Rectify : Manmarziyan part 17 and 18

Radhika: “Don’t panic yet papa, I will call Riddhima’s in law, you make sure Maa doesn’t know about Dinesh calling you and possibility that Riddhima is kidnapped.”

Dilip: “There’s no way I would jeopardize your mother’s health, but I’m worried for Riddhima, call the Joshi and tell me what happens.”

Radhika: “Okay papa I’m hanging up now, got to call Riddhima’s in law.”

Radhika hangs the phone.

Arjun: “You look intense is Riddhima di okay?”

Radhika: “Papa got a call from Dinesh, he said he has his daughter, he called to see if I’m okay, we think he might have Riddhima. I have to call Joshi family to confirm if Riddhima is safe.”

Radhika calls the Joshis.

Auntie: “Hello? ”

Radhika: “Hi auntie this is Radhika may I speak to Riddhima.”

Auntie: “Beta she’s at Mumbai, didn’t Saral tell you? ”

Radhika: “When did she come to Mumbai?”

Auntie: “Its been two days, she hasn’t called here either, I’ve told her to call here when she reach Mumbai. ”

Radhika: “Why didn’t you call us?”

Auntie: “Saral said she was okay, and was going to see her family.”

Radhika: POV my god Dinesh and Saral are working together, they have Riddhima.

Radhika: “Okay Auntie thank you for telling me where Riddhima is.”

She hangs the phone.

Radhika: “Arjun, Saral and Dinesh are working together, they have Riddhima.”

Arjun: “Of all the evil things he done, he kidnaps his own sister in law and working with a pimp like Dinesh.”

Radhika: “Dinesh is very evil, he sells innocent girls to the customers, I need to fine Riddhima di fast. It’s a good thing I gave her that necklace.”

Arjun: “What is so great about the necklace? ”

Radhika: “I put a little chip device, in Riddhima necklace, when she gets the chance, she will press the device of the necklace and with my cell phone I will know where she is located.”

Arjun: “Wow, my wife is very smart.”

Radhika: “There’s a lot of things you need to know about me, but right now is not the good time.”

Arjun: “I agree after Riddhima is found, we’ll talk, agree.”

Radhika: “Agree.”

Next scene Saral, Dinesh and Riddhima.

Dinesh: “I don’t understand why we couldn’t kidnap Radhika too.”

Saral: “Because I want her to suffer, I want her to bend down her knees for forgiveness for leaving me for that Arjun.”

Riddhima: POV For the first time I am relieved that my sister never married Saral, I’m glad she never listen to me. I never thought Saral would be this evil. When he made the phone call for me to come to Mumbai, I never thought he would be using me to get back at Radhika. And that Dinesh scares me alot, he is looking at me with lust, if he touches me, I will kill myself, only my husband can touch me no one else. I just need to reach my necklace but my hands are tied, I need to do something.

Riddhima: “Please Saral, I need water.”

Saral goes and gets her water.

Riddhima: “Please Saral could you untie the rope, so I could drink water, you could tie me back when I’m done.”

Saral unties the rope, he goes back to talking to Dinesh, she takes her chance to press the device.

Next scene Arjun and Radhika.

Radhika: “We got the location.”

Arjun: “Lets go save di.”

Radhika: “I’ll drive, you call the police and inform Nesam too.”

Arjun: “What about papa?”

Radhika: “I’ll call him, when we save di.”

Next scene Saral, Dinesh and Riddhima.

Riddhima POV I just hope Radhika comes fast because I could see, he is getting Saral drunk and has evil eyes on me. Please God get Radhika here on time before Dinesh trys to rape me. Oh no Saral is unconscious and Dinesh is coming towards me….

Part 18

Dinesh: “You are beautiful, you will be my s*x slave. ”

Riddhima: “Dream on its never going to happen.”

Suddenly Dinesh sees a light reflecting on Riddhima necklace. He takes her necklace off.

Dinesh: “What is this?”

Riddhima: “It’s a device given by my sister to locate where I’m at, my sister and her friends are coming to save me.”

Dinesh POV This Radhika is a very dangerous woman, smart thing to do is run, too bad I didn’t get to have fun with Riddhima.

For Dinesh it was too late to run. Radhika was pointing the gun straight to Dinesh.

Radhika : “Where do you think your going you creep, Arjun go untie di I’ll watch him until the police come.”

Arjun unties Riddhima, while the police and Nesam come. Saral wokeup being handcuff with Dinesh behind him. RIDDHIMA slapped Saral and Dinesh and said…

Riddhima: “I am ashamed that you are my brother in law, thank god Radhika didn’t marry you, and you Dinesh Mishra I curse you that something bad happens to you, you never think about those innocent girls who you have deprived there innocence giving them pain after pain for the rest of there life, I curse you that you live in pain, you will be begging for death.”

Dinesh starts laughing.

Dinesh: “That day will never come, I have power and money, I’ll be out of this jail as soon as possible, you wait and watch, I’m coming after you.”

Radhika slaps Dinesh.

Radhika: “I won’t let you lay a hand on my sister, you’ll face me first and I promise you will suffer, now take these creeps away.”

Radhika gives Riddhima a hug.

Radhika: ” Are you okay di, he didn’t harmake you in anyway.”

Riddhima: “You came just in time.”

Sam: ” Riddhima di I am so glad you are safe, Dilip uncle was so worry about you, but glad I could give him the good news that you are safe, Mala auntie doesn’t know that you were kidnap,we didn’t tell her because of her health.”

Riddhima: “I will go see them tomorrow, Ardhika if it’s okay, could I sleepover at your house.”

Arjun: “Di you don’t need to ask, you can sleep whenever you want, it is your house too.”

Next scene at Ardhika home.

When Arjun was asleep Radhika made a phone call.

Radhika: “Hi this is Radhika, you always wanted revenge on Dinesh well you can take your revenge, he is in jail.”

Mystery girl: “Thank you Radhika, I will get the other girls to hit him where he will not hurt any innocent girls again.”

Next scene at Central jail

Police: “Dinesh, you can go home.”

Saral: “Hey, what about me.”

Police: ” There’s no bail paper signed for you it was only for Dinesh.”

Dinesh: “Don’t worry buddy I’ll talk to Shanti Devi, she’ll get you release tomorrow.”

What Dinesh didn’t know, it was the rectifier who got Dinesh released to take revenge on him.”

Mystery girl: “Hello Dinesh, you are to go with me, Shanti Devi wants to see you.”

Dinesh: “Who are you?”

Mystery girl: “My name is Ritu, and madam wants to see you, get in the car.”

Dinesh without thinking he gets in the car, someone with chlorine cloth puts on Dinesh’s mouth and he gets unconscious.

When he wokeup he was tied up standing up naked. There were a lot of girls with sticks rocks and sledge hammer, all these girls were the victims and now they were here for revenge. Riddhima curse for him was going to come true, he was going to feel the pain of his life…

Next scene Niki and Radhika meeting.

It was time to meet Niki, Teji came to pick up Radhika, Arjun wanted to come but he had to take Riddhima di to the hospital. So Teji took Radhika to his house for Radhika to see Niki.

Niki: “Welcome Radhika, I’m been waiting for you.”

Radhika: “You want to see me I’m here, and I know that you know that Shanti Devi was my sister in my previous birth.”

Niki is shocked.

Niki: “How do you know this?”

Radhika : “One thing you should know about me, if I want my truth to be revealed, I decided when I want my truth to be revealed, and I wanted you to know my truth because we both have the same email enemy.”

Niki: “That’s why I want you, Arjun and Nesam to join hands to defeat Shanti Devi and Suraj. One thing I need to know when are you going to tell your husband and your friends that your the rectifier.”

Arjun: “What did you say about my wife?”

Arjun had ask Nesam to take Riddhima di to the hospital, so that he could follow his wife.

Radhika: “This is the truth I wanted to tell you Arjun, I’mean the rectifier.”

Arjun was shocked, suddenly he gets a phone call from Sam.

Sam: “Arjun someone tamper the brakes, please come fast and save us…..

Precap: A mask man trys to save Nesam and Riddhima, Shanti Devi comes close in seeing Ardhika.

Surprise double dhamaka, Ritu I hope you enjoy this, I did double chapter for you so the story is dedicated to you.

Please do comment, you give me energy to write and silent reader I want to here from you, it’s midnight, I’m going to sleep now ta ta

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  1. Jessie

    Brin.. this is interesting… we are nearing climax… shanthi devi sees Ardhika… eager 4 tat. Saral1 too deserves the worst punishment… and that Suraj…devil… Take care n lotssa love..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jessie, will Shanti see Ardhika? You have to fine out on my next chapter, I will update soon stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  2. Gauri

    Awesome Brin….loving it …I am waiting for the Shanti’s Devi punishment πŸ™‚ loads of love

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Gauri, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  3. Sathya

    It’s so intriguing to read further more Brin. It’s so interesting…. My nerves got out to know what will happen when the face off comes between Shanti devi, Radhika n arjun. Pls update next soon dear. This time it got very late ???

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sathya, so sorry for updating late, I will try to update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  4. Dipika

    Brin darling this is awesome double dhamaka chappy..i just enjoyed it thoroughly…. Rads is shrewd girl she put chip in necklace..n tge way tht creep dinesh got punishment.. I smiled lik anything.. Saral too deserve same fate…nesam r in danger.. Who is the othr mask man..u bettr update fast di…love u

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Dipika, the mask man is related to Sam, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  5. S.v

    awesome chapter brin and what a chapter first dinesh nailed finally and ridhi didi was in risk gosh and radhika is the saviour lovely. What was in the final part ?? gosh who is the mask man ?? and how is he related to nesama and shanthi devi face off of ardhika superb lovely. Love u so much damakka one

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much S.v, mask man is related to Sam, will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  6. Rossy

    Superb brin dear…dinesh such a irritating moron…served him right…Arjun got to know as his wife as rectifier…i think he will try to protect…waiting for shanti Devi and ardhika face…i want that monster lady to faint by seeing ardhika with fear…hehehe..

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Rossy, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  7. Sweetie

    Brin di,you are awesome yaar and the story is super duper awesome.. πŸ™‚ I loved Dinesh’s punishment..Too good for a man like him or else the jails are going to be a heaven for such creatures..I’m so sorry for the late comment.. πŸ™ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Sweetie, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  8. Affaa

    Di… WA WA what to say haa… Mind blowing… Ohh I want to what punishment they going to get.. I’m soo exited for that… It damaka episode… U blasted it amazing…. I love it sooooooo much… I just love u ff and writing skills… It’s outstanding… Keep writing… Di I love you…

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Affaa, love your comment, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  9. Meen

    hiiiiiiii brin….i missed u….sorry for being late dear…was caught up with few things……btw how r u?……i missed rectify so much….& now when i hv read it/…..i want to read next one as early as possible…..u reallly r a fab writer dear…lovvvvvvvve uuuu

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Meen, I am doing great, I will try to update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  10. _Ritu

    Brin…it was superb πŸ™‚ …I am so glad u dedicated that chappy to me in which Dinesh got nailed…thnx a lot dear…Want these monsters to beg for death… Arjun came to know about Rads… Now all curious for nxt..nd who is d mask man ?? Do we know him??? Post soon…loads of love. πŸ™‚

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Ritu, the mask man is close to Sam, I will update soon stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  11. Jnana

    Awesome brin….. You nailed it…… Waiting for the next……

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Jnana, I will update soon, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  12. Awesome, wowwww brin superbbbb double dhamaaka episodes. …loved it very very much.
    ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug

    1. Brin

      Thank you so much Roma, part 19 is already posted, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

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