Rectify:Manmarziyan Part 9


I finally escape from my monster of a father, I call him monster because what he did to me, I don’t wish on any girl to suffer the way I did.

When I was 6 year old my mother wanted to take me away from my father. They were arguing, he said he was going to throw acid on her face if she left. She didn’t believe he would do that but he did in front of my eyes. That was the first time I felt fear for my monster of a father. My mother couldn’t look at herself so she killed herself and left me alone with the monsters.

Badi maa is monster too, when I was 10 she gave me pill said it will make me feel better, I took the pill it made me feel unconscious. When I woke up, I was bleeding in my private part it was hurting too. I told Badi maa, she said I was having my period as an idiot I believed her.

It was at the age of 13 when I realize my father was raping me. I felt something was wrong so I decided to pretend taking pill, I pretend I was sleeping, my monster of a father came to my room, He was trying to take my clothes off, I scream at his and ask him what he was doing in my room. He said he’s been having s*x with me since I was 10. I was shocked, I realize Badi maa was in it to. I told him to leave, he left only to come back with my dog Meetu. He said he would kill my dog if I didn’t obey him. I knew he would kill my dog, I felt helpless, I let him do what he wanted. When he was done, I went in the shower trying to clean myself but all I felt was dirty. I was crying I felt helpless and ashamed.

I confronted Badi maa and ask her how she can do this to me, she said a girl is to give pleasure to men even if its a father. I felt discussed with her words. I told her that she is not a good mother no wonder she lost her other son. She got angry and slapped me. She told me to go to my room, and wait for my father and do what he says or else you know what he’ll do to your dog Meetu.

The abuse wen on I had nobody to help me. I couldn’t tell my teacher or my friends. They would threaten me if I tell anyone they would kill my dog.

It was at the age of 19 that I found out I was pregnant with my fathers child. I felt like ending my life, I was going to do that but one man came and saved me his name was Prem Malhotra.

He told me it was wrong to kill myself when I was pregnant. I was angry I blurted out the whole truth. He was shocked after hearing my story. I told him let me die, I have nobody who can save me from those monster. He said consider me as your brother, I will save you. I told him they will kill you, he said he would take the risk if I can be free from those monster then he will gladly die. He ask me what my fathers name is I told him Suraj Oberi. He told me he is a reporter and he is investigating on my father, I ask him what did he do, Prem told me that my father was human trafficking young girls, drugging them and using them for s*x he was trying to collect evidence but he can’t get in the security is too tight. I told him you can record my story.

When I came back home, they killed my dog. Badi maa said if you leave this house again we can do worse things to you. You are not allowed to go out until the baby isn’t born or else you know what we did to your mother. I cried they took away the best thing from me my dog Meetu and now they were threating to throw acid on me, I had enough, I decided I would play there game.

I need to get my passport from Badi maa some how. I was waiting for the right time. The right time came when I heard my father was going to the farm house and was taking Nandini. I never met Nandini but I heard that she was pregnant. I thought my monster of a father probably did the same thing that he does to me.

When my monster of father left, I took my chance, I put sleeping pills in the chai, Badi maa drank the chai and fell in a deep sleep. I took the key under the pillow, then I open the locker and took my passport. As planned I went to Prem brothers house. I didn’t know one of my fathers man was following me and telling it to my monster of a father.

When I got to his house he was not alone, he had his two year old son (Arjun) with him, he said his wife had some errands to do and left the little boy with him. He gave me a train ticket and a fake passport with the name Mala Gupta, he said with my original name they would trace me but with my new name I could be free. I hugged my brother and said thank you. That was when my father and his men came. I was scared for Prem brother and the little boy, I could tell from his signal that he wanted me to take his son away from this. Prem brother was distracting them, I took the boy from the back door and then I started running, I heard the gun shot and knew that my monster of a father killed my brother Prem. I couldn’t go back I was afraid that they would harm the little boy. I wish I could give the boy to his mother but it was too dangerous, so the only thing I could think of was putting the boy at the orphanage at least he would be safe there. I felt guilty for separating the boy from his mother but what choice did I have.

After I left the boy at the orphanage, I went straight to the train station wearing a burka, I saw my monster of a father searching for me, he went to the ticket boy to ask if Maya was in the train, he said there was no Maya. Then my father left the train station, that was the last time I saw him.

When the train started moving, I was going in labor luckily there was midwife, she was here for the other lady who was going in labor too After 2 hours of labor, I gave birth to a boy a stillborn baby. The lady said I’m sorry your baby is dead. I told the lady I’m glad it’s dead, I told her how it was conceived the lady cried for me and said don’t give up god will heal everything. I ask her what do you mean? She goes to the other side to bring the baby boy to me, she says that the baby’s mother died and that the baby is weak, It need milk since I can provide that. I said what would the baby’s father think, she said he is okay with that, I gave milk to the baby and then I gave it to the midwife, she gave the child back to the father. The mid wife said I had to go with the baby’s father to Rishikesh. She said I will introduce you to the baby’s father. I said hi my name is Mala Gupta and he said his name is Dilip Mishra…..

That’s it, I hope you enjoy Maya diary

Dilip has a secret past what that is you’ll have to find out from Dilip diary

What happen to Niki Pandey why wasn’t she able to save her daughter find out from Niki diary

Rectify:Manmarziyan part 9

Precap: Someone trys to strangle the old lady, Arjun wakes up, Mala tells the truth to Prerna.

Thank you so much for your comment, you give me energy to write. Silent reader it would be nice to hear from you but anyways thank you for reading. Bye for now ta ta…

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  1. Affaa

    Woooooooo I think I’m the first commenter….epic as usual mind blowing outstanding….no need to say I love you’re ff a lot…be blessed always…Thank you soooo much for updating…love you soo much…I’m waiting for next epi

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Affa , I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  2. Brin

    Sorry forgot to add Maya diary its not part 9 of rectify manmarziyan

  3. Sweetie

    Brin dear..You really made me cry with this part..?How can a father do such things to his daughter!!Disgusting fella..?And that badi maa,if at all I ever come across a woman like her,I’m going to sue her to such extent that she’ll not be able to remember who she is..???Oh No!!Right now I’m full on cursing mode..So I’ll just zip my mouth..?Waiting for the next dear..Stay blessed and keep writing such awesome stuff..?I’ve read this type of content that is rape of a daughter by his father in a newspaper,I was cursing so badly that day,my parents thought that I’m an alien rather than their daughter..LOL..?Sorry for the blabbering so much,I’m just like that when these social issues are involved..Lots of love..❀Bye..

    1. Thank you so much Sweetie πŸ™‚

    2. Sorry Sweetie I was having tecnical problem with the computer, any way I wanted to say father who do this to there daughter should be hanged to death, the law should be very strict. When ever I hear these things it really gets to me even I cry.

  4. Suga

    Pls make dat suraj to beg for his death …… Such a moron…… Monster…… Mala such a poor girl faced so much ….. It’s superbbbbbbbb one …….. Prem such a wise man …. Awesome brin……

    1. Thank you so much Suga, πŸ™‚

  5. Sathya

    Feeling very bad for Mala… This situation should not come for any woman even if it is our enemy. Suraj he should be punished till death. He should cry for his death instead of being alive.
    Brilliant episode bring… Keep it up… ?????

    1. Thank you so much Sathya. πŸ™‚

  6. Sammy

    She let them abuse herself for her dog …omg iam crying now ..this is called love …and then prem sacrificed himself for her ..humanity …poor arjun …wao brin amazing ..I bow my head in front of you …this was superb dear πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much Sammy πŸ™‚

  7. RANdomfANCreationz

    Wow brin it’s really good I liked it a lot n hate this suraj I feel so bad for Maya will be waiting for the next update

    1. Thank you so much Fatorajo, I will update soon πŸ™‚

  8. RituM

    brin….buddy…..u rocked it….!!! its sad but yet its true…..v have a lot on monster father in our country!!

    1. Thank you so much Ritum, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  9. S.v

    Brin something which is beyond words. You made it yaar. Now update soon as the precap is making my head go spinning and what does dilip has gash why all having a backup story ?? Wish everything is set right as digging and digging many things are coming out. U made it brin . Update soon .

    1. Thank you S.v I will update soon πŸ™‚

  10. Omg…such a moron father…god plzzzz don’t give such pain to enemy…n this badi maaa???? how can a woman do this to another woman…kill them by piece by…torture them like hell….argh…..why such kind of monsters live in the world…i curse alll those monsters to become handicapt n rot in hellll….chi chi….

    1. Thank you Rosie, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  11. These kind of man shouldn’t exist at all, am thinking of what punishment will be perfect for him but I find my ideas are less cruel than the cruelty these men do to the pure girls. It was a heart wrenching update, felt very sad for Mala but like always u ended up with another twist, now what’s Dilip’s secret am eager to read more. Loved the update Brin. ????

    1. Thank you so much Gianna, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  12. Shree

    How can a person be so ruthless?! To his own daughter? Chiii… You made me cry.. And her badi maa.. She being a woman was a part of it.. How disgusting… She had to go through so much.. Omg!! Suraj is so cheap that he killed Prem… Happy that she managed to escape.. Sorry for the baby.

    Sorry for commenting late brin.. It was a sad one

    Post soon . Love you ??

    1. Thank you so much Shree, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  13. Am speechless.way a monster..the one who shld be punished more is badimaa..yuck
    Its disgusting to mention her with a relation.prem jus lost his life 2 save a girl..but his son got used for d same prsn’s revenge.. way a fate.. how are they going 2 many prsns are made as victims for this idiot’s revenge…
    True tat such heartless stupid morons do exist.. way revenge does he hold against his own daughter..Brin..many twists ..will wait 4 next update

    1. Thank you so much Jessie, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  14. Brin you are amazing πŸ™‚ I am spell bound by the twist and turns πŸ™‚ ….you bought a very grave issue of child abuse…I applaud you for that….you showed maya’s pain and agony in an emotional way …. G8 going dear πŸ™‚ stay blessed

    1. Thank you Gauri, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  15. Bhabya

    Awesome Brin… Just love the way u convey emotion s

    1. Thank you Bhabya I will update soon πŸ™‚

  16. crap idiot can a father be such a monster…Maya/Mala her state made me shiver..God doesnt show this state to anyone…plz give a dreadful death to that Suraj and Badi Maa…I want their each body part to rip off from their body…make them beg for death…Brin dear hats off to ur imagination..u paid light towards such a sensitive issue…and again a twist…now m eagerly waiting to know Dilip’s past..plz plz plz post soon…

    1. Thank you so much Ritu, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  17. Aasthu

    superb !!!!!!! one doubt: who is Arjun’s mom ?????? Nandini ???

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Aasthu, Prerna is Arjun’s mother and Neil is his brother it was on rectify: manmarziyan part 7, I will update soon and will let you know when I post the next chapter. πŸ™‚

  18. Rg2015

    It’s extremely sad to read. Poor mala. It’s lovely. Pls reveal all d suspense soon. It’s fantastic.

    1. Brin

      Thank you Rg πŸ™‚

  19. omg Brin every time i read it i felt disgust abt that creep he could do this…dilip too has past..m soo eager to read…ur imagination is awesome

    1. Brin

      Thank you Dipika πŸ™‚

  20. Shravanrishi

    Brin nice update

    1. Brin

      Thank You Shravanrishi πŸ™‚

  21. Sorry friends I was having tecnical problem with the computer, I couldn’t post the comment fast, I hope everyone comment has reached now again very very sorry about that.

  22. Awesome, wowwww brin.. remarkable. ..outstanding narration. .. love you loads

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