I really love you(a twinj story) chapter 18

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Hello lovely people….
Well i m here wid my 18th chapter…..i know m late….sorry for dat….
And thank u soo much to all those who commented and all the silent readers too….

So here is chapter 18….

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Twinkle: mahi tell na what did kunj say…
Mahi: twinkle look i m sorry…but bhai said me dat there is nothing like dat with him abt u…..he considers u as a frind dats all..
Listening to dis twinkle’s face went sad and her hand became cold….tears started to flow from her eyes…

Mahi: twinkle r u der…hello..
Twinkle(sobbing): yah mahi….its ok….dnt wrry i m ok…..u just tell..ku..kunj…dat i have said him sorry…please itna bol dena..
Mahi: i aready told him dat u r srry…he said dat its alright…
Twinkle: ohkay thank u….soo bye ttyl…

Mahi: achha listen twinkle….mom told me dat tomorrow me mom and bhai are going to my nani’s place…..soo mom was telling dat we wud take u also with us..
Twinkle: what me…par me kese..
Mahi: mom already asked leela aunty and she said yes….soo u be ready tomorrow morning we will pick u from ur house..okay
Twinkle: oh okay…par mahi…kunj bhi hoga..me kese i mean..how wud i face him..
Mahi: twinkle its okay…..i m der na….tu ab mana mat kar plzz..
Twinkle: ohkay i ll come..
Mahi: hmm good..chal bye..
Twinkle: yup bye…cyu..

And the call ended…twinkle had harldy controlled her tears…..jus then leela called everyone for dinner….twinkle wiped her tears and went down…leela told her to come and sit at table and have dinner…
But twinkle refused by saying..
Twinkle: mumma muje bhuk nahi hai abhi…
Leela: twinkle aise kese bhuk nahi…chal kha le akar..
Twinkle: mumma mene thodi der pehle hi kuch khaya tha…abhi full hu…agar bhuk lagegi to khud kha lungi…plzz

Leela: achha thik hai….par kha lena bhukh lage to…
Twinkle: yes mumma…me room me ja rai hu..
Saying so twinkle ran to her room and closed the door on her back…
She went straight to her bed and fell on it and started crying….she took kunj’s photograph from her book from the side drawer…..she looked at his pic and said crying…..”i love u kunj….i know u dont nd i wont force u……tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte….isme tumhari koi galti nahi….but i love u…love alot…..aur me kabhi bhi tumhare raste me nahi aungi…..if u will be happy den i will be the happiest….i just want u to be happy…nothing else…
Saying this she cried a lot….she didnt wanted to fall weak but tears were not stopping they were just flowing and flowing……..after getting exhausted she retired to sleep….

It was late night…..
At sarna mansion….in kunj’s room…he was laying on his bed but was not sleeping…..
Kunj’s pov…..
I love u twinkle…..love u the most…..i know i lied mahi….par me agar mahi ko sach bata deta to twinkle wud have felt bad about me…coz if she loved me den she wud have asked me par usne mahi ko kaha….aur me nahi chahta ki twinkle ke mind me mere liye kuch galat ho….isliye i wont tell you twinkle dat i love u….aur ab se me tumse jitna ho sake utna distance banake rakhunga….q ki i dnt want you to feel uncomfortable of me….but the truth is i love u twinkle and i will always love u……u r the first and last girl in my life….

End of pov
Thinking all this kunj had almost tears in his eyes…..and then he drifted to sleep..

Next day morning…..twinkle woke up…it was 7 in the morning…..she had severe headache due to crying….jus den leela knocked on her door and said
Leela: twinkle beta…uth gayi kya….jaldi se ready ho jao….usha ji aati hi hogi….me tumhara breakfast ready kar deti hu….
Twinkle: haan mumma i ll come in half n hour…
Twinkle got up from her bed and went to have shower….she was still remembering ant kunj’s answer….she didnt wanted to accept the truth…..but she had to….she was remembering kunj’s face and tears flew from her eyes….

After 15 mins she came back from shower and got ready…..she saw her face in the mirror…her eyes were red and bulgy….and her face was pale….she thought that if leela wud see her face den she wud surely doubt her dat she cried so she put kajal in her eyes and put some powder on her face to hide her bulgy eyes…
She went downstairs and there she saw breakfast was kept on dining table but leela was not there…so she went to leela’s room there leela was in washroom…so twinkle came back to hall and went to dining table she didnt felt like eating so she didnt have breakfast and kept back the bowls in kitchen….
She was sitting in the hall and just then usha came and leela also came….after bidding bye to leela twinkle went with usha…
Usha alone had come with the driver as kunj and mahi were coming by another car with their cousin…
Twinkle sighed of relief as she didnt wanted to face kunj…
Usha nd twinkle went in the car….
Later after sometime they reached….
Usha and twinkle went inside the house…

Shreya and payal came and hugged her….twinkle met all at the house…..payal and twinkle were sitting together…..twinkle told payal about everything….payal stopped her from crying….
Just then mahi n kunj came…
Mahi came to twinkle and hugged her….twinkle saw kunj….she thought he wud come and say a hi to her but it didnt happen…..
Aftersometime it was lunch time…..till this time kunj had full on ignored twinkle was feeling more n more guilty…

All had lunch and then sat in the hall…
Kunj was busy in his phone……kunj’s mama,mami and nani had liked twinkle alot…..
Twinkle just once wanted to talk to kunj but kunj didnt….dat was killing twinkle from inside…..
Twinkle told mahi and payal about this…and they said dat it wud b coz of that question….
This way whole day passed and it was late evening…it was tym for twinkle to leave….but still kunj had not talked to her…

Usha nd twinkle met all and went to the car to leave….twinkle saw kunj nad gave him a smile to which he gave a feeble smile….a tear escaped from twinkle’s eye….kunj saw it…but he cud nt do anything about it…
Later usha nd twinkle left…

Kunj’s pov…
Twinkle was crying…but why….i hope i did right by ignoring her today….but did she feel bad about it….oh god….me to sirf uske liye kar raha tha ye sab….it was toi hard for me…par i had to do it…

End of pov..

Twinkle reached taneja mansion and bid bye to usha….she hugged her and then usha went…twinkle went inside…yuvi was in the hall..he informed twinkle dat mom and dad had gone to a friend’s house as there was a party…he told her to have dinner…
Twinkle nodded and then yuvi left to his room..
Twinkke went to kitchen and drank water and dint have dinner and then went to her room…
She changed her clothes and then went to bed…
Twinkle’s pov..
Kunj hates me….dats y he ignored me today…ye sab meri wajah se hua hai….agar mene mahi ko usse puchhne k liye na kaha hota to ye sab nai hota…atleast hum friends the….mene sab khatam kar diya…
Thinking this she cried alot….
Twinkle dint wanted to loose kunj…..she was missing him badly….
Chinki ws also not there to whom she cud share her pain…
Twinkle was already weak as she dint ate anything and her head was paining severly due to crying….so she just drifted to sleep….

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Precap: twinkle hospitalised…
Mahi: twinkle…bhai has a girlfriend
Twinkle:???????????????

Hope u all liked it…
Plzz do comment…
Love u all❤❤❤❤❤❤???

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23 Comments
  1. Twinjfan.tamanna

    OMG!!! ??tune itna suffer kiya? shit! itni miss understanding! aur this was so emotional epi! I just loved it! and precap is scary! try to post soon!
    See you!?

    With Love,
    Urs Tamanna

  2. Very emotional i feel very bad for you but love the epi and love kunj pov most

  3. SidMin23

    Shocking rocking episode poor twinkle when kunj ignored her she cried what kunj has girlfriend ????? twinkle hospitalized ???

  4. Purnima.agrawal30

    Emotional epi….really sad for twinkle

  5. Mia12

    Oh my god meri fattu u suffered like this,,??????…Ye kya hai itna ulat pulat sochna haan,,???…Uss time par kya biti hogi tum dono par ufff sochke hi bura lag raha hai muje to,,??..Seriously yarr meri Ankho se ansu nikal gayi epi padke,,????..I knw ki ye real story wala ff hai or tu ise fanfic ki tarah likh rai hai but trust me fanfic ki couple se jeyada real couple ko imagen karna or bhi jeyada accha hai or heart touching hai coz its real,,??????? well its sooo much emotional yet beautiful epi,,?????? Love it soooo much,,❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Ab plsssssssss jaldhi se next epi ko post kar can’t wait to read next,,?? And apna khyal rakhna OK surprise cahiye na tuje,,????
    LOAD’S OF LOVE MERI FATTU,,❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤..

  6. OooOo ???itna locha….Ho gayaaaa??……. Emotional aur Senti ho gayi main?,……..,but hamme toh pata Hai.. ..All will be well??????aur San theek ho gaya thaa????post soon ??

  7. Twinj

    Hey fana di sorry for not cmting but I had read the previous epi….really sry was a bit busy…oh god di u really had to suffer so much….how did u manage to overcome such situation..n that was really so shocking jiju had a gf….unexpected…..aap hospitalized…god……plzz post soon..pl di

  8. Feelings he’ll sad for twinkle try posting the next one ASAP and missed you a lot

  9. Nishfd

    Poor twinkle. ….
    Use inta mat rolavo…..
    Kunj ke dimag me kya chl rha hai …..
    N nw girlfriend. …
    Cnt wait yr….
    Jaldi post krna….if possible. ….

  10. Yaar hesrt attack aane wala tha precap padh kar jaldi post kar i want to know kon hai woh ladki??????

  11. _Manu_

    Omg today’s epi was soooo emotional feeling really bad for tw so much of misunderstanding and the precap kunj has a gf how is it possible he loves tw na? Plzz post soon cant wait for the nxt epi

  12. Awesome….. Its too emotional…. Really it was sad epi…. I luvd it to the core and luvd the kunj pov… Ur luv story is amazing…. Api really bhai’s pov make me cry… It was bliss to read…plzzz get well soon and post nxt asap…. Luv u…???

  13. Heyy the epi was amazing….but very much emotional though…
    I thought kunj would say a yes as he also loved u….but everything went alternate….
    I hope twinkle and kunj get together soon
    And the precap is????????…
    Post soon
    Love u

  14. Hey fatima yr kya episode tha… Sachi yr buht buht buht emotional epi thi…. It was superb epi…. And kunj ka pov buht zyada amazing tha mjy dill sa pasand aya epi thats why only i am comenting…. And u dont know that i am using my czn’s id for comenting she will kill me bcz she dont know that i am using her id her sis give me her id for comenting bcoz she said me to surely coment in ur ff and my id is not working but i really luvd it form the bottom of my heart… Luv u sooooooooo much??…. Take care of ur self… Bye

  15. Baby

    ohhhhh my god lollipop u suffered so mch……….♥
    srsly m crying ohhhhhh god too emotional wat to say I mean k literally
    ohhhhhhh……..why did kunj did dis to twinkle……..♥
    srsly luvd it……..awwwwwww……..shit….m really crying……..
    too mch too emotional……….♥♥♥♥♥
    jst loved it………♥
    love u lods……………♥♥♥♥♥

  16. Lovely episode…
    Felt very sad for twinkle..
    Post soon

  17. Very beautiful update
    Precap is scary

  18. Sameera

    Omg such a big misunderstanding in btw you both ???haww pity u whatvh thought and kunj seedha bol nahi Sakta thay Kya. ???bechari frnd ko hospitalised karadiya ???but seriously loved this shot sooo much and sorry yaar for late ??I hardly get time to come on Tu ???…
    Plzz post next one soon …

  19. Ramya

    Yaar tu itni kyu Roti hai
    Mujhe na Teri story yahi baat achi nahi lagti ki sirf tu Roti his n I really hate dis
    N about ff or uur story
    It’s as usual amazing Superb but kunj mana kyu kar raha hai yeh samaj nahi aaya
    N srsly tu itni lunch skip kardi ki tu hosipatalized jo gayi
    Aur na mujhe precap dekhe dar lag raha hai
    I just jope for gud n I hope twinkle will not cry more
    Love u keep smiling

  20. Presha

    Hey di…
    It was so intense nd emotional..
    Just loved it..
    Too good..
    Love u..

  21. Good going. …..

  22. Amaya_bhardwaj

    Tooo emotional epi ?????????
    U suffered this much ???????? Twinj pov were Awsm…
    Precap is scary….
    Post soon…
    Love you ???

  23. Supriya18d

    oh god ….. itna kyo roi….pta h mujhe bhi rona aaagya….I hope next epi scary na ho

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