Rectify : Manmarziyan part 15

Hi guys here the next episode of rectify, sorry for the delay, but I promise I’m going to keep writing tell the end, I should stop talking and let you read, enjoy…

Radhika: “How are the girls.”

Dr. Gauri: “They are fine, now that they know they are safe.”

Radhika: “I am really angry at Shanti for harming these innocent girls, making them do things without there will, taking away there innocent, making money out of it.”

Dr. Gauri: “Could I ask you a question?”

Radhika: “Yes, you may ask.”

Gauri: “What did Shanti Devi do to you, that you became a rectifier?”

Radhika: “Do you believe in recarnation. If not, I tell you that this is my second birth, in my first birth, Shanti Devi was my sister.”

Gauri: “This is hard to believe, so your recreated to take revenge on Shanti.”

Radhika: “I know this hard to believe, but it is true, in my first birth Shanti was obsessed with Raj, she hated me because Raj loved me, she hired men to send me to human trafficking, but always her plan failed, so one day on my wedding day she stabbed me and confess every crime she did in the name of love for Raj.”

Gauri: “I guess she married Raj when you died.”

Radhika: “No Raj didn’t marry her you see before I went after Shanti, I told Raj where I was going. When I died, he ended his life to be with me. And today he is known has Arjun Mehra oops Malhotra since he recently found out he’s Prem Malhotra son.”

Gauri: “So in this birth you got to be with your true soulmate, then who did Shanti married.”

Radhika: “Sudesh Oberoi he is Raj’s half brother.”

Gauri: “Shanti going to be shocked when she see you two. Does she know, you exist.”

Radhika: “No, she had no idea I exist.”

Flashback

Shanti Devi wanted to see the picture of Radhika and Arjun. But she had no idea that there was someone that was working for Radhika, his name Shravanrishi. Radhika once saved his sister from human trafficking, Radhika needed someone to spy on Oberoi so Shravanrishi volunteer to help Radhika.

Radhika: “I want you to make sure she never see’s my and Arjun’s picture.”

Shravanrishi: “What do you want me to do.”

Radhika: “I want you to switch the pictures, make sure she see’s these picture.”

The picture were of Kritika and Zubin, if she had seen Ardhika picture, she would figure out who the rectifier was and probably be obsessed with her husband since Arjun has Raj’s face.

Flashback ends

Gauri: ” When did you know about your first birth?”

Radhika: “When I was a little girl, I would always have the same dreams. My parents were worried and they didn’t know what was happening to me, my dadaji took me to the psychologist, she hypnotized me, and when I woke up she told me that these memories were my past life. And that I was given second chance to rectify it. I told my dadaji about it, and he said…”

Flashback when Radhika was 6 year old…

Dadaji: “Don’t tell your parents, they will just get worried.”

Radhika: “But this lady and her son harmed my mother too, I will not let them live peacefully, I will destroy them.”

Dadaji was shocked…

Dadaji: “How do you know your mother’s past, I don’t think we ever talk about this to you.”

Radhika: “They never talk to me about this, I had the same dreams about it, and also my father’s past as well.”

Dadaji was shocked, he was starting to believe that recarnation do happen to certain people, who’s past needed to be rectify.

Dadaji: “What ever your mission is I’ll always be there to help you.”

Flashback ends

Gauri: “What was your first mission in destroying Shanti Devi.”

Radhika: “When I was 15, I did some digging to where and how she would kidnap the girls. I found out that they say these words, that girls get tricked in believing but not me.”

Flashback when Radhika was 15 year old

Stranger: “Your parents were in a car accident, I’m suppose to take you to them.”

Radhika: “What secret code did they tell you?”

Stranger: “Excuse me.”

Radhika: “Well for safety reason my parents gave me a secret code and said that a stranger would use this word “your parents had an accident,” they said do not believe in a stranger unless we give the code to them. So I’m waiting, what’s the code.”

Stranger POV: “My god this girl is too smart, there no way I could trick her, best thing to do is run.”

So the stranger try to run but Radhika out smarted him, she already called the cops. With Radhika’s help they had found all the girls that were kidnapped.

Flashback ends

Gauri: “Your one brave girl.”

Radhika: “There’s more to it that they do not know, if you know what I mean.”

Gauri: ” Oh yes the one you saved, but everyone thinks he’s dead.”

Mystery man: “Are you girls talking about me.”

Suddenly a mystery man comes out he’s wearing a mask.

Mystery man: “That was genius Radhika, giving cupcakes to those gangs made them fall asleep, and made it easy for us to rescue the girls.”

Radhika: “The idea was mine, but you also contributed.”

Mystery man: ” I owe you, if you didn’t save me, Jai Khanna wouldn’t be alive today.”

He takes his mask and we see Jai Khanna smiling.

Flashback

When the accident happen, Radhika was there with Dr. Gauri at the hospital to replace Jai’s body with a fake Jai, Radhika needed a dead body to change this person’s face to Jai, Dr. Neeta was the plastic surgeon, she owe Radhika for saving her child from human trafficking, it was easy for Dr Neeta to find a body and knew this person had no family, she did the face surgery and made it look like Jai. Radhika and Gauri took Jai with them. They knew he was poisoned but Dr. Gauri immediately pump the poison out and made the report that Jai died of poison to make sure that there enemies believe Jai was dead. Radhika hated to do this to the Khanna family, but she had to for Jai’s safety. When Jai did finally woke up…

Jai: “Where am I?”

Radhika: “You are safe now, Shanti Devi and her son will not hurt you and I will make sure your family are safe.”

Jai: “My family are they okay, can I see them.”

Radhika: “They think your dead, please forgive me but I had to do this, your life will still be in danger if you go out.”

Jai: “But how will I know if my family are okay.”

Radhika: “I will keep an eye on them and inform you every event that happen.”

Flashback ends

Jai: “You have always kept your promise, I was really worried for Sam and Maanya when you told me what they were planning to do, I was panicking but you saved Sam’s life by marrying Arjun and spoiling there plan, I will always be greatful for that.”

Radhika: “I was mostly worried for Maanya, but thank god Neil saved her, all I had to do was make a phone call to Neil with changing my voice…

Flash back

The phone rings

Neil: “Hello.”

Radhika: “The enemies are going to take Maanya and s*xtually abuse her, save her.”

Neil: “Who are you, hello, hello.”

Radhika hangs the phone…

Flashback ends

Radhika: “I knew Neil would save Maanya, I had to save the old lady, I knew that Dinesh was my father’s cousin and that he was working with Shanti Devi and Suraj. He was trying to warn Rana not to tell that Nandini was not the culprit.”

Radhika’s phone started ringing

Radhika: “Oh it’s dadaji, I told hi if they find out I was missing, he would tell them I went to get medicine, I guess there still worried, hello Dadaji.”

Dadaji: “Choti, you need to come to the hospital……”

Precap: Radhika goes to the hospital, Niki connected to the rectifier…

I hope you weren’t bored no Nesam or Arjun, I will write them on part 18 and who do you think is in the hospital, find out in my next chapter…

I dedicate this story to Gauri and Shravanrishi, Shravanrishi I am waiting for your ff, please don’t quit it is beautiful story, eagerly waiting for your ff.

Thank you for those who comment you give me energy to write, silent reader thank you for reading but I would like to hear from you, please do comment, bye for now ta ta.

24 comments

  1. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Seems Like I am celebrating my Bday again πŸ™‚ thanks Brin πŸ™‚ loads of love πŸ™‚ the chapter was fantastic love u

  2. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Brin Di,you’ve connected the dots very beautifully,I’m bowled over by seeing these characters bonding.. πŸ˜€ yaayyy!!Jai is alive.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

  3. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Superbbbb episode Dear… What a twist n turn… U r a mystery girl Brin dear. I just likes the way she elaborated her reincarnation details… Lovely one

  4. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    Jai is alive…that is really a great news n fire crackers…awww…m loving this story sooo much…that shanti Devi & his son Suraj should be punished hard..they should rot in hell

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Rossy, I will update soon, and yes SHanti and Suraj will be punished by the rectifier, you stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  5. Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Brin what a rectification of this story..u nailed it througly.. U used the basic story so briefly.. I m.amazed…m hell eager for next chappy yarrr…u r oue rectifier..love u..don’t take much time like this..tc

  6. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww brin …mind blowing update. …rads recreated to be rectifier. …wowwww loved it to the coreeeee. …n she knows her parents past tooo…..shanti devi is gone now….rads very smart n playing her cards very well. …..loved that jai had been saved by rads…..rads is saving everyone from Shanti n suraj…brilliantly narrated n very thoughtful. …I’m wondering…why suraj behaved like a devil, pervert, etc…who kept molesting his own daughter maya/mala n made her pregnant…..is there any twist behind this too…how can a father do this shameful act to his own daughter. …my mind is not getting agree on it….is Mala was his enemy’s daughter n shanti n suraj was taking revange on her?….plzzzz update next epi soooooooon…keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug πŸ™‚ β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • Brin

      |Author

      Thank you so much Roma, well Shanti Devi never had a heart, she never teached her son what was right or wrong, yes Maya father is Suraj, I know it’s wrong but we can’t ignore that it doesn’t happen because it does. I will update soon, you take care, stay blessed. πŸ™‚

  7. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Brin… jai is also alive.. super… I cud sense Radz as a cop..u know clever n bold.. waiting 4 nxt one.. am thinking what will shanthi do when she meets Arjun.. TC n loads of love

  8. S.v

    |Registered Member

    wow brin jai is alive and radhika is super freaky awesome lovely one brin waiting for the reaction of shanti devi when she sees ardhika. Lovely one next part soon love u

  9. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    OMG Brin what a twist, Jai is alive n Rads saved him. U always shake us with a new twist. Amazing update, loved it very much

  10. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    I’m amazed….. Now jai is alive and rads saved him…. Okay I have a question…. Does arjun know about his reincarnation???

  11. Meen

    |Registered Member

    hey brin…..sorry for being late dear……& omg jai is alive……eagerly waiting to c d next step of shanti devi…….u r driving mr crazy dear……..plzz post soon……loads of love…..muuuuuuuuuha

  12. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    OMG..again a twist ..Jai is alive..Brin dear u r amazing πŸ™‚ Rads’s bold avataar was a treat to read πŸ™‚ now all curious for nxt…one question…whether Neil’s father is also alive…?? Plz be sooner dear nd if possible den a double dhamaka plz.. πŸ™‚ loads of love. πŸ™‚

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