REBORN LOVE {ONE SLOT}

A girl’s voice is heard. She is teaching philosophy of love to students in Arts college of Amritsar. “ Students, love is something which wont alert you and come but it will come and then you will become alert.” Her smiling lips are shown. “Love makes everything possible ……. love can make anything….anything possible and…..” and bell rings…… “Oh fish ma’am…not again……. ma’am please continue,” Aarti-a student said to her. “Yes ma’am please do not end this period; we will stay overtime. We always wait and do not come to know when u time passes by….” “How sweet of you all, dear. But now time is up. We will meet again”. She smiles. She turns to leave when she turns around and says “And always remember……” “…….all do not get pure love it depends on us to make our love pure”, everybody shout happily. “Not bad guys.” And she leaves. she comes and her legs are shown walking. She comes out of college.

“Twinkle….twinkle….!!!”, someone calls out. She turns and sees and smiles. A guy is shown in black jacket and white shirt with and black jeans a rudraksh bracelet in his right hand while a watch on another. The girl is shownwith blue churidar and dupatta with straight hair open and curls in front[ as jasmine did in recent epi of mrs. Amritsar competition] “ hey kunj….i mean mr. Kunj sarna…”. Their faces are revealed- they are none other than twinkle and kunj. Twinkle comes. “Hi Mr. Kunj sarna……so how are you my dear hubby!!!”“Hmm….Mrs Kunj Sarna……so how was your day…….” “Kunj …..nice!!” “So what say about a drive…..Mrs. Syappa Queen” “Not a bad idea, kunj. I must say that you are improving day by day…..company matters you know…” “Ya…[imitating] company matters….i see come and sit”. She sits and they leave for a drive. They enjoy scenery and matargashti plays in bg. “Love is in the air. How i wished he loved me as i loved him. For me he i my soul; heart; body and myself to him but for him…..

do i really matter to him…” She eyes him lovingly. “How i wished she had feelings for me. Oh how desperate my heart is to listen those three magical words from her mouth but i think have to wait for whole of my life…” Lost in his own thoughts kunj doesnot sees a curve and bangs his car with a tree. They both jerk towards front. Kunj had worn seat belt while twinkle had not. She hit her head on front and it started bleeding. “Twinkle…..Twinkle……get up. I am here na…..ur kunj is here…its my fault I did not notice and banged my car.” “No kunj its neither your fault nor mine…. it…its[breathing heavily] fault of my luck…my life. Happiness; love and peace is not in my luck…..” They share a very painful eyelock. A tear rolled from twinkle’s eye while kunj cried bitterly. He came out and fetched her out of the car…… “Kunj, i think my time is finished. I have to go” “No…no…no…twinkle u can’t go….did u get that?? U can’t leave me like this[Jag soona Jag soona lages plays in bg]He takes her in arms and rushes…….

TIME PASSES BY{AFTER 20 DAYS}

AGAIN TIME PASSES SOME DAYS GO WELL WITH GRIHPRAVESHTHEY HAVE DIED BUT NOT THEIR SOULS THEIR SOULS ARE HERE AMID U ALL…….ONLY TRUE LOVERS CAN FEEL THEM

BTW DO COMMENT DEAR AUDIENCE,PLSS COMMENT WILL BE WAITING, IF I WILL GET A GOOD RESPONSE ONLY THEN WILL I POST NEXT PART!!!

Credit to: Imagination

9 comments

  1. sanam

    well I believe u must enquire about the problem
    plz don’t stop ur ff due to the error
    u sent them an complaint and wait until they respond to it
    I Truely loved ur intro

  2. sanam

    well rakshitha u have another option to rewrite the whole and submit it with an different title

  3. Rakshita

    No sanam I posted whole 3 times but only beginning Nd last lines r posted u knw I wrote it with so many emotions if u would have read it u would have cried….no I m ending all my ffs!!!

  4. Bisha

    Its ok Rakshita…u plz complain them..it is really impressive dear..Or else try again..we the readers rnt v impatient..i m waiting to see the proper form of the story n wud really love it if u can post d correct one..lst time too i hv suggested n i m again suggesting..change sm prt or character names etc i mnget up of the story..it may get uploaded..n do complain n hope for d best..do u hv any other ff?? Is there any problm posting them or only this one is hvn ds pblm??

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