Rectify: manmarziyan Shanti Devi diary and Radha story


I hate her, that good for nothing sister of mine, always the perfect one, my parent like to compare us, Shanti Devi why can’t you be like Radha, blah, blah, blah, like I want to be like her, please, I don’t have a heart, I hate them all and want them dead.

My dad works in the confectionary and guess what he named his shop, that’s right Radha Sweet, my older sister’s name do you see my name, no, I tell you they don’t love me, that’s fine with me because I don’t love them.

They are always comparing her with me, don’t they know by doing this I am hating them more. You know what made me more angry, I had feeling for Raj but he was in love with Radha. One day Raj’s parent came over to ask my parent for Radha marriage with there son Raj, that was it they were taking the love of my life away from me, if I don’t do anything I’ll lose him forever.

I know this person who does human trafficking his name is Raghu, I once saved him from the police, so he owes me. I told him to sell my sister to any of your customers, I want her name tarnished and ruined so that the Oberoi take me as there daughter in law.

I set my plan in motion, they are going to kill my parents and take Radha with them, while I’ll go to the disco and party all night. Well when I came back the house was set on fire, so I started pretend crying, but this is where my plan backfire Radha was alive and she was with Raj, they were successful for killing my parents but still I want my sister ruined at any cost.

We started living with the Oberoi, Raj’s parents want them to get married in 2 weeks, I got angry, no way am I going to lose Raj, I made a plan to take Radha for shopping and that way Raghu’s men could take her away, but Raj wanted to come, he never leaves Radha alone, I need her alone so the plan could work and I need to do it fast before I lose Raj.

My third plan was to have a girls night out, I ask Raj’s mother and she said yes, I told Raj you can’t come because its girl night out, so I took my sister to the junction disco, I gave her juice which was mix with drugs, she drunk it and fell asleep, I thought finally my plan work but no, my sister’s best friend came over and saw that Radha was not feeling good, so she took her to her house and called Raj to say that Radha was staying with her. I was so angry my plan was always backfiring, I was so desperate to get rid of her, I was making plans to kill her if that is the only way to get rid of her from Raj life.

It was time for the wedding, I made a call to my sister that my life was in danger, I gave her the direction, she came, all worried for me she gave me a hug and I took that chance to stab her, she was shocked, I told her everything how I plan to kill the parents and what I was planning to do to her, I also told her that I love Raj and that is why she had to die. She said if you had told me you love Raj she would have backed out but seeing how evil you are, Raj would never love you he has good heart. I told her I will make him fall in love either by force. She said when Raj finds out that I’m no more he will kill himself. And when we take our second birth I will marry him and take my revenge on you. I laughed at her and said when you die there’s no coming back, goodbye sister mommy and daddy are waiting for you at heaven, I stab her again and again finally she’s dead, I give the knife to Raghu so he could disappear it.

I come at the back door and go to Radha room to change in her bridal gown, I look at Raj’s picture, everything is fare in love and war, when we get married you will be all mine and this time you can’t escape.

I hid myself well with the veil and got married with Raj, when we were alone I take my veil off and say you are only my Raj, looking at him with lust. But when he revealed his face, I was shocked, I didn’t marry Raj but his half brother Sudesh Oberoi, I ask him what did you do with Raj, he said Radha called him to say she was going to save you from the bad guys, he went to look for Radha and ask me to cover for him, how come your here and Radha and Raj not. Then there was commotion outside, there was two bodies one was Radha and the other was Raj. The police said they have captured Raghu for Radha’s murder and that Raj shot himself saying he couldn’t live without Radha. The parents were devastated they lost there son and had to cremate him beside Radha. Shanti Devi was angry again her sister win by taking Raj with her.

Though Raj mother was not Sudesh mother she still thought Sudesh will be the heir of the Oberoi empire, Shanti stayed married to him for money and gave him two children Suraj and Neeraj, she also knew that her husband was one of the customer in Raghu trafficking, she uses that against him so that he doesn’t leave me.

12 year ago Sudesh died and left all the business empire to me and I also help run Trafficking for Rughu getting young girl drugged and selling them to customers.

I will always love Raj and I will alway hate Radha. But today I am happy I have everything power and money and my sister can’t do anything about…..

Radha story

Radha was at the heaven watch how evil her sister had gotten, she ask the almighty god is there a way to stop her, the god ask what if you had second chance in life, what would you do. I told him I want to save all the girls from this trafficking.

I have watched all the disaster she has done, her son raping his own daughter, making Niki watch her daughter get rape while Shanti lets it happen, I also watch how Maya/Mala has escaped and living happily with Dilip.

God said its time for you to return to earth, he said Raj is already on earth it was time for me to have a second chance in life, I ask him will I remember my first birth, he said I will be dreaming about my first birth so that I remember what I have to do at earth.

I was happy and said to myself get ready sister I’m coming for revenge…..

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  1. Dipika

    Brin wht are u girl..this just amazinggggggg
    …i like it from core…that shanti devi thr b*t*h….she killed her parents.. N did such cruel things to her sis..n so happy tht raj n radha died bfor tht evil shanti snatch therr love.. N radha taking rebirth as must b arjun
    You should make movie on this ff Yarr.. Seriously its so fab!!

    You rocked i can hardly wait for next… This is soooo short one.. Want longer…Love

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Dipika, who knows maybe it will be made into movie one day, fingers cross, hope it come true, I will try to make it longer, I will update it soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  2. Gummiebear

    Yippee!!!!… Atlast you posted…loads of love for this amazing chappy….now I think RADHIKA z radha of previous birth nd raj z arjun r8???…di you nailed it….I love the update to the core…you are a rock star….now be a good girl nd post soon….loads of love??

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Supriya, I will try to update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  3. Brin

    I am so sorry to post it late, just didn’t have time, my kids wanted family day out so that was one of the reason I posted late.

    Rossy, I love your recarnation story so much, that I decided to write a recarnation story for my ff, hope you like it.

    I forgot to thank you all for inspiring me to write this ff, please do comment, it gives me energy to write and silent reader thank you for reading my ff,

    I don’t think I need to tell you who the recarnation of Radha and Raj are, right. But I will tell you this Shanti has not seen them but when she does, she will be shocked. Waiting for your comment. πŸ™‚

  4. It’s super good brin πŸ™‚ hate shanthi kill her soon ….waiting for next ff πŸ™‚ loved it πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Suga, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  5. S.v

    Super awesome brin. All the while I was like what ?? Is a woman can go so low that she can destroy her own family ?? My ood seriously boiled. I request rosie my twin u r best when u r angry and I can seriously say that u will be hell anger . Blast at ur own style and for my behalf also.
    Wow this reincarnation has made an effect lovely so arduika is raj and radha lovely sooo lovely I love that concept of reincarnation. Lovely one brin soo lovely. Was waiting and now it is wortg waiting for these days. Lovely update as always. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much S.v for the lovely comment, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  6. Jessie

    Its Arjun n Radhika… gosh.. Brin.. This rectify express took many twists..n this one of reincarnation.!..but u brought out valid with one point tat she will have dreams abt her prev life.. sibling rivalry is d main reason..Will be waiting 4 nxt chappy..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jessie, and yes your right it’s Arjun and Radhika, I will update soon stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  7. It was good I think radha is only radhika n raj as arjun

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Shreya, yes you got it right, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  8. Sweetie

    Brin di,big wala hug from side.. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ What are you di?OMG!!That Shanti Devi,how can she murder her own parents,ughh,I hate that lady..And then the most shocking part,she marrying Sudesh but not Raj,that was wow moment for me.. πŸ™‚ I was thinking what will Raj do after seeing he married to Radha’s sister..Lovely twist that is.. πŸ™‚ Radha and Raj are Rads and Arjun,right??Waiting eagerly for the next Di.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ˜€

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sweetie and yes you got it right it is Arjun and Radhika as the recarnation of Raj and Radha, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  9. Gauri

    Brin …wow you nailed it πŸ™‚ Radha is reborn as Radhika…what a twist ….I was just spell bound πŸ™‚ G8 going πŸ™‚ love u

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Gauri and yes you got it right, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  10. Aasthu

    wow Brin di……..loved the new twist of re-birth in this…… Radha is Rads and Raj is Arjun ri8?????? di can u correct me if I’m wrng????????
    1) Shanti Devi’s son- Suraj
    2)Suraj’s dau- Mala
    3)Mala’s child- dead(from Suraj)
    4)Prerna’s children- Arjun, Neil (di can u once again tell me how Arjun landed in orphanage??)
    5)Niki’s dau- Nandini ( frm Piyali’s father)
    6)Nandini’s son- Teji???? ( frm Suraj???)
    7)Dilip’s children- Ridhima, Ankush and Radhika
    8)Piyali’s dad’s and mom’s child: Piyali (Suraj holds a grudge against Piyali’s mom coz it was coz of her that his bro went to jail)
    9)Piyali’s children- Jai (killed by Nandini), Sam and Manya

    1. Brin

      4) Mala put Arjun in the orphanage, thinking he would be safe there, Suraj would have harmed the child. She did it to protect the child because her father was after her and the baby she was carrying her father’s child.

      6) Dr Chang raped Nandini, that’s how Teji was conceived, he’s been raised by Niki and Juan Chang, Dr Chang’s sister.

      7) Dilip’s children are Riddhima and Ankush with his first wife Radhika is the daughter of Dilip and Maya/Mala.

      I hope I answered all your question, if you have more question , I’ll be happy to answer. πŸ™‚

      1. Aasthu

        ok ok…..nw everything is clear………but one more doubt: Was Arjun with him when Prerna’s hubby came to save Mala,?????? when will you update next?????

      2. Brin

        It was Mala who went to Prem’s house and yes little Arjun was in the house.

      3. Aasthu

        so was not Neil born at that time?????

      4. Brin

        Prerna was pregnant so yeah he was not born yet.

      5. Brin

        Thank you so much Aasthu, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  11. Jnana

    Awesome….. You nailed it brin…. Waiting for the next….love you…tc.

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jnana, I will update soon stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  12. Awesome brin

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Janani, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  13. interesting……………awesome,……

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Subha, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  14. Meen

    wow….simply amazing….radha taking rebirth as rads & raj as arjun…..interesting plot……..bring it on girl….waiting for d next….loads of love…muuuuuha

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Meen, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  15. Awesome, wowwww brin… so radhika is second birth of radha…n arjun must be raj…very interesting. …it’s true…we shouldn’t compare between kids….sometimes it doesn’t create compitition but create rivalry between siblings…very well narrated. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Roma for liking the concept of the story, I will update soon. Stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  16. Sammy

    it was soooooooooo awesome di ..loved it to the core ..our Arjun is Raj ..srk style ..hehe ..too good di

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sammy, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  17. _Ritu

    OMG..Brin dear…it was heart touching…Shanti Devi is such a devil…killed her own parents…disgusting…. Nd Rads nd Arjun r d reincarnation of Radha nd Raj…now all curious for nxt one…. πŸ™‚ post soon…and two question dear…what is d meaning of ur name…?? Nd whether u know Hindi???plz don’t mind it dear.. Loads of love πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Ritu, I can speak Hindi but I can’t write it, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  18. Rossy

    Omg…what a devil evil cruel…how could she did such things with her parents n own blood sisters..still now I have Goosebumps…so horrible kind of lade…name shanti but doing only asanti…sorry dear for late response…my display screen was broken

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Rossy, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  19. Sathya

    Brin dear…. What should I say now… I m lack of words now. It’s a tremendous one dear… Awww I myself scolding me for reading it late… I m very very sorry dear….. I got goosebumps when I read the last part… Radha taken rebirth as Radhika n Raj as arjun….. Oh my gosh high voltage drama is on d way. I m on my toe now to see how Shanti devi reacts seeing ardhika… N I guess radha n Raj taken rebirth with the same face n thus makes Shanti devi shocked to he’ll…. Right?…. Ahhh pls pls pls post next soon

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sathya, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

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