Rectify: Manmarziyan (Part 1)


Arjun was reading the letter that is wife had left him with the divorce paper she wanted me to marry Sam and to be happy with her

Arjun: “No Radhika, now that I know I have feeling for you, I will not let you go. I am coming for you Radhika.”

He was about to leave when Suddenly Sam showed up

Sam: “Hi Arjun, I need to tell you that I am in love……”

Arjun: “Before you say anything I want to tell you the truth about why Radhika married me.”

Sam: ” Oh please, I don’t want to talk about that selfish girl. I want to tell you about my feeling.”

Arjun gets angry.

Arjun:”That selfish girl saved your life or else if you had married me, my sister would have killed you.”

Sam is shocked.

Sam:” I don’t understand, why would
Nandini dee want me dead?”

Arjun:”Because she want to hurt your father for rejecting her.”

Sam get another shock

Sam: “Your saying my father and your sister had an affair.”

Arjun:Yes, it was a one night stand your father was never in love with my sister he wanted to go back to his family.”

Sam controls her tears and it dawn on her

Sam: “You were never in love with me, you wanted revenge for your sister and if it wasn’t for Chasni, I would have been dead, oh my god Nandini was brainwashing me against Chasni and what do I do I believe Nandini over Chasni. How do I face my Chasni.”

Sam starts crying.

Arjun: “Sam it is true that I want revenge for my sister but I never want to kill you. It was yesterday that I found out the truth about Nandini. If it wasn’t for Radhika I would be blamed for murdering you.”

Sam: “What are saying.”

Arjun: “As a child Nandini was brain washing me against Khanna family, Sam Nandini killed your brother.”

Sam gets shocked again…..

To be continue

Credit to: Brin :-)

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  1. Awesome Brin ๐Ÿ™‚ Nandini killed Jai….wow tats a twist ๐Ÿ™‚ waiting for the next one

    1. Thank you so much Gauri, I will update it soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Brin is that you. Man that was way too shocking. This shows another perspective of our manmarziyan . Write more i wanna read them all. Next part should be much bigger . . Hey thanks for one more ff. Update soon eagerly waiting.

    1. Yes it is me Brin, thank you so much, I will try to update it soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. I’m very happy ? that you started another ff………its really nice……..I too am shocked to know that Nandini killed Jai……….ur story is diff and I like it……..plzzz update soooooon………….

    1. Thank you so much, I will update soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Hey Brin ,I love it . Pls continue. And give me a big one nxt time. And Nandini killing Jai was a rude shocker … But a awesome twist. Waiting for more.

    1. Thank you so much Rg, I will update soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. It’s interesting.. Brin.. whn is d nxt update.
    Hw Arjuu alone got to know abt Nandini.. and she killed jai..!! Getting curious

    1. Thank you so much Jessie. You will find out in the next chapter how Arjun will find out the truth. ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. one confusion from where this story starts?

    1. If you remember when Radhika left a note and a divorce paper. Arjun reads it, go to the door Sam shows up, the scene stops there. That is where I started my own plot. I hope there no confusion now. ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Great start Brin… ??wow tat was a twist… nice plot.. i like it dear… all. d best dear ???

    1. Than you so much Sathya. ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Awesome ๐Ÿ™‚ and this is called twist my god nandini killed jai

    1. Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. awesome dr. I loved the twist..update next soon

    1. Thank you Ritu I will try to update soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Oh Brin u started writing am so happy to see ur name credited. ? Nice start, I see here Nandini also killed Jai. Waiting for the next and stay blessed ???

    1. Thank you so much Gianna, I will update soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Ooooh my sweet brin dear u wrote a ff…m so glad….now m too much happy….n yes I liked your ff…..marvellous….thanks a ton for writing this ff.. ??

    1. Thank you so much Rosie ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Brin dear superb plot…. Omg nandu killed jai….that’s disgusting… Geez this woman….want to slap her….eagerly waiting for next one…..stay blessed?

    1. Thank you Supriya, I will update soon. ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. omg brin strted writing her own ff
    congrats dear
    ff is gud plz continue it try to update it daily plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

    1. Thanks Natasha, I will try to update soon ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. o wow…..brin wrote something……m eager to read more and more from one of tge craziest fan of mmz

    1. Thanks you Maandey ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. awesome episode………..

    1. Thank you Subha ๐Ÿ™‚

  16. Hey bring its gud Yarr pls do continue….

  17. God sry Yarr its brin srysry pls sry

    1. No need to say sorry, thank you for the comment ๐Ÿ™‚

  18. OMG brin ur ff is so interesting can’t wait for the next update ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thank you Fatarajo ๐Ÿ™‚

  19. Wow brin….awesome start….eagerly waiting for next epi….. Keep rocking dear……all the best for ur future epi…

    1. Thank you Susi ๐Ÿ™‚

  20. Awesome, wowwww Brin welcome to mmz ff world as writer…I’m so glad for you….lovely narration n very interesting plot n dialogues. …loved it very much. …all the best sweeeeeetheart. …plzzzz continue dear. ..keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . Muaaaaahhhhhh โ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™ก ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thank you Roma ๐Ÿ™‚

  21. Good start Brin..Wow!! What a twist in the last line..Nandini killed Jai..OMG!!
    Stay blessed dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thank you Sweetie ๐Ÿ™‚

  22. nice ……………

    1. Thank you Priya ๐Ÿ™‚

  23. Brin superb I like the plot please update soon

    1. Thank you so much Gayu ๐Ÿ™‚

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