Rectify:Manmarziyan Part 11


Niki was crying seeing her daughter in coma and also angry that Suraj and Badi maa were getting away with there evil deeds.

Teji: “Nani they will pay for there sins.”

Niki: “How will they pay for there sins Teji you can’t fight them alone.”

Teji: “That’s why to defeat our enemy we need Ardhika and Nesam in our team.”

Niki: “Will they agree to help us out.”

Teji: “Yes they will, because Suraj and Badi Maa are there enemy’s too, they don’t know why yet, but when they find out the truth, they will join our team.”

Niki: “Could you tell me about them.”

When Teji was at the hospital dress as a doctor many of the truth came out, Neil and Arjun are brothers, Radhika mother is Maya and Sam’s brother murder all connected to Suraj and Badi Maa.

Teji: “First I will tell you about Sam, she is the daughter of Samrat and Piyali, yes Angad and Maira daughter Piyali. Sam’s brother Jai was murdered.”

Niki: What did they do to Jai?”

Teji: “Actually Nandini mom killed Jai, she poison Jai’s drink and cause the accident but because of he pills she was not in her right mind.”

Niki: “Why would you think Sam will help out?”

Teji: “Because they found out that the mastermind is controlling Nandini and that he want to take revenge on her family. She will join our team to protect her family when we tell her the truth.”

Niki: “What about the other.”

Teji: “Arjun was raised by Nandini mom, he was used as a pawn to take revenge on Sam and her family. Recently found out he is Prerna son and Neil’s brother, they are Prem Malhotra sons who helped Maya escape from Suraj’s clutches. He got killed and his son ended in the orphanage.”

Niki: “How did Suraj found out that Arjun is Prem child?”

Teji: “Suraj doesn’t know Arjun is Prem son, it was Maya who left the child at the orphanage, he just needed a child for his revenge, he got Nandini to adopt the child. I took the picture of the llist that Suraj made for Nandini, I was able to take the picture when Neil was giving blood to Arjun.”

He shows it to Niki.

Niki: “What a monster Suraj his he is making Arjun and Nandini do his evil deed. And this last line Piyali watches her last daughter get rape, OMG there sins are getting bigger and bigger everyday, I remember when Badi maa force me to watch my daughter get rape and now because of the pill my daughter is forcing Piyali to watch her daughter omg, please tell me Piyali daughter is okay.”

Teji: “I would kill them if they lay there hands on Maanya but thank to Neil she is safe.”

Niki: “Tell me about Neil.”

Teji:”Neil is very good person, he’s in love with Sam but would sacrifice is happiness for her and when Radhika married Arjun he didn’t judge Radhika because he believe there was a reason to why she married Arjun. Neil and I supported Radhika when Sam was accusing her of stealing her fiancΓ©. He is my best friend and I know Neil will join our team when he finds out that they killed his father.”

Niki: “Now that leaves Radhika, how will she help us out?”

Teji: “This is going to shock you Nani, Radhika is Maya’s daughter.”

Niki: “OMG”

Teji: “I found out the truth today when Maya was talking to Prerna.”

Niki: “How is she, you know Teji I felt guilty for leaving her to those monsters, I never knew Suraj would abuse is daughter.”

Teji: “She has a good life now, Three kids, a good husband and a very kind father in law who treats her like a daughter and she changed her name to Mala.”

Niki: “Did her first child survive?”

Teji: ” Whant I heard from her was that she lost the child.”

Niki: “I hate to say this but I’m glad she lost the child. So now about Radhika, I assume she doesn’t know about her mother’s past.”

Teji: “No she doesn’t know about it but if we tell her about it she will definitely join our team.”

Niki: “We are not going tell about her mothers past only Mala has the right, she can join our team if Mala approves. I was thinking we should set a party here, that way I can meet Mala and the other 4.”

Teji: “That is a good idea, I will get them here together.”

Next scene in the car (Arjun and Neil)

Arjun: “Has Sam’s grandparent arrived from the airport.”

Neil: “Yes Sam called me that they just arrived. Just hope we find out the truth before someone else gets hurt.”

Arjun: “Neil, please forgive me for hurting you, I know that you love Sam but believe me at that time I was in a dark place it was only Radhika that brought me to light. I only love Radhika and Sam was just infatuated with me she truly loves you, I saw it in her eyes.”

Neil: “There is no need to forgive, you were a pawn to the mastermind, I’m just glad to have my brother alive.”

Arjun: “I am glad to have a brother like you. It’ll take time but I’ll try to be the best brother.”

Neil: “You already are, by saving my life. Now lets go to Sam house and see if Sam’s grandparent know who the mastermind is.”

Next scene Radhika, Mala, Dilip and the mystery guy.

The mystery guy is following Radhika and Mala (he was the one who was strangling the old lady) he follows them to there house when they get close to the door, Dilip opens the door and gives them a big smile. The mystery guy is shocked to see Dilip.

Radhika: “Papa when did you arrive.”

Dilip: “Just 2 hours ago, how is Arjun?”

Radhika: “He just got discharged and he is with Neil, they are going to Sam’s house to find information fro Sam’s grandparent if they know who the mastermind is.”

Dilip: “What I heard from your mother is that Sam and her family life is in danger.”

Radhika: “Yes papa it’s true, we believe Nandini life is in danger with the mastermind and that he might have her.”

Dilip: “I hope they find her soon before the mastermind do any harm to her.”

Radhika gets a phone call from Sam.

Sam: “My grandparent are here, you come over too.”

Radhika: “I’ll be there.”

They hung up the phone.

Radhika: “Mama and Papa Sam wants me to come to her house her grandparent have arrived.”

Mala: “Choti I’ll come with you.”

Radhika: “Okay maa you can come, papa would you like to come.”

Dilip: “No Choti you and your maa go ahead, I will stay home.”

Radhika: “Bye papa.”

The mystery man sees Radhika and Mala leaving he goes to the door and knocks. Dilip opens the door and his shocked the person standing is Dilip’s cousin Dinesh Mishra.

Dinesh: “Hello brother long time no see.”

Dilip: “What are you doing here, your not part of the family any more.”

Dinesh: “You do remember you promise…”

Dilip: “I do not want to remember the past, it was a big mistake.”

Dinesh: “I guess that’s why you fake your death to get away from the promise you made…”

Dilip: “I was 15 year old boy when I made that promise.”

Dinesh: “What ever you made that promise, you are a gang member, if you leave, we will kill you.”

Dilip: “I want to live a normal life, I do not want to sell drugs or kill innocent people.”

Dinesh: “You use to love the power and money.”

Dilip: “That was before you shoot an innocent child…”

Precap: Dinesh warns Dilip you need to destroy Maira and her family or else we will go after your daughter.

I guess you already figure out what Dilip secret is, read how he became member of the gang and what changed him.

I am writing this story because this is happening in my hometown and its mostly East Indian who join the gang. I knew one of this kid, he was 18 had a bright future but one day he went missing, his parents called at work they said there son did not come home. It’s been 11 year nobody know what happen to him, they believe he was hanging with the wrong crowd. You could imagine every parents nightmare not knowing where your son his. I suggest to every parent to find out who your child hangs with. Tell them not to accept expensive gift from a friend, they are alluring the kids to be gang member.

I was thinking of writing a diary on Badi Maa, but I need a name that suits her, could anyone give me a good name that suits her.

I know you guys wanted to see a moment on Ardhika and Nesam, I promise I will write that after Dilip diary.

Thank you so much for your comment you give me energy to write and silent reader thank you for reading, bye for now ta.ta….

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  1. Sathya

    Brin… U nailed it again. It’s very very interesting yar. Kill that two bastards. For bad Maa it should not be a good name… Hmm give her as saguni who create pbm in other lives. OK jokes apart give her name as manjari.

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sathya, I will post Badi maa name in my next chapter. πŸ™‚

  2. JoAn

    Brin wen u say badi ma I visualize bari rani ma of ek tha raja ekthi rani the old witch

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Joan, maybe I’ll use her as Badi maa, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  3. Sammy

    Too good brin …whenever I thought I solved the puzzle …you brought the new twist. ..and we all got entangled again …and for badi maa …it will like maa thakhurain …or shanti devi …lol .. but update was awesome brin areil scenes πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sammy, and happy birthday to you, I will post soon. πŸ™‚

  4. superb update Brin..ur every update surprises m coming to check ur brain.. πŸ™‚ ..and that Badi Maa and Suraj plz let them rot in hell..I want her name to be Chudail Rakchasi..okay Shashi Kala..anyways now m waiting for Dilip’s diary..I guess he made those pills which were given to Nandini and others..plz post soon and m xcited for aradhika nesam’s scenes as well..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Ritu, actually Dr. Chang made those pills, Dilip only mistake was hanging with the wrong crowd, I will update Dilip diary soon. πŸ™‚

  5. Dipika

    Brin its absolutely marvlous n amazing.. U rocked it..n now all threads are connecting….. Dilip has member of drug gang..n that badi maa the vile creature.. Just remove that maa frm her name n place it a b*t*h..badi b*t*h…..m eager for that b*t*h’s n dilip dairy…gohra name i suggest.. Tc

  6. Brin

    Thank you so much Dipika, I will post Badi Maa name in my next chapter, I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  7. Amazing update Brin just like always, now all pieces are coming together and I can get somewhat a picture of the story. I hope u will get good name suggestions coz I have none. Love u n tc

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Gianna, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  8. U always make things in different way…i love ur story dear.btw what u told is true..alluring by giving expensive gift is common funda now..really hate those people who suffer little kids…if u don’t mind can I know ur hometown??I love that u use reality in ur story…update soon…thank u ?

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Rossy, my hometown is in Canada mostly they target teenager to join the gang ages 15 to late 20, I will post Dilip diary very soon, stay bless. πŸ™‚

  9. Jessie

    Be in this one is awesomE.. no am so interested.. and abt tat witch.. no more badi maa..she is baddie..u knw one lady in uttaran., spoiling Tappu..I remember her face oly.. wanna know y a. Lady is this much bad.. yuck… I dont wanna think. Abt her.. pills.. drugs..! Yesss.. nw they hav brought in open market as chocolates..hope u know this.. based on reality.. hats off dear..! Tats so sad abt that boy.. Thanks Brin.. waiting 4 nxt one.. Take care

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jessie, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  10. Brin you are too good just amazing loved it to the core πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Gauri, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  11. amazing episode..eagerly waiting next

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Subha, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  12. Sweetie

    Brin yaar..You really are a super woman..?Please badi maa ko raakshasi names will suit more..How about Vidumbhika??Lol..I don’t know where that name came from and the meaning of that too..But when you asked for a name,I got that name in my mind..?Anyways jokes apart,now all the pieces of the puzzle and threads you have woven are coming together..Lovely plot..Ek badi wali jhappi from my side..??
    I agree with the peer pressure that children have..Basically this happens when they are in teenage,accepting gifts and expensive things from strangers is the first step to downfall of any person..For a nasty gift,children are surrendering their lives to bad guys’..This has to stop somewhere..I can go on and on about this topic,but doesn’t want to bore you with my long baashan,so stopping it here..
    Stay blessed and lots of love dear and thank you for such a nice plot..❀

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sweetie, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  13. Affaa

    Sorry sorry I’m late nah I’m really very sorry yaar…I’m ready to take any punishment…
    Brin what an episode….today you made me speechless…hats off to you yaar what a writer your…amazing…love you…take care…

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Affaa, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  14. RANdomfANCreationz

    Sorry for commenting late was quite busy these days really it’s amazing brin keep it up love ur story a lot u r a brilliant writer

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Fatarajo, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  15. Lakshmi05

    Amazing episode dear…update soon..

  16. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. . Love you loads muaaaaahhhhhh

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