Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 7)

The gun went off but it didn’t hit Neil it hit Arjun. Nandini was shocked, she loved Arjun like a little brother, she really did, but every time she wanted to forget her revenge and start a new life with her brother Arjun, Suraj would always give her pill which made her crazy. And sometimes she would take it on her own, she was addict she couldn’t control her self.

Nandini was confused she didn’t know how she got here or why she was holding a gun, she was just numb.

Suddenly the police came and arrested Nandini for Kidnapping but then she started having stroke and her body started shaking. While Arjun was bleeding to death, Sam untied her mother from the chair. They came over to Arjun, Sam had a scuff she pressed where Arjun was bleeding. Neil went out to get the paramedic.

Piyali: “Sam I am so sorry for blaming you for Jai death.”

Sam: “Mom you don’t need to apologize, you were in pain of losing your son, I can understand.”

Piyali: “I blamed you when it wasn’t your fault.”

Sam: “Mom even I felt guilty inside, but now that I know the truth, I will make sure Nandini get punished.”

Then Neil comes through the door with the paramedic to take Arjun to the hospital. Neil told them…

Neil: “Nandini had a stroke, there taking her to the hospital.”

Piyali: “Are you sure she not lying and if she not I hope she dies.”

Neil fines the list that Nandini was showing to Piyali he looks at it and ask Piyali

Neil: “I think there is a second person involved who want to take revenge on your family.”

Piyali: ” She mention about a master who made the list for her revenge. She also mention that I send men to rape her, could the master be the one who send these men and blamed it on me.”

Neil: “By looking at this list someone else is the mastermind but why does this person want to take revenge on your family?”

Piyali: “I need to talk to my parent maybe they know who the person is.”

Sam: “For now lets go to the hospital and be there for Arjun.”

Neil: “Yes, lets go, I want to thank him for saving my life.”

Mean while at the hospital, Radhika was in the room with an old lady who was hit by a car. She saw the last number of the car licence that hit her, 520 was the last number.

Radhika was going to get medication for the old lady while the other side the paramedic and the doctor were taking Arjun to the ICU.

Radhika came close to seeing Arjun but one of the paramedic came in between so she didn’t see him. But she felt in her heart that something was wrong.

Sam and Neil came to the hospital, Piyali went home with her daughter Maanya. Sam told Neil she would call Prerna aunty and Neil said he would check on Arjun.

Sam: “Hi Prerna aunty Neil and I are at the City Hospital.”

Prerna: “Sam what’s wrong why are you at the hospital?”

But Sam didn’t answer, she was shocked to see Radhika at the hospital.

Radhika: “Sam what are you doing in the hospital?”

Sam: “Your husband was shot by Nandini, the doctors are removing the bullet.”

Radhika was in pain to hear that the man she loved was shot.

Radhika: “Sam I promise you I will leave Arjun but please let me see him until he gets better.”

Sam: “I want to apologize to you Radhika, I realize I was never in love with Arjun it was always Neil that I love, I just didn’t know at that time. I slap you and humiliated you at the office when you were trying to save me from Nandini. I am very sorry, I want you to slap me.”

Radhika: “What ever happen it was misunderstanding created by Nandini.”

Sam: “Yes, but I listen to her instead of you and for that I deserve the slap from you.”

Radhika: “I’m not going to slap you Sam.”

Sam: “Fine then I will slit my wrist or I get that slap from you, choice is yours.”

Radhika: “You wouldn’t.”

Sam takes the pocket knife from the purse and say…

Sam: “I would, when I count to ten if you don’t slap me I will slit my wrist. 1,2,3,4,5”

Radhika: “Sam I forgave you please I don’t want to slap you.”

Sam wouldn’t stop 6,7,8,9


Radhika slap Sam everyone in the hospital was watching the scene. Then both of them were hugging and crying.

Sam: “Thank you Chaasni for slapping me you don’t know how much it was paining me inside when I found out the truth. I will never doubt you again.”

Radhika: “Sam I want to be there for Arjun when he wakes up.”

Sam: “Lets go.”

Then suddenly Prerna comes to Sam…

Prerna: “Sam why are you at the hospital, is…Neil okay?”

Sam: “I’m sorry aunty for not telling you the whole thing, yes Neil is fine it is Arjun who got shot.”

Prerna: “Could you take me to Neil.”

Sam: “Sure aunty, Radhika and I are going to the ICU, you can come with us.”

When they came to ICU Neil had question that he need to ask his mother..

Neil: “Mom I found this locket on Arjun the same one that I have.”

Prerna: “You were in my tummy when your father was murdered I thought I lost him.”

Neil: “What do you mean.”

Prerna: Arjun is my lost son, he’s your brother….

Precap: Neil gives blood to Arjun, someone trys to strangle the old lady…

Who killed Neil and Arjuns’ dad find out from Surajs’ daughter Maya’s diary

And did Nandinis’ baby survive find out from Suraj’s diary

Thank you for those who comment, you give me the energy to write and silent reader thank you for reading. Bye for now ta ta…..


  1. Sammy

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    Brin now my brain. Goes numb …arjun and Neil are brother …wao wao 🙂 ..yipee awesome job brin ..pls update next asap 🙂 🙂

  2. Ritu

    brin dr u r jst amazing in giving twist…ArNeil are brothers…i loved the twist and that old lady.. I think she is Maria..jst superb dr..u nailed it… everything were happening one after another that I didnt even get time to blink…cant wait for nxt…plz plz plz post soon…love

    • Brin


      Thank you so much Ritu, you will find out who the old lady is in my next chapter, I will update it soon. 🙂

  3. Gauri

    OMG what an episode Brin 🙂 fantastic Arjun-neil Brothers Wow ! its getting better and better loads of love 🙂 waiting for next 🙂

    • Brin


      I didn’t say Radhika is Nandini child, you have find out from Suraj’s diary if the child survive. But thank you Shreya so much, I will post soon. 🙂

  4. S.v

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    U r very good in making puzzles and i love them . Well for this update Neil and Arjun are brothers thats a big news and need to find who was Nandhini’s daughter. Brin the story has more twists and turns. I love something like these kinds of mystery stories. Awesome . Update soon waiting to know more.

  5. Shree

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    Wow!! This is cool… You Ned to be in CID… Such good twists you give all like unsolved tidbits of a puzzle and then tadaaa… It’s all solved.. Loved it so much

    Post soon.. Love you ??

  6. Rosie

    Wow…wow….wow….twist pe twist…awesome,mindboggling….really u should write much before…its intriguing…m already hooked…i think Maya is nandini daughter…n for every killing n misery I will punish Suraj…argh…that moron

    • Brin


      There is a mystery about Maya that I will update soon, thank you so much Rosie for your lovely comment. 🙂

  7. subha

    wow…. awesome episode………..thirlling..arneil brothers …eagerly waithing next

  8. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Wow!!What a twist in the end..You are superb dear.. 🙂 Waiting for the next..Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 😀

  9. Madhumita

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    Yes Brin, I was reading your story. Amazing episodes. But specially Loved this part. The Twist in the End is super Interesting. Neil & Arjun brothers. I am remembering the MMZ scene where Radhika stopped Neil from calling his mother to know whether Arjun & he is long lost brother or not. Eager to read more.

  10. dipika

    ohhhh Brin Darling its super duper loving chappy…I just loved that Arjun n neil r brothers… its so fantastic… This story is driving crazy.. n sam rads slap incident… haha…great….. m just excited for suraj’s n maya’s diary..i guess suraj is the killer… love

  11. Sathya

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    Brin… What can I say now? The best episode… Neil n arjun r brothers… Wow what a twist… Actually I m not getting angry on Nandini.. Coz she got manipulated by suraj…like others she also should get chance to rectify as per ur title ??BTW.. It’s a stupendous episode Dear.. And sorry for not commenting previous episodes… ???

  12. Gianna

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    Wow Brin u are giving us twist after twist. Hats off to u my dear u hv kept me glued to ur story. Amazing update

  13. Suga

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    Sorry for late update my dear…..pls pls give nice punishment to suraj ….. Arjun shot 😮 😮 😮 last part awwwwwwww dear it’s awesome 😀 😀 😀 arjun n Neil r blood brothers 😀 😀 yipeeeeeeeee :D:D loved it 😀 love u 😀 😀

  14. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, loved it very very much. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. .

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