Rectify:Manmarziyan Part 8

Neil was shocked, he couldn’t believe what is mother just told him, Arjun was his brother and that there father was murdered by who and why.

Neil: “Mom you said dad was murdered by who and why?”

Prerna didn’t realize she mention about the murder, she never told Neil about this, he never knew his father was murdered.

Neil: “Mom please tell me what happen.”

Prerna: “Neil could we talk about this later, I’m worried about Arjun, I just found him and he his not out of the wood yet.”

Neil: “Fine mother we will talk about this later until Arjun get better.”

The doctor comes out of the operation room and tell them..

Doctor: “Arjun lost a lot of blood he needs O negative blood.”

Neil: “I’m O negative I can give him blood.”

Neil gives his blood to Arjun while Prerna, Radhika, and Sam wait in the hall.

Radhika: “I can’t believe Neil and Arjun are brothers, you know Sam if you marry Neil we’ll be sister in law.”

Sam: “I would love to marry Neil, but not right now.”

Radhika: “Why not?”

Sam: “While we were helping mom and Maanya we discover a list that proves that Nandini wasn’t working alone.”

Radhika: “Can I see the list.”

Sam: “Neil has the list but I could tell you what was in the list. Most importantly I learn Jai was murdered by Nandini.”

Radhika: “Nandini killed Jai I knew she is a manipulater but a killer, I never knew she would go this far.”

Sam: “Not only that she accused my mother for sending men to rape her. I think she has been a pawn for someone else’s game.”

Radhika: “Do you know who the mastermind is?”

Sam: “No, we don’t know who he is and why he want to take revenge, mom is going to check on her parent to see if they know who the enemy is.”

Prerna: “I’m sorry to interrupt you, I heard about your sister how is she?”

Sam: “She is fine aunty thanks to Neil or her innocent would have been lost.”

Radhika is shocked

Radhika: “That is so horrible, how can Nandini do that to Maanya.”

Sam: We think it is the mastermind who hire men to rape her and is using her for the revenge.”

Prerna: “I am so proud of my son, he is like my husband Prem, he sacrificed his life to save an innocent girl who was s*xually abused by her father, she was carrying her father’s child.”

Sam and Radhika are shocked

Sam: “Did the girl escape.”

Prerna: “Her name is Maya, but I never met her, I don’t know what happen to her when my husband was murdered and my son went missing.”

Radhika: “I hope she escape.”

Suddenly the phone rings

Mala: “Choti are you okay?”

Radhika: “NO maa, I’m not okay.”

Mala: “What’s wrong Choti.”

Radhika: “Arjun got shot by Nandini.”

Mala: “Is Arjun okay?”

Radhika: “Neil is giving blood to Arjun, guess what maa, Arjun and Neil are brothers.”

Mala: “How did they get separated?”

Radhika: “There father Prem Malhotra was helping an innocent girl to escape from her father who got her pregnant.”

Mala was shocked.

Mala: “Choti I’m coming to Mumbai for you and Arjun.”

Radhika: “Okay Maa, I do need you here with me, please come.”

They hung the phone.

Mala goes in her room to take a box out it had certificate, passport and a picture of a man.

Mala: “I hate you for ruining my life, father.”

She open her old passport instead of Mala name it has Maya name, yes Mala is Maya…..

Precap: Someone trys to strangle the old lady, Arjun wakes up, Mala tells the truth to Prerna…

How was the shock, to know how Maya became Mala read Maya diary

And what happen to Niki why couldn’t she save her daughter find out in Niki diary

Thank you so much for your comment, you give me energy to write. Silent reader it would be nice to hear from you but anyways thank you for reading. Bye for now ta ta


  1. Sammy


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    Brin brin brin …iam lacking words now ..what to say further …omg iam having goosebumps have just make this ff a mini mystery world ..everyone having a different identity…arjun is no more mehra..he is a malhotra ..Mala is now Maya …teji had two mothers and the real one is nandini ..nandini and piyali sisters …well done brin …why don’t you write before ..iam loving it 🙂 🙂

  2. Krity

    Brin dear again shock well im eargly waiting for the next one..nd im silent reader i got time today so im here nd your story is nyc luv u tc..<3

  3. Gauri

    Brin pls pinch me…I am myself into shock now… Mala is Maya….OMG…I don’t have words every update is better that the last one … what to say you are just amazing 🙂

  4. Rossy

    Omg…brin m spinning around…never ending shocks are there…another awesome chapter…do write more plzzzzz

  5. S.v


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    This is what is called head spin. Brin u r gr8 in giving shocks . Mala is maya and she was saved by prem but he was killed and Arjun was taken away but by whom ?? what happened ?? Brin update the next part soon yaar pls. U nailed it and u r best in shock giving.

  6. Sweetie


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    Brin..This is called Dhamaka..OMG!!Mala is Maya..?I thought to add this s*xual abuse content by father in my one shot..I don’t know why I didn’t add that..Now I know why..Because my pyaari Brin has this concept in her FF..?Anyways awesome episode it is..Waiting for another shock.. 🙂 Stay blessed and lots of love..❤

    • Brin



      Thank you so much Sweetie, I really thought child s*xual abuse needed to be brought out especially when a father does this to a daughter. I will update Maya diary soon. 🙂

  7. Ritu

    OMG is the only word coming in my head right now..When I read Maya is Mala I was like What..shock after shock..and m loving it so much.. I guess Riddhima might be Suraj’s daughter..eager to know what will happen nxt..plz post u

  8. Affaa


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    Yaar speechless really…you’re planned give shock to us right….amazing…you rocked it…Please please update next episode ASAP

  9. Sathya


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    Brin pls tell on what u made up of. My head is spinning like anything now. I read the last line which says Mala is Maya. Twist se twist…. You r unbelievable… ?????

  10. dipika

    omg every time you left me shocked n numb…never expect this in my nightmare that mala is maya…means how….m literally out words… now tremendous excited the progress of this story..n each passing chappy make me that vile suraj hate more n more..wht he did to disgusting…waiting for nxt..

  11. Suga


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    Pls find suraj n punish him bad 😮 mala n Maya same godddddd 😮 brin u always keeping us in shock 😀 connection u made b/w them s superbbbbbbbb 😀 loved it 😀

  12. Supriya

    Brin I m at lost of words right now…..don’t know what to say……you nailed it……omg Maya z mala nd she was s*xually abused by her own father thant was so shameful how can someone stoop so low……dear you know to build up and preserve curiosity in all the heads thinking abt your ff…..m just dumbstruck after reading this….. you rocked it like every time…….right now I have many questions in my head but m enjoying my curiosity too….when z the next one?….loads of love…

  13. Rg2015


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    Maya is mala??? Oh god if ant believe it. Am eager for arjun to open his eyes .. Doom any ppl r interlinked… Am real out of words to describe this update. It’s just too gud.

  14. |Registered Member

    OMG OMG OMG Brin, what are u doing to us, another shock another twist another moment where my jaw hung low and eyes popped out. Mala is Maya and was s*xually abused by her father Suraj. Am still in shock. Amazing update Brin. Loved it very much

  15. Roma

    Brin wowwww what a mastermind you are….I’m so amazed…you connected the dots so perfectly. …I’m totally addicted to this story. ..I terribly interesting n mind blowing. ..Mala is actually Maya…so rads is actually suraj’s daughter…ahhhhh….in love you loads my dear for writing such a beautiful story. …keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

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