Rectify:Manmarziyan Part 10

Mala was packing her clothes and was thinking

Mala POV: “I finally get to meet Prem brother’s wife and I will apologize for separating her son. Can’t believe Arjun is Prem son and Radhika husband. I am so thankful to Prem brother because of him I have loving husband Dilip Mishra, three beautiful children even though I am not biological mother to Riddhima and Ankush, I consider them mine children. And then theirs Radhika my and Dilip’s daughter, the apple of my eye. And finally my father in law Deepak Mishra, he is more like a father to me. Even though what happen to me he accepted me as is daughter. And I finally had a father I can trust with my children as well.”

Deepak: “Mala beti, you got your packing done.”

Mala: “Yes papa, I am all ready to go to Mumbai.”

Deepak: “You still want to tell the truth to Prerna?”

Mala: “Yes she needs to know why I couldn’t take Arjun with me or give her child to her.”

Deepak: “She is also Radhika mother in law.”

Mala: “That is why I need to tell her everything I just hope she understand.”

Next scene at the hospital

Radhika is sitting close by Arjun, waiting for him to wake up.

Radhika: “Please Arjun sir wake up, I promise I won’t leave you.”

Slowly Arjun opens his eyes, closes it, rubs his eyes he can’t believe he is seeing Radhika. Radhika see him awake she gives him a kiss on the lips, he responds to it and says..

Arjun: “Wow, nice way to wake up.”

It was there first kiss.

Radhika: “I’ll tell Neil and Prerna maa that you are awake, they want to tell you something.”

Arjun: “Can it wait, I want to spend my time with you, you don’t know how much I miss you, you are my life if anything happens to you, I won’t be able to live. Since Nandu betrayal you are the only thing I have.”

Radhika: “I am not the only thing you have, you have a mother and brother.”

Arjun: “Whhhhaaaat!”

Radhika goes to the door and tells them to come.

Radhika: “Arjun, Prerna maa is your biological mother and Neil is your brother, you both share the same father and is name was Prem Malhotra, your father was murdered and you went missing at that time.”

Prerna goes to her son and gives him a hug and says…

Prerna: “My world went upside down when I lost your father and you. My poor baby was living in the orphanage, you were deprived of my love and your father never got a chance to see both of you grow into wonderful men.”

Neil: “Mom why was father killed.”

Prerna: “I think he got killed for helping the girl escape from her father. This is hard to tell you the girls father was raping her, he got her pregnant.”

Neil: “Men like that should be hanged to death.”

Arjun: “What happen to the girl and what was her name?”

Prerna: “Her name was Maya, I don’t know if she is alive or dead.”

Radhika: “What kind of father do this to their own daughter, I just hope that she escape and fines happiness. Anyway Arjun, I have to check on the old lady she is emitted in this hospital.”

Next scene the old lady

There is a man, he is dressed in a doctor clothes, he takes the pillow and try to suffocate the old woman but Radhika comes in time and stop the man she trys to take the mask but he pushes her and escapes. Radhika goes to the old lady and ask…

Radhika: “Are you okay, why did they want to kill you.”

Old Lady: “I was held hostage only my son knows why they held me hostage.”

Radhika: “What is your son name.”

Old Lady: “My son name is Rana, he takes care of the orphanage.”

Radhika was shocked Rana kaka mother. She calls Rana to come to the hospital, when he came she ask..

Radhika: “Who wants to attack your mother, could you please tell me what is going on?”

Rana: “I need to talk to Arjun and Sam there is something they don’t know about Nandini.”

Radhika takes Rana to Arjun’s room where Neil, Sam, Prerna are in the same room too. Then Rana tells them the shocking truth.

Rana: “Arjun I lied about Nandini wanting to burn the orphanage home, she was not in her right mind, her master is giving her pills so that he can control her.”

Neil: “We figure there was another person involved but what does he want with Sams’ family.”

Rana: “Revenge”

Sam: “But who is this person who wants revenge and why.”

Rana: “I don’t know his name or how he looks, he wears a mask,he had my mother hostage so I had to do his deeds. And for revenge even I don’t know why, but I could tell you he talks about Maira a lot.”

Sam: “Maira is my grandmother, but why does he want revenge with her.”

Neil: “Did your mother talk to your grandma.”

Sam: “Yes, they’ll be here tomorrow.”

Neil: “I guess we’ll get our answer tomorrow.”

Then the door opens and Mala comes in…

Radhika: “Maa, I’m so happy your here.”

She gives her mother a hug then Mala goes to Arjun and gives him a hug…

Mala: “How are you Arjun beta?”

Arjun: “I am fine maa just want to go home with my family, I assume Radhika has fill you in.”

Mala: “Yes she has, I am so glad that you are with your family.

Then she goes to Prerna

Mala: “Can we go to the hall there something I need to tell you privately.”

So Mala and Prerna go to another room to talk.

Prerna: “Mala jee what did you want to talk to me about.”

Mala has tears in her eyes and tell her the truth

Mala: “First of all I want to tell you my original name is Maya Oberi.”

Prerna is shocked

Mala: “I am the girl that Prem brother helped.”

Prerna: “I am so sorry, what your father did was hideous, and I’m glad that my husband was able to help you. I just have one question how did my son end in the orphanage?”

Mala: “I am so sorry, I am the one who left your son in the orphanage. I was afraid what my father would do to your son.”

Prerna: “You don’t need to say sorry, I have my son now and that all that matter.”

Mala: “You are not mad at me.”

Prerna: “I can never be mad at you the only person I’m angry at is your father, what you did was saving my son from your father so how can I be mad at that.”

Mala: “Thank you so much, you don’t know how much guilty I felt for leaving your son at the orphanage.”

Prerna: “You have nothing to feel guilty about, you did the right thing. Now I need to ask you a question is Ankush your fathers’ child.”

Mala: “No, I had a stillborn child it didn’t make it, Ankush is my husband child, he lost his wife and his son needed milk so I provided milk for his child.”

Prerna: “Does your family know about your past.”

Mala: “Only my husband and my father in law know about it.”

Prerna: “I am glad that you got a good life now.”

Mala: “It is all thanks to Prem brother, I am so glad that Arjun is Prem brother son, Arjun is good boy too he always come to our rescue when we are in trouble. I am so proud Radhika is married to Arjun.”

Prerna: “I’m lucky to have Radhika as my daughter in law.”

They both go back to Ardhika and Nesam when they went in the room they looked so worried…

Prerna: “Why do I detect there something wrong?”

Sam: “Nandini is in coma and she is missing.”

Prerna: “Do you think the mastermind took Nandini.”

Arjun: “If she’s with the mastermind, I hope he doesn’t harm her more.”

Next Scene

Someone brings Nandini to his house, she is lying in her bed, he say…

Mystery man: “You are safe here nobody will harm you, there is someone who desperately wants to see you, let me get her.”

He brings a lady she is in her wheelchair, she goes close to Nandini and starts crying.

Lady: “I wish I could save you my sweet daughter but I can’t walk or run to you all because of Suraj Oberi and Badi Maa.”

The face is shown she is Niki Pandey sitting in a wheelchair. And the mystery man is no other than Teji….

Precap: Teji says to his Nani to defeat our enemy we need Ardhika and Nesam in our team…

Your wondering how did Niki and Teji got together and how she got in a wheelchair read from Niki diary

Dilip has a past what that is you have to read Dilip diary….

Thank you so much for your comment, you give me energy to write. Silent reader it would be nice to hear from you but anyways thank you for reading. Bye for now ta ta

37 comments

  1. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Superbbbb…. Brin I m. Getting more into the story… I couldn’t stop reading I need more more more… I want to read it continously yar… Pls update next soon….. ??

  2. Sammy

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    Omg brin again ..this was amazing ..now everything is getting clear in my little head ..so many tangles ..u write it so beautifully …it is superb πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  3. S.v

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    Im gulping what a twist. Teji is mystery man ??? No no no he is cute and lovely person but not in revenge mode. Brin superb awesome as always. Lovely brin ipdate the next part soon. U are a head spinner.

  4. Jessie

    Teji d mystery man… am shocked… a very different shade for him.. now am curious for nxt part.. superb Brin..

  5. Gianna

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    OMG how do u always do this, Teji the mystery man and he is with Niko, Nandini in a coma, loving the twists Brin, loving them so much

  6. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    OMG!!?Again twist..Brin,you are a super woman..Seriously how many twists are remaining in your pandora box my dear..?Loved the episode..?I didn’t want the episode to end..Stay blessed and lots of love..❀

    I read the previous reply of yours..I agree with you,people who does such heinous crimes should be handed to death..

  7. Madhumita

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    First of all, A big SORRY Brin for late reply. I read all the parts. You are expert in giving twists & turns & most importantly you convinced the readers. I am loving the story. Great Going. Waiting for the next.
    Please give some Arjun & Neil brotherly scene. Thanks.

  8. dipika

    It was superb….truth is unfolding day by day..
    Hoe come teji n niki are together.. Eger to read niki’s n dilip’s diary….u hv so much twist to make me shock… Waiting for nxt…tc

  9. Gauri

    Awesome Brin πŸ™‚ you blew my head off..wow what a mystery web …waiting for next πŸ™‚ love u

  10. Rossy

    Awesome story line …u always make my head spin off in 360 angle..omg twist after twist…m gone..how many twists are left now…want to know about others diary n present story…awesome brin

  11. desire

    Wow, brin it was awesome. I loved the way you expressed the emotions of each character. and yes, I have read all the updates of your ff and have loved it truly. sorry couldn’t comment in previous updates. but, please do update soon and take care.

  12. Ritu

    Too good Brin..this was awesome..u r jst amazing..twist after twist..sorry for a late comment..waiting for nxt..plz post soon..and one question is teji d same mystery man who tried to kill that old lady???

    • Brin

      |Author

      No Teji is good person it was Suraj’s man who try to kill the old woman.

      Thank you so much Ritu, I will post it soon. πŸ™‚

  13. Affaa

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    Soooooo sorry for late comment….epi was spectacular…amazing yaar…hats off to you…In episode your rocking..Masha Allah…keep it up…your just mind blowing..love you

  14. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww Brin your story is full of mysteries. ..n all r very interesting. .linked very brilliantly to each other in a very neat web…I just loved it to the coreeeee. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh

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