Red String of Fate (RagSan) – Chapter 10


We are at chapter 10 already. Since weekdays have began, updates will be on alternate days. sorry about that. thanks so much for all your comments and love. please forgive an typos or spelling mistakes. i don’t get time to proofread these chapters. – Azure

Sanskar entered his room to see Ragini putting away freshly ironed clothes in his wardrobe. She had lost a bet with a him a couple of days back and had to take care of his wardrobe and clothes for the next one month.

“I have been looking for you everywhere” he told her as he entered

“Why?” Ragini asked, while continuing to arrange the clothes

“I need to talk to you” Sanskar told her “Can you come and sit here for a minute?” he asked pointing to the edge of the bed.

Ragini looked at him for the first time since he entered the room. His face was serious as was his tone. She walked over and sat down beside him

“Sanskar?” she asked “What is wrong?”

“I am going to meet Swara’s mother, Sharmistha today” he told her looking in the eye

Ragini sat still for a minute before nodding

“I didn’t want to go and talk to her without letting you know before” he told her with utmost sincerity “But I really need to go and meet her”

Ragini nodded, resting her hand gently on his “You didn’t need to let me know about it beforehand” she said gently with a small smile, even though Sanskar could see it didn’t reach her eyes.

“I did. I really did” Sanskar said softly “I need to find out somethings that have been bothering me for some time and only she can provide me the information”

“Then go do it” Ragini told him sincerely “Don’t worry about anything”

The prospect of going out there to meet Sharmistha was making his stomach churn. It was uncomfortable for more reasons than one. What if he didn’t find out anything there and it was a dead-end? He didn’t have any other avenues to clear the doubts he was having over his own knowledge of Swara. But what if she had information that made things worse?

Without meaning to he blurted “Will you come with me?” Then realizing what he had said as soon as it left his mouth, he quickly added “Don’t! Just forget what I said”

Ragini rubbed his arm gently seeing him worried “As a friend, I would have come with you” she told him gently “But as a daughter, I cannot”

Sanskar nodded

“I know that Maa would not be angry with me if I did, or even hold it against me. But I know she will be hurt” Ragini said softly

“I know. I don’t want you to come either” Sanskar admitted

“What are you worried about?” Ragini asked him gently

Sanskar looked at her for a while, remaining silent, before he spoke about his fear “What if I find out that I didn’t really know Swara completely?”

Ragini looked at him for a while before gently saying “You know Maa always loved Baba. Even after she found out about….” Ragini trailed off “It didn’t change how she felt. I always wondered why. But then she told me that when she loved him she didn’t do it with the expectation that he would be perfect. And he wasn’t. If his being perfect wasn’t the premise of her love, how and why would it change when it was shown that he wasn’t. I still don’t completely understand it” Ragini told him “May be because I haven’t experienced it myself, but if the premise of your love wasn’t knowing her completely, in and out, it won’t matter even now”

Sanskar nodded. He left the room, making his way to Shekhar Gadodia and Sharmishtha’s house, his mind asking him – what was really the premise of his love for Swara?

Sanskar reached at Shekhar’s Gadodia’s second house. It wasn’t as large as his family house, but it was no less grand. He had come unannounced. A maid asked him to wait in the private meeting room, while she called the mistress of the house, Sharmistha. It seemed that Shekhar Gadodia was out of the house. It served Sanskar well, considering that he wasn’t keen to meet him.

As Sanskar sat in the room, he saw photos of the family lining the wall. Swara standing out prominently on those. They seemed to be happy memories, vacation pictures, birthdays and just casual portraits. He walked over to glance at them up close, when he heard the door open. He turned around to see a middle aged lady dressed in Bengali saree walk over to him. She certainly looked younger than what her age must have been. She was graceful and still has a beauty about her, which would have meant she must have been much more beautiful in her youth, beautiful enough to make Shekhar Gadodia to leave his pregnant wife, even if she hadn’t driven him to. He could also understand where Swara got her beauty.

He joined his hand bidding her Namaste “I am Sanskar. Sanskar Maheshwari” he told her softly, though he had already given his name to the maid who let him in.

Sharmistha gave him a gentle smile and signaled him to sit down “I know who you are” she said

They said down in silence for a few minutes. Sanskar wasn’t sure what to say to her or even what and how to ask her anything about what was bothering him.

Finally, she spoke gently “What would you like to have?” she asked

“Nothing” he told her sincerely

“It wouldn’t be right to receive a guest and not offer them anything” she said, calling her maid and ordering some tea for them. Sanskar wasn’t a tea drinker but he didn’t correct her.

“I wanted to come over to pay my respect to you for Swara’s…” he trailed off, not realizing what else to say

Sharmistha nodded “She spoke a lot about you, you know” she said

Sanskar looked at her startled, but didn’t say anything

“Shona, my beautiful beautiful Shona. My stubborn princess” she said with a smile “She was full of life and mischievous and stubborn” she said sniffing a bit “Always had a way of getting her way with that beautiful smile of hers”

Sanskar nodded with a gentle smile of his own. She had her way of getting what she wanted. One of the things he, quite strangely, liked or at least didn’t get offended about when it came to her, despite it being extremely inconveniencing at times. She was high maintenance alright, but she had a way about making him do it without fighting against it. She kept him on his toes, right from day one. He had never chased anyone as much as he had her.

“We were very happy when she met you. She said how you would take care of her and her wants.” Sharmishtha said with misty eyes “She was hoping you would propose to her soon. We were going to talk to your family about the alliance, once both of you agreed” Sharmistha explained

Sanskar looked at her mutely. He wasn’t sure how to react to that comment. True he had wanted to propose to Swara at some point in time, sooner than later. He loved her after all and he wasn’t fooling around. But he felt a bit taken aback by Sharmistha taking about it when he and Swara hadn’t even started discussing the topic, more because Swara had made it clear that her theater work was a priority for her just then. To add to it, his current reality made it very awkward. True he never wanted the marriage, but the reality was that he was married right now, and to Shekhar Gadodia’s other daughter – to Ragini. Talking about what could have been, when Ragini was back home, felt uncomfortable.

“She was really full of life” Sanskar said, trying to move away from the marriage topic

“Oh my Shona was life itself. Where ever she went she spread her twinkle and spark around. People just came alive around her. She was very beautiful, my Shona” Sharmistha said, a bit emotional

The main served them tea and left. Sanskar picked a cup up and sipped it quietly, unsure of how to proceed.

“You know she had so many boys trying to get her attention. She was ethereal beauty, but she chose you” Sharmistha said “Said he is a true gentleman. Knows how to treat a girl.”

Sanskar nodded and gave her a small smile “She was very interested in her theater work” he said, changing the subject again

“Shona was a star. What did she say, yes, Diva! She was a diva” Sharmistha said with pride, despite her still misty eyes “She had a bright future. Of course she was willing to give that up. She knew yours was a traditional Marwari family. My Shona knew how to manage her relationships” she added “You must be missing her a lot too?” she asked him softly, sadness showing through her eyes.

Before Sanskar to answer, Shekhar Gadodia walked into the room “Misty, Kamla said we have a guest” he said before his glance fell on Sanskar.

Sanskar got up and joined his hands wishing Shekhar Namaste. Ideally, he would have been excepted to touch Shekhar’s feet, but after the way the man had clearly been treating Janki Maa and Ragini, he had no inclination to do so. He had seen the numerous happy family photos in the room, many featuring a smile Shekhar Gadodia, when he knew very well that Ragini most likely didn’t even have any.

“Shekhar, you have come” Sharmistha said, quickly wiping her eyes “Sit. Look who is here” she said with a soft smile

Shekhar Gadodia nodded at Sanskar and sat down on the chair but didn’t say anything.

“We were talking about Shona” Sharmistha told him touching his hand

Shekhar looked at her and then sharply at Sanskar

“I came to offer my condolence” Sanskar told him “I should have come sooner, but with everything that was happening….” He trailed off

“Shona was Shekhar’s life” Sharmistha said looking at Shekhar “There wasn’t anything he wouldn’t do for her” she added sadly

Sanskar looked at the man. He sat there stoically

“You remember Shekhar, when she wanted that latest iPhone and wanted it immediately. How you got one of your contacts to buy it in US and fly with it to India for her” Sharmistha said, running her hand over his arm

Sanskar felt odd, as though he was infringing on their private moment.

“And when she wanted to go skiing in summer, do you remember Shekhar?” she said tearing up “He immediately arranged for a holiday to New Zealand, for her to enjoy the snow” Sharmistha explained

Sanskar gave her a tight smile and a nod. He never felt as strong a desire to leave right then. It was decidedly awkward.

“I need to do something” Shekhar said and walked out of the room, without a look towards Sanskar

Sharmistha looked at him walk away sadly before turning to Sanskar “He misses he very much. Both of us do”

Sanskar nodded in understanding “I should probably leave now”

“You don’t need to. Do stay” Sharmistha told him “It was nice to meet you after everything Shona had told us”

“May be some other time” Sanskar said “I am supposed to be back home. They are expecting me” he said making an excuse

Sharmistha gave him a sad smile, but didn’t try to stop him further.

Sanskar managed to reach home in time for lunch. After lunch, as he retired back in his room, in more comfortable clothes, his thoughts went back to the meeting that he had with Sharmistha. He had been feeling out of whack since coming back from visiting her and he couldn’t explain it.

Ragini saw him and realized that there was a lot weighing on his mind. To lighten the mood, she went and sat on the bed in front of him. Pulling a fringe of her hair, creating a fake mustache out of it, she said, in a masculine voice, one that mimicked Sanskar’s style “Why don’t you buy me a drink? I can buy you the next one”

Sanskar looked at her as though she had lost her mind “What are you doing?”

“I am trying to play you” Ragini said “Couldn’t you recognize?”

“Why exactly are you doing it?” Sanskar asked confused “Don’t you have enough project work to do?” he asked her pointing to her iPad.

“I am bored” she said making a face

“So you decided to mimic me?” Sanskar asked. Ragini nodded “You are crazy; do you know that?” Sanskar asked her. But she just shrugged. Sanskar shook his head “You don’t look like me” Sanskar commented

Ragini leapt from there, opened his wardrobe and wore one of his jackets on top of her saree “How about now?” she asked.

Sanskar looked at her critically, or pretended too. His jacket was too big for her and the shoulders were dropping, while sleves were completely hiding her hands

“You look like a shrunken pigmy version of me” Sanskar said looking amused. Ragini rolled her eyes “If you are me, who am I supposed to be?” he asked

“That drag queen date of course!” she said as though that was the most obvious thing “That is the only sort of women you can impress”

“What!” Sanskar exclaimed and leapt on her, trapping her on the bed, holding her arms over her head “That is the old women, I can impress, huh? I will have you know I have impressed a lot of women”

“Were they blind?” She asked as she tried to pull her hands out from where he hand trapped them

“Blind!!” Sanskar exclaimed “I will show you blind” he said ticking her

Ragini burst into laughter, pleading him to stop until she had tears in her eyes

“Idiot!” she told him when he finally stopped

“Do you want me to start again?” he warned her

“No!” she said widening her eyes. This wasn’t what she had expected when she thought of cheering him up. While she didn’t want to let him know, her wound while almost completely healed, was still tender and the violent laughter had caused a bit of pain for her.

“So you admit that I can impress girls?” Sanskar asked her

“Only under duress. I am yet to see it” Ragini said

Sanskar shook his head “What do you want me to do? Go to some pub and impress girls?” He let go off her hands and hit her head lightly. He laid down next to her even as she was recovering from the laughter “And what was that all about? You promised you wouldn’t bring the drag queen bit up. How could you do that?” he asked her annoyed

“I didn’t bring it up in front of anyone else. It’s just the two of us here right now” Ragini told him

“Is that how this works?” Sanskar asked, now turning on his side, resting his head on his elbow “I have an question to ask about your adult store incident then” he told her

“What about it?” Ragini asked confused “I told you everything there was to tell”

“Not everything” Sanskar told her “I want to know what you bought in there”

“I am not telling you” Ragini told him

“You cannot get out of it now. You were the one who brought out the drag queen episode” Sanskar told her with a broad smile

Ragini rolled her eyes and muttered something

“What?” Sanskar asked

“Fur covered hand cuffs” she said embarrassed, covering her face with her hands

Sanskar let out a loud chuckle “What did you do with it?” he asked

“We gave it to Jason for messing with his coffee” Ragini said, before blushing and adding “He and his girlfriend thanked us for it, later”

Sanskar burst out laughing

“Idiot” Ragini shot at him, hitting his arm

Sanskar poked her in the waist in retaliation, but she let out a yelp, holding her waist

“Ragini!” Sanskar asked worried

Ragini’s eyes teared up a bit

“Ragini, what is wrong?” he asked again

“It is nothing” she said, trying not to make him feel bad. But Sanskar persisted “It is the bullet wound. It was almost healed completely now, but sometimes it still feels a bit tender”

“Where is it? Can I see it?” Sanskar asked soberly

Ragini was a bit embarrassed to show it to him, but looking at his concern, she finally relented. She moved her saree pallu a bit to reveal a star shaped pinkish mark on her waist. It had been usually covered by pallu and not visible to anyone.

Sanskar felt guilty for poking her in the waist and causing her pain. He gently touched the wound “Does it hurt?” he asked her tenderly

Ragini shook her head

Sanskar looked back at the wound, a lump forming in his throat and the thought of how she must have gotten it. “It must have been really painful” he said looking at her

Ragini nodded “It was. It could have been worse. If it hadn’t been for Raghu kaka” her voice caught in her throat “He saved me. He took all the bullets that were meant for me”

“Except for this one” Sanskar said softly

“Even this one” Ragini said, as her eyes teared up

“Ragini” Sanskar said softly, holding her and hand giving it a gentle squeeze before letting it go “You don’t have to talk about it, if you don’t want to” he told her gently

Ragini shook her head “It is okay” she said “It is just that I miss him you know” she told Sanskar “He really cared for me like his daughter”

Sanskar nodded

“The doctors at the hospital said I was really lucky. This bullet lost its velocity as it went through him, before hitting me. If it had been a direct hit, it would have been much worse”

“I am glad he was there to take care of you and protect you. I don’t want to think about what would have happened if he wasn’t there” Sanskar told her, feeling a bit emotional himself.

They were quiet for a long while, before Sanskar spoke “How long will it take for the wound to heal completely?”

“Probably a week more” Ragini said “After that I will still need to take the tablets for some time, but I can stop the cream”

Sanskar nodded. They lay there on the bed for some time, letting silence envelop them before Ragini got up “I better get back to the project” she said as she took his jacket off and put it back in the cupboard, before going to the coffee table and working on the project.

Sanskar nodded, getting back to the book he was reading. He glanced at Ragini for a second. He realized, belatedly, that she must have done the drag queen drama to distract him from the weird mood that he had gotten himself into since visiting Sharmistha. She had made him smile, made him laugh even and then what had he done in return? He had hurt her and then brought back bad memories. He sighed, he didn’t like seeing her pensive the way she was right now. She looked good happy, smiling, laughing her beautiful laughter.

“You know there is still something that I don’t know about that adult store incident” He told her

She looked up from her iPad, looking confused

“What was the color of those hand-cuffs?” he asked with a smile

Ragini blushed and broke into a smile of her own “Hot pink” she said before going back to her work

Sanskar smile looking at her. He was happy that she had been distracted from those sad memories.

As he returned to his book, his mind wandered back to the meeting Sharmistha again. There were decidedly a lot of things awkward about that meeting. The topic of his and Swara’s marriage at the forefront of it all. It wasn’t that he minded the talk of his and Swara’s marriage, it was more that he was awkward about it being done in the context of his current reality. He glanced at Ragini once. When he had gone there, there had been no doubts about him being a married man and married to Ragini – Swara’s step sister at that.

As he thought more, words and sentences, just stood out. ‘We were very happy when she met you’, ‘We were going to talk to your family about the alliance, once both of you agreed’ and ‘Of course she was willing to give that up. She knew yours was a traditional Marwari family’. What did that mean?

He remembered Adarsh bhaiyaa saying that they knew about him and Swara right from the beginning. He recollected Ranveer telling him that everyone in that room, who was discussion his and Ragini’s marriage was aware of his relationship with Swara. What did that mean?

He had met Swara as Sanskar Mehta not as Sanskar Maheshwari. Did she know that he was a Maheshwari and not Mehta? Or could it have been that she didn’t know about it, just like him and only the family knew? But they why would Sharmishtha say that they were going to talk to the family? Why would she say that Swara knew his was a traditional Marwari family? And if she knew who he was, why didn’t she way anything to him? Was she waiting for him to come out and tell her own his own? And how long had she known it? Did she know it right from the beginning? If that was the case, why not pull him for his lie right then?

Sanskar ran his fingers through his hair. He was left feeling more unsettled than when he started this quest. He was left feeling even less sure of what he really knew of Swara. It there was one reality that was staring him starkly right in the eye, it was that she knew he was Sanskar Maheshwari but he wasn’t sure who Swara Gadodia was anymore.

Precap – Ashu


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Credit to: Azure

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  1. Juz love ur ff.. It’s brilliant.. HW CME u write so perfectly.. Each Nd every emotions.. Thoughts.. Thanks.. I wanted sanskar to know that raginis injury still hurts her BT she is hiding so that he takes care f her. Waiting for next part.. For cute ashu..

    1. thanks so much liz…..big hug dear…..i am glad u liked their thoughts and emotions…and esp the injury scene. you are right, he needed to see it and care for her. he had been so ignorant for so long….that was imp change needed in him 🙂

  2. Hey azure…a mindblowingly confusing epi……with swaras character a much more mysterious 1…….butlovd d way ragsan convo n tickles aftr d retrn of sanky….
    Love n hugs…tc

    1. thanks so much dev……glad u liked the ragsan moments……haha swara is mysterious…..sorry about causing confusion there but i want to reveal who she is as sanskar discovers it and investigates himself…lots of hug dear. tc.

  3. Did swara died after that attack? Nd yr start love phase soon.?

    1. the love phase will start really really really soon 😉 and yes swara was killed in that attack. sanskar is trying to make sense of who she was since with every info he is questioning himself over it.

  4. All time favorite ragsan ff!!! I’m honestly falling in love this ff even more nowadays!!! It’s to good and awesome!!! I honestly love ragsan so much now aha, also I posted episode 18 for Dvs and started another ff
    You’re amazing, keep up the great work Hun~Nusz

    1. thanks so so much nusz…..really glad u are falling in love with this….i am falling in love with your story too 🙂 🙂 i am glad we share out new discovered lover for ragsan lol 🙂 big hug!

  5. Awesome di how could shekar do that being a father does he won’t love ragini?? But I hope ragini get all love from sanskar!! Loved ragsan scenes a lot even though he felt pain for his friend But that was cute and u l update alternative days di gonna miss u and next update u l give ashu scenes I m waiting for that di!!!☺☺☺

    1. thanks so much dear….shekhar feels he was forced into being with janki against his wishes and forced to have ragini. so while he is civil to her when they meet, he doesnt meet her that often or take time out for her or give her any priority …luckily for her ranveer and janki and ashu and rest of the family give her enough love. while there is gap and not everything is perfect, they love her enough and soon sanskar will as well ;)……this ashu scene is going to be different so you have to tell me what you think of it ….lots of luv dear

  6. Awsm dear..swara’s character is really mysterious right now..loved ragsan scenes..waiting for nxt prt

    1. thanks so much rakhi…..that is true…..we are going to discover who she is along with sanskar as he investigates more……v happy u loved ragsan scenes though…..thank u a ton dear 🙂 🙂

  7. Ua r amazing writter…..

    1. thanks so much for your sweet sweet comment… was wonderful to read it. big thanks!

  8. awesome awesome awesome seriously its just mind blowing ragsan scences r too good loved ragsan frnd ship waiting for next part if possible plsz update soon……………… Love it

    1. thanks so so so so much poonam dear……really v v happy that u liked their scenes….glad u are enjoying their friendship….will try to post next part soon….still working a bit on it. big hug dear!

  9. Amazing dear

    1. thanks so much venni….big thanks!

  10. Sorry couldn’t reply in the last epi because of my exams…so here is a surprise for you…
    Chapter 9-
    Awestruck…Sanskar’s ruthless side revealed…OMG!!! Imagining the scene only one thing revolved in my head

    Sanky rocks!!!
    Lucky shocks!!!???

    But I have to admit that I don’t think Laksh changed 1% too. Given the lecherous activities he is involved in, maybe he might be waiting for the right opportunity to hurt Sanskar and if he does before Sanky m gonna kill that idiot???
    Loved Ragini’s care for Sanskar…they have started to know each other’s likes and dislikes…YOHO!!! Maybe their love story will start soon. Fingers crossed!!!?

    Chapter 10-
    Amazingly mysterious…definitely m now clueless about the reality of Swara Gadodia…How did she know about Sanskar’s reality is very intriguing and i think somewhere it is going to form the main crux of the story in the near future…Loved RagSan part today a lot. I could clearly imagine their funny antics, the tickling game and sanskar’s care for Ragini…
    Eagerly waiting for next update as it is going to feature the all time cherubic and cute Ashu…No problem di u can update it whenever you get time as I ll always wait for it because it’s my No.1 favorite?
    Lots of hugs and love???

    P.S: I am posting a three shot on ek duje ke vaaste. Already uploaded 1st epi. If you can take a look I ll be very happy. I had written the story earlier now changed the characters name and posted and I ll surely post another ff on Swaragini on the idea running in my mind for a long time after my exams in the month of June. Here’s the link-
    Hope you like it?

    1. how were your exams? studies going well? take care and do really well in them. thanks so much for the wonderful wonderful surprise. i was missing ur comments dear. hahaha that is true sanky did rock didnt he….u are right it is too soon for laksh to change. no one has reprimanded him yet so he had been spoilt….but sanskar has made it clear he is not going to take it when it comes to ragini so he will be a bit cautious….not not reformed. haha yes there is a lot of care between them… story will start soon.

      swara is a mystery that will open up as sanskar investigates more…as he finds out, we will too. there is a lot that isn’t revealed yet is all i will say. glad u liked their antics in chp 10 though 😉 😉 this ashu scene is going to be very different so you have to tell me what u think if it.

      i am going to start reading ur ff now…thanks for sharing the link….will love to read the new one you are planning in june too!

      lots of luv and tons of hugs

  11. Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrt se uparrrrrrrrr…………
    Mind blowing…………. Fwless………amazing…………..

    Sanskar ka ragini ko batana sharmishtha se milne ki baat,sanskar-sharmishta-shekhar,every emotion of them,ragini ki samskar k mood ko cheer karne ki Successful koshish,sanskar’s concern for ragini,sanskar’s doubts at d end of epi………..perfect………..u rocked as always…….

    Highlight of dis epi-janki’s thoughts related to love which ragini shared wid sanskar……..????????????

    1. thanks so much joya…your comment was laajawab as well 🙂 🙂 i am so glad u liked each and every aspect of the update…and i liked that janki dialogue too….i surprised myself when i wrote it……hahaha funny na ….big hug dear!

  12. Its soo nizz di…..awesome…ur writing skills

    1. thanks so much sweety….really v happy u liked the update and loved ur comment about my writing….lots of luv dear

  13. Another awesome part… ragsan scenes r very nyc.. truly i fell in luv wt ur ff n i was waitung for this update.. i lik ragsan pair but u made me luv thm wt ur ff… u r brilliant…

    1. thanks so much taiana….you are really sweet for saying that. but i am really really happy that u love this ff and were waiting for the update….felt really good to read. i am glad i made u love ragsan ….lots of love dear

  14. I can’t wait more fore ashu .he so cute

    1. this one will be a different ashu scene….but i hope u will love it all the same dear. thanks 🙂

  15. Mind blwing epi…keep up the good work…. I must say swara is a mystery

    1. thanks so much lila…..v happy u found it good and yes swara is a mystery…dont worry sanskar will get to the bottom of that one…..thanks a ton dear!

  16. Superb dear

    1. thanks so much mama 🙂 🙂 🙂

  17. whats say fabulous yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr i just loved it and i am waiting for the cute ashu part

    1. thanks so much sneha…..v happy u loved it…..ashu part will be cute but different from before…hope u still like it 😉

    1. thanks so much kriya 🙂

  18. Vry vry gud
    Lyk always luv ur ff
    Plz update soon

    1. thanks so much sweety….v happy that u are continuing to love it….thanks dear. lots of luv

  19. It was amazing Azure?! I loved RagSan’s concern towards each other! Neither he wanted her to b stuck in bad memories nor she wanted him to feel bad! That was cute ?and Sanskar’s awkward feeling of talking about his marriage with Swara cuz he’s married now is something I Loved!?

    1. thanks so much ramya…..v happy u loved it….they are really concerned about each other na…i liked that. small things about each other matter now…..and i am glad u liked the part about the marriage….i wanted to show the difference in his attitude from when he first spoke to adarsh to now….thanks for picking that up….big hug!

  20. Thanks so much for your comments. I will reply back to each one in the evening. Big thanks

  21. day by day it becomes more interesting
    luved it

    1. thanks so much dear….v happy i am keeping ur interest levels up with this. big big thanks and hug dear

  22. Well.. im late… the meeting part yu nailed it.. seriously u r incredibly gooddd…. sanskar awkward feeling abt the marriage part was really really brilliant… is thr something he dunno abt swara??? This thr a twist or like big drama were sanskar fall fr ragini… and abt ashuuuuu… just waiting..

    1. thanks so much madhu dear…and love to have ur comments whenever u can port them 🙂 v happy to read i got that meeting bang on….thanks so much for your compliment…u r making me blush! i wanted him to feel different now vs when he first spoke to adarsh about swara/his marriage…..glad u found it good. swara is a mystery….not much is known about her yet….as sanskar discovers her we will too. u will have to see if there is a big drama 😉 ashu part…all i will say is that it will be different…but hope u still like it ….big big thanks dear!

  23. Vyshnavi (Vyshu)

    Its awesome………………
    Its emotional.. And also soon muchhh heart touching expressions from ragini. I just just loved it a lotttttt

    1. thanks so much vyshu……i am really glad u liked this one. ragini is someone who has learned to value and appreciate the affection that comes to her and those that give her that affection. she really cares for them and raghu kaka was one of those…even though he was her body guard and not family. big big thanks dear!

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