Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 4)


Hi my lovely friends, here again with another episode. I am introducing four new character for you to understand why Nandini hates Piyali.

Character Sketch

Angad Dixit: married to Maira Dixit before Piyali was born they were childless for five years.

Maira Dixit: Desperately wants a child with Angad, it took her five years to get pregnant

Niki Pandey: She is Angad secretary, had a one night stand and got pregnant with her bosses child.

Suraj Oberi: He is the reason for all the problems…

Now that I introduce the new character lets go back to the story.

Nandini: “that’s right Piyali we’re sisters.

Piyali: “No, my father woulk never cheat with my mother, your lying.”

Nandini: “Yes your father loved your mother, but he did cheat and I’m the proof of it. Your father used my mother for only one reason to give a child to his wife…


Maira: “The test came negative.”

Angad:”Honey, will try again, I’m sure next time it’ll be positive.”

Maira: “You have been saying that for five year but it always come negative. Why don’t we see a doctor who specialize on fertility.”

Angad:”We do not need to see a specialist there are other ways to have a baby.”

Maira: “What do you mean?”

Angad:”we can adopt a baby.”

Maira: “Would you be okay if it isn’t yours.”

Angad: “I don’t care if it isn’t mine I will love it no matter what.”

But being in the adoption center was always a disappointment either they were on the waiting list or a pregnant woman changes her mind about giving her baby up for adoption.

Maira was crying. Every time she gets close to a baby her biological mother would take the baby away.

Angad had enough he could not see his wife in pain, he suggested that she go to her parents house for two month to get over the pain she agreed with him and left.

One day his friend Suraj suggested:

Suraj: “Have a one night stand with Niki, get her pregnant and give your baby to your wife.”

Angad:”no way I would no do that to my wife.”

Suraj: “Who said you have to tell your wife, look Niki needs money for her mother’s operation and you need a child to give to your wife, just think about it.”

Angad was thinking about it he already knew he could father a child is wife on the other hand didn’t know that she could not conceive. One day she will go to the doctor and when she fines out then what, Angad thought about it she would suicide if she found out the truth.

Angad:”No, no what if she kills herself, Suraj is right, I should sleep with Niki, I will call Suraj

Suraj: ” Hey, Angad, whats up.”

Angad: “I’ve decided your right, I will sleep with Niki.”


Piyali:” If mother couldn’t conceive, then how did she conceive me.”

Nandini: “Wheb your mother was at her parents, she went to the doctor and the doctor told her…”


Doctor:” You need surgery to remove the stone, and then you’ll be able to conceive.”

Maira got the surgery done. She didn’t tell Angad about the surgery. She want to surprise him when she gets pregnant.

On the other hand

Angad was getting ready to do the deed but first he needed to ask.

Angad;”You do know why your here.”

Niki: “Yes, Sir, Suraj told me that you will give me the money for my mother’s operation, if I give you a child.”

They do the deed, but Angad didn’t know that Niki was in love with him, but Suraj knew he told Niki:

Suraj: “If you get pregnant he’ll have no choice but to marry you.”

After doing the deed, he went home when he was in his room there waiting for him was his wife wearing a s*xy lingerie. He was so happy to see her, they made love.

And then two week later:

Maira: “The test is positive, we are having a baby.”

Angad is shocked, looking at Angad shocked face she smile and say.

Maira: “I know that you are shocked since we’ve been trying to get pregnant for five years. I went to the doctor they told me I need surgery and then I can conceive. And now our dream has come true.

Angad hugs his wife, he is happy and also feeling guilty how was he going to tell his wife that he slept with another woman so that she could have a baby. Only way out was if Niki was not Pregnant.

Next day at the office

Niki: Sir I’m pregnant. Iwant to tell you I love you and want to marry you.”

Angad was shocked

Angad: “Niki the reason we did that was for you to give the child to my wife. Didn’t Suraj tell you that?

Niki: “No I thought if I have your child you would leave your wife.”

Angad:”I will never leave my wife, I love her, what we did was wrong, I should never have listen to Suraj.

He open the locker takes some money out and gives it to Niki.

Angad:” I want you to take the money and abort the child.”

Niki was shocked and disappointed with her self for falling in love with her boss.

Niki:”didn’t you just said that you wanted the baby”

Angad:” I don’t need to my wife is pregnant So now if you tell my wife I will destroy you. I will stop your mother’s operation. It’s better you take the money and leave.

Angad leaves she goes to Suraj house to confront him

Niki: “You lied to me Suraj, you told me he would leave his wife if I Had his child.

Suraj: Tell Maira she will leave him

Niki:”Maira is pregnant

Suraj is angry he could see tat is plan had backfire…

precap:Suraj’s motive will be revealed.

Sorry guys that how long I can do. It my daughter birthday. I will try to do longer next time bye now

Credit to: Brin

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  1. Wao ..brin was awesome .and you should enjoy with your princess …bday wishes from side …””HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO BRIN’S PRINCESS “” …love you a lot dear …I wish princess get all happiness of this universe …and don’t worry about the long ..or short chappy …we are glad at least you are regular in updating πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much Sammy for my daughter’s birthday wish, and for liking the ff. πŸ™‚

  2. Hi Brin gud one. I loved it.mBut am curious as to whr is rads and wat is arjun going to do to get her back . Am just curious. Pls if possible pls tell me. Wishing ur Daughter a very happy birthday . May u and your family have prosperity, peace, happiness and contentment in your life. Take care. Have a blast. Bye for now. Update soon.

    1. First I’m trying to work on new characters when that’s done then I’ll think of Arjun and Radhika. But I could tell you this Nandini hates Piyali not because she married Samrat or how much money she has there’s a twist to it and it involves Suraj you just have to wait for the twist. Also thank you for my daughters birthday wish. πŸ™‚

  3. Omg…what horrible is Suraj…it’s like he didn’t want his friend’s happiness…what’s his plan…to acquire all property of angada…punish him bad…nandini is a carbon copy of Suraj…yuck…u r awesome dear…u should write more….

    1. Ooh…i forgot to wish ur daughter happy birthday ? to her…take care of her…so much love n sweet wishes

      1. You will fine out What Suraj’s motive is in my next chapter for now you’ll have to wait, also thank you for my daughter’s birthday wish. πŸ™‚

  4. hey congrats for completing the journey of years to b a mother… old ur sweety is…..? n the epi is really good

    1. My daughter is 6 year old, thanks for the birthday wish and for liking my ff. πŸ™‚

  5. Coz of suraj all life get messed …… Nice one brin….. Loved it ……

    1. Suraj is going to brainwash Nandini too just wait for what he’s going to do. πŸ™‚

  6. Hey brin how r u……. hope u r…. fine……. this epi was just awesome……. I loved it….. plz. Update next soon….. byee tc

    1. Thanks Deeva, I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  7. Hey Brin darling first of all happy birthday to your angel..loads love n happiness for her.. n today’s epi is shocking rocking n full of twist..though angad did it in helpness bt it complicated the life of maira nikki n him.n suraj took advantage of angad situation.. eger to knw his r amazing.. love you. tc

    1. Dipika, thank you for my daughters birthday wish and I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  8. what a twist…but it was superb..eagerly waiting to know what was the motive of that creep Suraj…loved it dr..and a very happy bday to ur angel…have a blast…and listen our treat is due..just kidding..waiting for nxt soon..take care..

    1. Thank you Ritu, for my daughter’s birthday wish and I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  9. Hey Brin..Loved the episode.. πŸ™‚
    My wishes to your daughter “Happy B’day Princess” πŸ™‚
    Stay blessed and keep smiling.. πŸ™‚

    1. Thank you so much for my daughter’s birthday wish. πŸ™‚

  10. Happy birthday to you…Happy birthday to dea cute little princess..happy day to you…may God bless…many many happy returns of the day…Brin di….It was an awesome epi….Thank you so much for updating…love you…its me afa

    1. Thank you so much Afa for my daughter’s birthday wish and I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  11. happy birth day to your angel………..god bless u ..awesome episode……..eagerly waiting next one…tc

    1. Thank you for my daughter’s birthday wish, and I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  12. Happy happy birthday to d lovely little princess!!! Its really a twist after twist brin.. the story s so different.. bad suraj.. why cheating everyone.. eager 4 nxt update.. TC.. enjoy d day to d fullest..

    1. Thank you for my daughter’s birthday wish, and I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  13. hbd to ur lil princess brin dear nyc episode

    1. Thank you for my daughters birthday wish, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  14. Brin why were u depriving us of such a good story for long, am so happy u decided to write this is just amazing. It keeps getting better and better. Waiting for the nxt one. And happy birthday to the princess. ???

    1. Thank you for my daughters birthday wish and to your question, I was juggling whether I should write or not and then eventually I decided to give it a shot and see how it goes. I never expected to get good response, with your comment it gives me energy to write and I am thankful for that. πŸ™‚

  15. Awesome, wowwww very interesting episode….all new charac. were good. ..angad n maira were good n suraj cheated angad as well as niki….suraj very disgusting. …very interesting twist…precap is very interesting. ..very lovely narration. ..loved it to the core. ..anddd a bery happy birthday to your Lil princess. …may almighty bless her with lotssssss of happiness n success. ..keep her safe n sound…keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€ β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

    1. Thank you for my daughters birthday wish, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  16. Wow brin dear ….today episode outstanding yaar…..u just nailed it….eagerly waiting for next one…..n very happy bday to ur cute princess….keep rocking dear….love u lot……tc…..

    1. Thank you for my daughter’s birthday wish, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  17. Brin this was aewsome. Angad yuck how could a man be like this. Everything taken for granted. Soo what is gonna happen next please update soon and many more happy returns to the little angle princess. Let she get all the happiness and blessings in the world. My wishes to her.

    1. Thank you Sv, for my daughter’s birthday wish, and I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  18. awesome episode dear ……………………….. and a very happy birthday to your little princess

    1. Thank you Priya for my daughter’s birthday wish will update soon. πŸ™‚

  19. Brin I really love the twist πŸ™‚ Samrat too is wrong …this was an amazing episode πŸ™‚ and now the most important part Many more happy returns of the day to the little doll may almighty bless her with all happiness of the universe πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚ enjoy πŸ™‚ love u

    1. Thank you Gauri, for my daughter’ s birthday wish, I will update soon. πŸ™‚

  20. Happy birthday to your princess . Waiting for the next episode

    1. Thank you for wishing my daughter a happy Birthday, I will update it soon. πŸ™‚

  21. my u gave me a real shock…u r a mother!!!… god… i thought u r of our age grp..mean girl youths….anyhow…happy bday dear doll….wishing her a happy and successful life ahead…still not able to believ…
    and coming to chappy…angad was wrong….and suraj tho basically wrong hae!!!…. bechari maira…well…its good…nandinie revealed the truth…awesome twist…keep going….love u….
    still….didnt come up with the shock………………………!!!

  22. Here’s another shock I’m mother of two kids. Thank you Feby for wishing my daughter a happy birthday, I’ll update soon. πŸ™‚

    1. god…. y one earth will i get shocks from my tu frnds….lol…iam fainting….never evr thought u r sooo elder to us….how old r the two chotus… i evn have a doubt tat brin is not ur real name…tats not a probs..coz most of thm have their duplicate names and i know all tat…and no formality between us di….celebrate the birthday…we will b thr invisibly in bday

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