Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 5)

Hi my lovely friends, I want to thank you for my daughter birthday wishes and for commenting on my ff also silent reader please comment if you can.. so here is part 5

After Niki left, he went to the secret room, where there were pictures of Maira Dixit. His plan backfire, he thought that if Angad cheat, Maira would tell him to leave her and to marry Niki and then he would be there for Maira.

When Angad’s report came, that he can be a father that’s when Suraj had a plan…

Suraj: “If it’s taking that long to conceive a child then it is Maira that can’t conceive. And when she goes to the doctor, I wonder what she will do.”

Angad: “What ever happen we’ll work together.”

Suraj: “I know Maira she will feel aweful for depriving you of being a father, she will leave or kill herself.”

Angad: “No, Maira will never kill herself.”

Suraj: “I heard from one of my friend that is friend’s wife swallowed the whole pack of pills because she couldn’t give her husband a baby.”

Angad: “Well if my wife can’t have a baby then we will adopt a baby.”

Suraj: POV “There’s no way I would let you adopt a baby, I will threaten them if they try to give you a baby.”

Suraj:”Hey, that’s a good idea why didn’t his friend think of that maybe his wife would still be alive.”

Angad: “Thank Suraj, I will talk to my wife.”

After Suraj left Angad office he heard, Niki Pandey say to a friend that she wish Angad sir were her husband then she would be a lucky girl. Then Suraj had a plan…

Suraj: “There is a way to have Angad.”

Niki Pandey: “How”?

Suraj: “I here you need money for your mother’s operation.”

Niki Pandey: “Yes but how will I get Angad sir to love me, he doesn’t love me the way I love him.”

Suraj: “If you have Angad’s baby, he will leave his wife because she can’t conceive.”

Few hour ago

Niki Pandey: “Maira is pregnant.”

Suraj: “That is impossible.”

Niki Pandey: “You know what I pore my heart to him and he tells me to abort the baby, it was a big mistake listening to you. After mother’s surgery I am leaving this place and Angad sir forever, I will raise this child on my own and will not come between his wife, he made it clear he loves his wife. And you better not cause problem.”

Niki leaves

Now in the dark room he has Maira pictures with a X mark on it.

Suraj: “I hate you Maira for taking my brother away.”

It all happen when four men raped a 19 year old girl one of the man was Suraj’s brother and the eye witness was Maira. The 19 year old girl was her friend. Maira was determine to get justice for her friend and she did, the judge declare them to be hanged to death. At that time Suraj was at London for his studies, he didn’t see Maira face only his badi maa saw Maira’s face. When they went to Angad’s reception party badi maa was shocked after the reception was over she told Suraj that Maira is responsible for his brother death. Suraj promise is badi maa that he would take his revenge on Maira.

He wanted Maira out of Angad’s life He wanted to destroy her. But Nike was not going to cooraperate after her mother’s surgery she left Mumbai and settle at Pune.

Next scene Suraj and Badi Maa

Suraj: “I have my men searching for Niki but so far they have not found her.”

Badi maa:” We need to find her or else Maira will live a happy life with Angad and her unborn child.”

Suraj:”Badi Maa I don’t think this plan will work if Niki will not listen to us.”

Badi maa: “We need Niki for our plan to work.”

Sudddenly the phone rings, Suraj takes the call and smile.

Suraj: “They found Niki at Pune.”

Badi Maa: “Now we have to get Angad and Maira at Pune for the plan to work.”

Suraj:”Don’t worry our plan A didn’t work but our plan B will work.”

Suraj convince Angad and Maira to go to Pune for business deal, he convince Angad to take a nurse for Maira so that she could travel comfortable.

When at Pune Maira and Nike had a labour pain. They went to the same hospital. Suraj made sure they were in the same hospital. Nike and Maira both gave birth to girls

Now the plan was to switch the babies so that Maira had Niki’s child so at night he switch the babies. Suraj was happy with this he could torture Maira child without her knowing it. Being satisfied he left the hospital. But he didn’t know that Niki’s mom also switch the baby, she wanted her granddaughter to live with her father who could provide her with a better life. Niki mom didn’t know that she had Niki’s daughter.


Nandini: “My grandma told me that she switched us I did the blood test it prove that I was with my biological mother.”

Piyali: “Thank god, I was not raise with a crazy woman.”

Nandini: “My mom was a good woman I know she made a big mistake by trusting your father who wanted me dead but she always made me feel like I was special.”

Piyali: “Then what is the reason you want revenge with me is it because I’m rich.”

Nandini: “It has nothing to do with money or with your husband Samrat even though I would like to strangle him for betraying my trust.

Piyali: “You and my Husband.”

Nandini: “Yes, we are lovers, but it was a one night stand just the way my mother had a one night stand. This is what you deserve for hurting me in the worse way.”

Piyali: “I don’t understand how did I hurt you?”

Nandini: “For sending those men to rape me”…

Precap: Another person is kidnapped by Nandini….

I hope it is not boring and I hope its long enough if not sorry about it.. So who do you think the other person is that is kidnapped?
Waiting to hear your comment. bye for now.

Credit to: Brin


  1. Jessie

    Brinn..u are rocking yaar.. the story is gaining momentum.. love d twists.. myra as a witness.. niki mom too switching babies were nice turns.. superb.. no boring..bring it on..and nandini wit gr8 effort explaining everything., piyali feels relieved she wasnt raised up by crazy woman hahaha so realistic..

    I guess its sam who might be kidnapped.

  2. Sammy

    |Registered Member

    It is getting interesting day by day …awesome chappy brin ..uodateca long one next time pls ..want to read it more 🙂 🙂

    • Brin

      |Registered Member

      Sammy I really trying to do it long but with two kids its not easy and sometime the computer freezes on me but I will try to write it as soon as possible. 🙂

  3. Rosie

    This is very interesting…continue soon to the present…now whom gonna nandu kidnap…she is dangerous like Suraj…plzzzzz b soon ?

  4. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    This just keeps on getting better, full of twists and turns so thrilling. I am eagerly waiting for the next update. Amazing update Brin just loved it.

  5. Ritu

    story is interesting a lot dr…twist after twist nd I m really enjoying it…u nailed it…waiting for nxt…plz post

  6. Shree

    |Registered Member

    Twist twist twist… wow!! It was wonderful… Sorry for not wishing for your daughter’s birthday… I had exams… belated birthday wishes to her…

    Post soon.. Love you ??

    • Brin

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      I’ve been waiting for your comment, but now I can understand, how was your exam and thank you for wishing my daughter’s belated birthday, will update soon. 🙂

  7. Gauri

    Awesome Brin 🙂 wat a twist …now who the next one to get kidnapped …I am curious…pls post soon 🙂

  8. dipika

    OmG brin darling i can’t swallow this much twist..m a like what ?? what?? at every pt…u r amazing writer with this amazing story.. just bcos she stood fot justive that vike suraj want to take revenge.. n piyali sent men to rape nandini?? twist is coming i guess.. love this

  9. afa

    Brin….your great babes your an awesome writer…and your ff is just amazing….I love your ff and you too

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