Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 11

Hi, next part of the story is here. Thanks for your comments. I know a lot of you are looking forward to ashu scenes in this one…..they will be very different from the usual ones. i hope you aren’t disappointed. Thanks – azure

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It had been a week since Sanskar had visited Sharmishtha and things had turned completely upside down, in terms of his understanding of who Swara really was. There had been no further leads on that front and he was desperately hoping for some.

Ragini had been getting busier with her project work as the deadline loomed on her head, but they did continue to squeeze in some quality time together. Their every interaction, every chat seemed so effortless and natural that he had not really realized when she started becoming integral part of his life and touched every aspect of it. She was the only one he could share his dreams and deepest fears with, without fearing judgement.

They had finished their dinner sometime back and Ragini had been back in the room just a few minutes before, after helping with the clean-up. A knock on the door brought him out of his thoughts. Ragini had been busy working on the project, he didn’t want her disturbed “I will check who it is” he told her as she made to get up.

Sanskar opened the door to see Uttara, standing outside the door, with a pile of clothes in her hands. “Bhabhi” she called out

“Uttara!” Ragini called out getting up “Come in”

Uttara tried to move around Sanskar, but he kept coming in the way. Finally, she dumped the clothes, in her hand, into his and shoved him aside exclaiming “Bhai!”

Ragini took Uttara’s hand and made her sit next to her on the seatee by the coffee table. Sanskar looked at them and the clothes in his hand, annoyed, before dumping them on the bed “Now that Bhabhi has come in, you are not bothered with the Bhai!” he shot at her

“Are you feeling jealous Bhai?” Uttara asked him

Sanskar rolled his eyes “Yes, as if I don’t have anything better to do than be jealous of your girly gossip”

“Bhai!” Uttara exclaimed, crossing her hands in front her, in annoyance

“Sanskar, stop teasing her” Ragini told him before turning to Uttara “So what are you going to do?” she asked

Uttara looked at her and then Sanskar, who was by now sitting with his book on his side of the bed.

“Don’t worry. It’s okay. Your Bhai won’t do anything” Ragini assured her talking softly.

Sanskar’s ear’s prickled hearing this. He continued to focus on the book, pretending he wasn’t bothered with the conversation that was going on.

Uttara glanced over at him once, before looking back at Ragini “I tried the clothes on” she said quietly

“And?” Ragini asked her, keeping her volume down

“I am not comfortable in them” Uttara admitted.

Ragini nodded “What about the other thing?” Ragini asked her

“I thought a lot about what you said” Uttara told her. Ragini held her hand gently in support “You are right” Ragini nodded with a reassuring smile, gently squeezing her hand. “Thanks Bhabhi. It felt good talking to you about it though” Uttara told her

“You know you can talk to me about anything. I am not just your Bhabhi. We are friends as well, right?” Ragini asked her.

Uttara nodded with a smile. She got up from the seatee “You get back to your project now” Uttara said before walking over to the pile of clothes “Bhabhi, this will look really good on you though” she said touching a black dress on the top of the pile, before walking out of the room, closing the door.

As soon as she left the left, Sanskar put his book aside “What was that about?” he asked Ragini

Ragini looked at the door and then back at him “You have to promise you aren’t going to jump the gun after I tell you”

“What is that supposed to mean?” He asked concerned “Is everything okay with Uttara?”

Ragini nodded walking over to the bed and sitting next to him “She has made friends with some of the popular girls in her college, they have told her that if she wants to be part of their group she has to wear more modern western clothes and not the salwar kurtis that she usually wears”

“What?” Sanskar asked surprised “What does she need such stupid friends?”

“Calm down Sanskar” Ragini told him, but he threw his hands in the air, signaling that that wasn’t going to happen. Ragini sighed “She was feeling a bit stressed because she wanted to be part of their group” Sanskar made to speak, but Ragini cut in before he could “I spoke to her. She understands. She isn’t going to change herself or her clothes to be part of their group”

Sanskar nodded, though he wasn’t completely calmed down “What did you tell her?” May be I should talk to her as well”

“I told her that if they were her true friends they would accept her the way she is. It is not true friendship if they expect her to do something that she isn’t comfortable with.” Ragini told him “I told her that if she compromises over this, she might feel good temporarily, but soon she will start feeling suffocated in that friendship and she will stop being who she is.” Sanskar nodded hearing this “I told her she was fine just the way she was. And anyone who didn’t understand it, wasn’t worth her friendship”

“So she isn’t going to put herself through that silliness then?” Sanskar asked.

Ragini nodded “I told her that if she still wanted she should try some of my clothes in the privacy of her room” Ragini told him “You know my clothes had been shipped back home along with the other things. I had some of them sent over here for her to try” she explained “I told her that if she really liked wearing them and felt comfortable in them then I would talk to you and we would talk to the family together to let her wear them”

“But she wasn’t comfortable in them” Sanskar stated, remembering their conversation. Ragini nodded

Sanskar sat back for a minute lost in thought. Ragini didn’t interrupt him. After a few minutes Sanskar broke into a small smile “You really are a lazy copy cat!” he told her

“Sanskar! How can you say that?” Ragini asked him

“Do you want to repeat what you said to Uttara again?” Sanskar said raising his eyebrow “I distinctly remembering hearing some of those words before. Hmmm now where did I hear them?” he asked her pretending to remember something “Oh! That is right” he exclaimed as if he has remembered what he was trying to recollect “Didn’t I say something on these lines to you just about a week back”

Ragini has the grace to blush hearing this “Okay! So you said it” she admitted “But the important thing wasn’t about which one of us said it, right? The main thing was for Uttara to hear it.”

Sanskar nodded and smiled warmly as her “Fine! But at least give me credit for my wonderful words” he said straightening his collar

“Okay! Thanks Sanskar gurudev for your enlightening words!” Ragini said bowing down to him “Happy!” she said making a face, before breaking into a genuine smile “In a way, I guess you can think of it as both of us talking to her”

“Fine! You are forgiven Ragini balike for infringing my copy written words this time” Sanskar told her. Ragini made to get up and go back to her project “Not so fast” he told her. Ragini gave him a confused look “Since you are going to get all the credit for my words, I need some guru dakshina as well”

“What do you want?” Ragini asked him

“Hmmmmm” Sanskar said pondering “It has to be a long list of things, considering the number of times you do this” he said looking at her critically

“Sanskar!” Ragini said in a childish tone “You won’t make it too difficult, right? I am your best friend” she tried to reason

“I have to think about it” Sanskar said looking around before his eyes landed on the pile of clothes in front of her “Okay! I will make the first one really easy. You are, as you have said, my best friend after all” he told her enthusiastically “You don’t need to do much, just wear this one” he said picking up the black dress that Uttara had spoken about earlier

“Sanskar! What if someone comes in? Family won’t be okay with me wearing this” Ragini told him, her eyes widening

“You are my best friend that is why I am not going to ask you to wear it in front of the family. It is just here” Sanskar shot at her

Ragini made a pleading face but Sanskar wouldn’t budge “Fine! When do I have to do this?” she asked finally

“ummmm now!” he told her rolling his eyes

“Now!” Ragini exclaimed

“Did you want me to call the panditji and find the right muhurat for you to wear it?” Sanskar asked her sarcastically “Of course now!”

“Fine!” Ragini said taking the dress along with her and going to washroom to change

Sanskar shook his head and went back to his book. She came out after a few minutes “How do I look?” she asked a bit nervously

Sanskar glanced at her. She was wearing a knee length black body hugging dress. It was sleeveless with a boat neck and some lacy details. When he had pointed to the dress, he had no clue what it was really like. Her protesting had, more than anything else, made him push her to wear it. Sanskar had only seen her in traditional Indian clothes, she had always looked good in them. But she looked amazing in this one. She had a grace and poise about her that made her look even more elegant in the dress.

She lifted her hair, tying it at the back of her head “The hair is supposed to be all tied up” she added “Does it look bad?” she asked seeing that he hadn’t commented

He snapped out of his thoughts and walked towards her “Leave your hair open” he said softly “It looks better that way”

Ragini let her hair down “Okay now?” she asked

Sanskar nodded “You look nice” he said

“Just nice” Ragini said a bit disappointed

Sanskar broke into a smile “You look really beautiful” he said “In fact, you look amazing in this. So amazing that if you wore this in public I would need to sock a few people for staring at you the wrong way”

Ragini blushed “Really?” she asked gently

“Really” he reassured her “So what was this dress for? Were you trying to impress someone?” he asked her

“It was meant to be for my graduation party” she said softly “I know it is silly to buy it when graduation was months away, but when I saw it, I really liked it. I called Ranveer bhai to check if he was okay with me buying it. He was, so I went ahead”

“Why did you need to check? He wouldn’t have stopped you” Sanskar commented

“I know he wouldn’t have, but when I was spending family money, I felt the need to” Ragini told him earnestly

That was one of the things he loved about Ragini. She was really conscientious. She had little ways of showing respect to others around her, showing that she wasn’t taking things for granted, that she valued what they were doing for her.

“So you were going to attend this graduation party, but do you even know how to dance?” Sanskar asked her teasingly

“I am not going to the graduation party, so you can never know now” Ragini said casually

“Not necessarily” Sanskar said tilting his head, before extending his hand towards her. Ragini looked at him questioningly “Can I have the dance?” he asked

“Where is the music?” Ragini asked raising her eyebrow

“You don’t need music in playing in your ears to dance. Music should be in your head and heart” Sanskar told her

Ragini raised her eyebrows hearing the comment “Are you trying to be Shahrukh or something?” she asked him

Sanskar rolled his eyes, pulling her closer to him, wrapping a hand around her waist and holding her hand in the other one “Please! You are no Kajol for me to pretend to be Shahrukh” he said

“Do you even know how to dance?” Ragini asked him, throwing the question he had asked just a few minutes back.

Sanskar twirled her around and then dipped her, before pulling her back upright “You were saying?” he asked with a bright smile and raised eyebrow

“Okay fine you know how to dance” Ragini said with a blush

“Hang on! You didn’t think I could dance, did you?” Sanskar asked seeing her expression “This isn’t like that judge prosecutor thing, right?” he asked narrowing his eyes

Ragini’s blush deepened

“Ohhhh! Come on, out with it. What did you think?” Sanskar asked amused. Ragini muttered something but Sanskar couldn’t catch it “What?”

“Ring master” Ragini said breaking into a laughter

Sanskar’s eyes widened “Ring master!” he exclaimed. He dipped her a bit too low in retaliation

“Sanskar!” Ragini yelped

“Say it!” he told her

“Say what?” she asked. Sanskar dipped her a bit lower “Sanskar!” she yelled “Okay! Okay! Sorry!”

“And?” he asked not letting her up

“And you aren’t ring master! Happy!” Ragini told him “Now let me up”

“And?” Sanskar asked

“And what?” Ragini asked. When raised his eyebrows and didn’t let her up, she quickly added “Okay! You are a really good dancer. Better than John Travolta”

Sanskar pulled her upright quickly “John Travolta!!” he exclaimed making a face “I am not an old pervert!”

“What do you think you are? Aditya Roy Kapoor?” Ragini asked him

“Please! I have no intention of being compared to that monkey!” Sanskar told her

“You called my Adi a monkey!” Ragini exclaimed affronted, pulling the hand, which he held in his, out and hitting him on the arm for his comment.

Sanskar wrapped his now freed up arm around her waist, without much thought behind it, wraping his hands one over the other, around her waist.

“That Adi is worse than Ityadi (etc)” Sanskar commented “And I am not the only one who thinks this. Ashu is with me on this” Sanskar told her

“You and Ashu have teamed up on this!” Ragini exclaimed feeling amused even as she rested her now free hand around his neck as they continued to swing together slowly. “How many chocolates did you need to bribe him with?”

“I don’t bribe him with cholates like you!” Sanskar told her “And he didn’t need any bribing for this. He agrees with me completely. We both think that that Ityadi is an idiot with a cuckoo nest on his head”

Ragini moved a bit closer, pretending to smell something “I smell something burning” she said softly “I think someone is jealous”

Sanskar moved close to her ears and whispered “Are you sure it not from the heat you are feeling around your cheeks, from all the blushing, because you have such a hot dance partner!”

“Sanskar!” Ragini exclaimed, hitting him, even as a blush started emerging on her cheeks

“What!” Sanskar said with a sly teasing smile “You look really pretty like this, blushing”

“Sanskar! Stop it!” Ragini said, even as the blush on her cheeks deepened

Sanskar smiled but didn’t push it further. They just moved about in silence for a few minutes, sharing warm smiles with each other before Sanskar broke through the silence “So when is this graduation party?” he asked

“In December, if I manage to graduate that is” Ragini told him softly

“You aren’t sure you are going to graduate?” Sanskar asked surprised “Have you been flunking your papers?”

Ragini hit him on the arm “I will have you know that I have always been among the top students in the class”

“Well then what is the problem? Your project seems to be going well” Sanskar asked

“Internship” Ragini said softly

“Why are you worried about it? You know you will get through in any of city’s top architecture firms, but if for some reason that doesn’t happen, you can always do it in the family business” Sanskar assured her

“I am not worried about getting internship” Ragini said

“Then what are you worried about?” Sanskar asked confused

“Will the family be okay with me doing the internship? I won’t be able to help with the house work. I would be away the whole day” She said softly

“Don’t worry about it. I will talk to them and convince them” Sanskar promised her

“No. Don’t!” Ragini told him

“What? Why?” Sanskar asked confused

“I will ask them. I know that if you talk to them, you will convince them” she said

“And you don’t want them to be convinced?” he asked confused

“I want them to be okay with me doing this with their whole heart. I don’t want them to agree to it because they had to be convinced about it” she told him “Please, let me do this”

Sanskar nodded. They continued to move in perfect sync without music, wrapping their arms around each other, for a while, before a ping of message on Sanskar’s phone brought them back.

“I better change and get back to the project” Ragini told him. Sanskar nodded. Ragini went off to the washroom to change, while Sanskar went back to check the message. It was a sales message “Idiots!” Sanskar muttered before going back to his book.

Ragini walked out of the washroom a few minutes later, changed into her comfortable night kurta and pajama. She walked over to the side table and picked up the phone making a call. Sanskar guessed it must be her usual nightly call to Ashu.

“Hello! Aditi Bhabhi” She said as her Bhabhi picked up the call

“Oh!” she said sadly after a few minutes “Okay I will call him tomorrow morning. Are you okay?” she asked

“hmmm. Okay. Good night” she wished her Bhabhi as she put the phone away. She looked a bit sad

“What happened?” Sanskar asked “Couldn’t talk to Ashu?”

Ragini nodded “He is already asleep” she said as she opened the drawer next to the bed to get her medicines.

Sanskar could see that she was feeling a bit low, not having been able to talk to Ashu. Feeling the need to make her smile, he spoke in a childish voice “Laddo! Did you have any chocolates without Ashu?”

Ragini looked at him confused “What?” she asked

Mimicking Ashu’s usual expressions Sanskar asked “Did you eat any chocolates without Ashu?”

Ragini gave him an amused look, before answering “No”

“Promise?” Sanskar asked mimicking Ashu still

“Promise” Ragini said breaking into a bright smile

“Did you take your medicines?” Sanskar continued asking her, playing the part of Ashu

“I will have them now” she told him the way she would to Ashu

“Okay! I have to go now. I have school tomorrow” Sanskar said “Good night” before blowing a flying kiss toward her

Ragini burst out into laughter. She leaned over toward Sanskar, ruffling his hair a bit “I didn’t know I shared the room with big Ashu” she said

Sanskar smiled brightly at her. She quickly gulped her medicine and went back to her project, the smile still intact on her face, as Sanskar went back to his book.

Sanskar glance over at her a few minutes later and she looked back. Both shared a bright smile before returning to their activities.

Sanskar had been reading a book that Ragini had persuaded him to – ‘Architecture of Happiness’. He had been reading it just for her. Though he had to admit it, that as he started reading it, he found it really interesting. But right now even the interesting book, wasn’t keeping him from getting distracted with other thoughts. More preciously thoughts of his best friend.

Sanskar glanced at Ragini. She was busy focusing on her project. If someone had told him, he would be best friends with her two weeks back, he would have laughed at them and right now, he couldn’t imagine her not being there. She was really something else.

He was not one to compare, but without meaning to, his thoughts drifted to how different the two sisters were. Swara had been a beautiful princess who knew she was beautiful and demanded to be treated like a princess. Her demands were meant to be fulfilled. She was meant to be indulged and pampered. And he had, and found happiness in doing that.

Ragini, on the other hand, was like a cool breeze taking away the fatigue not just from the body, but also from the mind and soul, leaving you feel refreshed. She was like the warmth that you yearned on cold night, protecting you from the chilly weather. She was like nature, who bore the brunt of harsh conditions and yet spread spring wherever she went, without really expecting much in return. She was the essence of life, and yet she worked in the background, without consciously making her presence felt. But once someone realized her presence, it was impossible to go back to the world where she didn’t exist. She didn’t boast of her beauty, though she was pure pristine beauty. She was humble and warm.

He glanced over at her again. She was tying her hair in a bun, but had missed a tendril of her hair, which still rested gently along the nape of her neck. Her eyes were lost in the drawings that she had been working on, when a fringe of her hair fell across them, bothering her. She gently tucked it behind her ears before going back to examining the drawings, tapping her ipencil along her delicate pink lips. Woah!! His mind exclaimed. He quickly dragged his eyes back to his book. What was that! Bring your thoughts back on track! She is your best friend! His mind’s warned.

He shook his head and decided to step outside the room for a while. As he walked past her, Ragini called out confused “Where are you going?”

“Just going out for a few minutes to get some fresh air” he said not really looking at her “I will be back soon” he said rushing out

Ragini looked at him confused, but didn’t stop him.

Sanskar went to the terrace. There was a nice cool breeze flowing. He closed his eyes trying to enjoy it, but his thoughts went back to their fun childish crazy Ashu discussion.

“Where are you lost little brother? What are you thinking?” came a voice next to him.

Sanskar opened his eyes and looked over to find Adarsh bhaiyaa standing beside him.

“Nothing” Sanskar said looking away

“It didn’t seem like nothing” Adarsh said casually

“If you must know, I was thinking about Ashu” Sanskar said trying to get Adarsh bhaiyaa off his back.

“Ashu?” Adarsh asked confused “Our Ashu?” Adarsh asked again using his hand to indicate Ashu’s height “Little Ashu?”

Sanskar felt a bit of blush rising on his cheeks hearing ‘little ashu’ as he remembered what Ragini had called him “Yes, why?” Sanskar asked trying to cover it up

“You had a smile on your face when you were thinking about” Adarsh said, pausing for a few seconds, before skeptically adding “Ashu. Usually such kind of smile is only brought about by thoughts of a girl. A special girl at that” Adarsh said raising his eyebrows

“You are really way off track” Sanskar said, before quickly adding “And what are you doing here?”

“Off track? Really? I came here to enjoy some fresh air. Why I cannot come here?” Adarsh asked looking at him amused

“Then enjoy the fresh air. Why are you going into such crazy topics?” Sanskar asked him annoyed

“Okay!” Adarsh said raising his hands in defeat “Lets enjoy the fresh air, shall we?” he said.

Sanskar nodded and looked away. Adarsh gave him an amused look, before looking away.

Precap – kuch toh gadbad hai

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Credit to: Azure

77 comments

    • azure

      thanks so much kamy……u comments made me feel really great….big big thanks for the praise and big hug

  1. Amna

    This chap+new montages + you all r awsm, supra, mind boggling. Nd thnk u for fulfilling my wish so early.

  2. Mahima

    Lol.. even though ashu is not in the scene cuteness is overloaded… and this is the strating od there love phase ?? again and again u giv us interesting and not so bored episodes… each one is different… and waiting fr many more to come…

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….and u guessed it right….things are changing in their equation …so so glad u weren’t bored….sometimes when the scenes seem a bit nature, i worry if they are still interesting as well. thanks …big hug

    • azure

      thanks soo much lila dear……v happy u liked it and a big big hug for your sweet compliment…..you all help me realise that i can write well 🙂

    • azure

      thanks so much sherin…..big big hug dear…and its wonderful comments likes yours that help me be better at writing 🙂

  3. S priya

    I can’t say in words hw I enjoyed while reading…plz post nxt part soon I can’t wait…

    • azure

      thanks so much dear….how r u? v happy u liked reading it…..will try dear….i need to start writing the next part. will do soon.

  4. Superb
    Luvd d epi
    Ragsan scenes awsum as alwayz natural bt nvr fail to fail to bring smile on ur face
    In luv wid ur ff
    U r a rlllly vry vry vry gud writer!!!!!!!!!!
    Luvd it

    • azure

      thanks so much sweety……v glad u liked it…..so so happy to know that they bring smile on ur face even if they are normal natural scenes….big big thanks and biggggg hug for your compliment dear. its all of your comments that push me to write better

  5. liz

    Yay…. Sanskar is falling for ragu… It’s a pleasure to read ur ff.. Juz keeps on smiling till the end.. It is sweet

    • azure

      thanks so much liz….trust me ur comments make me smile….so big big thanks for that…..it is always a pleasure to read ur comments too! big hug…and yes he is falling for her alright….how long could he have resisted 😉

      • liz

        Yeaaaa.. It’s so sweet of you to reply each Nd everyone’s comments.. Spending so much time on it.. I think m adicted to ur ff. First thing I do in the morning is to check whether YU have posted next update though i read most of the ragini ff’s .. It’s a pleasure to read..

      • azure

        you all take so much time to read my updates…..i would feel wrong not to respond to all of you and thanks u for the love and affection ur shower on me 🙂 and trust me comments like this make me v v v happy so i need to thanks u for ur sweet words

    • azure

      thanks so much poonam….:) 🙂 u write really welll….good to read it from u always

  6. taiana

    Super chapter it’s brilliantly written… sanskar imitating ansh for bringing smile on ragini’s face is the best part… he started to fall for ragini… im waiting for the next one…

    • azure

      thanks so much dear…..v happy u liked how it was written and u thought it was super….he is starting to fall for rags alright…..how long could he have prevented himself from that….big hug dear

  7. Joya

    Marvelous………………………………………………

    Uttara-ragini,ragini-sanskar conversation,gurudev sanskar??,dance,ragini-ashu-sanskar….comparison of sanskar’s mind between ragini and swara,uske lips pe aake uske khaylon ka ruk jana then uncomfortable hona,adrsh’s and sanskar……..mind blowing…………

    Jaise aap unke actions ko emotions ko labjo me baya karti hai means raising his eyebrow,he threw his hand in air,signaling, ashu se baat na hone ki wajah se ragini ka sad hona……………….superb………………………
    I loved it so much……………..
    Veryyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyyyyyy veryyyyyyyyy beautiful epi……….ragini’s blushing??

    Superbbbbbbbbbbb

    • azure

      joya……aapke comments bahot acche or lajawab hote hai…..aap har cheeze notice karte ho….as a writer bohot acha lagta hai yeh padkar……and yes ragini is blushing….sanskar ke compliments ka asar hone laga hai 😉 ;)……big hug dear

  8. Wow thats so sweet di eventhough little ashu is not in this epi big ashu did really a great job??and this epi is like a magical thing I mean in friendship itself I feel like epi is romantic when it come to love that will be blockbuster romance……. Its so cute di and that ashu part was quite funny……. Day by day improvement in sanky???

    • azure

      hahahahah…..glad u liked big ashu 😉 i am glad u found it magical…..and yes it was romantic because now the lines between friendship and ‘something more’ are blurring and blurring really fast. she is blushing at his compliments….and small comments. when he says hot partner, she blushes instead of saying shutup or something like a friend…..he likes her blushing….he is annoyed with aditya roy even thought he may not be jealous…..attraction is slowly coming into picture now…..not just friendship. 😉 glad u liked this sanky….i want him to find out who ragini is and fall for her slowly.

      • Same here even I want that he should know ragini completely till the deep of her life and fall for her…..we have same taste??

    • now only I saw ur reply in prev epi di ya she got the love from others the way u showed that its awesome and u said abt ashu scene ryt I felt like even though he is not in the scene he made a magical thing btw ragsan ….love u a loads di…….??????????????????????????????

  9. i am short of words to praise ur ff..it’s just amazing superb fabulous excellent..eagerly waiting for nxt prt..finally sanky started falling for ragu

    • azure

      thanks so much rakhi…..ur comments mean a lot to me….v v happy to read them…..glad u loved the update….and yes sanskar is falling for ragu alright 😉 …..big hug dear.

    • azure

      thanks so much megha…..glad u liked how the scene/update played out….yes he is feeling for rags now 😉

  10. Ramya

    Azure????!!! Lots n lots of love from my side??Oh Thank u so muchhh for this wonderful part!! Ashu’s conversation was the cutest??N his comparison between Swara n Ragini was also very sweet?

    • azure

      lots and lots of love from my side too dear. i am v v happy u liked the part….hahha and yes ashu convo as well….i wanted sanskar to slowly realise and understand rags and appreciate her….v happy u liked the comparison dear….big hug!

  11. sima

    Very nice ..when i read others comments …i dont know why but i feel very proud of uu….u r blessed with the skillss….the original serial is less than ur story

    • azure

      u are making me blush sima dear…..but i am really really touched by your care and thoughtfulness…..u are really really so sweet for saying this. thanks so much for u so wonderful compliment……big tight hug dear……so so sweet of you.

  12. adu

    Effortlessly beautiful….really reading ur ff it seriously gives some peace to my insane mind and a lovely bliss to my dumb heart???

    Uttara-Ragini understanding as friends, Ragini making Sanskar understand his sister’s dilemma,their soulful dance (I literally imagined it to be a romantic one?), their convo during the dance, Sanskar’s comparison between Swara and Ragini and looking at Ragini in a different way for the 1st time (Ahem! Ahem! Sanky Kuch Kuch Hota Hai???)….I laughed really hard thinking about Big Ashu…I didn’t understand why u said it was different, now I know….Definitely an out-of-the-world epi…can’t wait for the next?

    How are you di? Hope u r in the pink of health…Thanks for asking about my studies…it’s going good but still I doubt my efforts…

    Thanks a ton for reading my story and liking it…your comment means a lot…I always have a doubt if I write well or not…Do give me some tips to write such beautiful stories like well ( I won’t be able to express like u in my umpteenth effort too???Foolish me)….And as you asked for the next chapter, here it is-
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/mere-humsafar-ek-duje-ke-vaste-three-shots-epi-2/?replytocom=1174073

    Lots of love and big big big teddy bear hugs???

    • azure

      adu sweety….after ur comment i should feel pink because of the blushing right? 😉 hahahaha hey why are u worried about ur efforts….dont the best u can….as long as u are convinced ur are putting the right effort it is good….leave the rest to god. you write really well and u have me curious about ur story so please don’t doubt at all.

      i am v v v happy that u found some peace after reading the update. and sanskar….how long was he going to be able to resist. they became best friends and thought of each other as a person…now they are waking up to being a boy and a girl too…..they are blushing, getting annoyed by crushes……hahhaah…..i am glad u liked this different ashu scene 😉 big big teddy bear hugs to you too!

      • adu

        Thanks di for your encouraging words…will surely try to act on them…Awww!!! You like my story…Thank u so much that u find it interesting…I ll definitely let u know when I post the next part…btw m blushing ri8 now reading ur comment???

  13. Dev

    A MIND BLOWINGLY FAB EPI AZURE…….it was damn tooo gooodddd…..especially d dance n d convo b4 it btwn ragsan……omg sanky is falling 4 ragu…….n d way u rot abt his looks on her was too pretty….n making sanku as ashu was good yaar…really lovd d epi n good comparison btwn swarag…..
    Love u lots …..hugs n tc

    • azure

      thanks so much dev……thanks for ur fab words and compliments…..i am so glad u liked the convo and the dance..and yes sanky is falling for rags alright…..he is starting to notice that she is not just wonderful person, she is beautiful too and his close confidant already….and he likes when she blushes…..hahahah…glad u liked the comparison…i want sanskar to slowly fall for rags not like the chasing and courting he did with swara….it was to be different… lots of love dear!

  14. Bisha

    I was busy with this NEET exam. Uff!! Huff!! Puff!! Could not read any ffs. But As soon as I got your ff I went back and read all the missed ones!! I must admit you are beyond awesome. This story is beyond compkiments. Everything is so much perfectin characterisation. This Ragini is just a fabulous character I tell you. Beyond that. I amrelieved to see such a Ragini. And Sanskar is no less! Whenevr I read this story an automatic smile forms from ear to ear. 🙂 You are so so much awesome! I really really love this story like anything. I am speechless dear. Keep it up dear!! ♥♥

    Hey can u give any intro of yours? I mean only if you want to. And are you on Wattpad??

    • azure

      how are the exams? sorry i don’t know about these anymore since i work and no longer study….best luck for the exam dear. thanks so much for your wonderful compliments dear….u r really really sweet and generous with them…..makes me feel really good. i am glad u liked the characterisation…..i like that to be solid usually then it is easy for me to write how the character will react to a situation. and i am v v happy that the updates are making u smile….my job done then…..i am not on wattapad yet…..lets see may be someday. i have written some swasan stories on india forums though under the pen name of foresight. my name is sapna. i am currently working in finance…lol!!!…from mumbai.

      • Bisha

        Obvio your job done long back. I just love it. Specially that understanding. Both of them understands tge othrs mood as soon as they sense it. A very adorable bonding u know. Keep writing dear.

        Oh then you a big di! Awesome. Well I am a bengali girl. Just completed my +2 waiting fir results and these grumpy entrances. Well NEET was on 1st may and it was just okay. Cant say anything.

        I too write stories and suddenly got interested in it after I joined wattpad and TU. You should post tgese awesome stories there too. Well tell me your ID SO THAT i can follow you. Mine is PoisonBish . U know what I love thus online world as it makes my day. And i have some awesome friends here. Afvantage is you make friends without judging. No one is judging you too as none can see each other. Hence can tell many things freely. And these awesome writer who are above compliments. One of them is you.

      • azure

        sorry for the quick reply yesterday ….i will check out your stories…are they all on wattpad or are they here as well? you have done ur best in exams…leave rest to luck. don’t worry about something that is done…unless u have a time turner 😉

  15. Ashrita

    Omg I was too late to read your updates dear, it was fantastic, each and every words they speak with each other makes me feel some essence that drag me to them. Sanskar has started to fall for Ragini, the way he was comparing Swaragini make me feel that he never knew the in and out of Swara but he loved her beauty than anything else. Coming to Ragini he saw her inner beauty which is a real love….. Even now he doesn’t find her beauty that’s what every girl would want in their life partner. Ragini’s character is mind blowing and should accept that you have nailed it dear…….. Sanskar is awesome my favourite ever…. I just love this Sanskar who wants to stand up for his bf/wife……. Great job dear…. Keep smiling 🙂

    • azure

      thanks so much ashrita….was missing ur comments recently. glad to see them 🙂 you are right sanskar didnt know swara as much as he thought he did. i am really glad u are liking the wordings of the update and also how they are interacting with each other. he has really understood ragini a lot better and started to appreciated her for who she is, which is the core foundation of strong and true love. i am glad u liked that about the story. and i am really happy u liked how ragini and sanskar are portrayed her. i wanted they to be very normal people they have their own problems, but they aren’t super human or weaklings either. sanskar was thrown into a situation against his wishes and he retaliates but he is good at heart. he doesnt get angry often, but when it does it is for the right reasons. he isn’t the hero who can beat up goons, he will probably get beaten up but that doesnt stop him from wanting to fight for ragini. he isn’t okay with family business and has isolated himself from them in a way. ragini too has seen a lot in life. she used that to make herself stronger. she isn’t idealistic she is more realist. she is perceptive because of her past and she tries to be mindful of other peoples feelings/does small things for them the way she would have liked done may be for herself or for her mother. she is not one to point flaws in other people. she lets them be, being mindful of them/their behaviour instead. hahah….looks like i wrote a profile thesis no them. u keep smiling too dear 🙂 🙂

  16. smily

    hi.. im a silent reader of ur fanfic .. but thought to comment coz ur fanfic is soo awsm that i read every episode without missing single line.. nd u r a fantastic writer… its been so interesting nd u r making it worth.. nd todays episode… start of the love phase was damn good… keep going nd one suggestion.. as you are updating alternate days… when you are free plz try to write more than one chapter… we feel good..

    • azure

      thanks so much dear. it is great to see your comment and v happy that the story made u not remain a silent reader anymore. i am so so happy that u have liked it so much that u read each bit of it. big big thanks dear. thanks for ur wonderful comment abt my writing….i am glad i make it worth your time…..i wouldnt want it any other way. i try to write more as much as i can…but the problem is that since i am also working, i can only write after i come back from work and since the chapters are long, i write it part on one day and part on the next day. but i will try to write more dear. thanks again 🙂

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