness overloaded!!!! Seriously di nowadays appreciating u is becoming a headache;) U know why??? Because m constantly searching new words in the dictionary, rambling its pages like an idiot, in order to appreciate u in the very best possible way…U have truly earned it by giving us one after another rocking epi!!!! Definitely agreee with everyones’ opinion, if u had been the writer of the show, it would have sky-rocketed in the TRP charts and would be the best show in the world…but I ll stop whining about it because m having a blast on this page:):):)

    Coming to the epi…So(Infinite times) BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN…Starting from the minute things like Sanskar’s attraction, in what way is he attracted towards her, his care and concern, the teasing of big bro, the sweet moments between the duo during the movie, Ragini’s constant blushing( Ragini don’t blush this much…u r making me go red;););) )….Also we got a glimpse of Ragini’s view point…but would love to see more of it and her changed feelings towards Sanky…Can’t wait for the next one…who is the person??? The suspense is killing me;)

    Di I have posted my last epi of the 3 shots…Please check it if u have time and give me ur suggestions regarding the story. Here’s the link-
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=mere+humsafar+ek+duje+ke+vaste

    How r u??? Hope u r doing great…and come back soon…m very greedy for ur ff…
    Lots of love and hugs…tkcr:):):)

    • azure

      hahahaha ….that is some compliment adu dear…..i am forcing u to by heart the dictionary ….hahahha …side effect of the ff? 😉 if the CVs of the show gave us the tracks i am writing about….i probably would have been too lazy to write anything…so i have to thank them ;)…..but jokes apart….big big teddy bear hug for your sweet words! i am trying to add a lot of details…somethings i wonder if it is boring…but thanks for always making me realise that they are needed….i wanted all of you to be able to visualise the story and more importantly a lot of the scenes that i write, esp the ones which might not have immediately connect right now, have some remote impact to the bigger story at the play…..so i am very very glad u r enjoying each minute detail about the story…make it really worth the effort of typing the chapters after coming back from work……u will see more of ragini’s pov later once she understands her own feelings better. …..it is suspense….u have to wait 😉 i am hmm good…..happy that weekend has come so that i can rest a bit. how r u? how is preparation going? when are the exams? will read your ff after this.

  18. kalai

    awww must say full part was so cute nd about precap I know it will be definitely beyond my imagination…
    luv dis part so much
    waitng fr nxt update

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….glad u found it cute….and precap and next epi….hmmmm i hope so….i am trying my best to make it that way 😉 thanks so much for loving it! 🙂

  19. Amna

    It was awsm di . Sorry for being late but l was stressed for my boards results but now happy as l got 84% l know it is not good but enough for me. This chap increased my happiness. Oh it was so cute he was controlling his attention with so much difficulty but l thnk he is not ready to accept that it is more than jst attraction. Nd parish teasing was too gud.??

    • azure

      first big big congrats on the result. as long as u r happy that is all that matters. how stream are u planning to pursue? what do you want to do? i am glad that the chapter increased ur happiness. think of it as virtual sweet for your success……big big hug to you and wish you the very very best for the step leg of your studies. about sanskar…..pyar pe zor nahi…how long can he deny 😉 adarsh has a way of teasing his brother and his wife is his partner in crime…perfect jodi 😉 and don’t ever say sorry for this…..ur board results come first!! big hug again

      • Amna

        coming to stream i m really confused . l thought of asking from u ppl bt u asked first only strings heart to heart lol. well l m quite good in science especially bio bt my intrests lies in in arts subject like history,social science, eng. bt as u know middle class working family thnk much about society my mom was stressed out as my father is an engineer,bhai doing b.tech , she a gov science teacher what people will say. she said to me that if i wnt pursue my carrier in arts , she will not stop me bt atleat i cn pass 12th from bio side. I thnk she is not wrong in her place bt there is a smalll devil poppng in my mind saying what is d use of wasting ur 2 yrs in somethng which u r not pursueing afterwards.
        nd further I want to go in civil services for which arts subject r bst.
        pls pls help me l m dangling between two bridges not knwing where to go.
        were u a comm student as u said u are working in an office?

      • Azure

        Best place to start is asking what you want to do finally and why? It is is civil services then why that? What do you like about it? Is there any other profession that can give you the same work profile? What is the best way to get there and via areas of your interest? I have seen eng students do as well in civil ser as arts because maths helps with logical q. What is ur career choice plan b? What do u need to get there is civil services doesn’t work out? Start with these questions. I did my sci first and then went to commerce. I know people who did arts and moved to commerce as well. Options are there u need to follow the one of most interest because then u will want to study well and do well.

  20. this is the first time i comment in your ff but i read every episode of your ff. I just love your ff, it is so good, every thing is good, you are a really good writter. you should write a book. Your so talented. seriously your ff is one of my favorite ff and you are one of my favorite writter. seriously yyour ff is wonderfull,fabulous,nice,exelent,amazing,mindblowing…. words arent enough to describe your ff. every scene is so good. every thing is perfect. i became a fan of ur writting. i love your ff. waitting for the next episode.

    • azure

      thanks so much anamica …..it really feels good to have a silent reader like the story enough for them to comment…i am really v happy. thanks dear for ur wonderful words u r really sweet. i am v happy u like my writing….if it is fated i will write a book someday 🙂 🙂 but for now your wonderful compliments have made me v v v happy. i am glad u liked the scene and the story…and thanks for being a fan and loving the ff! 🙂

  21. bisha

    Azure!! It was Fantabulous!! More than that. Di I loved this chapter. Its so so much adorable. This story is above my compliments. You describe everything with so much perfectness!! Wohoo!! I love it.

    And YJHD!! One of my fav movies!!! ^_^ Tysm fr adding it. And that fuss over movie selection was soo cute!! RagSan moments were in no less words cute!!! I loved it. So Sanskar’s falling for Ragini!! Ahaan 😉 And Ragini too realising something special. Thay bhaiya bhabi moment was so funny!! I laughed at those teases!! Keep it up di and keep writing♥♥

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…glad u loved the update and found it adorable. thanks for such wonderful compliments bisha. 🙂 🙂 sweet of you……and v happy u liked their moments. yes they are feeling something sp for each other 😉 and adarsh and pari are teasing them full on for it….thanks a lot dear 🙂 🙂 big hug

    • azure

      so sweet of u kamy….i am just starting to write the next part…..will try to update soon

  22. Hey azure. I AM YOUR NEW READER .. just like everyone here I am going crazy for your story ur ff ur writing.. its amazing.. loved every single scene ..cant point out just one..
    pleasure to read yrr!!

    • azure

      thanks so much roshni dear….it is great to have new readers…big big thanks for liking the story so so much! big hug dear! 🙂 🙂

      • the storyline is is really great! Really!! Nd I forgot to mention yjhd is my fvrt. movie 😀 🙂 well,I would love it if you give halka sa time to my new ff “KINDLE” hope you like that

      • azure

        absolutely…will read it as soon as i finish typing the next update for this, today itself

  23. Joya

    Aaaaaaaayyyyyyylaaaaaaaaaaa………………..

    Woooooooowwwwwwwwww……………………..

    Pyar huaaaaa chupke se……………………

    Superbbbbbbb…………

    Every line…….just perfect…………….i reallly dnt wannnnnna misssssss any singal ward of ur fffffff…………………perfect perfect perfect…………….

    Pyar huaaaa chupke se……………………

    It was chumeshwariiii???????????

    • azure

      hahahaha…..i will join u in singing….kuch toh hua hai….kuch ho gaya hai….do char din se lagta hai aise 😉 ….hahahaha…..thanks so much dear….big big hug for your comment.

  24. azure

    btw folks all my stories leaving aside this one are now only on wattpad. my username there is foresight_azure. i will try to publish them here at some point soon. i have deleted all of them from IF.

  25. Mahima

    Is that u r saying frm nw on ur stories ll be on wattpad and not here TU or may be later ?? just a clarification….

    • azure

      red string will be on tellyupdates. the others that i wrote in india forums, i will post them here at some point. for now those stories which were in india forums, i have posted them on wattpad. that is what i meant. i will post the next chapter in this tonight. i am writing it now

  26. Fari

    So I just finished binge reading all the episodes and I’m honestly speechless right now. The way you write is simply flawless. The vocabulary, sentence lengths, speech – everything about your writing amazes me. Most of the FFs on here have either great plots but terrible writing or great writing and terrible plots. Yours is a splendid mix of the two. Also I am so grateful that you have chosen to give importance to Ragini in your FF otherwise almost all the other FF writers and even the actual writers of Swaragini place so much importance on Swara’s character and frankly it’s quite annoying. Keep up the amazing work.

    • azure

      thanks so much fari for your sweet sweet words. i am so happy that u enjoyed the story and more important i managed to get the right mix of language, plot into the writing….big big thanks for the compliment. v v happy to read such comments as a writer. ragini is a strong character….perceptive, smart, gusty and a lot more understanding of the emotional underplay. i must admit that i haven’t been able to do as much justice to her in my past stories though she and sanskar are my fav characters…..i am glad i could do some right by her in this one. thanks a lot dear.

  27. azure

    next chapter just submitted. just finished writing it so might have typos…..but it has been the longest one written till date.

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